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TheEternalDretch

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Alien Encounter (Tremulous Fiction)
« on: March 06, 2009, 02:04:42 pm »
This here be a story written by the mystic Glunnator, who gave me permission to post it. He never finished the story, though I think it's just fine the way it is.
Also, The story is split over three posts because it's too long for just one. Darn character limits.



Alien Encounter By Glunnator (Unfinished)


John lifted his hands, and brought them forward, catching Commander Yaké full in the stomach, and catapulting him off the top of the tower and into the chaos of the battle below... John felt sick as he saw the result of the landing. He turned away in the direction of the trapdoor only to run into the smirking evil and above all ugly face of Captain Strein. 'Going somewhere, are we, Wades?' he cackled evilly. ‘Actually, I was about to go looking for you!’ John’s voice stabbed his ears. ‘Is that so, Wades? I can see you’re a talented soldier, man, why haven’t you made promotion yet?’
‘Shutup, you bastard! You’re a disgrace to humankind! How dare you talk to me like that! How dare you talk to any of us like that, you filthy deserter! You... you... gaaaaah!’
In a blur of rage, John pulled out his sword and threw a sidelong blow at Strein, who blocked it with his own sabre.
‘Oh, don’t be angry, Wades.’ Strein grinned, his horrible features still jiggling from the blow. ‘There’s no reason to—‘ ‘Yaaaaarrrgh!’
John spun in the opposite direction, his blade scythed through the air around him and hit home. It caught Strein sideways. It went through his arm and into his chest, and stayed there.
‘Gerk... hgn..  ahh...’ Strein looked down at his absence of a right arm and a deep sideways swordcut, complete with sword. Red blood spread and stained Strein’s blue uniform. His expression clearly said something along the lines of : ‘You son of a...’
‘Haah... hrg... hraaa...’ He squeaked
‘That’s enough, Strein! You’re not going to survive that cut.’ John said.
I’ll make sure of that! He thought.
‘Arrgh... y-.. you...’
‘Have you got anything more to say, Captain?’
Strein’s eyes were fixed on the sword in his chest, his face contorted in horrible horror.
‘You.. ahh.. ‘ng...’
‘Yes?’
Suddenly, rage overtook Strein. He screamed.
‘Aaaaaaaaaaaaarrrghh!’
The battle below paused for a moment, the soldiers stunned. Then it continued, as the troops realised they were standing in the midst of more enemy troops.
‘You Bastard!’ Strein screamed.
‘You’re the bastard, Strein! And don’t you ever forget it!’ John took a fighting position, pulled his hands back, murmured something, spun around until he stood only one foot away from Strein, with both his hands open, palms together, only inches away from Strein’s face. John’s eyes gleamed bright yellow light for a moment, and he surged all the energy he had into his palms.
‘Haaaaaaaaaahh!’ The yell echoed along the mountains.
A burst of light exploded from his palms and caught Strein in the full blast, sending him into the air.
What remained of Strein glowed red, and caught fire. Or he seemed to catch fire, because he was burning away. Strein screamed as his body turned black in patches, which blew away as glowing dust. His remaining hand outstreched in agony he screamed and yelled in more rage than pain. As he burnt away there was a definite shape left in the air which glowed slightly in red, and had a tail, horns and wings, and as evil as can be, and then it, too, burned away in the blast.
John fell to his knees, breathing heavily. He clutched his chest, and absentmindedly  stared at his red uniform. Below, there were cheers. The battle was almost over, and they were winning. John picked up his sword out of Strein’s charcoal remains, jumped off the keep’s tower and spread his arms. He glode down gently, landed lightly between his troops, then held his sword up, and with a voice that commanded authority although he officially was a simple soldier, he shouted: “CHAAAAAAAAAAARGE!”
The soldiers charged.


*


John woke up. He sat up, and clutched his head. The same dream again! He had this dream every year. He never knew why. He looked at his alarm clock, straining his eyes in the gloom. It was 7:51. More than an hour before the alarm went off. He lay back, and dozed off again.

The soldiers charged with a roar that made some of their own cower in fear. The enemy troops already seemed to be retreating, but they weren’t. They were each deserting on the spot and running for their lives.
This didn’t slow the soldiers down.
It sped them up.
They overtook the chaos of fleeing enemy troops and slaughtered any of them who came in range of their swords. Any of them stricken would certainly be dead. A few of them weren’t too badly injured, but this changed dramatically when the charging horde of soldiers trampled them.
A small group of blue-uniformed troops tried to stand their ground, but too late did the charging reds notice the white flag.
There was no pity.
No mercy.
No thought.
Just mindless charging anyone with the wrong uniform on.
Sons of mothers, brothers of sisters, fathers of daughters.
No one realized.
There was only Death.

Beep beep beep beep beep.
John sat up gasping. That part he hadn’t seen before!
He reached for the alarm clock tiredly, and turned the alarm off, almost falling out of bed while doing so.
He lay half-off the bed for a moment trying to remember why it was he had to get up so early. He lay still, thinking about it for a few minutes, and gave up.
He pulled himself up, and headed for a shower.

When John came downstairs, there already was someone in the kitchen.
‘Is that you, John? Come in, dear, I’ve made you some breakfast.’
John had never understood his mother quite well. She sometimes made breakfast for him and other times didn’t seem to notice he was there. And when she made food, what she made was highly unpredictable. So was the food itself.
‘Er... Thanks, mom.’

This time the breakfast was what looked like vegetable curry with ketchup and small bacon cubes, all mixed into an omelet covered in cheese sauce. It tasted exactly like John expected: Nothing like what it looked like at all.
‘Eat up dear, you’ve got a big day ahead of you. Time to start looking for a job.’
John stopped in mid-chew. Ah, yes! Job. Of course. He had a house bought for him but he wouldn’t get the keys untill he had found a job. That’s what started today.
He finished his breakfast and put his shoes on, found his jacket underneath a helpless heap of extremely old clothes in his bedroom, took the list of the possibilities he had found the night before, made a small pack with the list, two sandwiches and a water bottle, and headed out.

The first place on the list was a shop full of antiques. John cycled into the street, and stopped at number eight. As the advert had said, in the window there was a sign visible, which read: “Help Wanted for Heavy Lifting. Reasonable Pay.”
John sniggered at this. The entire concept of having Help Wanted signs in windows was an antique by itself.
John didn’t want to rush things, or go for a job with too much heavy lifting, so he cycled his way to the next vacancy.

Once he had arrived, he wasn’t sure he had. He checked his list for the description again, which read: “Well-Paid Job Available at Clocktower Lane 3, Requirements are a Strong Mind and Good Will” and nothing more than that.
He looked at the street sign. “Clocktower Lane” was correct.
He looked at the houses in front of him. They went smoothly from number 4 to number 6. There was no number five.
Then, he realized that this was an old part of the town. In the old days, people alternated the numbers across the street, or something...
He turned.
On the other side there was number three, and further along number seven.
In between there was a small caravan.
It had a 5 painted on the door.
The streets around here were empty. John didn’t bother looking left or right.
He crossed the street and walked up to the caravan.
Why a caravan? Why not a house? Confusion filled his mind.
He shook his head, and knocked on the door.
‘Come in, Mr Wades!’ said an old crackly voice.
John opened the door and stepped in, confusion taking over again.
He sat down on the only chair there was, apart from the one the little woman was sitting on behind her desk, which was in the middle of the room, facing John.
John looked uncomfortable as the lady stared at him. It really was a small caravan. Very small. If it was just a little smaller you probably could have fitted it inside the car.
‘Er...’ John began.
‘Shus!’ snapped the woman. She seemed to be wearing a ridiculous amount of jewellery, a lot of it being dangly things.
‘You are John Wades here for a job and you are very confused about how I know your name and also about the caravan.’ She didn’t say ‘Am I right?’, John noticed. She wasn’t asking either. She was stating facts.
‘Er...’ John didn’t have many words left. ‘How...?’
‘Quite easy.’ Snapped the woman ‘I knows things. I knows things all the time. I knows more things about how to knows things than I knows things as things are. And when I say that, I knows what I’m talking about.’
John had to stop himself from automatically saying ‘I knows.’ to round it off.
‘Of course,’ the woman continued, ‘It helps to know your mother beforehand too.’ She grinned.
‘Ah...’ John sagged with relief. ‘But... about wandering about the cara—?’
‘That’s even easier.’ The woman interrupted him, grinning. ‘Everyone who comes here wonders about the caravan.’ The grin was almost devious.
‘So...’
‘Ah, the job? Sorry luv, but you only was sent ‘ere for a bit o’ advice from ol’ Maggie’
She cackled. John merely looked confused.
‘And that advice goes as follows, lad: make damned sure you get a good pay! Also, I did a fortune telling on yer, and I has some extra tips on job interviews. The fortune telling gave an interesting result.’
‘And... W-what was that result?’
‘Shus, let me think, now...’
Maggie put her hands to her head and closed her eyes, mumbling as if trying to remember something.
She opened her eyes.
‘Ah yes... There was a very distinct... sentence in the result.’
She closed her eyes again for a moment.
‘Yes... “The first is best to bring you forward”, or something similar... What I thinks it means is that “The First”, whatever that may be, will be the best choice to either bring you fame, wealth, health, or some other individual special trait.’
John sat silently, still confused as ever.
‘Right!’ Maggie shouted, making John almost fall out of his chair, what, since the caravan was so small, would have resulted in hitting the wall more than anything else.
‘Times up, lad! Now get out of here and find that job!’
‘Er... Yes, miss!’ Said John, stumbling out of the caravan.

John closed the door behind him as he pondered about the fortune telling.
The first will bring me forward? What’s that supposed to mean? I mean, exactly.
A thought struck him. He was looking  for a job, wasn’t he? Maybe... the first on the list? He fumbled to get the list out of his pack. He checked the address again, and set off.

Arriving at the antique shop, he locked his bike, walked up to the door, sopped himself from knocking and walked inside.
This place isn’t an antique shop, it’s an antique shop! Thought John. He strode in, and looked at the various pieces of antique furniture, ancient utensils, extremely old clocks, amazingly elderly wrist- and pocketwatches, and other thoroughly aged objects. And finally, at the wrinkly fragile-looking man behind the counter.
‘Can I help you?’ said the man in a voice that seemed more ancient than any of the furniture here. ‘Er.. I’m here for the job.’ Said John. He pointed at the dusty sign in the window as a form of explanation. The small man brightened up. ‘Excellent!’ the wheezy voice exclaimed. ‘You’re hired! Work days are Monday to Friday from ten in the morning till five, you get payed per week based on your how well you’ve done, we’re closed in all holiday times, you get one hour’s lunch break each day, and you can start right now.’ John almost fell over in the long outburst of sound. ‘What... R-right now?’ He asked, dazed. The old man’s eyes twinkled. ‘That’s right! You can call me Mr. Downes. What is your name, boy?’
‘Er... John.’ Said John. ‘John Wades’
Downes scribbled on a yellowing piece of paper, and then put it front of John with a pen next to it. ‘Sign here, please!’ he said, pointing. John looked down. A contract! He thought. This place is ancient! He put his name down.
‘Brilliant!’ Said Mr. Downes ‘Okay, you look a strong lad, let’s start with moving those boxes upstairs. And be careful, some of them are extremely fragile.’
John looked around at where Downes was pointing, and saw a large pile of boxes which looked grey, but later turned out to just be covered in a very thick layer of dust.
John looked around and saw Mr. Downes reach out to the sign in the window to take it out, and he saw the sign simply crumble away as Downes touched it. Apparently there hadn’t been anyone here for a very long time. John sighed, brushed some of the dust off the top box only to reveal some older, tougher dust, and began work.
« Last Edit: March 06, 2009, 02:08:50 pm by TheEternalDretch »
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Re: Alien Encounter (Tremulous Fiction)
« Reply #1 on: March 06, 2009, 02:05:50 pm »
Several weeks passed and John worked hard. It wasn’t a bad job, and, as the sign had said, the pay was reasonable, and when Downes scolded him for damaging some of the boxes or pieces of furniture he didn’t scold loudly. And John became stronger and more skilled at keeping things in one piece every day. Day in day out John uncovered more dust-dipped boxes that to be brought upstairs, furniture upstairs that had to be swapped with some in the shop, and sometimes some boxes or furniture that had to be brought onto a very old cart outside which was pulled by a very old horse with which the very old Mr. Downes would bring some orders away, which presumably, seeing that Downes couldn’t lift the boxes onto the cart himself, would’ve been some very old orders.
Some people had seen that the shop was active again and slowly some customers appeared, who would sometimes order some items which John would have to hoist onto the cart the next day. Apparently word had gotten around, because this particular day, the shop was crowded.
John sat down on the stairs for a bit of rest after bringing some particularly heavy chairs down, and watched as the three customers bustled about in the shop. Two of them were very old people, John noticed. After a while Mr. Downes called John to lift a small sofa onto the cart for same-day-delivery, for which, John knew, would be payed a handsome ten credits extra. John sighed. Sofas were the worst, since he was lifting them on his own, and they were extremely heavy. Of course, Downes would help with the sofas using his little forklift, but it was a very old forklift and the sofas always seemed incredibly determined to stay near the ground. After a while, the last customer dissapeared after giving Mr. Downes a large order of two matching chairs and a matching sofa, a small table, a five-piece china set and a box of cutlery. This caused a little conversation and it ended with the customer going to rent a van and drive it round tomorrow to pick the stuff up. This had pleased Downes. It had pleased John, too, because vans were easier to load into than Downes’ old cart.
‘That was a good day’s work, John! I suggest you go home now. I’ll be closing the shop early today, I’ve got a lot of paperwork to catch up on.’
‘Thank you Mr. Downes.’
‘There’s a good lad. Ah, you want your pay for the week, don’t you?’
‘And last week’s pay, Mr. Downes.’
‘Really? Is that- Oh yes, I remember, the rushed last bit, eh? Yes, I was planning to give you a little extra for that, yes, hmm...’
‘Thank you, Mr. Downes.’
‘Oh, please stop calling me Mr. Downes like that, it’s not like you’re in the... freakin’... ...army....’ His eyes glazed over, as he seemed to lose himself in memory.
‘Are you okay?’ John said. He’d never seen Mr. Downes like this.
Downes shook his head. ‘Sorry about that, old memories, they pounce on you at unexpected moments. Since you’ve been such a good hard-working lad here for so long, you can call me Albert.’
‘Thanks, Albert.’
Albert Downes grinned.
‘Right!’ He said. ‘You’ve done well in the last two weeks. Let’s see, the average pay was...’ Albert fell into some silent whispered calculation. Then he looked into the ancient cash machine, and looked back at John. ‘A hundred an’ seventy-five credits?’ He grinned. John gaped at the immense amount of cash wadded in front of him. He didn’t quite know what to say. ‘Er... Ah.. Th-Thank you sir!’ He managed.
‘It’s Albert.’ Said Albert, grinning. ‘It’s been a good profit since you’ve been working here. I thought you’d like a little something in return. Business has been going so well I’ve had to order some more antiques! I haven’t ordered extra items in years!’
John didn’t answer him. He believed every word of it. Apart from that, he still didn’t know what to say.
‘Off you go, now, lad! We’ll see each other Monday.’
John regained some words. ‘Albert?’
‘What is it, John?’
‘Er... How do you have memories about...’ He tried to bring it slowly. ‘...the army?’
‘War, lad. Off you go, now, you’ve got some free time. Spend it!’ Albert was getting out his paperwork. He clearly seemed annoyed at being asked about his memories.
‘But... there hasn’t been a war on earth for over a hundred years!’
Albert stopped. He sighed. ‘Allright lad, have a seat, I’ll tell you a few secrets.’
John obediently pulled up one of the slightly less ancient chairs. One that at least looked like it could carry his full weight. He listened. ‘Lad, there’s a reason I run an antique shop, and another why I’ve never ordered more antiques before.’ Never? John’s brain made a warning signal. Albert continued: ‘There’s a few secrets the goverment has, lad. One of them is an experiment. Of this experiment, I’m a guinea pig. And it’s going the right way.’
‘What experiment’s this?’ John asked.
‘A regeneration experiment, lad. I’m a hundred and twenty years old!’
John gaped again. ‘You fought in the Last War?’
‘Aye, World War Four. And a very hefty battle it was. I lost all my mates in that war. All my family, too. That was why I let them experiment on me. What did I have to lose? And eventually, everything my friends and family owned came to me! All my friends’ families had been killed too! All this stuff used to be theirs.’ He waved around him at the antique home decorations. ‘All they had was family heirlooms, too! Some of this stuff is more than three hundred years old!’
‘What? From 2000?’
Albert nodded. ‘Correct, lad. I sold all the electronic stuff within the first years, too. Sold well, that stuff. It’s amazing what people would give for a Nintendo Wii’ He grinned. ‘And the government’s other secret is that the Last War ain’t really the last, either, but anyone could’ve predicted that.’
John, who had been staring at the three-hundred-year-old china behind him, twirled around at a speed that almost burnt his face. ‘What?!’
Albert nodded slowly. ‘There’s another war coming, lad. And from what I heard, it’s gonna be even bigger than the last one. I’ve heard some people say this is going to be the first war worthy to be called a World War since it’s the first where the entire world is fighting. Or something.’
‘But... Who will be fighting?’ said John, getting lost. Albert shrugged. ‘Beats me. Now hop to it, lad. You’ve got some extra free time to enjoy.’
John stayed where he was, and gazed into open space, trying to figure out what he was being told. ‘What?’ It seemed the only word that made sense to him right now.
‘If you’re thinking you ever want to defend your country, you’ll have to join up as soon as possible, because training takes a long time. And you’ll need full training, believe me! I lost a hand in my second battle, and the rest of the arm in the fourth!’
John looked at Albert’s arms. They looked real enough. ‘But...’ He started.
‘Regeneration experiment, lad, didn’t I say?’ Albert said grinning. ‘It looks a bit weird the first few weeks, a tiny arm growing out of your shoulder, but I heard they’ve sped it all up strongly now. I think that’s true, because once when I was chopping up sausages I felt a sharp pain in my finger and I didn’t notice the extra sausage until I bit into it.’ He grinned. John grimaced.
‘Now go, please, I really have to finish this paperwork.’ Said Albert almost impatiently.
‘Er, what? Oh. Yes. Sorry.’ John stood up, picked up his salary, stuffed it into his pocket and wandered outside to his bike. With Albert’s words haunting through his head, he headed home.

He passed his mum’s house on the way, and that set a whole new train of thought flowing, bursting through and lifting the other thoughts up. He arrived home in a half-dreaming state, and although it was still very early, he made himself some food, ate it, and went to bed completely forgetting about the dirty dishes on the table. After brushing his teeth, he lay in bed staring at the ceiling, thoughts still racing through his head waiting to be sorted out. What if he did join the army? What would his mum say? What would his dad say if he was still around? Who would he be fighting? Would he be a hero or the first to die? No, he knew the answer to that one. He wasn’t the killer type. He might have grown impressive muscles with all the lifting, but he didn’t have any experience with weapons. He’d be an extra target, giving the better soldiers some more time to shoot the enemy through the head as they aimed at him. He wasn’t useless, though. He knew that. He’d probably be able to kill a single man before dying. He stopped thinking about it. If he wanted to know, he’d have to join up and find out. Somehow the idea of joining up felt like the next right thing to do...
The first is best to bring you forward...
He dozed off.

*

Chaaaaaaaarge!
John woke up. That dream again! But... why? This was confusing. He didn’t remember having the dream twice in the same year. But the dream made up his mind. He was going to join the army. Today!

After some morning preparations John set off. He sent a letter to his mum explaining  what, where, when and possibly why, and asking her to inform Albert and find him a new Heavy-Stuff-Lifting-Lad. Or Lass. John looked at his piece of paper with the address. Internet was a wonderful thing. Albert was right; the army was recruiting.
He set off.


*


Sergeant Jake Tinder looked up from his small desk as another few recruits walked in.
‘Be with you in a minute.’ He said. He looked sideways at Corporal Walter Stream who seemed to be bored out of his mind waiting for the Sergeant to finish programming the enlisting documents on his laptop. The Sergeant wasn’t a technical man, and in technical times like these that was a problem. He was almost finished, though. All he had to do was calibrate the signing area into the document. To the average man, this was three clicks and a quick dance on the keys. To Sergeant Tinder, it was Hell.

Half an hour later, John stepped inside. He saw a sergeant behind a laptop, a corporal waiting impatiently next to him, and a couple of boys a little younger than him without a uniform, sitting on a long bench against the window. They were probably here to enlist too. The sergeant looked up at him and gave him a little nod, then looked at his laptop again. He looked puzzled. John sat down on the bench.
‘Excuse me?’ said one of the men next to John. ‘What are we waiting for, exactly?’
‘Technical trouble, soldier! And when you ask me something you shall call me sir, understand?’
‘What kind of technical trouble?’ The man was the impatient type. ‘S-sir?’ he added, when he saw the sergeant glare at him.
‘You tell me!’ Said the sergeant, giving up fiddling with the laptop. The one who spoke rushed over to help. ‘Ah.’ He said. ‘Inserting a graphic input field for signatures?’
‘S’right.’ The Sergeant mumbled.
‘Then what you want to do is...’
Click, click, click. Rrrrrap.
‘...done!’
The sergeant stared.
The soldier hurried back to his spot on the bench.
The sergeant pulled himself together, saved the document, and stood up.
‘Right!’ He bellowed. ‘My name would be Sergeant Jake Tinder, and this here’s Corporal Stream. I expect you’re all here to enlist, are you not? Anyone who’s not, raise a hand and I’ll personally kick you out if you’re not gone withing two seconds! Right!’
Against all humour regulations, no one raised a hand. This seemed to disappoint Tinder. ‘You! Technical genius! Name?’
The technical genius stood at attention. ‘Bert Famishson, sir!’ He didn’t forget this time. ‘Right!’ Bellowed the sergeant again. ‘Sign here!’
Bert looked puzzled. Then he hurried over to the laptop, picked up the stylus and scribbled a signature. ‘You may proceed, over there you’ll get a uniform.’ Sergeant Tinder was pointing at the doorway behind him. Bert hurried in. He hurried a lot, John noticed. Either anxious to get in the fray, or out of it as soon as possible.
‘Right! Next!’ Bellowed Tinder. The next recruit shivered to attention, following Bert’s example. ‘Samuel Cardins, s-sir!’
‘My, my, what a weak bunch today.’ Tinder said, shaking his head. ‘Right! Sign here and carry on!’
After Samuel had disappeared, Tinder sighed, and, almost dutifully, said ‘Right!’
‘Sir, permission to speak freely, sir!’ The next in line interrupted him. Sergeant Tinder obviously hated interruptions. ‘Hrrngngng... Granted, soldier!’
‘Sir, aren’t there supposed to be the oath, sir, and the shilling, sir?’
‘No soldier, the shilling disappeared when our currency became credits, too valuable, you see? And the oath just tagged along. Can we continue now? RIGHT!’ The yell created a silence in which no one dared to even move. ‘Name?’ Bellowed Tinder
‘Sir, Rafael Doromir, sir!’
Tinder stopped. He narrowed his eyes. ‘A Sir, are you?’
‘Sir, no, sir!’
Tinder stopped again. He seemed to swell up with rage. ‘Hrrngngng Right! SignherenowthankyouproceedGOODBYE! Hrrrngng...’
Rafael was almost kicked into the next room.
‘Right! Next! Name!’

A while later, all the recruits had gone through. John stepped inside the next room, where a soldier behind a counter was handing out uniforms freshly made by the machine behind him after a large scanner had scanned everyone's sizes. He walked past it and it almost unnoticeable scanned his. A few seconds later the soldier behind the counter called him over. ‘Oi! You! This one’s yours!’ John smiled slightly as he took it, and hurried into a changing room. The uniform wasn’t much interesting stuff. It was green all over with a headband and a toolbelt, and a good pair of boots. The toolbelt had a weapon in it. John took it out. Some small print on the side of it said:

“Blaster Mk II — Type U — B.T.S. FE 67 GE 12”

John experimentally practiced taking it in and out of the toolbelt. He sniggered. This wasn’t hard. ...Yet. said a voice in his head. The training hasn’t even started yet.


*


The newly-bought bell tinkled as a strong-looking young man walked into the antique shop. He strode in, and looked at the various pieces of antique furniture, ancient utensils, extremely old clocks, amazingly elderly wrist- and pocketwatches, and other thoroughly aged objects. And finally, at the wrinkly fragile-looking man behind the counter.
‘Can I help you?’ said Albert, a lot more cheerfully than he had first greeted John.
‘Er...’ Daniel said ‘I got sent here by Mrs Wades... She said I should give you this note...’
‘Ah.’ Said Albert, purposefully not taking the note. ‘John’s gone and enlisted, has he? I thought so. You were sent for replacement?’
‘Er... Yes...’
Daniel didn’t know what to say. This man knew all about it and hadn’t even read the note. Daniel just stood there and gaped. Albert grinned. Looks like they found the perfect replacement. ‘Excellent! You’re hired! Work days are Monday to Friday from ten in the morning till five, you get payed per week based on your how well you’ve done, we’re closed in all holiday times, you get one hour’s lunch break each day, and you can start right now.’ Daniel almost fell over in the long outburst of sound. ‘What... R-right now?’ He asked, dazed. The old man’s eyes twinkled. ‘That’s right! You can call me Mr. Downes. What is your name, boy?’
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Re: Alien Encounter (Tremulous Fiction)
« Reply #2 on: March 06, 2009, 02:06:20 pm »
‘Bert Famishson. Although my friends call me Famish.’ Famish grinned. John had made a list in his head of all the recruits around him. There was Bert, a.k.a. Famish, Rafael, who after agreement became The Knight, Samuel Cardins became Shivererer, Thomas Birkins was now Dark Star, Rob Wesley told them he was called Red Demon on internet, and then there was George Ridley, who had a nasty rash on his face and became Pestilence, as suggested by Famish, who also tried to turn Dark Star into Death, but failed. There were another three whose name John didn’t manage to catch, but their nicknames were Ozzerd, a combination between Wizard and Oz, the new Death, who after a joke became New Death, and, to round it off, War. There was one more recruit who no one seemed to notice, and who didn’t talk. John saw him quietly sitting in a corner as all the rest socialized. John thought he recognized the situation. If this character ever got famous, it would be as another Unnamed Soldier.
John didn’t seem to get a nickname. He just remained John Wades.
‘Right!’ Sergeant Jake Tinder’s voice boomed into the room as he marched in and through. ‘Follow me, you lot! Training starts immediately!’
The room suddenly filled with rush and bustle as everyone tried to keep up with the sergeant, everyone else, and their stomachs. Sergeant Tinder had an amazing speed.
They were led into a shooting range, where they each got a target to shoot at with their Blasters. The targets reacted to the shots, and a small screen near the shooting soldiers displayed their bullseyes, regular hits, near misses, and misses. You could also flick through the menus quickly to check the other soldier’s scores. John’s scores were better than he expected. Three bullseyes, six hits, two near-misses and three misses. It wasn’t too bad. The target moved slightly, and the Blaster’s shots were slow-moving energy pellets. John took a break and checked everyone else’s scores.
He wasn’t the best, as expected, but he wasn’t the worst either. The worst was range 4. John looked out to see who was is range 4. He saw the Unnamed Soldier silently shooting his blaster directly at the target. If the target hadn’t been moving slightly, he’d have gotten all bullseyes. Now all he had was five hits, eight near misses, and four misses. John didn’t look at who the other scores belonged to. He didn’t want to start ranking people.

After a while Sergeant Tinder called the squad together, and handed out some new weapons. These were pretty basic too. John looked on the side of his.

“Rifle Mk I — Type B — B.T.S. FE 67 GE 12”

John wondered what the type meant, and what B.T.S. stood for. The sergeant had said that, unlike the Blaster, this weapon did not have unlimited shots. This was an ammo weapon. With bullets! Ammo is depletable! Keep that in mind when you’re shooting. And remember to aim before you shoot, otherwise it’s wasted ammo! Now get shooting! And be careful private, these things are rapid-fire! The Sergeant’s words still echoed through John’s head as he took aim. He pulled he trigger, and almost dropped the gun. He let go of the trigger. John sniggered. He took aim again and made sure his arms were ready for it.
Bangbangbangbangbangbang
Five bulls-eyes and a hit. He liked this gun already.
‘Right! That’s enough, lads! Hand ‘em back! And remember that the enemy won’t be patiently waiting for you to shoot them! Corporal Stream here will show you to your bunks, and we’ve got some physical training for breakfast! After that we’ll show you the shotgun and the mass driver! It’s time to get tough! You’re in the army now!’
The squad followed Stream to two bunk rooms where the squad divided into, put down their packs, and got called out again by Stream. ‘Right, lads!’ said Stream, sounding like the sergeant already. John didn’t blame him. A man like that sergeant was contagious. ‘You’re all going to be wanted down in the cantine in fifteen minutes. If you don’t like the grub you won’t get anything else. Turning back from this point on is what we call deserting. Soon everything will turn routine to you. Things are going to get tough, but it’ll be nothing compared to when war starts to throw some weight around, what’s so funny, private?’
War straightened up. ‘Nothing, sir. Sorry, sir.’ John could see he was suppressing a smile. So was the rest of the squad.


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The next few months went by extremely fast, and were quite hard. John had learned to hate Stream. Stream was a horrible snob and didn’t care about anyone but himself. Stream didn’t make the impression he was here to defend his country. Stream didn’t even look like he was here to fight at all. Stream was a nutcase. Physical training wasn’t any problem for John. Working at Albert’s had been enough to prepare him for that. In the meantime Sergeant Jake Tinder had been promoted to captain, and Stream managed to become the squad’s sergeant. This made John hate him more. The new corporal was Knight. It still worried John that war was getting closer every day. He didn’t know how far he was going to get. He’d kill one man before dying...


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‘Okay, mates! That’s enough for now!’ Knight yelled. John stopped staring into the scope of his mass driver and handed it back to Knight. ‘Let’s go back to the bunks. We’ve got a lot to do tomorrow. Again.’ He sighed. ‘Let’s go! March!’
They all marched to the doorway, where they almost marched straight into the newly promoted Commander Tinder. He looked darkly at the squad. ‘Right, lads. I’ve got some bad news for you.’
The squad looked at each other. Behind them, Stream had seen the Commander’s dark expression and walked up to next to the squad. ‘Sir, what’s wrong, sir?’ said Knight. Commander Tinder waved a hand. ‘We’re going to war, lads. And it isn’t a small one.’
The squad started murmuring at each other. John could see Stream’s face contort in horror. ‘The first true world war?’ John said. Tinder’s eyes narrowed.
‘What do you know about it, kid?’
‘Just that it’d be the first war worthy of being called a World War.’
‘Is that all?’
‘Yes, sir.’
‘Are you sure?’
‘Yes, sir.’
Tinder seemed to relax. ‘The reason it will be called a World War is not because the whole world is fighting, lad.’
‘It isn’t? But... then why–‘
‘It’s because it’s a fight between worlds.’
There was a chorus of gasps through the squad, and more mumbling.
‘And the worst part...’ Tinder gulped ‘...is that we’re going to be the first to the front.’
More shocked gasps. John noticed Stream’s wide-eyed shocked terror.
‘We don’t know what we’re fighting here. The commander wasn’t specific about that. We don’t know what we’re up against. We don’t know what these alien buggers can do.’
‘Do we know what they look like, sah?’ said New Death
‘No,’ Tinder shivered ‘And that’s what scares me the most.’
‘W-When are we g-going, s-sir?’ said Shiverer
‘That’s another bad part.’ Tinder looked as if he was going to cry. ‘We’re being transported directly into the battle right now.’
‘Sir, what about defences, sir?’ said Knight
‘Now see, soldier, this is where I explain the base to you.’ said Tinder
‘First, you need a Reactor to bring power to all the other units. Do you understand that?’ The squad nodded. ‘Then,’ Tinder continued, ‘You’ll need telenodes so we can send you reinforcements.’ Squad-nod. ‘After that, you’ll need an Armoury to get your weapons, and a Medical Station to regenerate your wounds and replenish your remote healer. Understood so far?’ Nod. ‘When that’s done, you’ll need some base defences. Machinegun turrets are fully automated defence units, and will definitely help defend the base, but you’ll still need some people defending the base as well, because, again, we have no idea of the enemy’s abilities. That’s it for now. We have all our researchers working on more weapons and armour, and we’ll be able to get you more as we learn more about the enemy. Reinforcements have been called for. Sergeant Stream, you are now acting captain, take them to the teleporter! Corporal Doromir, you are now acting sergeant, and Private Wades, you are acting corporal. Right! Dismissed!’


*


The squad was teleported into the battlefield. ‘Pay attention, now.’ Said the voice of Commander Jake Tinder over the comms. ‘Corporal Doromir, I know you’ve studied the army before you joined up, but did you study defences as well?’
‘Sir, yes, sir!’ said Knight.
‘Then you’re designated chief builder. Hurry up, the enemy could arrive any minute. Reinforcements are on the way. Commander Tinder signing off.’ There was a beep suggesting the disconnection.
‘Allright, squad! Cover me, and watch for any good spots for the Reactor!’ Said Knight. Pretty soon, Pestilence discovered a nice little alcove which looked like it would keep the entire base. Knight took out his Construction kit, which looked vaguely like a large orange beam-gun, and beamed a Reactor into existence at the back of the alcove as the other builders patiently waited for it to finish so they could start building the rest. When the Reactor finally became solid, Knight started shouting orders where to place the rest of what they needed. ‘Put a telenode over there! Shiverer! You put an Armoury as close to the wall as possible. Wades! You put a Medical station next to it! Put another telenode over here, Ozzerd! Now close off the entrance with machinegun turrets, like that, try to get them in an inward crescent!’
It all took two minutes. When it was all done, everyone was ordered by Stream to get a weapon. Once every had a weapon, Knight seemed to know what to do.
‘Now we wait.’ Knight said. ‘The enemy is in this closed-off area and we just have to wait for them to find us. We’ll be able to see them from far, so we’ll know what we’re up against.’
They waited.
After a while, Dark Star said: ‘I object, sir!’
‘Why is that, Dark?’ said Knight.
‘I suggest we go out in small patrols of say, two-three people?’
Knight thought for a while. ‘You’re right, Dark. I call two patrols. John and Stan, you go with Dark Star, and Ozzerd, you’re leading the second patrol. New Death, you’re with Oz. Famish, you too.’
John looked around. Stan? He watched the Unnamed Soldier salute Knight and join John’s squad. Knight continued with the orders. ‘The rest of you, take up defencive positions in the base and try to look for any movement at all. Report if you see anything. I’ll be watching too.’ He turned back to the patrols. ‘Dark, you and your men patrol to the west,’ he pointed, ‘And Oz, you go east. I want both patrols back here in half an hour with full reports on any alien activity you encounter. And keep yourselves alive! Dismissed!’


*


John and his patrol had been walking for twenty minutes now, and were on their way back. They hadn’t found or seen anything. John was starting to wonder whether there were any aliens here at all. Just at that moment, almost as if history was keeping up a tradition, they found something just around the corner. John stared at it. It was a small animal, and all green. It looked like a large green blob with a head, three eyes on each side of it’s head, six stubby legs and two large frontal shield-like... well, more legs. Although they weren’t used as legs. More like arms. The animal stopped, and scuttled backwards a bit when the squad saw it. ‘Aww, cute!’ Said Dark Star, dropping to his knees to get a closer look at it. The alien edged away. ‘Prr-RR!’ It said. ‘Did you hear that?’ Dark Star said. ‘It purrs!’
‘Be careful, Dark. It could also be growling. We don’t know what this thing is!’ John said cautiously. Dark reached out his hand to pet the alien, which scuttled backwards a little further. ‘PRR-rr-RR!’ It yelped. Dark leant forward a bit more, and stretched out to pet it, but as soon as he touched it... ‘RRRRR-rr-RRR!’ It lept back, spat at Dark but missed, turned around and scuttled off, growling. Dark looked shocked at where the spit had landed. There was a strange stringy puddle of black.. stuff there. No one dared get near it. ‘Told you.’ John sniggered. ‘You okay?’
‘F-fine...’ Dark said, getting up. ‘What’s that noise?’ He said. John had heard it too, and was looking around. It had sounded like a strange cross between a cricket and a broken record player. ‘Skrrit-Krit!’ It went again. ‘Aargh!’ John turned around and looked at Stan, who was looking at his heel. A part of the boot had been torn away and there was a nasty wound underneath. John looked a little further. Sitting there, a drip of blood dripping down it’s front, was was looked like a very large orange spider. ‘Skrrit-Krit!’ It said. It charged. ‘Look out!’ John screamed. He was too slow. He watched the spider jump and bite Stan’s head. ‘Aaaaaaaggghh!’ Stan dropped to the ground. He was dead. John looked at the spider, which had scuttled a little further away. Then he looked at Dark Star, who was slowly drawing his weapon. John did the same.
The spider charged. John and Dark Star did all they could, shooting at it. The spider got hit three times, but managed to get to Dark and bite him in the chest before it perished. ‘Ungh..’ Dark moaned.
‘Are you okay? Use the medkit! The... remote regeneration thingy! Err...’ John was panicking. This was his first battle against anything harder than a wobbling target. It wasn’t a nice first battle to have.
‘Urk... I’m fine...’ Dark said. John heard the pressure squeak of the medkit, and Dark’s wound disappeared. ‘Let’s get Stan back to the base. You carry him. I’ll cover you.’ He said.
John didn’t argue. He was used to heavy lifting, and Dark was a much better shot than him. Luckily, the base wasn’t too far away.


*


‘You’re back! We were worrying a lot... Oz’s squad came back early and they were heavily wounded. After they already had used their medkits to heal some other wounds. They got back just in time, too... We’re fighting some horrible creatur—’ Knight stopped. ‘Oh...’ He said. ‘A casualty...’
John put Stan’s lifeless body down inside the base, next to the turrets. Then he climbed over the turrets himself, fell into the base, and refused to get up again.
‘Oh dear. We’re going to have to stick together. Get yourself on the medipad, I’ll tell you what the others saw.’


*


John gaped at the story of what the other had seen. The squad had given the various aliens names, too. Most names were made by Ozzerd, who seemed to know a lot of mythical creatures’ names and a lot more after that, too. The green alien John’s squad encountered was called a Granger. The large spider got named a Dretch. Then there were stories about Basilisks, pink lizard-like creatures with six long legs that walk on the walls and can grab you firmly so you can’t even turn around, and then they’d start biting you. There was a Marauder, an even larger, red alien which, unlike the Dretch and the Basilisk, couldn’t walk on the ceiling, but it could jump. It could walljump, too. It would jump all around you and attack you as it flew past from all directions. And the biggest alien they saw, they had called a Dragoon. It had been an enormous beast, bigger than a lion and also bearing six legs. This huge beast could pounce.
John didn’t want to encounter it. Luckily, some time after, some reinforcements arrived. Five more troops. And they also brought better armour, more weapons, and, best of all, strong helmets. The helmets had radars in them. After the first alien encounter, the researchers had been able to configure these radars. And they were taken gratefully. At least you’d know if there’d be some aliens around the corner.
Now was the time that the entire team would charge the aliens, and wipe them out. And destroy any way they could come back, if they found any. John looked around. Everyone was wearing some armour, a helmet, and a weapon. There were shotguns, mass drivers, lasguns, which where an energy-type upgrade to the rifle, and there were three or four pulse rifles, which were another kind of energy upgrade, for who could afford them. John pitied them. John pitied himself. John didn’t pity the aliens they were about to destroy. But John noticed a certain kind of... tremulousness about the band of soldiers. No one wanted to be here. They were shivering. They were frightened. But, against all expectations, Shiverer was not shivering the worst. Stream was. Stream looked like he could break down in tears any moment. Stream suddenly turned around, and headed straight for a telenode. ‘No!’ shouted John. He knew this about the telenodes: they were one-way only until High Command would set them to work the other way. This was done to avoid desertions in-battle. If someone attempted to teleport in the wrong direction, there would be a power cut and everything would shut down unfixably. ‘Stop him!’ John shouted, running after him. Stream wouldn’t listen. Trembling in fear, he ran for his only escape, which would leave everyone else to die without defences. John didn’t have any options left. He pulled out his mass driver, and shot Stream through the head.
Bang!
The rest of the squad hadn’t moved. They had just watched in terror. Now they had betrayed their own captain, they had to win. They didn’t realize that their captain had betrayed them first. ‘This has gone far enough!’ shouted John. ‘This is where we destroy the enemy! We fight for our planet! We fight for our lives!’
John stepped forward, and held his mass driver up. And in a voice that demanded authority, he shouted:
‘Chaaaaaaaaarge!’
The soldiers charged.

John leading the squad into battle, they fought with pride and power. They fought with all they had. They fought with their lives. The five deaths were worth the victory.
John had not been the fighting type. John had been officer material. On the battlefield, he was merely an extra target so his fellows could take a better aim. That put aside, and he fought the fiercest of them all. If he hadn’t been there, the world would have perished. John had been brought forward.
And he had killed only one man, before dying.
Glory is eternal.

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Re: Alien Encounter (Tremulous Fiction)
« Reply #3 on: March 06, 2009, 02:54:08 pm »
Great story! :grenade:
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Re: Alien Encounter (Tremulous Fiction)
« Reply #4 on: March 06, 2009, 05:24:27 pm »
Then John was a zombie.

Fantastic story! I couldn't help but post that though.

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Re: Alien Encounter (Tremulous Fiction)
« Reply #5 on: March 07, 2009, 04:59:43 am »
Awesome story! :o Good work, Glunnator! ;D

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Re: Alien Encounter (Tremulous Fiction)
« Reply #6 on: March 07, 2009, 07:25:52 am »
I read the beggining, seemed pretty good. I'll get back to you on the rest of the story when I finish it in a month or so.
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Re: Alien Encounter (Tremulous Fiction)
« Reply #7 on: March 09, 2009, 12:29:17 am »
I read the beggining, seemed pretty good. I'll get back to you on the rest of the story when I finish it in a month or so.
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Re: Alien Encounter (Tremulous Fiction)
« Reply #8 on: March 23, 2009, 07:19:24 pm »
Oh, hey, I wrote that!

...jeebus, it's worse than I thought. That thing really needs some editing and smoothing out.
After finishing it, of course. If I ever do.

Thanks for the compliments, anyway! :D

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Re: Alien Encounter (Tremulous Fiction)
« Reply #9 on: April 02, 2009, 09:08:52 pm »
Literature for the win!

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Re: Alien Encounter (Tremulous Fiction)
« Reply #10 on: May 07, 2009, 08:30:59 am »
then the dewd from the start comes back and pwns all but John, who is now a zomibe, so he cannot die, so they fight for ages, then a random rant rushes in and fights them both, then John infects the rant with Zombie stuff and the rant kills the dewd from the start, then Zombie John and Zombie Rant sit happily in ATCS camping the newbs.


=D I should write this profeshunully