Yeah, this map won't work as a funmap, let alone a serious gameplay map. I encourage you to continue mapping, but releases like this don't really contribute anything to trem.
A few suggestions :
- Try to avoid obvious repeating textures.
- Avoid making your map dependent on other maps, especially custom maps.
- The red column in the middle looks awful.
- Please make serious gameplay an objective when you make a map. The last thing trem needs is more joke maps, hardly anyone plays them and they're usually only fun for a couple minutes, if even that.
I look forward to seeing your next effort, hopefully you will improve
