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Community => Off Topic => Topic started by: jm82792 on September 17, 2011, 10:27:13 am

Title: Writing
Post by: jm82792 on September 17, 2011, 10:27:13 am
I have never been into writing, but I seem to enjoy it, I guess English comp has been my favorite subject.
Here is my first piece, I've got another one but it's not done yet.
I'm still getting the hang of it but I enjoy being creative.....

As multitudes of oil tankers are ablaze, flames and smoke violently swirl upwards, forming a massive wall of despair.
The acrid smell of burning fuel proliferates the air while the flames blast blistering heat.
The environment appears to be anything but hospitable.
Fireballs with their trailing smoke jealously engulf the horizon.
They explosively display their power, and deafen everything within their vicinity.
Close to the metal melting flames, a man leans on his fire truck. 
He seems to be defeated by the sheer volume of the blaze,
being so diminutive next to the massive inferno.
His blank, yet saddened expression, reflects this event is far from being a rare occurrence.







 
Title: Re: Writing
Post by: CreatureofHell on September 17, 2011, 10:29:00 am
That doesn't sound like a happy scene...
Title: Re: Writing
Post by: Tremulant on September 17, 2011, 12:53:44 pm
and yet you wont share the vast majority of your 3D modelling with us?
Title: Re: Writing
Post by: Garion on September 17, 2011, 04:55:49 pm
Are you trying to portrait the life of Libyans with the NATO in their shoes?
Title: Re: Writing
Post by: jm82792 on September 18, 2011, 12:42:48 am
Are you trying to portrait the life of Libyans with the NATO in their shoes?
That is precisely the photo I used, as I had to pick from a bunch of boring ones and found one dynamic one.