This is my first map, the working title is behavioural research it is supposed to be an underground lab studying the aliens with the hopes of finding a way to defeat them, however they escape and run amok.
Currently at early alpha release with a lot of work needed. Please feel free to make comments. (no more spam though)
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Alpha 1 is now released. There is still lots to be done I know but while it may not look pretty yet, the basic layout is good. Please give me some feedback.
Alpha 1 release:
http://www.mediafire.com/?dhy3hnw5nze
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Known issues and to-do list:
General:
*Concrete textures need sorting, it is a mish mash of different samples at the moment
*Information on walls (big text with 'elevator room' (for example) and arrows giving directions)
Corridors:
*Very generic at the moment in need of trim and decoration, pipes wires etc.
*Corners of corridors need reworking
*pillars need respacing
Human Base:
*Needs decorating to look like either 1) Armoury
2) Equiment room
3)locker room
*Doors need sorting.
Alien Base:
*Ramps need re-doing, they don't meet up properly
*needs more trim
Obervation Deck:
*needs trim and deco computer screens buttons which look like they do things etc.
Main Lab (room with lots of doors and big contamination notice)
*needs more trim, lights etc.
*lots of monitors showing alert status needed.
Elevator Room:
*needs elevator control panel (just for show)
*needs a few monitors showing alert status
Overmind Access Stairs:
*endless amount of work needed here
Tell me if you think anything needs adding to my to do list.
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Alpha 1 release:
http://www.mediafire.com/?dhy3hnw5nze
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Here are a few screenies (new and up to date):
(http://i162.photobucket.com/albums/t261/obidose/resba1/th_alienbase.jpg) (http://i162.photobucket.com/albums/t261/obidose/resba1/alienbase.jpg)
(http://i162.photobucket.com/albums/t261/obidose/resba1/th_coldroom-1.jpg) (http://i162.photobucket.com/albums/t261/obidose/resba1/coldroom-1.jpg)
(http://i162.photobucket.com/albums/t261/obidose/resba1/th_elevator.jpg) (http://i162.photobucket.com/albums/t261/obidose/resba1/elevator.jpg)
(http://i162.photobucket.com/albums/t261/obidose/resba1/th_hotroom.jpg) (http://i162.photobucket.com/albums/t261/obidose/resba1/hotroom.jpg)
(http://i162.photobucket.com/albums/t261/obidose/resba1/th_humanbase.jpg) (http://i162.photobucket.com/albums/t261/obidose/resba1/humanbase.jpg)
(http://i162.photobucket.com/albums/t261/obidose/resba1/th_obsdeck.jpg) (http://i162.photobucket.com/albums/t261/obidose/resba1/obsdeck.jpg)
(http://i162.photobucket.com/albums/t261/obidose/resba1/th_lab.jpg) (http://i162.photobucket.com/albums/t261/obidose/resba1/lab.jpg)
It looks good to me. I think this map definitely has potential! You are right about needing detail, but that can be added in later.
I'm actually currently making a map with the same concept, it's called ADOC.
http://tremulous.net/phpBB2/viewtopic.php?t=3428
But it doesn't quite have the same feel, and it is far from completion. Looks good so far. Good luck :)
looks decent for the early stages of a first time map
Looks good Obi, Keep up the good work!!! :p
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mine is teh bettar
i bite my thumb in your general direction
rawr
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i am stalkar you.
oO
quoot spam ftw
mine is teh bettar
i bite my thumb in your general direction
rawr
i do say ol chap your pants are rather big LOL
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i am stalkar you.
oO
quoot spam ftw
mine is teh bettar
i bite my thumb in your general direction
rawr
i do say ol chap your pants are rather big LOL
no1 understands that
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fixed
i am stalkar you.
oO
quoot spam ftw
mine is teh bettar
i bite my thumb in your general direction
rawr
i do say ol chap your pants are rather big LOL
no1 understands that
of cours not i dont think the author even found it funny
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fixed
i am stalkar you.
oO
quoot spam ftw
mine is teh bettar
i bite my thumb in your general direction
rawr
i do say ol chap your pants are rather big LOL
no1 understands that
of cours not i dont think the author even found it funny
I think the author needs help
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fixed
i am stalkar you.
oO
quoot spam ftw
mine is teh bettar
i bite my thumb in your general direction
rawr
i do say ol chap your pants are rather big LOL
no1 understands that
of cours not i dont think the author even found it funny
I think the author needs help
i think this quote spam is coming along quite nicely
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fixed
i am stalkar you.
oO
quoot spam ftw
mine is teh bettar
i bite my thumb in your general direction
rawr
i do say ol chap your pants are rather big LOL
no1 understands that
of cours not i dont think the author even found it funny
I think the author needs help
i think this quote spam is coming along quite nicely
hai
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fixed
i am stalkar you.
oO
quoot spam ftw
mine is teh bettar
i bite my thumb in your general direction
rawr
i do say ol chap your pants are rather big LOL
no1 understands that
of cours not i dont think the author even found it funny
I think the author needs help
i think this quote spam is coming along quite nicely
hai
www.hai2u.cm
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fixed
i am stalkar you.
oO
quoot spam ftw
mine is teh bettar
i bite my thumb in your general direction
rawr
i do say ol chap your pants are rather big LOL
no1 understands that
of cours not i dont think the author even found it funny
I think the author needs help
i think this quote spam is coming along quite nicely
hai
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bannage ^ oh, and btw, hai is japanese for yes
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fixed
i am stalkar you.
oO
quoot spam ftw
mine is teh bettar
i bite my thumb in your general direction
rawr
i do say ol chap your pants are rather big LOL
no1 understands that
of cours not i dont think the author even found it funny
I think the author needs help
i think this quote spam is coming along quite nicely
hai
www.hai2u.cm
bannage ^ oh, and btw, hai is japanese for yes
fixed. :)
enough is enough. please stop the useless quote spamming.
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fixed
i am stalkar you.
oO
quoot spam ftw
mine is teh bettar
i bite my thumb in your general direction
rawr
i do say ol chap your pants are rather big LOL
no1 understands that
of cours not i dont think the author even found it funny
I think the author needs help
i think this quote spam is coming along quite nicely
hai
www.hai2u.cm
bannage ^ oh, and btw, hai is japanese for yes
fixed. :)
ohhhh...it makes a pretty curve.....
lame
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fixed
i am stalkar you.
oO
quoot spam ftw
mine is teh bettar
i bite my thumb in your general direction
rawr
i do say ol chap your pants are rather big LOL
no1 understands that
of cours not i dont think the author even found it funny
I think the author needs help
i think this quote spam is coming along quite nicely
hai
www.hai2u.cm
bannage ^ oh, and btw, hai is japanese for yes
fixed. :)
ohhhh...it makes a pretty curve.....
You people are evil. You totally hijacked his tread :P
Quote from: ObidoseI am now getting quite well into creating my first map and would like feedback. It's not very detailed but that will come with time, I just want feedback about the general idea of the map.
Idea: An underground lab studying the aliens with the hopes of finding a way to defeat them, however they escape and run amok.
Here are a few screenies:






If anyone wants a better look I can package and upload the map, but tbh I think that can wait until I complete at least the whole layout.
Quote from: TRaKYou people are evil. You totally hijacked his tread :P
That's because these people are retarded.
map looks good. add more details soon. it looks fun.
Quote from: Lava CroftQuote from: TRaKYou people are evil. You totally hijacked his tread :P
That's because these people are retarded.
QFT!
vcxzet: Your giant dretch's baackground color doesn't match with the comment's baackground color, you should make it transparent.
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It's transparent, get a real browser.
I have been working (slowly) on this map and I have completed the basic layout.
Just a little more before I release alpha 1 so you can get a general feel for the map. I expect to release my first alpha either today or tomorrow.
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fixed
i am stalkar you.
oO
quoot spam ftw
mine is teh bettar
i bite my thumb in your general direction
rawr
i do say ol chap your pants are rather big LOL
no1 understands that
of cours not i dont think the author even found it funny
I think the author needs help
i think this quote spam is coming along quite nicely
hai
www.hai2u.cm
bannage ^ oh, and btw, hai is japanese for yes
fixed. :)
ohhhh...it makes a pretty curve.....
Srry, had to do it :P
The map's looking good,is the alpha with or without details?
Ok, alpha 1 released, se first post for details and to-do list.
Alpha 1 release:
http://www.mediafire.com/?dhy3hnw5nze
New screenies of Alpha 1 uploaded:
(http://i162.photobucket.com/albums/t261/obidose/resba1/th_alienbase.jpg) (http://i162.photobucket.com/albums/t261/obidose/resba1/alienbase.jpg)
(http://i162.photobucket.com/albums/t261/obidose/resba1/th_coldroom-1.jpg) (http://i162.photobucket.com/albums/t261/obidose/resba1/coldroom-1.jpg)
(http://i162.photobucket.com/albums/t261/obidose/resba1/th_elevator.jpg) (http://i162.photobucket.com/albums/t261/obidose/resba1/elevator.jpg)
(http://i162.photobucket.com/albums/t261/obidose/resba1/th_hotroom.jpg) (http://i162.photobucket.com/albums/t261/obidose/resba1/hotroom.jpg)
(http://i162.photobucket.com/albums/t261/obidose/resba1/th_humanbase.jpg) (http://i162.photobucket.com/albums/t261/obidose/resba1/humanbase.jpg)
(http://i162.photobucket.com/albums/t261/obidose/resba1/th_obsdeck.jpg) (http://i162.photobucket.com/albums/t261/obidose/resba1/obsdeck.jpg)
(http://i162.photobucket.com/albums/t261/obidose/resba1/th_lab.jpg) (http://i162.photobucket.com/albums/t261/obidose/resba1/lab.jpg)
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fixed
i am stalkar you.
oO
quoot spam ftw
mine is teh bettar
i bite my thumb in your general direction
rawr
i do say ol chap your pants are rather big LOL
no1 understands that
of cours not i dont think the author even found it funny
I think the author needs help
i think this quote spam is coming along quite nicely
hai
www.hai2u.cm
bannage ^ oh, and btw, hai is japanese for yes
fixed. :)
ohhhh...it makes a pretty curve.....
Srry, had to do it :P
The map's looking good,is the alpha with or without details?
Lol,
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Galore!!![/size] Looks good, play it in Dretch Storm. I like the skybox :D But plz stop the quotespamming. Its annoying! :wink: