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Woohoo!
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AMAGAD ITS GONNA BLOW!!1
Nice work. :D
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Heh, the ol' dretch-in-crate prank, my favorite :D
Sounds like an objective-based map.
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Great work, can't wait until you write more chapters! :)
OOooooooooooOOOOOooooooh! The suspence is KILLING me.
Although I did get certain sleez vibes when Alastair claimed that she 'did get lonely' with that hunk of a man, Foster standing at her side. ;D
I was certain you had degraded to porn short stories afor a while there. :p
I hardly think that any story involving space travel, weapons development and alien research by a large corporate-military conglomerate is complete without a generous helping of stereotypical sleaze. ...and red hot alien-on-human action with lots of scenes of people being raped by a tyrant while it eats them alive at the same time ooh yes!!1!