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Re: Memory
« Reply #30 on: June 17, 2010, 03:47:09 pm »
Finally!
Still awesome though, worth the wait.
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Re: Memory
« Reply #31 on: June 17, 2010, 04:13:08 pm »
Agreed!  Very nicely done!

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Re: Memory
« Reply #32 on: July 09, 2010, 04:19:38 am »
Chapter 4:

“You searched for answers that refused to ever be found ...”
                  -Delain

It was dark in here, and the air smelled stale and tasted dry. Or maybe that was her throat again. Unscrewing the cap on her water bottle, Lisa took another sip and swished it around in her mouth a bit before swallowing it. Much better.

Troy slid his pack off and leaned it against the wall, nearly collapsing. His face was red and his shirt was soaked with sweat, clinging to his body like some strange alien life-form. His water bottle appeared to be empty so Lisa handed him the rest of hers, assuring him it was fine and that she didn't want any more.

“Well, I think your generators died,” McNabb said as he looked around. “No lights on, no nothing.”

Troy shook his head. “I doubt it. Chances are the computer probably shut the lights off to conserve power and then went to sleep. Right, Anne?”

“Pretty much,” she replied. “I can go start it again from the cockpit, but I need a flashlight.”

McNabb tossed her one. “Let us know when you get things running.”

“Oh, you'll know,” she said, flicking the flashlight on and moving down the hall. She hooked a right at the corner and vanished.

“Is it just me or did she make that line sound creepy?” Troy asked, looking around cautiously, as if he expected some hidden defense system to come online at any second and kill them. There was nothing but silence, however. It unnerved all of them.

Lisa lowered herself to her knees and folded her hands on her lap, almost in a praying position. The other, still-yet-unnamed soldiers had stayed outside to stand watch, looking out for any natural predators and the occasional person or group of people from the colony on a hike. “There's a sense of familiarity here,” Lisa said, looking at the floor. “When I'm here on the ship, I feel like... I'm almost in touch with whatever it is I don't know.”

“Probably because you woke up here,” McNabb said from his position by the wall. “It's a starting point for you, so you're probably hoping that whatever secrets your mind is holding, the key to unlock them is somewhere on this ship. Or maybe someone who was here on the ship that died knew who you were. It's a Karith vessel, we established that much-”

“But you don't think the people aboard had hostile intent?” Troy asked, interjecting.

“So far I don't, but there's clearly reason to be worried and suspicious,” McNabb said. “Someone ejected an escape pod for one reason or another, and I intend to find out what was so important that it had to be removed from the ship. Either the person who did it was trying to save something, or maybe it was a message... or that pod contains something that we're not supposed to see.”

Lisa raised her head. “I wonder if it has anything to do with me,” she asked aloud, more to herself than to the other two. She had a dazed look in her eyes, as if she were somewhere far away mentally. Concerned, Troy moved closer to her and put an arm around her shoulders. Her eyes didn't move; she hadn't registered his touch at all.

“Don't go jumping at shadows,” Troy said. “Okay? We'll figure this all out together, as a team. Right now we need to solve the problems that are at hand.”

Lisa nodded slowly, eyes still never wavering. “Of course,” she said, finally looking at him. “Remember the mission. Stick with the plan, soldier,” she added, smiling.

Troy's eyes widened as she spoke these last words, which had also garnered a sharp look from McNabb. It wasn't the words she said, exactly, but how she said them: almost in a commanding tone. None of the two men had time to inquire further: just then the power came back on, flooding the ship with white, fluorescent light. A smooth, female voice came in over the comms. “Welcome to the Explorer,” it said. “We hope you enjoy your trip!”

“I want a goddamn refund,” Lisa said, standing abruptly and moving for the main hold. Troy only stared at her as she walked away, confused and almost afraid. Heart beating a bit faster than normal, he also rose to his feet and started after her, but McNabb reached out and grasped his forearm, stopping him.

“I would be wary if I were you,” he warned, his face stern, his lips pressed into a tight line. “It's clear to any halfwit that watches you fumble around her that she's got your heart, hook, line, and sinker. We don't know what she's hiding, so be on your best guard around her for a while. I don't know if you knew her before...”

Troy dropped his eyes to the floor hastily, suddenly unable to hold McNabb's gaze. His face displayed a range of emotions, but the most prevalent were what looked like fear and worry, perhaps a bit of longing mixed in. “I guess I didn't know half as much as I thought I did,” he said, walking off before McNabb had a chance to process what he said, let alone respond. There's clearly more than meets the eye here, McNabb thought to himself. This isn't over, not by a long shot.

John followed in Troy's footsteps down the hall to the main room of the ship. The first thing he noticed upon entering was that it was starting to smell: the stench of death had hardly left, and decay was setting in slowly. It wasn't unbearable yet, thank god, but he had no intention of sticking around for the afterlife party. “I think we ought to make this as fast as possible,” he said to the others, and they all nodded in agreement. All except for Lisa, who stood back against the wall, away from the others. Her arms were crossed and her gaze steady, her face aimed towards the rear of the ship, as if staring the place down would help her remember anything. John touched her on the shoulder and she responded almost instantly, turning his way and smiling. Old Lisa was back, for now.

“Was woolgathering,” she said, sounding slightly apologetic. Now there was a term McNabb hadn't heard in a while.

“It's fine,” he replied, offering a smile of his own now that his heart was slightly less troubled, at least for the moment. “Listen up, folks. Here are your assigned roles: Lisa, you'll be sticking with me as I explore the barracks and storage areas. Troy, I want you to get into the system and see what visual and audio evidence you can find in the 6 hours or so before the ship crashed, but first I want you to get me and Lisa through any locked doors we come across-”

“Not possible,” Anne interjected. “The ship goes into total lockdown in the event of a major emergency.”

“I'd say this qualifies as major,” Troy said.

“I'll have to override the locks myself from the cockpit, and we can stay in audio touch through the intercom system with this,” Anne continued, reaching into her pocket and removing a small earpiece with a mic attached and tossing it to McNabb. He put it on and made sure it was activated.

“Sounds good,” he said, giving a thumbs up. “Let's get to work, people.”

While Anne made her way to the co-pilots seat, Troy inquired about the audio files. “I can fast forward through the vid records myself and watch for anything suspicious, but 6 hours of audio? That's going to be a bitch. Unless...”

“Unless what?” Lisa asked, finally joining in.

“Well, I can have the computer scan through it in record time, but I'd need some keywords for the system to listen for. For example, if I want it to look for pie, it'll save any logs related to pie whatsoever, for that time frame. Give me some words and I'm good to go.”

McNabb sighed. “Well, Karith is an obvious one. This is a Karith ship, but it's a public passenger and cargo transport ship, so the only people who'd be likely to even mention Karith would be people affiliated with them.”

Troy nodded and tapped on the keyboard while McNabb narrowed his eyes at something across the room. He started walking over there, hand on the butt of his blaster. Lisa followed behind him, slightly curious. What did he see?

“Ok, got it. Computer, how about a lifeform reading to start us off?” Troy asked, clearly enthused by the fact that everything was in working order, more or less.

“There are five beings currently residing on the Explorer,” the computer replied in its smooth, womanly voice.

“Say what?!” Troy exclaimed, his eyes wide. “Me, Lisa, Anne... McNabb... that's only four! The other soldiers stayed outside to guard the ship. What the hell...?” He swiveled in his chair and ran a hand over his face. “There's someone still alive on here... there has to be!”

“Or something,” McNabb said, crouching down by the door that Lisa and Troy had met Anne at when they first escaped the crashed ship. He picked something up off the floor and stood, his back still towards Lisa. She was confused and suddenly afraid.

“What is it?” she asked, trying to peek around his shoulder. He had something in his hand.

“You might want to add a new word to that audio search,” McNabb said, turning around at last. “Aliens.”

Troy tapped on his keyboard while McNabb stepped forward into the light. Held tightly between his index finger and his thumb was the remains of what looked like the amputated limb of some large insect. Lisa shuddered as she remembered the pattering sound from the time she had woken up. Did this belong to one of those... things?

“Did you say.. alien?” Lisa asked, almost bewildered. “I don't think this is the time for jokes.”

McNabb smiled. “I'm not joking. The creature this leg belongs to is extremely insectile, about the size of a basketball, and has a sort of dirty orange colored exoskeleton. Very dangerous, and that's no understatement. So are its brethren.”

Lisa swallowed, unable to take her eyes away from the leg. “Brethren?”

“Oh yeah, there's lots of them. Bigger ones, too.”

“Sounds like you're speaking from experience,” Troy said as he walked over, taking a closer look at the leg.

“I wish I wasn't,” McNabb replied, his face going slightly pale. “Those are times... well, I'd be better off forgetting them.”

“Do you have a name for it?” Lisa asked, finally looking McNabb in the eyes. What he said next gave her chills.

“I have no idea what the hell they call themselves, if they even use those chatters and roars to communicate anything beyond taunts and victory cries. As for ourselves: we called them dretches.”

I know that word, Lisa thought to herself, a feeling of euphoria washing over her as she realized she had finally remembered something that was, well, worth remembering. She didn't know how she did, or when she had learned it... but the word called out to her from some distant island in the vast wasteland that was her mind. It was a step forward at last. She suddenly found herself genuinely smiling for the first time since she'd woken up, and the feeling of true happiness... yes, she remembered that too.

Troy, meanwhile, was completely oblivious to what was happening to her. He was transfixed by the strangeness... the alienness of what McNabb had found. “You said there were more?” he asked, tearing himself away from the limb and returning to his seat.

“Bigger ones, yes,” McNabb replied, setting the dretch leg on a nearby table. “This goes back to the base with us,” he said, giving Troy a stern look. “Bag it up while we wai-”

Without warning, the locks slid back with a thud and the doors hissed open, revealing the dimly lit hallways of the barrack halls and the way to the storage area beyond.

“You're a real peach,” McNabb said aloud, smirking.

And right on time, as usual,” Anne said over the intercom. “Better get your asses moving. We haven't got all day.

vvv Part II below! vvv
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Re: Memory
« Reply #33 on: July 09, 2010, 04:24:10 am »
^^^ Part I Above! ^^^

“Sure thing,” McNabb said, turning the safety on his blaster off and moving through the doorway. “Come on, Lisa. Let's see where the dark, grey road leads us.”

Lisa reluctantly followed, being sure to stay behind McNabb and out of his way. She didn't want to interfere with whatever he'd be doing. As for finding out where the road led... well, she wasn't entirely sure she wanted to know. “Searching for answers that refuse to ever be found,” Lisa said quietly under her breath, but McNabb was apparently gifted with supernatural hearing, as he heard every word.

“Oh, we'll find the answers,” he said, smiling lightly as if to assure her that everything would be a-okay.

On that subject, Lisa certainly hoped so.

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

They trekked onward some 40 feet or so, moving carefully around the debris in the very dim light provided by the emergency lights. Apparently the connection to the overhead fluorescent tubes had been cut in the crash, unlike the rest of the ship. Lisa found herself thankful that it was as dark as it was; it meant she didn't have to see what lay in the shadows. Bugs and dust and dead bodies... the very thought made her shiver. She rubbed her arms through her jumpsuit and stayed close to McNabb, who apparently knew exactly where he wanted to go. “Storage?” she asked.

“The escape pods are located back there as well. I want to see who launched it and locate a hint as to what it was they sent off, if there's any hints to be found,” McNabb replied as he ducked through a doorway. “Something big and important was hidden on this ship, and I intend to find out exactly what.”

“Involving the aliens?” she asked, feeling strange for even having to use that word. Aliens... that was something that humanity had long made up stories about, but had never seen... but hadn't McNabb seen them? “And what about what you mentioned earlier... you used the word dretches?”

“I'll tell you about that later,” McNabb said as they reached the door to the storage area. “Anne, this door is stuck. Fix it for me?”

Kick it. It always had a habit of sticking.

McNabb gave it the boot and it slid open with a hiss. “Flashlights on,” he said, pulling his out and switching it on. Lisa searched her belt for hers, but no luck. Food packet, check. Knife, check. Flashlight, no check. Frustrated, she told McNabb she didn't have one, but they were in luck as he'd brought an extra. She took it and switched it on, cautiously aiming it around the room as they entered it.

“What are we looking for, specifically?” she asked, peering at the crates around them, wooden and metal alike.

“That,” he said, pointing towards the row of escape pods along the left wall. Each pod had a circular 'iris' style door that opened when the emergency systems activated, ready to be launched. All of the doors here were shut, however. All except for one: that pod was missing entirely and now lay on the surface of the planet, in the woods not far from here.

“Look over there,” McNabb said, aiming his light at a body against the wall; that of a man about age 40, with short brown hair that was receding. He wore a white jumpsuit, similar to the other ship crew, and it too had a company logo. “Ten dollars says he's the one who send the pod off. Probably worked back here, stacking boxes.”

Lisa nodded and turned her light to the right, then screamed. McNabb jumped slightly and looked at where she was pointing the beam. It was the remains of a crate, now broken into pieces. That wasn't what made her scream, however; it was the large green leg poking out from under the debris. Moving slowly and carefully, McNabb walked over and kicked a piece of wood aside, revealing a fat green creature about the size of a 5 gallon barrel of water. Seeing that it didn't move, he decided to kneel beside it.

“What is it?” Lisa asked, moving a bit closer but still not wanting to get with touching distance.

“Granger. They're the builders.”

Lisa didn't inquire more about that just yet, since there would be time for questions later. “Is it alive? Is that the thing the computer picked up?”

McNabb shook his head and rose from his position on the floor. “Dead as a damn doornail. Whatever the system was talking about, it's somewhere else on this ship. Let's go back to the main hold. I've found all I need to.”

The two of them exited through the door they came in, moving quickly down the hall. They were about halfway down it when Lisa stopped in front of an open doorway, peering through it with a strange look on her face.

“What is it?” McNabb asked, standing next to her. “Was this your room?”

She nodded slowly, as if in a trance. Maybe she was on one of those memory hunting binges again, but McNabb hoped not. She got weird when she was like that.

“Mind if I take a peek inside?”

She nodded again and backed up a couple feet, giving him room to move past her. While he was busy exploring the darkened sleeping quarters, Lisa stayed out in the hall. A sudden mention of her name brought her out of her trance and into reality.

“Lisa!”

She blinked and looked down the hall, only to see Anne standing there. “What are you doing?” Lisa asked, frowning. “Aren't you supposed to be in the cockpit?”

Anne walked towards her and reached out, grabbing her arm and pulling her away from the room door. “You've already seen what's back there, haven't you?”

“If you mean all the boxes and the dead guy and the... the granger, yeah,” Lisa replied, pulling her arm away from Anne's grasp. “Why the hell are you asking me- wait, do you know something?”

Anne looked around them and leaned closer, placing her lips next to Lisa's ear. “Yeah, I know something. I know a lot of things, including the story behind those aliens... I might even know about you.”

This last statement made her heart go faster. Was it possible? This woman was clearly more than just a co-pilot, unless she was bluffing. Lisa didn't think she was bluffing, though... or maybe she just really, really hoped Anne was telling the truth. “I assume you're not going to just hand this information over,” Lisa said, the idea that her identity was possibly so close yet so far away threatening to dampen her mood slightly. But I could be me again as soon as tomorrow, she thought. A trickle of fear dripped into her heart at the thought of finding out the truth. What if it was something I was better off forgetting?

“Actually, I will,” Anne replied, backing away and smiling. “As soon as we get back to the base and somewhere private, I'll open up about- what the hell?”

Lisa saw Anne's eyes go wide a split second before the low growl reached her ears, sounding almost like a purr. Neither of them had time to move. Some pink, long-legged thing leapt off the wall and onto Anne's face, some thing that was all teeth and eyes and thrashing limbs. Anne began to scream as she backed into the wall, raising her hands to pull the voracious alien off her, but it was to no avail. The thing wrapped its tail around her throat to both silence her and get a tighter grip as it tore at her face with its teeth, blood flowing like a river to the floor. In a matter of seconds the co-pilot stopped convulsing in pain and went still, dropping to the floor. As for the pink thing itself, it jumped off her face gracefully and gripped the wall, looking right at Lisa.

McNabb came running out just in time to see Anne drop like a sack of potatoes, halting in his tracks when he spotted the alien. “Basilisk!” he exclaimed, reaching for the blaster that he'd reholstered as they left the storage room. Lisa, however, was far faster. Moving with a speed previously unknown to her, she unsheathed her knife and threw it, impaling the basilisk on seven inches of steel. The thing squealed and dropped to the floor, writhing in pain. Gritting her teeth, Lisa stepped on its head, crushing it to death.

“Guess that other lifeform found us,” McNabb said, moving past her to kneel next to Anne. He placed two fingers on her throat, then looked away. “She's dead,” he said, removing his jacket and laying it over her head and torso. “Help me carry her to the main room.”

Lisa grabbed the feet while McNabb lifted the body from the shoulders, and together they carried the woman out of the hallway and to a table next to the one the dretch leg laid on. Shocked, Troy got up and ran over to them. “What the hell happened?!”

“Alien got her, but Lisa killed it. We don't have to worry about that fifth being on the ship. Number just dropped to three,” McNabb said. Troy reached for the jacket covering Anne's face, but the older man stopped him. “It's not pretty,” he said, his face grim. “How goes your job?”

Troy sighed and stepped back, putting his hands into his pockets. “Nothing on the vid at all. There's no cameras in storage and very few in the barracks area. Most of them are out here, in the pilot area, the eating area and the engine rooms. Apparently the computer picked up a couple things on the audio, so I had those files transferred to a flash drive. We can listen back at the base.”

“That's what I wanted to hear. Stick that leg in your pack and lets find a stretcher for Anne. We're taking her back with us.”

“Yes sir,” Troy said as he got to work. “Meet you outside.”

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

The sun was high in the sky by the time they finished, so Lisa guessed it was about 1 in the afternoon. She was sitting by the stretcher that Anne's body was laying on. They had wrapped her in some white sheets they'd found in a locker, some small red spots growing where... where her face had been. Lisa was depressed. Anne might have been lying, but something told her that the co-pilot had been the key she'd been seeking. And now she was dead, and her memories still yet laid beyond some locked door in her mind.

“Fucking aliens,” she said, her dead down. John and Troy stood nearby, conversing with the soldiers.

“Once we're at base you'll take her to the freezer room, so we can keep her body cold,” McNabb explained to the two soldiers, messing with his data-pad. “Troy, I want you-”

“Hey! Look over there!” Troy interrupted, pointing over McNabb's shoulder towards the treeline. The commander turned and Lisa looked up. It was the second group from the base, the one that had investigated the escape pod. Four soldiers and the two other people from the ship; two of the soldiers carried a large metal container by its handles between them.

“What the hell?! I've been trying to raise you on the radio for the last God knows how long!” McNabb shouted over the distance.

“We got the wrong frequency!” one of the soldiers shouted back. “But I think we found the right thing at the pod!” he added, pointing to the aforementioned container.

“Was it locked?” McNabb asked as they drew closer.

“The pod? Probably, but the crash rendered that feature completely useless. The damn thing it hit a rock on the way down, busted the door to hell. Took a little prying, but that bitch revealed her secrets to us. This box, on the the other hand...”

“Figured as much,” McNabb said. “We're heading back to base right now. Lisa, ready to go?”

Lisa stood and nodded. “I guess,” she replied.

“Alright then,” McNabb said as the soldiers in their group lifted the stretcher. “Let's get home, folks.”

"Amen to that!" Troy exclaimed.

Lisa thought it was music to her ears.

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Author's Note:

Sorry about the rather long delay on this chapter. I've been really busy and whatnot and haven't found time to write, but I set this evening aside to finally get a move on and do Chapter 4. The story as we know it is starting to wrap up, but rest assured that we haven't seen the last of Lisa, McNabb, or even the protagonist of The Harder They Fall, Mac Turner. They'll all be back at some future date, I'm sure.

Thank you all for reading, as always, and I hope you enjoyed it! Chapter 5 is coming soon! I'm serious this time!

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Re: Memory
« Reply #34 on: July 09, 2010, 04:01:39 pm »
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Re: Memory
« Reply #35 on: July 09, 2010, 05:10:04 pm »
that was pretty intensely epic
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Re: Memory
« Reply #36 on: July 10, 2010, 03:13:29 pm »
Dude this story is addicting. But I must point out:

Quote from: death skull
Alien got her, but Lisa killed it. We don't have to worry about that fifth being on the ship. Number just dropped to three,” McNabb said. Troy reached for the jacket covering Anne's face, but the older man stopped him. “It's not pretty,” he said, his face grim. “How goes your job?”

do you mean fifth, or filth?

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Re: Memory
« Reply #37 on: July 10, 2010, 07:52:16 pm »
Dude this story is addicting. But I must point out:

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Alien got her, but Lisa killed it. We don't have to worry about that fifth being on the ship. Number just dropped to three,” McNabb said. Troy reached for the jacket covering Anne's face, but the older man stopped him. “It's not pretty,” he said, his face grim. “How goes your job?”

do you mean fifth, or filth?

Definitely 'fifth'. There's only four of them on the ship currently, and they were wondering what mysterious being #5 was (the one the computer mentioned). The basilisk was killed and Anne was also killed, thus:

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Re: Memory
« Reply #38 on: July 10, 2010, 08:19:58 pm »
Ah. K.

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Re: Memory
« Reply #39 on: July 11, 2010, 07:01:34 am »
Dude this story is addicting. But I must point out:

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Alien got her, but Lisa killed it. We don't have to worry about that fifth being on the ship. Number just dropped to three,” McNabb said. Troy reached for the jacket covering Anne's face, but the older man stopped him. “It's not pretty,” he said, his face grim. “How goes your job?”

do you mean fifth, or filth?

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Re: Memory
« Reply #40 on: July 15, 2010, 06:22:36 am »
Skulleh, you never cease to amaze, as well as make me want to write more
Can't wait for chapter 5!
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Re: Memory
« Reply #41 on: July 20, 2010, 10:55:28 pm »
I think I see some Robert Ludlum influences. Am I right?

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Re: Memory
« Reply #42 on: July 21, 2010, 06:33:40 am »
I think I see some Robert Ludlum influences. Am I right?

Well, the fact that I had to look the guy up would say no.  :P

I've heard of the movies, though. I remember the advertisements on T.V.
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Re: Memory
« Reply #43 on: July 21, 2010, 06:42:25 pm »
I mention, because Lisa reminds me of Bourne. They both have memory loss, and both appear to have some serious skills that are tied to a sinister past. You really gotta watch one or two of those movies (or read the book if have time). You'll see just how alike your character seems.

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Re: Memory
« Reply #44 on: July 21, 2010, 09:24:00 pm »
Bourne trilogy ftw.
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Re: Memory
« Reply #45 on: September 02, 2010, 02:48:32 am »
Chapter 5:

“Oh, it makes me wonder
What if I slip, will they catch me
Or watch me fall?
I am walking on a wire.”

            - Third Day


Crack.

Lisa visibly winced as she stepped on a fallen branch. Cursing her clumsiness, she knelt next to a tree and placed a hand on the lower branches, pushing them out of the way. She narrowed her eyes as she peered through the bushes ahead, trying to see what was happening at the base. Some sort of commotion had started to take place in their absence, and from the way the small group of men and women out in front of the base were dressed, she guessed they were officials and law enforcement from the colony down the hill.

“Great,” McNabb muttered as he moved up next to her. “Just what we needed... more problems.”

“I guess this doesn't bode well for us?” Troy asked, squinting to see better. “Ten dollars says they're here for us and the ship.”

“That's a bet you'd win,” McNabb replied, holding up his right hand in a fist. Behind them, the group of soldiers halted and sat both the stretcher and the metal box down. “Troy, look here,” McNabb said.

Troy turned his head and frowned. “Wha-”

Wham!

“Fuck!” he yelled as McNabb punched him in the nose. Losing his balance, he fell backwards into the dirt and dead leaves. “Fucker! Trying to break my no-”

The older man reached out and placed a hand over Troy's mouth. “Be quiet. Do you think those men out there would believe that all of you came without a fight?” he asked, motioning to the officials in front of the base as he spoke.”That's what I thought.”

“Sir?” asked one of the soldiers behind them. “What about the crate and the body?”

McNabb looked at him for a moment, then to his right, through the trees. “Well, if you go that way, you can get around to the back of the base relatively undisturbed and hopefully unseen, and take the other two passengers with you. Two of my men, stay here. The others: just let the guard out back know I said it's okay to go in that way and he'll open up. Take the crate to the science team, but tell them to wait till I arrive to open the damn thing. I know they'll be freaking out when they lay their eyes on it, but maintain the rules: not till I arrive, understand? Can you do that?”

“Sir, yes sir,” replied the soldier. “And the body, sir?” he asked again.

Sighing, McNabb looked out at the officials. “Where else? Take her to the morgue.”

Nodding, the group of soldiers, along with the passengers, moved through the trees as quickly and quietly as they could. McNabb couldn't help but wince at every twig snap.

“Come on,” he said to Troy and Lisa.

- - - - - - - -

Agent Carstairs looked up as Commander McNabb approached with the man and woman in tow. Brushing his suit off, he stepped forward and extended a hand. “Hello sir. I'm Special Agent Jeff Carstairs, of the Palanthia Colony Security Force, or PCSF if you need an abbreviation. The men and women with me here are members of the task force.”

“Sorry if I don't stop to shake your hand,” McNabb said, moving past with the prisoners. “Kinda busy here.”

“Certainly, sir,” Carstairs said, following him into the base. The automated doors slid open with a hiss as they approached, and the rush of cool air felt like a blessing to him. It was so damn hot out this time of year. Wiping his brow with a cloth napkin, he considered asking where the water fountain was, but McNabb was moving full speed ahead and showed no signs of stopping.

“They're from the ship, aren't they?” Carstairs inquired.

“Maybe. What's it to you?”

“I'd like an audience with them. A personal one, if you don't mind. Get some names, run a few history checks, find out what's going on with them. I represent the security force for the entire colony, and I want to do my job when it comes to keeping the people safe.”

McNabb slid open a cell door and pushed Troy inside rather harshly, sending Lisa in after him and slamming the door shut with a clang. “With all due respect, Agent Carstairs, I do mind. These are my prisoners, and as I told someone earlier, they're safer in here than they are any place out there.”

“They're safer? What? I meant the people in the colony. Who do you need to keep them safe from?” Carstairs asked, gesturing to Lisa and Troy.

“From people like you,” McNabb replied, putting an arm around the agent's shoulders and leading him to the front of the base. “People with prying eyes and big noses and fingers that just won't stay still. I'll take care of this business myself, without your help, understood? And if I should ever need you, I'll give you a call.”

As they reached the doors, McNabb pushed the agent outside and slammed a button on a nearby panel.

“Here's my car-” Carstairs started to say, but the doors slid shut and locked. Gritting his teeth, the agent brushed his suit off with his hands and turned to his subordinates. “Bastard,” he muttered. “Let's go back to town.”

- - - - - - - -

Flustered, McNabb headed back to the cell and let the wrongly 'imprisoned' ship crew out. “I really don't like that guy,” McNabb said.

“History?” Troy asked, lightly touching his nose and wincing.

“Yeah, sort of. We go back a couple years.”

“Well, at least you have one,” Lisa muttered, running her fingers through her hair.

“Hey, you shouldn't complain too much,” Troy said. “I mean, you could have a nearly broken nose, like me!”

“Speaking of noses, how's yours?” McNabb asked.

“You hit it. It hurts.”

“Enough said,” McNabb replied. “Now that the pretentious prick from the colony down below is gone, I guess we ought to bust our asses and get over to the science center. I want to know what's in that metal crate.”

Sniffling, Lisa regathered her hair into a ponytail and exhaled slowly. “Alright, let's go. Will you make it, Troy?” she asked him, a sly smile on her face.

Half-scowling, Troy straightened up and looked down at her with a stern expression. “Why, darling, I'll have you know that we video technicians are no weak, sickly bunch. Contrary to popular belief, we are in fact brave enough to stare death in the face for five whole seconds before screaming and running for the nearest bunker!”

Giggling, Lisa punched him on the shoulder. “I bet if I hit your nose again you'd be out for the count.”

“You might be right,” Troy replied as they fell into step behind the commander. “But that's not something I'd want to try. Why, I quite relish these painful moments with you and the boss.”

“Flattery will get you nowhere,” McNabb said from up ahead.

“Bullshit. You know he likes it. Right, McNabb?”

“Come around here and I'll show you.”

Troy sighed. “Higher positioned people are so unappreciative these days...”

- - - - - - -

Snap.

McNabb jumped a little bit as one of the scientists pulled on a pair of rubber gloves. He never was fond of the people in the white lab coats. Too smart for him. When he was a kid and the men in the white coats were called doctors, they tried to stick you with sharp needles and tell you that it wasn't going to hurt a bit. He realized that being a scientist or a doctor meant that you probably had to lie a lot, to a lot of people. And on the heels of that thought: after so much time, would you be able to discern truth from fiction?

“I assume you've got this process all figured out, right?” he asked.

The scientist with the gloved hands raised his eyebrows. “Come again?”

“You've written all the necessary reports and whatnot?”

“Of course, Commander McNabb. Would you like to talk about that or should we just go ahead and open it?”

McNabb mumbled something under his breath and nodded. “Sure, let's go. Where's the old man, by the way?”

“He's involved in another project at the moment. Ready team?” the scientist asked. Everyone nodded, and the young man stepped forward, unsnapping the clamps around the edge of the crate, wincing as some white stuff billowed out and faded in the air.

“What's that?” Lisa asked McNabb. She and Troy had been standing behind him, acting as if the crate contained a nuclear weapon or something.

“Looks like the inside of the crate is kept cold, so when he opened it the air rushed out, along with some ice particles. Interesting... a portable refrigeration unit. Maybe whatever they have inside would spoil if left out in the heat...” McNabb replied.

Clank! went the lid on the tabletop as it was flipped back.

Excited, the group closed in around the table in a tight circle. “Dry ice,” the scientist said, reaching inside with one hand. He grabbed whatever was inside and pulled it out, the ice “chattering” as it fell off the item that was withdrawn. The thing in question was a plastic, cylindrical container, about a foot tall and five inches in diameter. As the scientist sat it on the table, McNabb (and those with him) clearly saw that the container had something inside of it.

“It moved when he pulled it out,” Troy said, peeking cautiously around McNabb's shoulder.

“Not completely frozen, then,” McNabb said. “Looks like creep.”

“Creep?” Lisa asked. The liquid within the container appeared to be thick in substance, as if it were molasses. It's appearance wasn't far off either; the color was either dark brown or purple. She couldn't tell which it was from here. All she knew was that it was almost certainly dangerous.

“Remember the green creature back at the ship?” McNabb asked Lisa.

“The granger?”

“Yes. Those are the alien builders. They get this creep from somewhere, we haven't found out where just yet. Anyways, they ingest the creep and begin to digest it, turning into a sort of substance that can be used to build structures and whatnot. When they're ready, they'll spit it out and they'll help the structure start to form, which it then begins to grow on its own without their help. It's a pretty interesting process.” McNabb looked at the scientist. “I presume you're going to store that for later study?”

“Sure thing. We'll let the boss have a look when he gets back,” the young man replied, placing the container back in the crate.

“Excellent. We're done here then,” McNabb replied. Motioning for Troy and Lisa to follow him, he exited the room and headed down the hall.

Troy was amazed and somewhat bewildered by his creep explanation. “So, uh, how do you know that?”

“We captured a few of them during the Karith incident for study. The science team here, along with its leader, performed tests and experiments and all sorts of crazy shit that I preferred to keep my nose out of. I have no problem keeping in the know, but dissections and cages are for the birds. Those white-coated lab nuts can keep those.”

Lisa smiled. “I don't blame you. Science never was a captivating subject for me.”

“Same here,” Troy said, raising his hand and looking at his watch. “Damn, almost eight o'clock already. I might see if they have any leftovers in the mess hall, and then I'm going to bed. Commander here has me wore out.”

McNabb snorted. “You are definitely not soldier material.”

“Thank God. Night guys... well, guy and girl,” Troy replied, winking. The two waved farewell and he walked off towards the cafeteria. Lisa was thinking about heading to bed herself when McNabb spoke up.

“Mind if you come make a pit stop in my office?”

She turned to him and raised a quizzical eyebrow. “Sure, I don't mind. As long as we don't take all night.”

McNabb grinned. “Don't worry, I don't have that in mind. Just wanted to talk about something.”

She started to ask him what he meant, but then she got it. Her face went red. Luckily he had already turned away and was heading down the hall. She followed him meekly, her gaze on the floor. Sheesh, it's only a joke anyways. He's old enough to be your dad, for God's sake!

“Besides, I'm old enough to be your dad,” he said, echoing her thoughts. “So you're safe with me. Want coffee when we get there?”

“Yeah, sure. What'd you want to talk about?”

He opened the door to his office and flicked the light on. “Well now, no rush,” he said. “Coffee first, then business.” He moved across the room and rummaged through the cabinets. “Now where did I put the can of Folgers...”

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Re: Memory
« Reply #46 on: September 02, 2010, 02:50:54 am »
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Lisa took a seat in one of the nearby chairs, folding one leg under her other one and leaning on the arm of the chair itself. “Pretty big, comfy chairs for such a small base,” she remarked.

“Don't let size deter your thoughts. We've got some of the best stuff this side of the galaxy out here in this little base. Black or cream and sugar?”

“The latter,” Lisa replied. “So, what'd you wanna talk about?”

“Damn, you're persistent and impatient,” McNabb replied, bringing over the cups of coffee. Lisa took hers and sipped it, immediately feeling warm inside.

“Mmmm,” was all she said.

McNabb chuckled. “I make pretty good coffee if I do say so myself. Alright, let's move on to business. You already know we wanted you working with us on this particular mission, and you accepted. But I'm thinking about upping the offer.”

“What do you mean?” she asked, knowing full well what he meant.

Sighing, McNabb folded his hands on his desk and leaned forward. “Well, no skipping around the bush. Your situation is a dire one. You've lost most of your memories involving your adult life. I have a feeling that this was no freak accident. I think this was downright intentional. You possess skills that have no clear origin. On one hand, I want to keep you here till we find out what happened to you and how you came to acquire such skills. On the other hand, I would also like your assistance while we go about that.”

Lisa sipped some more of her coffee and motioned for him to go on.

“This isn't something that could happen overnight. It's gonna take a while. During that time, I figure it'd be good for both us at the base, as well as yourself, to be involved in activities best suited to your nature.”

She had already made up her mind, but she wanted to inquire further. “How would you help me with my memories?”

“Well, the science team leader has been known to crank out some very interesting technology. He's a genius in his own right. I have no doubt that as a powerful man of science, he could help you overcome whatever is blocking those memories. Hopefully sooner than later,” McNabb finished, smiling.

Lisa looked at the floor for a moment, quickly digesting what she'd been told. Didn't really seem like an option, to her. Where else was she going to go? What else was she going to do?

“I accept,” she said, looking the Commander in the eye.

McNabb leaned back at last, his smile now a grin. “Excellent. I'm glad to have you on board. A few papers from now, you'll be an official member of our little group. That's all I wanted to cover, really.”

Lisa nodded. “I better be getting to bed myself, then.” She stood and sat the coffee cup on his desk. “Thank you. You know, for what you've done and what you're doing.”

“Hey, ain't no skin off of my nose. I'm always glad to help a friend. Granted, we haven't known each other for long... but let's just say I have good feelings about a few select people in my life. You're one of them,” McNabb said, winking.

Lisa smiled. “Well, glad to hear that. Good night,” she said, heading for the door. She was almost out into the hall when she remembered something.

“I almost forgot to show you this,” she said, heading back towards his desk. Reaching into her pocket, she pulled out the picture and handed it over.

“What's th-” he started to ask, but then he saw who was in the picture. He grew still for a moment, then looked up at her, his face expressionless. “Where did you get this?”

“It was under my pillow,” Lisa replied, unable to determine if he was angry or shocked or something else entirely. “Do you... do you know them?”

McNabb looked back at the picture. By all rights he shouldn't tell her about this, but she had skills that they needed. Of course, if he told her what had been going on in the past few years... well, she already knew about the aliens. How could much more hurt her or scare her off? “Yeah, I know them,” he said finally. “The man is Mac Turner. That's his wife Jess and daughter Emily with him. He... he was a soldier here, at this base. There's a couple people who were here then. They'd remember him. Can't forget a man like that.”

Lisa took a seat, again. “Did he... did he die?”

McNabb shrugged. “He left here about 5 years ago, just after the Karith incident. He was a major player in that event, more than you could know. Just a young fellow, mid 20's at the most. He and I got along great, and I almost considered him to be a son.”

“He was one of those few you got along with? The ones you mentioned to Troy?”

Nodding, McNabb continued. “He and Jess got married, and she had the baby, They showed up once or twice a year to visit, and they stayed in that back room. The last time was about two years ago; that picture was taken then just outside the base. If you look closely, you can see a bit of the colony in the bottom right. Anyways, that last time, he and I had a talk and he said that he was probably going to have to stay low for a while. Word was that Karith was royally pissed off and wanted his ass dead for what he helped do to them. So we said our goodbyes, for then, anyways, and he pretty much vanished. I haven't seen any of them since.”

Lisa cocked her head to one side, a quizzical look on her face. “You keep mentioning the Karith incident. What happened?”

“You realize...” McNabb started to say, then hesitated. “Well, you realize if I tell you this, you can't repeat it to anyone? Not even your closest friends. We've been ordered to keep all info and property regarding that event in lockdown, and that includes whatever we may say. Like I said, a few of us here at the base were here then, but no one dares to speak of it to anyone else. Mum's the word, darling. Total silence. Can I trust you?”

Lisa closed her eyes, then nodded. She didn't remember ever being a dishonest and otherwise untrustworthy person; that was good enough for her. Whatever those hidden memories contained, though... well, that was a bridge that could be crossed later.

“I might have to show you a few things as well, but first, the story.” McNabb leaned back and composed himself. “Actually, I think we could use some more coffee. We're gonna need it.”

He got up and walked over to the pot. “The day I met Turner was a rainy one and a loud one. The ship that brought him in set off the damn earsplitting alarm...”

- - - - - - - - - - -

“...and that brings it to a close. Mac and Jess left to raise their little girl, and then the things I told you about earlier happened and I haven't seen them since. I wish I knew where they were, though. Those are the kind of people you don't meet more than once in a lifetime.”

Lisa broke out of her trance. She'd been completely captivated. “So everyone here at the base helped fight the alien scourge?”

“Well, some of them have moved on, but yes, quite a few,” McNabb replied. He knew by her facial expression what question was next.

“But how is that possible?” Lisa asked. “There's not nearly enough soldiers here to pull off such a thing. Also, to have them all so well trained? I doubt it.”

McNabb made a grimace and sighed. “Well, this is where the showing part comes in, I guess. Come with me.”

“Where are we going?”

McNabb said nothing and walked over to the wall. He slid a picture to the left, revealing an electronic keypad built into the wall. He pushed a few keys and part of the wall slid back, revealing a tunnel. “Come on.”

She had no choice but to follow, and her curiosity had gotten a hold of her. After a couple feet, McNabb began to speak again.

“I've been talking with a few commanders at other bases stationed around this area, and they've reported Karith activity as well. They weren't wiped out completely, it seems, just made to be very low key. Nothing like the corporate giant we fought back in the day, five years ago. No one knows what they're up to, as the whole alien incident was kept low key and pretty much only mentioned in top secret government files. I have an idea, though.”

“So they created and bred these aliens?”

McNabb shook his head. “No, they didn't create them. We don't know where they got them from. Nothing in their records about that, and the ones that represented the company in the trials didn't disclose any info about that either. During our galactic expansion, we've never seen any, so any ideas on our end would be complete guesswork.”

“I see. Where are we going?” Lisa asked again.

“This is a back passage to the important science labs. It's where the files and such on the Karith incident are kept, as well as the place the experiments were performed. Those files aren't allowed to be in the base's public database, if you were wondering why they're in the science lab.”

“No, I think I got the idea that they're super top secret,” Lisa replied, smiling.

“Good,” McNabb said, opening a door ahead of them. They emerged into a bright room full of white light. Desks and tables covered most of the floor, with a row of file cabinets against the far wall. Across the room from those were plexiglass cages with holes cut in them. “The aliens were kept there. None of them were small enough to squeeze out through the holes, but we could drop stuff in there. Food and the like. They were awfully fond of rats. And over there, through that door,” he continued, pointing, “is the refrigeration units.”

“Where today's find has been locked away,” a new voice said. Lisa and McNabb turned around. There, behind them, was a man in a wheelchair. He had white hair and a beard to match, and he was still dressed in his lab outfit. “You don't come down this way much, John. These young students and their newfangled ideas rattle me up sometimes. Wish you'd come around more often so we could talk about the good old days.”

McNabb laughed and stepped  forward, patting the older man on the shoulder. “Well, I'll do that. Lisa, I'd like you to meet the head of the science team, Dr. McGregor.”

Lisa smiled and shook his hand. “It's nice to meet you. The Commander here says you're a genius. Everyone could use one of those around, right?”

The two men laughed. “Yes, I'm something of a science wizard, if I say so myself,” McGregor replied.

“Also, considering what you know, Lisa, I think you can drop the commander thing and just call me John,” McNabb said.

“Well, ok... John,” Lisa said, then looked at McGregor. “What put you in that chair, if I may ask?”

“Nasty incident with a dragoon,” he replied. “The thing broke one of our plexiglass containers and took a nice bite out of my left leg. We had to put the thing down, of course. It was too voracious and deadly  to try and capture it in such a closed in area.”

“Oh,” Lisa said, looking at the floor. She tried to imagine being without one of her legs and winced. It would be a horrible life, for her. To be constrained to a chair... that was no fun.

“I've got something to discuss with you,” McNabb said, looking at the lead scientist. “I've been talking with the others in our command circle, and they've reported Karith activity as well. They unanimously agreed that we should send out a spec ops team to investigate. I'm sure you understand who they mean when they said they wanted the best of the best.”

McGregor frowned, then nodded. “Yes, I suppose it's time for that again. I was itching for some action anyways. Shall I go ahead and wake them?”

McNabb nodded. “The sooner the better.”

Nodding, McGregor wheeled over to a desk and began typing at a computer. Slowly the lights began to dim.

“You know, John... you're pretty crafty when it comes to avoiding my questions,” Lisa said, smirking.

“Oh, is that so?” McNabb replied, smirking right back at her.

“Yeah, it is. You never explained how you took down Karith with just this base full of soldiers and scientists. You also said Mac had a very large role in taking them down. How does one man and a military base take on a huge corporation?”

The room was now almost completely dark, but behind Lisa, blue and white lights began to glow.

McNabb crossed his arms. “Well, in some ways Mac was one man... and in others, he wasn't one man at all.”

“What?!” Lisa asked, bewildered. “What are you talking about?”

“I,” McNabb replied, motioning behind her with his head, “am talking about them.”

Lisa turned around, her eyes widening. Panels on the wall had opened, revealing tanks full of light and what looked like some clear, liquid chemical. Above each tank was a distinctive number. But it wasn't the numbering system or the tanks themselves that made her suddenly gasp, but what was floating in them.

“Meet the Turner clones,” McGregor said, wheeling up next to them.

“Oh my God,” Lisa said, walking forward. She touched the glass carefully, almost as if it would break. “They look just like him.” She looked up at the number over the tank. It read: #13.

“They also adopted his combat traits, which is what we really wanted. A lot of them fought beside him too. The best soldiers in the galaxy, right here,” McNabb said. “We're going to hand pick a few of them to form the spec ops team and investigate these reports. That one there is a bit tougher than the others, so he'll be team leader. Always had a knack for wanting to get the job done. Remember when he disassembled the cloning machine, McGregor?”

The scientist chuckled. “Won't ever forget it.”

Lisa stepped back and took a place next to the others, thinking:

This is something amazing here. Three days ago, I was completely lost and had no place in life. Now I'm heading for a new and brighter future, all in no time. I'm not even sure if I'll want to remember who I was pretty soon. Maybe that's what they should be... forgotten memories. I'll... I'll just make new ones.

“Are they waking up?” she asked.

McNabb nodded. “In a second or so.”

“This is amazing,” Lisa said, repeating her earlier thought.

McNabb nodded. “Yes... yes, it is.”

Yes, that's what I'll do. Make new memories. And the person that I was... well, she can stay dead. Time for me to make a new life...  time to become someone new and better.

Inside the tank, #13's fingers began to move.

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Re: Memory
« Reply #47 on: September 02, 2010, 03:11:26 am »
Author's Note:

It's been a while since I posted in this story. Well, two things sort of happened at once: I got too busy with real life, and I hit my annual writer's block. Every year around this time, I can't write worth a darn and it really sucks when I have something big going on. Well, a few days ago I decided I was going to push that block out of the way and sit down to finish this story, for my fans and (most of all) for myself. Doing that was beneficial in a very important way: I actually really feel like writing stuff again.

Now you're probably wondering why the story ended like it did. I'd like to tell you that I have complete control over my stories, but that's not really the truth. My job is to tell a story as it is shown to me, and like it or not, this is how it ends. Honestly, I don't think it's all that bad myself.

We haven't seen the end of Lisa or her mysterious amnesia. There's more to be told there, as well as McNabb's tale and eventually Turner's as well. Even Troy has a significant part.

If you're wondering where this fits into the 'The Harder They Fall' universe, consider it a sort of filler between the aforementioned THTF and the eventual sequel. Everyone in this story will be back when I get around to writing that.

I hope you enjoyed reading this as much as I enjoyed writing it. I missed the characters from THTF and I missed that universe. I think the fact that the developers don't have an actual story for Trem makes it so much easier to write for. There's literally unlimited tales to be told.

Thanks to the devs for an awesome game, thanks to the players for helping support it, and thanks to each and every fan and reader for taking the time to look at this and leave your comments. We writers couldn't live without ya!

Until next time!

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Re: Memory
« Reply #48 on: September 02, 2010, 04:21:48 am »
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Re: Memory
« Reply #49 on: September 02, 2010, 05:34:05 am »
You have been an inspiration. Thank you.

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Re: Memory
« Reply #50 on: September 02, 2010, 05:39:11 am »
Excellent writing, as usual ;)

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« Reply #51 on: September 08, 2010, 04:25:37 am »
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« Reply #52 on: September 08, 2010, 06:59:44 pm »
I love you!!!! But get someone else to proofread it next time  ;)
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« Reply #53 on: October 23, 2010, 04:44:10 am »
Due to the sheer awesomeness of this story, I put it into a .pdf so I could read it on my iPod.

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