Hate to be a critic but here it goes.
I prefer my HUD to have essential stuff (HP, BP, ammo, credits/evo, poison, stage, kills for next stage) bundled in the center-low part. It's the place where I can see it all quickly without taking my eyes off the action. Less essential stuff includes icons for armor and equipment, which are fine on the side of the screen, but also low. Time and FPS are fine on top-right, as well as chat on top-center. See the Volt HUD for a fine example.
Having stuff spread all around the corners and edges does not help. Having cute outlines of human equipment and a HP bar is pretty but useless.
I like the idea of the pounce/trample charge bar though.