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Media => Mapping Center => Topic started by: Firstinaction on August 29, 2010, 11:54:45 pm

Title: BIOTECK ( A research facility)
Post by: Firstinaction on August 29, 2010, 11:54:45 pm
Welcome too Bioteck   

A research facility.
 
This map is still a work in progress.

This map will be very futuristic and will resemble this concept--
(http://a.imageshack.us/img291/4103/800pxconceptnoveria.jpg)
By f1rst18 (http://profile.imageshack.us/user/f1rst18) at 2010-08-29

I will work on it later and it is going too be an awesome map...  And fun. (Im working on it)

(http://a.imageshack.us/img683/8127/bioteckmap1.jpg)
By f1rst18 (http://profile.imageshack.us/user/f1rst18) at 2010-08-29
(http://a.imageshack.us/img837/2412/bioteckmap2.jpg)
By f1rst18 (http://profile.imageshack.us/user/f1rst18) at 2010-08-29
(http://a.imageshack.us/img687/7730/bioteckmap3.jpg)
By f1rst18 (http://profile.imageshack.us/user/f1rst18) at 2010-08-29
Title: Re: BIOTECK ( A research facility)
Post by: Xedoh on August 30, 2010, 12:06:18 am
Well, what you did looks quite nice, especially the details. However, I hope you are gonna change the textures. It looks a bit plain atm. Also, the floor is very simple. You could use some diffrent textures for it, making paths this way (like for example on nano) or place some boxes on it.

Is the railing the thing you mentioned in your post about rails. I think they could get quite close to the original by using a cylinder for the main railing and a square cylinder for the vertical parts.
Title: Re: BIOTECK ( A research facility)
Post by: Firstinaction on August 30, 2010, 01:01:55 am
Well, what you did looks quite nice, especially the details. However, I hope you are gonna change the textures. It looks a bit plain atm. Also, the floor is very simple. You could use some diffrent textures for it, making paths this way (like for example on nano) or place some boxes on it.

Is the railing the thing you mentioned in your post about rails. I think they could get quite close to the original by using a cylinder for the main railing and a square cylinder for the vertical parts.
THanks... But yea I would put rails there but when I size down cylinders the will not go that small... So Ireally dont know how too do it. O and thanks for giving me tips... please post more...
Title: Re: BIOTECK ( A research facility)
Post by: UniqPhoeniX on August 30, 2010, 01:37:16 am
The brushwork looks quite nice, but the gray/repetitive textures need to go. Try to break all larger surfaces down with some details. Also, try not to copy things too closely from other peoples concept art; just look for inspiration & mix different designs etc.
Title: Re: BIOTECK ( A research facility)
Post by: Plague Bringer on August 30, 2010, 02:03:46 am
Let me be the first to note that an airplane or space ship "hanger" is spelled hangar. :)
Title: Re: BIOTECK ( A research facility)
Post by: c4 on August 30, 2010, 02:23:32 am
HAY I WAS ABOUT TO SAY THAT... :(
Title: Re: BIOTECK ( A research facility)
Post by: your face on August 30, 2010, 04:49:17 am
HAY IS FOR HORSES.

btw nice start, looks good.
Title: Re: BIOTECK ( A research facility)
Post by: Asvarox on August 30, 2010, 09:04:41 am
Yeah that's nice one, but textures need to be changed. Also, I have noticed on the second screenshot, that that "roof" or ceiling is about to collapse - some additional columns would probably remove that feeling.

PS. I don't recall this location from ME1 :o
Title: Re: BIOTECK ( A research facility)
Post by: Firstinaction on August 30, 2010, 12:39:45 pm
Yeah that's nice one, but textures need to be changed. Also, I have noticed on the second screenshot, that that "roof" or ceiling is about to collapse - some additional columns would probably remove that feeling.

PS. I don't recall this location from ME1 :o
Thanks. And IDK I found it and its a concept
Title: Re: BIOTECK ( A research facility)
Post by: c4 on August 30, 2010, 12:57:17 pm
Well, what you did looks quite nice, especially the details. However, I hope you are gonna change the textures. It looks a bit plain atm. Also, the floor is very simple. You could use some diffrent textures for it, making paths this way (like for example on nano) or place some boxes on it.

Is the railing the thing you mentioned in your post about rails. I think they could get quite close to the original by using a cylinder for the main railing and a square cylinder for the vertical parts.
THanks... But yea I would put rails there but when I size down cylinders the will not go that small... So Ireally dont know how too do it. O and thanks for giving me tips... please post more...
Use the scaling tool
Title: Re: BIOTECK ( A research facility)
Post by: CreatureofHell on August 30, 2010, 04:35:39 pm
That doesn't look too bad actually at the moment.

You spelled "to" wrong in the title.