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Title: My first map
Post by: Ripperjack on March 15, 2008, 08:50:46 AM

Like the title says.
opinion pleaze.

http://www.mc-design.nl/noobforce/games/tremulous/base/Kalbunga_beta2.pk3

Title: Re: My first map
Post by: Knowitall66 on March 15, 2008, 09:06:55 AM

This probably should've been posted in 'Level Reviews & Released'.
Your map, Needs a levelshot and .arena file. It's a little too small and the rooms themselves seem oversized. In many areas it is much too dark. The alien base is too open and the human's base would benifit from some defence and maybe an armoury. The map also overall lacks detail.

Title: Re: My first map
Post by: Ripperjack on March 15, 2008, 10:27:43 AM

srry for the post here i forgot to login and accedentaly click this one move topic plz

Title: Re: My first map
Post by: Zero Ame on March 15, 2008, 07:02:02 PM

screenshots??

Title: Re: My first map
Post by: E-Mxp on March 16, 2008, 06:42:46 AM

**Screenshot's**
(http://img517.imageshack.us/img517/1021/shot0009zq9.th.jpg) (http://img517.imageshack.us/my.php?image=shot0009zq9.jpg)(http://img231.imageshack.us/img231/596/shot0013xq9.th.jpg) (http://img231.imageshack.us/my.php?image=shot0013xq9.jpg)(http://img231.imageshack.us/img231/1157/shot0010id0.th.jpg) (http://img231.imageshack.us/my.php?image=shot0010id0.jpg)(http://img137.imageshack.us/img137/3708/shot0011pl7.th.jpg) (http://img137.imageshack.us/my.php?image=shot0011pl7.jpg)(http://img137.imageshack.us/img137/9038/shot0014nz4.th.jpg) (http://img137.imageshack.us/my.php?image=shot0014nz4.jpg)

Title: Re: My first map
Post by: mooseberry on March 16, 2008, 06:44:54 AM

@E-Mxp: Is it really that dark in game?

@Ripperjack:I bet using greeble would make some of those walls look nicer.

Title: Re: My first map
Post by: E-Mxp on March 16, 2008, 06:45:59 AM

Quote from: mooseberry on March 16, 2008, 06:44:54 AM
@E-Mxp: Is it really that dark in game?

Yes :)

Title: Re: My first map
Post by: Ripperjack on March 18, 2008, 03:21:45 PM

greeble?

Title: Re: My first map
Post by: n.o.s.brain on March 19, 2008, 02:43:34 AM

Greeble (http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Greeble)

Title: Re: My first map
Post by: mooseberry on March 19, 2008, 04:20:07 AM

Quote from: n.o.s.brain on March 19, 2008, 02:43:34 AM
Greeble (http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Greeble)

Indeed, on some of these "Tremor-ish (http://img231.imageshack.us/my.php?image=shot0010id0.jpg)" walls, greeble would help break it up and make it look better.

Title: Re: My first map
Post by: techhead on March 19, 2008, 11:25:33 AM

Now I have a form-letter response to many maps:
"Needs more greeble!!!"

Title: Re: My first map
Post by: Lava Croft on March 19, 2008, 03:08:55 PM

Quote from: techhead on March 19, 2008, 11:25:33 AM
Now I have a form-letter response to many maps:
"Needs more greeble!!!"

And I can finally start whining about the surplus of greeble'd box maps!

Title: Re: My first map
Post by: mooseberry on March 19, 2008, 09:48:32 PM

http://www.3dfluff.com/files/greebletut/whoneedsgreeble11cr.jpg (http://www.3dfluff.com/files/greebletut/whoneedsgreeble11cr.jpg)

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