@Bissig: Duly noted. See change and notation. Thanks for the info. Much appreciated. It's the small details that make it all seem complete.
By the way, was there a specific question that you had about the back story, the terminology or a particular star system? Happy to answer any inquiries.
@Squad-mates: OK, just checking - Who is still playing? Kaleo? (You did the last post before me, so I assume yes.) Hendrich? (You have added some artful entries, so I assume yes for you also.) Syntac? (We knocked you out but you can still dream, have a flashback, suddenly jump up and start dancing, etc.) Plague Bringer? (I'll bet you are working on other fiction. Are you still working on "The Collector"? I would like to see more. I hope my comments were not destructive of your creativity.)
Sorry about my own semi-negligence of this and at least four other threads (Querulous, Unvanquished, Trem RP #1, PB's story thread, etc.). Got busy with RL stuffs, and a friend asked me to join his clan. But I'm sure I'll have a lovely burst of inspiration SOON.
P.S. I'd say we have just about reached the end of this Scene and Act, and it's time to descend into that HR facility. Is it ready for occupancy, Mr. Dungeon Master?
Also, would you guys like to set up a time to "practice", "spar", "scrim", what-have-you? It would be interesting, to have the whole "clan", "guild", "team" on at one time. Anybody up for a team-writing session?
My time zone is GMT-8 (PST - US). I could be available, for a pre-arranged "clan practice", typically around 9 to 11 pm (my time), or alternatively, PM me, if anyone is interested. Please post your time zone (I believe I know everyone's approximate locations: two Canucks, an Aussie, and me and the other guy are West Coast US, iirc), and when you might possibly be interested in tentatively "getting together" for a "team-building session".
Cheers!
Let me know if anyone else has any other groovy ideas for kick-starting this hawg.