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Re: ...The Harder They Fall
« Reply #30 on: May 20, 2009, 10:47:10 pm »
*claps* Loved it, MOAR

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Re: ...The Harder They Fall
« Reply #31 on: May 21, 2009, 02:44:58 am »
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Re: ...The Harder They Fall
« Reply #32 on: May 23, 2009, 07:10:22 am »
Wow. Absolutely amazing, and I want to publish this in a single document once you're done editing... very cool, I look forward to more!

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Re: ...The Harder They Fall
« Reply #33 on: May 23, 2009, 09:15:36 pm »
This is so prone for a movie/series of sorts...

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Re: ...The Harder They Fall
« Reply #34 on: May 23, 2009, 09:26:47 pm »
I was totally thinking that too. :D
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Re: ...The Harder They Fall: Part 7
« Reply #35 on: May 24, 2009, 08:39:33 pm »
"Do you have any means of transporting a lot of men at once?" McNabb asked.

"We've got a transport truck, but it won't take everyone at once." Prezowski replied. "Maybe one-third, maybe half if you want to squeeze that many in there."

"We'll go with one-third. We don't need everyone tripping over everyone else trying to get out."

Prezowski nodded. "Grant, go start up the truck! Sam, escort the men to the garage. The rest of you, get ready for lockdown. As of this moment, the facility is offline!"

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The clones piled into the back of the truck, fitting as many in as possible. When it was full, Sam closed the back and slapped the side. Grant nodded in the mirror and pulled out.

He turned left, the tires slipping on the ice and snow. The Karith Building loomed in the distance, casting its shadow over the colony. 24 knocked on the window seperating the cab from the back, and Grant slid it open.

"What can you tell us about Karith Corp?" he asked.

"Well, they bought us out a few years back. We used to fuel everyone who came through, but now Karith reserves one-third of the fuel for their own ships. We've got a few angry customers because of that, as I'm sure you can imagine."

24 nodded, then remembered Grant couldnt see him. "Yeah, I'll bet," he said.

"Yep, got some mad people out there. Maybe one or two of them are bit on the crazy side, ya know? We've got good security, though. Nobody bugs us."

"Except those bugs, right?"

Grant laughed. "Yeah, 'cept those bugs. Aliens, huh. Never thought I'd see the day. How 'bout you?"

24 smiled. "Me either."

"Well, here we are. Holy shit! What happened there?"

Grant got out and opened the back of the truck. The clones piled out one by one, 24 in the rear.

"Dang!"

The front of the building was demolished, as if it had been bombed. The flaming remains of a truck sat amongst the rubble, with what looked like bodies strewn around it. The clones moved closer.

"This vehicle was sabatoged, from the looks of it." 24 said. "Check the back."

"We've got what looks like a large crate back here, sir."

Grant frowned and moved away from the smoke. "Is there anything in it?"

24 shrugged. "It's locked shut. Some sort of code is required to open it. Let's get inside."

"I've got to get back and get the other soldiers," Grant said, walking back to his truck. "Good luck to you."

24 nodded. "Thanks. Men, move out!"

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They walked into the lobby, working their way around the rubble. "Why would anyone would go through this much trouble to sabatoge this place?" one of the clones inqiured.

"Secrets, maybe?" 24 replied.

"Could be. Hey, there's someone over there!"

They rushed over to a large chunk of rock, nearly hiding the woman crushed beneath it. They worked together to move it off her. "Is she alive?" 24 asked.

One of the clones checked for a pulse. "Nothing, sir. She's as dead as a doorknob."

"Alright, let's go. Elevator or stairs?"

"Stairs. This building is in shambles, and the elevator might die on us. Last thing we'd need is to get trapped in there."

"Agreed. I'll take lead." 24 said.

They moved down the stairs in single file, down into the darkness. God knows what lay in wait for them there.

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Turner jumped out of the truck first, his clones following.

"What the hell is this?" he asked.

Grant shook his head. "No idea. The first group investigated, then went inside."

Turner tuned into 24's channel. "You there? Turner, over."

"I'm here. We're down in the sub levels. It's pretty dark down here."

"No lights?"

"Nope. I think this is supposed to be closed to the public... I see a light up ahead. 04, check it out."

"Stay in contact, 24, and be safe. Any sign of 13?"

"No, not a thing. Jesus! Turner, we've got a weapons stockpile down here!"

Turner's eyes widened. "Weapons, here?"

"Rifles, Shotguns, Mass Drivers, Grenades. My God, there's enough down here for a war! Wait... what's that?Shi-"

"24, come in! I repeat, come in!"

"The doors just shut and locked. We're trapped!

"We'll be right down as soon as group 3 arri- Nevermind, here they are."

Group 3 walked through the door, McNabb in the lead. "What the hell is going on here?" he asked.

Turner shook his head. "No idea. I need you and your men to guard up here while I go check out downstairs. 24 and his guys are trapped down there. They found a weapons stockpile."

"The usual shit or something more dangerous?"

"Yeah, the usual. Rifles, nades, the like. Can you hold down the fort?"

"Sure thing. Go on."

"Thanks. Men, let's move!"

Turner grabbed his rifle and headed down the stairs, the clones following right behind.

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"Jesus, 24 was right, it is dark down here. Who brought flashlights?"

Turned out several of the clones had. Turner took one and turned it on. "I think I see the light 24 was talking about. Looks like a window."

The group moved forward in the darkness, hugging the walls as not to get lost. They could barely see each other, mere silhouettes in the shadows. The air was thick with the smell of dust and age. Apparently not many came down here. One of the clones sneezed, and they all jumped.

"Sorry."

"Shhhhh," Turner said, turning off his flashlight. "Something around this corner...."

Turner moved around the corner, rifle raised, only to smash into another soldier. "Jesus! Is that you, 13?"

The dim light from the room down the hall softly lit up the clones face. It was indeed 13, and behind him were his soldiers.

"What the hell are you doing here?" Turner asked.

"I could ask you the same thing, Turner." The clone replied.

"Did you trap my men?"

"No, someone else is behind this. The aliens are upstairs, in the bulk of the building. I had to retreat back down here. I lost a lot of soldiers."

"Clones also?"

"Of course. Why else would I take vital parts of your machine?"

"We thought as much. But why?"

"Because I don't like being controlled. This way I'm free to do as I wish. I am, however, not against working with you. After all, I am your clone."

Turner smiled. "True. Allies?" he asked, extending his hand.

13 shook it. "Allies. Now let's go see if we can get your men out."

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"I think we can agree that the door is too thick to blow up or otherwise damage it." 13 said, twenty minutes later.

Turner nodded.

24 stood on the other side of the window. It too was explosive/bullet proof. "Well, I hope you fix this problem sometime soon, guys... like today."

Turner sighed. "We will. Any ideas, 13?"

13 shook his head. "Not one."

04 snarled. "There has to be some way out of here!" He threw his weapon down and kicked the wall.

24 froze. "04, do that again."

"Kick the wall? Ok." He kicked it again. There was a hollow thud.

"Again."

04 kicked it again. This time the wall budged slightly.

The other clones rushed over to it and began to push. In a matter of seconds it was open, revealing a long dirt hallway.

"A secret passage?" Turner asked, amazed.

"Well, I guess I know where we're going." 24 said, picking up 04's rifle and handing it back to him. "Maybe it leads out of here."

Turner nodded. "I'd tell you to stay here and wait for help, but after all, we are the help."

24 laughed. "Some help we are. We'll stay in radio contact. Let's move, soldiers!"

They walked into the darkness.

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After moving downward at a steady rate, the group finally reached level ground. There were more lights ahead, shining through a space under a door. Sliding it open, 24 peeked around through the crack. All he saw were a bunch of computers and machines, and a lone scientist. Making a motion with his free hand, the soldiers surrounded the man quietly. He suddenly spun around, sending the papers he was holding flying through the air.

"Jesus, you scared me! What are you doing here?"

"What is this?" inquired 24.

"Who are you?"

"I'm nobody you know. Now what is this?"

"Get out or I'll sound the alarm!"

24 smiled. "The only people here to answer it are my men."

"Screw you! Now you listen to me-"

24 darted forward, grabbing the scientist by the shirt and slamming him against the wall. "No, YOU listen to me! Tell me who you are and what you're doing here...." 24 reached down and grabbed his blaster, placing it under the scientists chin. "...or this room is going to get a redecoration, starting with your brains on that wall. It could use some red, don't you think?"

"O-o-o... ok! P-p-please, put it d-down. I'll tell you everything!"

24 let go and stepped back. "Start talking."

"Alright. My named is Robert Brown-"

"That's not what your nametag says. Jules Santiago. That's a long ways from Robert Brown."

"That's the name I work under! I'm... I'm spying on Karith Corporation. The government suspects they are up to illegal activities, and I was sent in to investigate."

"Just you?"

"Well... me and my wife."

"Oh, so you have a wife now? When do we get to the part with the 5 starving children? Oh, and don't forget the dog!"

Robert sighed, disgusted. "Why do I even bother?"

24 apologized. "Continue."

"Well... my wife isn't here right now. She's in another part of the facility, gathering information. It's my job to process it all and send it off to the big guys."

"How does she get this information?"

Robert shrugged. "She doesn't give me much in the way of details. Once she does get it, I've got my hands full with my part of the job. In fact, I was just fixing to decode a package I got recently. It looks important, because there's a lot of files in this one. Who the hell are you guys, anyways? You're not mercs, I can tell that much."

"I'm 24. I also work for the government. Military."

Robert blinked. "What are you doing here?"

"Robert?" a voice called. The clones immediately grabbed their weapons.

Suddenly a door opened across the room, and a young woman walked into the room. She had a wave of dark brown hair, and stormy blue eyes. On the contrast, Robert had light blonde hair, and greenish eyes. She stopped and looked at them. "Oh god."

Robert shook his head. "It's not what you think. These men are government, not Corp men."

"I figured if they were Corp, we'd both be dead right now. Listen, Robert, something is going on upstairs-"

"What?"

"Well, let's just say it's all the proof we'll need that Karith has got their nose in something dirty. That and this folder I snatched from the lab." She handed it to Robert, who opened it. "What the hell are these?" he asked.

"Dretches." 24 said, peeking over Roberts shoulder.

"What?"

"Thats what we call them."

"You've seen them before?" the woman asked.

"Are you kidding? We've killed dozens of them. Them and bigger ones."

Robert snapped the folder shut. "You've got to be kidding me. Karith brought them here."

24 looked shocked. "No way! Let me see the folder."

Robert handed it over. 24 looked through it. "You're right! Turner, you there? You've got to hear this."

"Can it wait? I'm more interested in a solution for this door."

"Robert, can you open the door up there?"

"Sure thing." he replied, turning to his keyboard.

"Good, it's open. Now what'd you want me to know?"

"It can wait till you get here. "Oh, and tell McNabbs men to come also. This is big."

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"You must be kidding me." Turner said.

Robert shook his head. "Amanda, go check the security cams, will you. I've got an idea on how to get us out of here."

His wife nodded and walked over to a row of monitors.

"So Karirh Corporation brought them here. What in hell for?" McNabb asked.

"Well, this folder doesn't give all the details. They obviously wanted to study them. After all, it is the first alien life form we've ever seen."

McNabb snorted. "They couldn't be like ET, could they?"

"ET?"

"Old movie, way before our time. Cute alien crashes on earth, wants to get back home. Something tells me these guys don't care about getting home."

Turner agreed. "I think they care more about killing us than getting back home."

"Are you sure?" Robert asked.

McNabb nodded. "Eating someones face off is not a good way to ask for a phone to call for a ride."

"Alright then. Amanda, is the coast clear?"

"Yeah, so far. Are we ready?"

"We are. Grab a jacket."

Once they were bundled up, Robert grabbed his laptop and the folder.

"Let's go."

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The trek to the surface only took a handful of minutes, and then they were out in the biting cold. Snow had begun to fall, making the lights of the colony hard to see. Turner cupped his hands over his mouth and breathed, warming his lips.

"Listen, we can't leave without taking care of this."

McNabb shook his head. "We don't have a construction kit. We can't build a base, and without a base we can't fight the aliens."

Turner sighed. McNabb was right.

"Let's get back to the colony. Maybe we can think of something there."

The group started their long trek through the snow and ice.

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Nearby, hidden behind a generator, was a marauder. It watched the humans with its small black eyes until it couldn't see them anymore. It could still smell them, however.

It turned and went back into the building, hopping off the walls. It was warm in here. Warm like fresh blood. The marauder grew hungry. Hungry for flesh.

Human flesh.

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McNabb collasped on a stool at the bar, his face almost numb. Thank god for heating. The others were spread throughout the tavern, clustered together for warmth. The security team was here, along with the builder team and Jess. As soon as they warmed up, they were sending the build team out to set up a base.

"Beer?" The bartender asked.

"No thanks." McNabb replied, getting up and walking over to the window. Grant joined him.

"We need to go back and get that stockpile. It could come in handy."

Grant nodded.

"Up for it?"

"Sure. We'll need some extra men."

"I'll take care of it. Go start up the truck.

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Grant backed the truck up the entrance of the building and opened the back. The men filed out and headed towards the stairs, McNabb in the rear.

"Grant, guard the truck. Let's make it fast, men."

"Hoorah!"

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The granger crawled out of the shadows, sniffing the air for the human scent. The humans with the weapons were inside. It crawled on top of the truck and sat there, waiting.

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"Jesus, these crates are heavy. Is there a dolly down here or something?"

One of the clones shone his flashlight around the room. "Over there, sir. Two of them!"

"Go get em and lets load up."

The clones slid the base under the box, and two more lifted another box, placing it on top of the first one. They did the same with the second dolly. As they were leaving, McNabb saw a case over against the far wall.

"Someone grab that."

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They slid the last crate in and piled into the back. McNabb knocked on the window. "Let's go."

Grant started the truck up and pulled out.

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They turned a corner, sliding on the ice and snow. The granger, unprepared for the sudden change in direction, slid off, watching as the truck righted itself and continued on its course. It shook the snow off itself and headed for the nearest building.

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"We're back!" McNabb announced as he and the others entered the bar.

"Where'd you go?" Turner asked, sipping some hot chocolate. He was wrapped in a large blanket.

"We went back and grabbed those guns and shit. I figured they'd come in handy."

"You figured right. We've been working up a plan on how to take these aliens down."

"Share?"

"Well, first our builders put up a couple telenodes here. We think they can run off the generator, at least long enough to be beneficial. After that, someone takes our builders to the site-"

"That'd be me." Grant said.

"Yes. Anyways, Grant takes them there, and they set up our usual base. Then we go through the telenodes here and end up there."

McNabb scratched his head. "That'll work?"

Turner shrugged. "I don't see why not. Sound good?"

"I'm in. I guess we better go unload the truck."

"Let's do it. Soldiers, get ready for battle!"

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The End of Part 7
« Last Edit: May 24, 2009, 08:45:16 pm by DeathSkull »
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Re: ...The Harder They Fall
« Reply #36 on: May 24, 2009, 09:19:23 pm »
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Re: ...The Harder They Fall
« Reply #37 on: May 27, 2009, 03:35:17 pm »
Wow.
I have to say, this is the best fic I've seen so far.

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Re: ...The Harder They Fall
« Reply #38 on: May 27, 2009, 03:51:51 pm »
Thanks very much! : >

Now I need to get my lazy butt in gear and write part 8!

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Re: ...The Harder They Fall
« Reply #39 on: May 27, 2009, 07:55:38 pm »
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Re: ...The Harder They Fall: Part 8
« Reply #40 on: May 29, 2009, 06:55:09 am »
Turner

"What do you mean, they've moved?"

The Clone leader was leaning against the wall by the armory. The recon team had just returned with their report. According to them, the aliens, or any sign of a base, were nowhere in sight. Turner sighed and walked over to the computer.

"Do we have satellite access?"

The tech messed around for a few seconds. "Yes sir, we do."

"Pull up live video for this area. I need to know where the aliens went."

Turner watched the screen as the computer zoomed in on the Karith Building. Nothing outside, except snow. Lots and lots of snow.

"Screw it." Turner said, walking away. He unholstered his rifle and sat it on the table, then leaned back in a nearby chair.

"Take it easy, Mac." Jess said, entering the room.

"What're you doing here?!"

"It's my job." she replied.

"No." Turner said, getting up. "Back to the bar with you."

"If you touch me..."

"You'll do what? Huh? I'm your superior officer."

"You're more than that, Mac..."

Turner dropped the boss act. "I know, I just don't want you getting hurt out there."

"I'm only running a computer, Mac. What's the worst that could happen?"

 "I give in. But don't leave the base!"

"Of course not, sir," she said, pecking him on the cheek and heading to the nearest computer.

Turner smiled sheepishly and went back to the table. McNabb was playing cards with 24. "Care for a game of Uno?" he asked.

Turner nodded and grabbed a chair. McNabb dealt.

"Didn't this game die out about a century ago?" 24 asked.

McNabb shifted his eyes. "Yes, it did. I aqquired a deck of cards though, and learned how to play. It's fun."

Turner shook his head. "Sometimes I wonder if you are archaic in more ways than one, John."

"Shut it," McNabb replied, a touch of humor in his voice. "Now listen..."

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"Sir? Come see this."

Turner got up and walked over. "What is it?"

"We've got a visual on the aliens. They're nested in another section of the Karith building. We saw a maraudar jumping around in the snow."

"Just jumping around?"

"Yes sir. It seemed to be... uh, amused with the snow. It'd climb up a small hill and jump to the bottom, then do it again."

Turner had to smile a bit. "Like a child's game."

"Perhaps, sir. Maybe this is a peek into their mindset?"

Turner nodded. It's possible... but don't forget: a cat plays with his mouse before he eats it. Just because it looks cute from our perspective does not mean it has good intentions."

He walked over to the intercom and switched it on, picking up the microphone. "This is Mac Turner, and we've got a confirmation on alien lifeforms in the Karith Corporation building. Get ready."

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The clones marched out in rows of four, McNabb following with his own group. Turner was the last to leave.

"Be safe, Mac." Jess said, hugging him.

"Always. I'll be back before you know it."

Turner grabbed his rifle and walked out the door.

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Mac lay prone on a snowbank, peering through his binoculars.

"13, are your men in position?"

"Affirmative, Turner. We are go."

"Move up them up. Do you see the target?"

"Affirmative. Target is secure. Ready to fire."

"Take it down."

The mara was hit from 5 different angles at once, obliterating it. The steaming corpse fell to the snow, melting what was around it.

"Target exterminated."

"Good job. Let's enter the build-"

"Mac!"

"Jess? What is it?"

"We've got a problem. The Aliens were spotted in the colony, at a train station."

"How the hell did they get there?!"

"We don't know. Some civilians were killed, but the security team evacuated the rest. You need to send someone over there, Mac."

"Hell... I need all my men here."

"Innocent lives are in danger. Think about that."

Turner dropped his head, thinking. Maybe they could spare some men... but it would be risky. He brought up a mental image of the colony. If they were at the train station... god, that was on the other side. It was almost as if the aliens were trying to split them up.

"John?" he said finally, his breath fogging in the cold air.

"Yes?"

"Take your men to the train station. 13 and I will take care of things here."

"Are you sure?"

"Yes. Go now. 13, meet up with me. We're going in."

Over the hills, a large group of clones rose from the snow and ran towards the building. A moment later another group showed up, heading towards the colony. "Good luck, John."

"Good luck to you, Mac. Hopefully we'll see you all soon."

Turner stood and brushed himself off.

"Lets move."

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They moved through the hallways swiftly, the glare of the flourescent lights shining off their armor. Turner listened for anything suggesting alien movement, be it a scratch, a growl, a footstep. His breathing was harsh, his blood was pumping. The feeling of battle never got old. It was his life.

"Hold it." he said. "Let's check this room."

The door didn't seem to be in working order, so Turner slid his hands under the lip and pulled up, the door rolling on its tracks. Behind it lay a storage room, complete with a second floor and an elevator. The air was old and musty, suggesting that this room had been closed for some time.

"Move on."

They passed a couple of flowerbeds, noting that none of them had been touched. The next room was huge, going up several floors and with its own elevator to boot. 24 started to push the button.

"No!" Turner shouted, then cringed as the room amplified his voice. "If they hear it, they'll know we're here." he continued in whisper. "Use the stairs."

13 nodded and went up the left staircase with his men, while Turner and his men took the right. They walked down the narrow walkway in a row, each man moving slowly to assure proper footing. Slowly it began to sway. Turner looked up from his feet to see a dragoon sitting down at the end.

"Oh sh-"

It turned and bit through one of the cables, and the walkway shifted downwards to the right. One of the clones fell over the edge to the ground below. Turner shut his eyes. When he opened them, he saw that the goon had resumed watching them, wearing a feral grin full of teeth. Turner stared at it, not moving.

Without warning, it turned, chewed through the other cable, and leaped to freedom. Time froze for a moment... and then the walkway fell.

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McNabb

They arrived at the train station within the hour. Nathan brought them up to date as they built their base.

"Apparently the aliens nested in one of the trains. Berlinger 102, old model. It's been out of use for years now."

"How long were they there, do you think?"

Nathan shook his head. "Days, maybe weeks."

McNabb shook his head. "They'd go hungry. I'm thinking... less than a day, maybe."

Nathan was shocked. "That recent? And there's that many of them already?

"How many are there?"

Nathan walked over to a door and opened the peephole. "Look for yourself."

McNabb walked over. He couldn't believe his eyes.

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Turner

Turner fell forward, rolling down the walkway. He cursed whoever made this with no railings, wishing he had something to break his fall. At least there was the ground.

He landed face down, breath nearly knocked out of him. He filled his lungs with air... then remembered the clones that were behind him and rolled out of the way.

The clones landed behind him, yells of pain and shouts of surprise filling the air. Turner glanced behind him only to see a mass of arms and legs. As he helped sort them out, he was relieved to find that no one was seriously hurt. They organized themselves and looked up.

13 and his men were on their way, rushing down the stairs as fast as possible. No more aliens were in sight, and for that Turner was thankful. He gathered the men and laid out a plan.

"Alright, I'm going to take half the group and go through that door up there." he said, pointing to the door on the second floor. "I want the rest of you to go back outside and find another entrance into the building. Use your 3D map, if you must. We've got to find another way into the alien base and destroy them. Any questions?"

No one had any.

"Ok, let's move. Stick together and be careful. We can do this."

Turner raced up the stairs, men close behind. He approached the door, which slid open automatically. They searched the ceiling, walls, floor. Nothing.

"Where the hell are they?"

"Down the hall, look!"

On the floor sat one dretch, alone. It didn't move, make a sound, or give any other indication it was alive. One of the clones approached it slowly, nudging it with his foot.

"It's dead, sir."

Turner nodded. "13, what is your location?"

"We're on a staircase leading up to to the second floor of the building. There's a door here, and we can see something through it. Hard to tell what it is, because the glass is cloudy. We're going to shoot through it."

Turner heard gunfire, then a scream. He pushed past his men, only to find one of his clones who had wandered ahead. Blood was gushing from his wounds.

13 stepped through the broken glass and shook his head sadly. "Damn."

"Do you hear that?" another of the clones asked.

Turner listened. It was the tiny pattering of little feet... times 100.

Without warning a swarm of dretches burst through the far door. The clones jumped up and ran, leaving their wounded comrade behind. Nothing could be done for him now. The dretches swarmed over him, tearing at his flesh and chewing on his bones. Another clones was taken down, and yet another tripped on the stairs. Before anyone could save him, he too was taken under.

Turner ran as fast as his legs would carry him, gasping for breath. He felt a stab in his side, and his legs were beginning to hurt. He felt on his belt, praying to God or anyone who would hear him that he had a grenade. Nothing.

He went sprawling, his legs unable to carry him any farther. As he hit the floor, a grenade rolled out of a pouch on his belt. His eyes widened, for he was sure he hadn't had any.

Grabbing it, he pulled the pin, rolled over, and threw it. It exploded, the heat rushing back at Turner and what men were left. The biggest part of the alien group was destroyed, and Turner grabbed his rifle. "Kill the rest!"

The others opened fire, bullets tearing through the remaining dretches. Several of them dodged, jumping onto the walls and ceiling. Turner tried to keep his aim on them, but it was hard. One of them launched itself at his head. He moved, but one claw scratched his cheek as it flew past. One of the clones stepped on it, crushing it. The others escaped.

"Fuck." Turner said.

At least 7 men had been taken down. Turner was saddened to see that 24 was not among those living. He collapsed to the floor, his body to tired to do anything. His heart was wounded, for each clone was, after all, him. How long can a man go on, dying over and over again? Turner cursed the aliens, cursed them for everything they'd done to him and his men. But it wasn't over yet.

Not till every last one was dead.

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"Is this a joke, Nathan?" John asked, narrowing his eyes at the other.

"What the hell are you talking about?"

"There's nothing out there. If this was an error on your part, you are going to pay."

Nathan looked out the peephole. McNabb was right. There was nothing there.

"But..."

McNabb snarled and pushed past him, disgusted. Nathan followed him, protesting. "I'm telling you, I saw them. Small, brown, six legs. There were some others too, pink ones and a couple red ones."

McNabb looked at him for a minute. "Alright, assuming you're not lying, where'd they all go?"

Nathan shook his head. "How the hell should I know? Jesus, it's not like I'm going to post a guard out there to keep tabs on them. They killed three innocent people, McNabb. Three!"

"Ok, they did. I'm sorry I blew up at you. I'm just a bit pressured lately. All this fighting, it'll get to me in the end."

"It's ok, John."

McNabb nodded. "Are the men ready?"

"Yes. I'll go get them."

McNabb went to the armory and selected a mass driver, along with the battery pack. He put it on and hooked the power cord up to the driver. Satisfied, he waited for the men. One by one they arrived, lining up in a row.

"Pick a weapon from the armory. We've got a few new toys, including a pulse rifle ans what the science team calls a painsaw. You can thank McGregor for them when we get home. And we are going to get home, am I clear?"

"Yes sir!"

"These aliens, they've gone too far. Not only have they killed out soldiers, but they've killed our citizens. Some mans wife isn't coming home to him. A parent went to school, worried that their child hadn't come home yet. Instead, they find out he's at the morgue. You understand what I'm saying here? These aliens have violated our life, our very existance."

"Yes!"

"We're going to teach them a lesson. You see, when you attack a man, he doesn't stand there and take it. He fights back. Maybe these bastards have conquered weaklings before, because they didn't fight back. Well, we do. And they've attacked us enough already. Today, we make our stand. We've got our chance to wipe them out, and it starts here and now. Are we ready for this, men?"

"YES SIR!"

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"Room clear?"

"Clear!"

McNabb followed his men out, staying in the rear. The mass driver made an excellent sniper, capable of picking targets off from extreme distances. He dropped into a crouch and snuck along the wall, eyes searching every nook and cranny.

"Wait, John!"

He turned around and saw Nathan. "What is it?"

"Come this way. We've got a secret way to the trains."

McNabb got up and followed them through a large room full of boxes. "Mechanical parts," Nathan explained. "In case the trains break down. We've got part of the floor torn up over here, to allow easy access to said train. As it happens, 102 is down there because of renovation. Crew was gonna salvage any parts from it and send it to the scrapyard."

"So it's where the aliens are holed up?"

"We think so yes."

McNabb nodded and dropped down to the box below. Nathan followed him. The train stretched out before them, like a road into the past. It had been to times and places they would never see. Its steel grey body spoke in dreary tones, suggesting its life had been somewhat dull and was about to get worse. McNabb could concur. He dropped into a prone position on the roof of the storage car and waited for his men.

The door across the room slid up, his men on the other side. They moved forward, motioning to him. He acknowledged that he'd seen them, and dropped his hand back to his gun. He aimed it slowly from side to side, finger on the trigger. He motioned for his men to stop, waiting. He could hear them below, crawling and walking, waiting for the surprise opportunity to attack. Suddenly the doors of the cab slid open, and the alien hoarde was unleashed. The dretches swarmed out first, crawling over everything, including each other, to get to the humans. His men opened fire, the gunshots sounding extremely loud in the big room. McNabb waited a another few seconds, and unleashed him own surprise.

In a matter of seconds he took down 6 dretches, missing once. He waited for the weapon to re-energize, then opened fire again, trying to clear an opening for the man with the saw. One of the other soldiers rushed forward with a flamethrower and opened up, unleashing a wall of flame. A dretch bypassed him, jumping on the tank and biting it. It exploded, causing a shower of body parts to rain down. It was all the sawer needed, and he started running for the open door. He barely making it inside as it slammed shut behind him.

McNabb and the others cleared out the remaining dretches, of which there were only a few. They all waited outside for a few minutes, and then the door opened, revealing a smiling blood and gore splattered marine. "I got them all. One basilisk, and the granger, were hiding behind some crates. They didn't stand a chance."

McNabb smiled. "And the eggs?"

"Two of em. Got them both. We won this battle, sir."

A cheer rose from the small group of soldiers. "Good work, son." McNabb said, now beaming. He removed his portable radio and switched to Turners channel.

"This is Hawk Eye #2, come in #1."

Nothing.

"I repeat, this is McNabb with Hawk Eye #2, come in!"

Then there was nothing, again. McNabb swore and replaced the radio from where he got it. "We're going to Karith Corp Headquarters. Turner isn't responding. Gather what you need and let's move."

Suddenly, static. McNabb grabbed the radio and placed it to his ear.

"Haw-....tack. Overwhelmed. Th-.....seven men. We ca-...much lon-.....elp us."

Silence.

Dead silence.

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Re: ...The Harder They Fall
« Reply #41 on: May 29, 2009, 07:11:15 am »
That was just plain epic :D

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Epic! Every single chapter :)

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« Reply #44 on: May 29, 2009, 07:48:08 pm »
Great work, loved it :D

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I wish I could step on dretches!  :)
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Re: ...The Harder They Fall: Part 9
« Reply #48 on: May 31, 2009, 01:23:43 am »
McNabb lead his men through the snow, which was now knee deep. They were making slow progress, having to stop every so often for a breather. Despite the extreme cold, McNabb found himself nearly burning up. It was the suit, he thought. Wiping sweat from his brow, he continued on.

As they topped the next hill, he spotted a vague figure in the distance running towards them. He squinted his eyes, hoping for a better look, but no luck. The vague figure moved a bit closer, and McNabb saw that it was a man, or a large woman. The figure began to wave its arms enthusiasticly. McNabb had no idea if the person was talking or not.

"Who are you?!" he shouted over the screaming wind, hoping it carried his words to the man up ahead. Unfortunately, he realized that because of the wind direction, he wouldn't be able to hear anything they said. He raised his mass driver and pointed to it, then motioned for the man to approach. The figure fought its way closer. The wind rose for a second, and the man ahead was blown over. McNabb was worried , but then the man reappeared, attempting to stay on his feet. Finally, he could hear something!

"It's me!" the figure shouted.

"Who's me?" McNabb shouted back. He aimed his mass driver at the other, just in case.

"Robert! The scientist back at the facility!"

McNabb frowned. "What the hell are you doing here?!"

Robert finally reached them. He pulled down the scarf over his face for a moment so he could be heard. McNabb noted his face was red.

"You'll need me!" he said, still shouting. "I know the codes to get into Kariths secret files. Anything they've got on those aliens, including where they came from, will be in the database."

"Well," McNabb said, "we're not in a position to argue. Can you use a gun?"

"I shot some at the range back in the colony."

"Ok, come with us."

McNabb walked past, hoping this snow would let up eventually.

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They reached the facility about 30 minutes later. Robert punched in the door code and they all gathered inside, thankful for the shelter at last.

"So the heat is always on here?" McNabb asked.

"Yes," Robert replied. "In a climate as cold as this one we've got to leave it on all the time, because the building, and everyone in it, would freeze in no time. And if you're thinking about power outages, we've got generators to help us out with that."

"And if the generators go out?"

Robert smiled. "Hope you go to hell when you die, cause it's a lot warmer there."

McNabb shook his head. "Screw you. Let's go."

He raised his weapon and kicked in the nearest door. It led down a narrow hallway, with rooms aligned on each side. He procceeded to each one, opening it and scanning the area. Offices, a janitors closet, a small dining room. No aliens. McNabb sighed and motioned for the others to follow. He opened the door at the end of the hallway, revealing the base Turners group had built earlier.

Jess raised her eyes from the screen at looked at them, somewhat shocked. "Are you finished?"

McNabb nodded. "We cleared out the Transit Station, but we just got a distress call from Turner th-"

"Mac?" she said, rising. "Is he ok?"

McNabb said he didn't know. "I'm taking my team over there now. I need you to give me updates on the alien location, flanks and the like. Can you do that for me?"

She sighed. "I will. God, I hope he's ok..."

"He'll be fine. He's a tough nut to crack." McNabb said, walking over to the door, before stopping and turning around. "You care about him a lot, don't you?"

He was a bit surprised to see tears in her eyes... or maybe it was a trick of the light. Never the less, she nodded. McNabb smiled. "So do I. He's a good friend." With that, he left.

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The snow had finally quit falling, leaving the colony in a peaceful state. Everyone was fast asleep, or should be. McNabb wondered where the phrase 'fast asleep' came from, and decided he didn't care. He lit a cigarette and inhaled, holding it for a moment before letting it go.

"Any luck?" he asked over the comm. He'd sent a search team ahead to look for any evidence as to where Turner and his men had gone.

"None, sir. Wait, I think I see blood."

McNabbs heart sank. It was more likely one of the clones, but you could never tell.

"Holy shit! It's a bloodbath up here!

McNabb had heard enough. "I'm on my way."

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"Dear God, what have we here?"

McNabb felt sick, and he didn't think anything in his military career would have prepared him for this. The hallway was splattered with gore, human and alien alike. He walked through the carnage, trying not to step in the blood, and unable to help it. He fought with his stomach, trying to keep his last meal down.

"No sign of Turner, sir, or the remaining men. They've obviously moved on. See, we've got footprints up here." one of the men said, walking past McNabb and pointing to the red tracks. "And these smears... they dragged someone with them."

John shook his head. "How do you know some alien didn't carry a body off?"

"All footprints are human, sir."

"All right. Let's keep looking. Leave the bodies here for now. We can collect them later."

McNabb was glad to not have to look at that mess anymore, but it'd forever be etched into his memory.

"Sir, up here!"

"What is it?"

"We've found them!"

McNabb burst into a run. The soldier motioned to an open doorway. He looked inside, then sighed in relief. "Turner, you bastard. I thought something happened to you."

Turner laughed. "If I knew company was coming, I'd have cleaned up out there." He went serious. "I can't believe I lost that many men. It was a huge swarm of dretches, and we nearly lost everyone, including myself."

"I'm glad you made it Turner. God only made one of you."

Turner looked around at his clones and smiled.

McNabb shook his head. "Nevermind. What's your plan, or do you even have one?"

"Well, we need to find the source of these aliens. We're pretty sure it's not the sub levels, so we have-"

"To go up, yeah. Makes sense, the aliens have the high ground that way."

Turner nodded. "I don't think we should split up for this one. There's too many of them."

"I'll agree with you this time. Stick together at all costs. Got it, men?"

They all nodded.

"We've got a great base killer. McGregor invented the Painsaw, and it works wonders."

"Painsaw?"

"Electric saw. It tears through alien structures like a lightsaber through metal."

"Lightsaber?"

"Forget it, ancient sci fi movie. Come on."

Turner grinned and followed, the men right behind them.

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"Did the base get my call?" Turner asked as they walked.

"Apparently not. Jess was worried sick."

Turner fell silent.

"She cares about you a lot, you know."

"I know, John. I care about her, too."

McNabb nodded. "And thats why we're getting out of here alive."

"We?"

"Well yeah... did you have other plans?"

Turner appeared to think for a moment. "Well, I wanted to use you for bait...."

"Asshole."

Turner laughed. "I'm here all week!"

"I hope we won't be here all week."

"Nah. Let's go. Men, breach the door!"

The clones moved up and planted themselves on each side of the door. Another kicked it open, revealing two goons. "Attack!"

The goons roared and pounced forward, knocking a couple clones down. Turner dodged to the left, sliding on the floor. He rolled over and depressed the trigger on his rifle, spraying bullets. Most missed. He swore and reloaded, nearly dropping the clip. "John, go behind them!"

McNabb crouched just as the second goon pouced for him again, missing. He spun around and shot the creature in the hind leg, making it stumble. One of the clones saw his chance and jumped on the back of the goon, grabbing the bony plate on the head for a solid grip. It bucked and slammed into the wall, trying to send the clone flying, yet he managed to hold on. He reached for his knife and stabbed the dragoon in the back of the neck, severing the spine from the head. It collapsed instantly, dead.

Turner aimed his weapon at the remaining goon, riddling its body with bullets. The alien gave a weak roar and crawled towards him, its jaws snapping. Turner moved back and McNabb shot it in the head, finishing it off.

Before they could recover, a basilisk rounded the corner and grabbed a clone by the leg, dragging him away. Turner cursed and reloaded, but he couldn't fire without hitting the clone. McNabb moved forward, hoping for a clear shot. The basilisk growled and launched itself at him, expelling a cloud of green gas. McNabb made a choking sound, grabbing his throat and stumbling back. He tripped over a body and went down, the basi crawling up on his chest. Turner kicked it squarely in the side, sending it into the wall. He unloaded his clip into it, killing it.

"You ok?" he asked, crouching next to McNabb. The sarge coughed and nodded, and Turner helped him up. He stumbled for a second, putting his hand on the wall for support.

"Nasty critter. When could they do that?"

Robert pushed his way to the front, looking at the now dead basilisk with wonder. "It's an advanced class." he said.

"Advanced?"

Robert nodded. "This version of the basilisk is a tad bit stronger than the others, and it expells a foul gas that causes the target to slowly smother if not treated instantly. That, with the basilisk chewing on you, should render you dead pretty fast."

McNabb shuddered. "I think I'll keep them away from me from now on. Where are we?"

Robert looked around. "I think we're right below the main offices. If we take the stairs up a floor or two, I can hack into the mainframe and download all the alien data, including where they may have more."

"More aliens?"

"Yes, I heard rumors that they have a top secret facility somewhere else on this world. If such a place exists, they'd surely have more creatures there."

"I hope to God they don't." Turner said. "I've just about had enough of this."

"Haven't we all." McNabb added.

Robert agreed. "I also hope these are the last, but we need to be prepared just in case they aren't. Come, lets get moving."

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Upstairs...

Robert typed on the keyboard, waking the computer up. He opened the tray and inserted a disk, then reached into his pocket and grabbed a flashdrive, and plugged that in. He pushed a few more keys, and a bunch of windows came up.

"Ok, keep an eye on the door, this'll take a few minutes."

Turner shut the door and put a chair in front of it, then sat against the wall. He was exhausted, both mentally and physically, but yet he kept going. He rubbed his eyes and asked if there was a bathroom nearby.

"Over there, through that door." Robert said.

Turner thanked him and went inside, shutting the door behind him. He checked to see if the water was working, and it was. He rinsed his hands and face off, relishing the coldness. He looked at his reflection, and noted that he needed a shave when he got home. He was pale, too. His eyes were still lively though, a bright vibrant blue. Feeling a lot better, he shut the water off and went back out.

"Water in there," he said to McNabb, and sat down against the wall again.

"Almost done," Robert said. "We're doing good."

Turner nodded. "I'll be glad to leave this hell hole."

"So will I, my freind. Oh shit, look at this."

Turner raced over to the computer. "What is it?"

"I was right! There's another facility."

Turner cursed and threw a paperweight at the wall. It bounced off and landed on the carpet.

"Apparently it's where they took the first batch of aliens they captured. They brought them here from a distant system and studied them, but apparently the work load was too much, so they split the group of aliens up and brought half here."

"Let me guess," McNabb said, exiting the bathroom. "The aliens here escaped, and the building was evacuated, and we were sent in to clean this mess up?"

"Wait," 13 said, coming over. "How does this explain the aliens on the other worlds?"

Robert shook his head. "I don't know...wait, there's a log here of an unidentified shipment to a Nivieus base in the Xeres system. Know where that is?"

Turner bristled. "I was stationed not far from there. My base came under attack, and everyone but myself died."

McNabb nodded. "We've already cleared up there. And I think it's obvious how they got to the train station and the Fuel Depot. Both are close by."

Robert frowned. "So they got a shipment of aliens offworld? Damn. It makes you wonder if they'd done it more than once, but there's nothing else here to show for that."

"I'd probably shoot myself right now if they did."

"Now, now," McNabb said. "We can't have our hero killing himself. You've got to save the human race, after all."

"Save it for the girls."

"Don't be a smartass, I was joking."

"Files are finished downloading, let's get the hell out of here." Robert said, ejecting the disk.

"You heard the man!" 13 said. "Grab your weapons and lets haul ass!"

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The soldiers went down the stairs as fast as possible, making sure not to stumble. They reached the ground floor and pushed open the stairwell door, emerging into the empty lobby.

"What about the remaining aliens?"

Robert smiled. "The few left were still in the section of the facility under lockdown. They'll starve to death with no food. Problem solved."

"So after this other facility, we'll have them all destroyed?"

"With luck, yes."

The soldiers cheered and ran outside under a still night sky. The stars glistened like diamonds, and the air was cool. Turner felt better just being out of that god forsaken place.

"Lets go home, men."

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The colonys hotel was leased out to them by the owner, who was thankful for what they'd done for the people. After they'd cleaned up, the townspeople held a dinner in thanks for those who lived, and in memory for those who had given their lives. Turner left early and went to his room.

He placed his blaster under the mattress and laid down on the bed. A few minutes later a knock sounded.

"Come in."

It was Jess.

"Hey," he said, sitting up.

"Hey," she said. "I see you made it back alive."

He nodded.

"I'm glad," she added.

"So am I."

She started to say something, then came over and sat by him on the bed. "Mac... how DO they tell you from the clones?"

Turner laughed and raised his right sleeve. On his bicep was a tattoo. "The doc put it there after making the clones. Anyone who's looking for me can tell by the-"

She interrupted him with a kiss, shocking him into silence.

"Wow, what was that for?" he asked.

"You've had that coming for a while, Mac." she replied, getting up.

"Leaving?"

"No," she said, locking the door and lowering the lights. "We're just getting started."

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"Wow."

"Mhm."

"Amazing."

"Mhm."

"Can we go again?"

"No."

The phone rang.

"Why does that always happen when it shouldnt?" Turner said, sighing. He sat up and answered it. "Hello?"

"Hey, it's John. I just wanted to let you know that command is coming to pick us up. They'll be taking us to the facility personally. Oh and we've got some new toys. McGregor finished the Battlesuit and it'll be coming with us."

"Great..."

"You weren't sleeping, were you? Sorry if I woke you up."

"Nah, I was wide awake."

"Ok, good. They'll be here in a couple days, so we've got plenty of resting time. Say, you haven't seen Jess, have you? She was looking for you."

"Yeah, talked to her earlier."

"Ok, good. I'll be off."

"Thanks for the info, John."

"Of course." He hung up.

Turner leaned back and closed his eyes. "We're off in few days."

"No!"

"Yes. There's one last facility we've got to take care of."

"Send the clones. You can stay."

"No, I have to lead them."

"Mac..."

"I'm sorry, Jess. Thats just the way it is."

She gave him a glare and turned over.

"What, the cold shoulder now?"

Silence.

Turner grumbled and shut the light off. "Goodnight."

"Night."

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« Reply #49 on: May 31, 2009, 01:48:14 am »
Best part yet, pretty good.  :)
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« Reply #51 on: May 31, 2009, 10:59:47 am »
When you've finished them you really should try sending a manuscript to a publisher, I think you've got some chances!

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« Reply #52 on: May 31, 2009, 12:37:34 pm »
Yea, and think about the publicity Tremulous would get :P

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Re: ...The Harder They Fall: Part 8
« Reply #53 on: June 01, 2009, 06:52:49 am »
...In a matter of seconds he took down 6 dretches, missing once...

Oh dear - how could we forget? 30 rounds in the magazine...and 1 more down in the chamber! So screw everyone who says it's incorrect :P

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Re: ...The Harder They Fall: Part 10
« Reply #54 on: June 03, 2009, 09:26:05 pm »
Turner gripped his chaingun tighter. Last thing he needed was to lose his grip on his weapon. At least recent technological breakthorughs allowed manufactuers to make the weapons lighter, otherwise he wouldn't be going anywhere with this thing. Sitting the weapon down for a moment, he wiped his sweaty hands on his pants and looked around. He was stationed on a mostly barren world in the Xeres System. Most of the traffic to and from mostly consisted of transporters, as a few big manufactuers had factories out here.

He wiped the sweat from his brow, squinting his eyes as the hot yellow sun beamed down on him. This particular area was reminescent of a desert back on Earth, dry and hot, devoid of almost all life. And like on Earth, it hardly rained out here. They had their water (and food) shipped to them from offworld, stored in large coolers underneath the base. At least there wasn't much to do out here except sleep and eat. Who the heck would bother them out here? Terrorists? No one gave a crap about this system.

Sunlight glimmered off a metal surface in the distance. Turner shaded his eyes, hoping he'd get a better look. Finally! It was their monthly supplies. He picked up the chaingun and trotted over to the landing pad. The ship drew closer, hovering over the pad then lowering slowly. When it had landed, the ramp opened, hissing.

"I was wondering when you'd get here." Turner said.

A short man, about 5'7", stepped out of the ship, putting on a pair of sun goggles. "Took us a bit longer than usual. You the new guy? Haven't seen you before."

Turner nodded. "I got stuck with the welcoming job."

The man laughed. "Must suck out here in all this heat. Tell your commander to get off his lazy ass and build a small air conditioned building out here."

"I'll pass it on."

"You do that. Sign this form, please. It confirms that you got the shipment."

Turner took the small handheld computer and scribbled his name on the line. "Busy today?"

"You bet. We're gonna have to make this short, cause we've got an important delivery. Some sort of major business on the main worlds. Karith, I think it is."

"The fuel guys?"

"Well, they ship other things as well, not just fuel. I've never heard of fuel being transported in metal boxes locked with codes, though. They wouldn't say what was in them. Word is they paid our boss extra to ship it. Hey, Ramirez, get this stuff in the base!"

Ramirez started up a hoverlift.

Turner watched him, then shifted his gaze to the ramp. He thought he someone or something go behind it.

"What was that?"

The man turned around. "What?"

"Over there, behind the ramp. I saw someone go behind it. He was wearing green."

The man shook his head. "No one out here except us three. Are you sure you saw something?"

Turner was, but he shook his head. "Probably seeing things."

"Like an Oasis?" the man said, laughing. "This sun must really be getting to you."

Ramirez returned with the hoverlift, driving up the ramp and shutting it off. "All done."

The man nodded, then extended his hand. "We're out of here. Maybe we'll see you next time, eh? Miles Gardener is the name."

Turner shook it. "Mac Turner."

"Nice ta meet you. Don't you guys eat that food all at once. We only come once a month, no exceptions."

Turner smiled. "We wont. Stay safe."

Miles walked up the ramp and raised his hand in a farewell. Turner covered his eyes to protect them from the dust as the ship took off. He waved, then looked around him. Back to the same old thing.

He started back to base when the spitting sound made him freeze. There it was again.

"Hello?"

Nothing.

"Anyone there?"

Silence.

He frowned and started walking again. He really needed to stop staying in the sun for so long.

Back in the base, he opened a bottle of water and sipped some, letting out a pleased sigh. The water was cold and refreshing. "Hey guys, we need to get this down to the fridge. Guys?"

For some reason, no one was around. Turner sat the bottle down and walked through the halls to the main room, where the computers and weapons were kept. The base power supply, a large Reactor, stood in the corner. No sign of human life.

Turner mumbled to himself and stepped forward.

"Hello son." someone said.

Turner spun around to face his Sarge, and let out a small scream. Sores and cuts covered the skin that Turner could see, and the man was gaunt, as if he'd not eaten for some time.

"Sarge? You ok?"

"They're watching, son..."

"They? Sarge, we need to get you to the med lab..."

"It's their eyes on you that gets to you first," another voice said. Turner looked to his left to see McNabb. "It's creepy at first, then you start going insane, little by little. You want to hide from those eyes. Your skin crawls, and you feel as if all your secrets lay exposed. After they tear down your mental defense, they attack. And you lay there, a gibbering coward, as they tear you apart. You can't fight back. You're too afraid."

"What are you talking about?" Turner shouted.

"Can you do it, son?" Sarge asked.

"Do what?"

"They killed our son, Mac." a woman said. She was crying. Turner blinked and saw Jess standing in front of him, tears streaming down her face. "He was at school... they rushed in, eating everyone. A teacher said she saw him die... they-"

"STOP IT!" Turner yelled, stumbling backwards. "I don't have a son! Sarge, you're dead! John, I don't know what you're doing here..."

McNabb smiled. "Can you do it, Mac? Can you save us?"

In a flash, they all vanished, and the base went up in flames. Mac choked on the smoke, dropping to the ground and crawling to the door. He looked up and saw a giant creature in the entrance, blocking the way out. It snarled, revealing a mouthful of teeth, moving towards him step by step.

"No... stay back..."

The creature swiped with a large claw, catching him in the chest and sending him into the wall, which was hot to the touch. Turner could see the paint bubbling from the intense heat in the room. How could he die like this?

Jess was by his side again, reaching for him. He took her hand and she pulled him up.

"Can you do it, Mac? Can you destroy them?"

"I don't know... I can try."

She kissed him firmly on the lips. "Do it for us." she said, turning and walking away.

"Wait!" he shouted, but she was gone. Turner moved away from the wall, looking for the alien, but it was nowhere to be found. His heart was beating rapidly, and the rising heat was making him sweat. "Where are you?" he yelled.

He gasped as intense pain filled his stomach. Looking down, he saw a large claw sticking out of him. It vanished a moment later, and he covered the wound, attempting to hold his guts in as he stumbled forward, tripping over his feet and spinning, landing on his back. Above him the alien stood, an almost triumphant look on its face. Turner pushed with his feet, slowly backing away, but there wasn't time. It darted its head forward, and Turner screamed, rolling to the left-


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-and onto the floor beside the bed.

He landed face first, nearly breaking his nose. A moment later Jess peeked over the side, a concerned look on her face.

"You ok, Mac?"

"Jesus..."

"Mac?"

"I'm... I'm ok. Did I scream?" he asked, getting up. His heart was still racing, and he was sweating.

"Loud enough to wake the dead." she replied. "Was it a nightmare?"

He sat on the edge of the bed and put his face in his hands. She knelt behind him and locked her arms around his neck, laying her head on his shoulder. "Tell me about it."

Mac told her everything, including the strange thing he'd seen dart behind the ship. "You know, I think that part was real. I think The dream showed me how the aliens got there, at my base. Somehow I forgot that moment in the later events, but now that I know what the aliens look like, I'm positive it was a granger."

"So..." Jess picked up. "The granger created a place for the aliens to be birthed, and they destroyed your base and most of the men. But..."

"What?"

"How did you get here? I know a ship brought you in, but who owned it?"

Turner jumped as if shot. "Oh god, you're right. All my men were dead... so who picked me and the sarge up? I've got to talk to John about this!"

He grabbed a pair of pants and slid them on, then his shirt. He washed his face in the bathroom, fixed his hair, and gave Jess a quick kiss on the cheek. "I'll be back soon."

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McNabb leaned back in his chair, feet propped up on the table, looking out the window at the community. The people bustled about, running their daily errands, checking the mail, snowblowing a walkway, jogging. Nearby, DJ and 13 were engaged in an arm wrestling contest, with 13 winning. DJ finally gave up, the last of his strength fading.

"Man, you're strong!" he exclaimed. "And I work out on a daily basis!"

McNabb grinned. "DJ, cut the shit. The heaviest thing you lift every day is a spoon."

"Screw you."

Turner walked in, and McNabb noticed something was wrong immediately. "What's up, Mac?"

"Listen, I've got a question."

"Shoot."

"You remember when I arrived at the base, right?"

"Of course, how could anyone forget?"

"Yeah, well, do you know who brought me there?"

DJ interrupted. "Didn't that ship set off alarms?"

McNabb nodded. "Yeah, it did. Maintenance was supposed to check it out and get back to me on it, but they never did."

"In what events would the alarms go off?"

"Well," McNabb said, "besides being manually activated, if anyone were trying to break in, they'd go off, and sometimes a wild animal will wander near the base and the alarms will go off. That doesnt happen often, though."

"Why wild animals?" DJ asked.

"They aren't humanoid..." Turner replied. "Right?"

McNabb nodded. "That's right... what are you thinking?"

Turner first explained the dream had. "So I'm thinking that Karith came to collect their specimens, and saw us injured, took us along, and left us at your base."

"That's some wicked voodoo you got there," DJ said. "I'm gonna check your room for creepy little dolls."

McNabb smiled. "I don't think that's needed. So if Karith had aliens on their ship... that would explain why the alarms went off."

Turner nodded. "That's what I think."

"Of course... that also means-"

Turner gave him a questioning look.

"Nevermind, I'm thinking a little too much there. So, about your dream?"

"I think it's a mix of what has happened and a vision of the future, maybe. What unnerves me is the part about having a son. Is that what might happen if we don't beat the aliens, or is it saying we're doomed to fail?"

DJ shook his head. "Don't be so negative. Dreams don't always mean anything. When I was a kid, I dreamed I was a superhero. Everyone probably does, but still, it didn't turn out that way."

"Perhaps," 13 added, "but you may yet become a hero in your own right."

DJ thought about it. "That's true."

"Don't beat yourself over the head with it, Mac. Just relax and prepare for our mission. Ok?"

"I'll try." Mac replied, smiling. Yet it still bothered him, and he couldn't shake it. He bid them good bye and went back to his room. Jess was gone, probably out doing her thing. He sighed, shut the lights off, and laid down. He was going to need all the rest he could get.

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2 Days Later

"Attention: Military Helicopters are coming in for Landing. Repeat: Helicopters are coming in."

"Well," John said, "there's our ride. Grab your bags!"

Outside, the copters landed, blowing the dust off the pad. The soldiers ran out, throwing their bags on first, then climbing up themselves. Each helicopter looked as if it would hold about a dozen each, with some room for supplies. John looked around for Turner and finally spotted him exiting the hotel. He waved and got on.

Turner threw his stuff in and walked over to Jess, who would be staying behind.

"Be careful, Mac." she said.

"I always am." he replied, tears welling up in his eyes. His dream came back to him, and he felt a sudden rush of sadness and fear, as if he was never coming back. Suddenly, surely, he decided he would die out there. He knew it.

He embraced her and gave her a quick kiss, then turned and left before she could see his tears. He took a seat just as the helicopters took off, watching through the window as the colony grew smaller. He would never see it again, he believed.

DJ placed his hand on Turners shoulder, and across the way McNabb nodded sympatheticly. "We'll do fine, Mac. You'll see her again, trust me on that. You're like steel, strong and durable."

13 leaned against an ammo crate near the back, remaining silent. After a few moments, he said: "Even steel can be broken."

McNabb shot him a sharp look that had no effect on the other, then pulled up a holomap. "We'll be there in a few hours, and we'll have to move fast to set up a base. We won't need an armory, or nodes. What men that are here are the only ones that are going in. This facility already has a stockpile of weapons waiting for us. I recieved word from Dr. McGregor that he has a smaller power source for us to use, called a repeater. It should be all we need."

"Anything else?" DJ said.

"We've got a new toy to play with. Two, in fact." McNabb said, moving to the back of the helicopter and motioning to a crate. "First, a weapon Turner will be familiar with, the Lucifer Cannon. It's the third of its kind made, a prototype nuclear weapon that shoots radiated energy balls. Does lots of damage, but you've got to be careful with it. You all know what happened to Sargeant O'Reilly."

They all looked at each other, a bit uneasy. McNabb moved away from the crate and next to a tall box with a tarp over it.

"Last but not least, the Battlesuit is complete and is ready to go!" he said, pulling on the tarp. Everyone's eyes widened at the sight. Encased in glass, the large metal suit awed them into silence. One by one, they began to feel optimistic about the coming mission.

"And thats it. Who thinks we can win this war now?" McNabb asked.

The group cheered.

McNabb sat back down at looked over at Turner, who was now smiling. "Told ya it'd be fine."

Mac nodded. "We'll fight them till every last man is dead, if that's what it takes. I'm ready for them now. That there was just what I needed."

The group cheered again.

"Approaching destination. Prepare for drop off!"

Turner grabbed his shotgun and checked to make sure it was loaded. Satisfied, he stood, looking over all his men, all together for the last time.

"This is it, my friends. I will not call you my fellow soldiers, because over time, throughout these battles, we've become more than that. True, most of you are my clones, but at the same time you are each his own person. I'm glad to have served with each of you. DJ, your humor and upbeat look on life is always inspiring. And of course, I wouldn't be here if McNabb hadn't taken me in when I was wounded. Together we are unstoppable. I'm ready. Are you?"

"YES!" they shouted.

Turner grinned.

"Let's kick some alien ass!"

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The End of Chapter 10
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Re: ...The Harder They Fall
« Reply #55 on: June 04, 2009, 05:00:56 am »
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Re: ...The Harder They Fall
« Reply #56 on: June 04, 2009, 06:02:43 pm »
You just did it again. :D

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Re: ...The Harder They Fall
« Reply #58 on: June 09, 2009, 07:11:03 am »
Oh, moar is coming. Patience is the key here, soldier!
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Re: ...The Harder They Fall
« Reply #59 on: June 17, 2009, 07:39:42 pm »
Oh, moar is coming. Patience is the key here, soldier!

I lost the key D: