Author Topic: Tremulous: The Harder They Fall  (Read 107834 times)

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« Reply #60 on: June 21, 2009, 07:08:37 am »
The PC my work is currently on is FUBAR. I'm currently on a Mac. Rest assured, faithful readers (who ever is left): I'll begin working on the next chapter on here very soon. School just let out and I should have more time. Thanks for your patience!

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Re: ...The Harder They Fall
« Reply #61 on: June 22, 2009, 01:35:43 am »
 :'(
Why will you folk not ban me? :'(

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Re: ...The Harder They Fall
« Reply #62 on: June 26, 2009, 03:25:15 am »
wow love the way you write!
it puts a whole knew perspective when playing the game!
this (when done) needs to go to a publisher!
I think for the sake of trem and your audience,you should cut your language in half at least!
but other wise I love this!!!!!!
love the way you explain trem its self! :basilisk: :battlesuit: and much more!

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Re: ...The Harder They Fall
« Reply #63 on: June 26, 2009, 07:47:37 pm »
Just found this topic, Skulleh, and I love it so far!  Keep up your good work!

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Re: ...wat
« Reply #64 on: June 26, 2009, 08:18:52 pm »
I think for the sake of trem and your audience,you should cut your language in half at least!

wat  ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ???
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Re: ...The Harder They Fall
« Reply #65 on: June 26, 2009, 10:06:04 pm »
yes cut it in half you use it too much!

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Re: ...The Harder They Fall
« Reply #66 on: June 26, 2009, 10:53:11 pm »
yes cut it in half you use it too much!
wat ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ???
Oh hi!

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Re: ...The Harder They Fall
« Reply #67 on: June 26, 2009, 11:49:51 pm »
i love the story just cut the "cussinig" in half at least!

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Re: ...The Harder They Fall
« Reply #68 on: June 27, 2009, 12:27:02 am »
i love the story just cut the "cussinig" in half at least!

You obviously haven't spent much time in the real world, have you?  This is actually quite mild, just so you know.

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Re: ...The Harder They Fall
« Reply #69 on: June 27, 2009, 07:45:51 am »
Well, I'll keep that in mind, Rep.

Thanks for the comments, Vorty <3

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Re: ...The Harder They Fall
« Reply #70 on: June 27, 2009, 12:51:29 pm »
You said that a week ago, too.
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Re: ...The Harder They Fall
« Reply #71 on: June 27, 2009, 08:45:08 pm »
deathskull: i love you story,your definitely a good writer and you kept my attention the whole time! and im still waiting!

vortex: yes i know whats its like to here some one spouting off the F word every other word! but you respect the characters much more if they don't !

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Re: ...The Harder They Fall: Part 11
« Reply #72 on: July 05, 2009, 08:58:19 am »
[Authors Note: I am dearly sorry this took so long. I had intended on this being the final chapter, but real life kept getting in the way, along with some other things, so I've finally reached a good length in this chapter and I've decided to release as is. There is more coming, rest assured, my comrades! (Note#2: I, like you, got tired of waiting to release it!)]

The Harder They Fall: Chapter 11

Note#3: This and the next chapter are based on the great map recently released, called Blackout. I've made a few changes, but I said BASED on, not a copy of :P

“Better put some gloves on, son.” McNabb said to the soldier next to him. “You'll get some nasty rope burn otherwise.”

Turner picked up the coil of rope in the corner and hefted it over the side, watching it as it trailed down to the ground below. He gripped it in his hands, gave a salute to the crew, and slid down. Even with gloves his hands began to warm from the friction. He hit the ground with a soft thud, the grass and leaves muffling the sound. Mac dropped into a crouch, looked around the area to confirm that there were no enemies, and waved up to the chopper. One by one the soldiers came down.

McNabb took point, leading them through the trees and brush closer to the outpost. “Beta, go east about 40 feet, tell me what you see.”

Mac nodded and broke out into a low run, still moving quietly., spotting a soldier guarding a sewer entrance. He motioned with his hand and the sniper took the soldier out.

“Move up, Alpha, and get that grill off. Thats our back door.”

McNabb's team moved forward, the engineer procuring a drill from his pack. The tool whirred to life, the noise shockingly loud in the stillness of the night. He was done in seconds, though.

“We're in.”

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They moved through the mushy water and the thick stench that hung in the air. Turner wished they had nose filters, but they hadn't known how they'd be be coming in. He made a mental note to upgrade his equiptment when they got out. He heard DJ let out a disgusted moan.

“Man, I think a rat just swam past my feet...”

McNabb snorted. “Toughen up, DJ. In this business you'll see worse than that.”

“It was the size of a fucking poodle!”

The whole group burst into laughter. After a moment, DJ joined in. “I'm serious, man. That was the biggest rat I have ever seen.”

“Wait till you get married. The biggest rat you'll see then is the one in your bed.” someone said. Another round of laughter.

“Screw you, whoever said that!”

“Shhhh,” Mac said. “I see a light!”

“Who the hell opened the Pearly Gates for you? Hey Peter! You better let me in, too!”

“I'm serious, quiet!”

Mac trotted ahead, his boots sloshing in the muddy water. Up ahead, the small light grew in size till he could see the grate covering it. He pressed his face against the cool metal, trying to see down the hallway. No one in sight.

“Anything out there?” someone asked, right by his ear.

He jumped and hit his head on the top of the pipe. “For Gods sake, don't do that!”

“Sorry, boss,” the clone said, smirking.

Turner wiped at the grime that now coated his cheeks and stepped back so the engineer could get to work. “I'll have to use a saw for this. The screws are on the outside. Everyone, stay back.”

The saw came to life, throwing sparks as he cut through the metal. He crafted a large circle and pushed it out, wincing as it clattered to the floor. The soldiers moved out into the hall, gasping for fresh air.

“No more sewers for me.” DJ said.

“Where are we?” 13 asked.

Turner tapped a button on his wrist computer. “GPS says we're under the outpost. This must be the hidden facility, then.”

“Anyone even live in the outpost?”

“Maybe some of the soldiers. It's more for cover than anything.”

“I bet the tourists wonder what's up out here.”

“Somehow, 13, I don't think tourists come this way.”

“Hmm, you're probably right.”

Mac looked both ways, then frowned. “I think we're gonna have to split up.”

“Why? If there's aliens here we'll be murdered!”

Mac motioned to the walls. “See how narrow these halls are? If an alien comes and we're all together, we'll be murdered anyways.”

McNabb nodded. “Mac has a point. Close quarters, large aliens... we'd be shooting each other down before we even touched them.”

“Alright, I'll go east, then. Stay in constant radio contact?”

“Of course. Good luck, 13.”

The clone nodded and led his men away, vanishing down the stairs.

Mac sighed and ran a hand through his hair. “John, stay up front with me, men, stay spread out and behind me.”

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They ran up the stairs, two at a time, slamming through the door at the top. Their boots thudded on the linoleum covered floor, which had not been cleaned in a while. Dirt and grime covered the walls, and cobwebs hung in the corners. The lights swung from thin chains, casting wild shadows.

The hallway led into another room, bordered by doors on 3 sides. The 4th wall was filled with tech equipment. Monitors hung near the ceiling, reporting live feed from all around the base. A few screens were filled with static, and others were just plain dead. Weapon racks were built on the walls, but no one could remove the guns. They were locked in.

“John, look,” Turner said, pointing to a circle on the floor. Several bundles of wires led into pipes under the floor. They ended in three prong plugs. “We need some sort of power source,” he added.

McNabb nodded. “Where's the construction kit?”

“I have it !” The engineer said, pulling his pack off.

“Build a repeater right there.”

Once it was completed, Turner knelt and plugged in the cords. Without warning, force fields went up in the doorways, and the weapon racks lit up.

“Well, that problem is solved.”

The soldiers grabbed what few weapons there were, while Mac examined the force fields. He reached out and watched as his hand passed through the field. No shock, no nothing.

“What the hell is this?” he muttered under his breath.

One of the clones passed through the field and turned around in amazement. “What's the point of this if anything can just go through it?”

“WATCH OUT!” Mac yelled suddenly. The clone turned around and screamed as a goon ran down the hall. “Turn off the field!”

McNabb shook his head. “I don't know how!”

The clone backed into the field, but he couldn't pass through it again. Now they knew how they worked. Once you went out, you didn't come back in.

His screams tore through the air as the goon bit into him, spilling his guts on the floor. The unfortunate clone dropped to his knees, and the goon took his head into its jaws, squeezing. A moment later his brain popped out, splattering on the wall.

Someone threw up, and McNabb watched as the goon drug the body down the hall. Turner had looked away, struggling to hold his lunch down.

“Oh my fucking god!” Another clone exclaimed.

“Watch your mouth,” McNabb said. He was feeling queasy himself.

Turner won the battle with his stomach, although his skin was pale. He closed his eyes and leaned against the nearest wall, breathing slowly. Little by little his flesh resumed its color. After a few more moments he stepped forward and grabbed his gun. “Stay with me, men. Someone will need to stay here to let us back in.”

“I'll do it,” DJ said.

“Ok. The rest of you, follow me. We're gonna kill these bastards.”

He led them out of the small room through the door to the east. A long hallway extended before them, more rooms at the end.

“I wonder if there are any people left alive.”

“After what happened back there... I doubt it.”

They reached a large shaft that seemed to go down forever.

“The hell?”

Turner looked up and saw a plethora of machinery, turning its gears and emitting smoke. Platforms went up and down, carrying supplies from one floor to another.

“Exactly HOW are we supposed to get up there?” McNabb asked, pointing to a room up above them to the left.

Turner shook his head. “I have no idea.”

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Beta

13 and his men found themselves in what appeared to be an office area. Desks were scattered around the room, computers and papers sitting on them. 13 pulled open one of the drawers and rummaged through the folders. Nothing interesting. He shut it and went to the next one.

“What the hell is all this?” he muttered to himself.

Base plans, financial reports, nothing about aliens, about experiments. He cursed again and slammed the drawer shut. Something dripped down on his uniform. He reached up and wiped his forehead, sure he was sweating, but it was dry.

He stepped back and looked up at the disemboweled corpse hanging from the ceiling like a grotesque decoration. The other soldiers noticed it and ran over. “Something tells me he's been dead for a while.” one of them said.

“What makes you say that?”

“Well, he looks stiff as a board...” the soldier replied, grabbing a chair and sliding it across the floor in front of him. He stepped on the seat and reached up with his rifle, nudging the foot of the deceased. “Yep, this guy is so much wood.” Without warning, the leg came off, which had been nearly chewed through.

Another soldier offered his opinion. “I think something ate him after he was dead. Look, that stuff that dripped down was blood. If  something had chewed him up and that led to his death, he wouldn't be bleeding, would he?”

13 thought about it. “No, probably not. Also, he wouldn't be hanging from a rope. Suicide, then. But why?”

“Well, I'm going to go out on a limb here, no pun intended, and say if this guy knew the aliens had gotten loose, he wouldn't stand a chance against them. Hanging is a heck of a lot better than being eaten piece by piece.”

“Word,” another clone said.

“Let's move on, folks. Showtime is over.”

The soldiers gathered their weapons and gear and left the room. The pipes above their heads rattled, as if something were in them. Or maybe it was just old pipes. “This place is in such disarray.”

“Tell me about it. When man gets into a frenzy, though, he tends to forget the world around him.”

“That's what happened here?”

“I think so. They got so devoted to their work here, these aliens, the place has fallen apart around them. It's a wonder it looks as good as it is, given the damage those aliens could have done while on the loose.” 13 said.

“I have a feeling they don't spend much time up here.”

13 stopped.

“What?”

“Thats it!”

The soldiers looked around uneasily.

“The labs and the experiment rooms would be downstairs of course... where Turner and the others went! Damn! Move, move, move! Downstairs!”

They rushed back to the offices, feet muffled by the carpeted floor. The computers and machinery continued to run, and somewhere a water cooler kept dripping. 13 was suddenly aware it was very quiet, very still. He thought you could hear a pin drop.

The door on one of the upper balconies burst open, expelling a swarm of dretches unlike any they'd seen before. Several of the soldiers opened fire, but 13 shouted at them not to.

“RUN! NOW!”

They fled the room, tearing down the stairs 3 at a time, the aliens close an their heels. They could hear them, the little feet pattering on the floor and walls. 13 was suddenly sure thats what you heard as you died, when Death reached out his hand for you, the whisper of bone against bone. It was like those feet, always running after you in hell. Dear God, he didn't want to die.

They slammed through the doors at the bottom of the stairs, racing against time to reach the others. And the dretches followed, intent on one thing:

Total eradication.


The End of Part 11

Note #4: Part 12 coming soon!
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Re: ...The Harder They Fall
« Reply #73 on: July 05, 2009, 06:01:43 pm »
Note #4: Part 12 coming soon!

Now that I know where you live, you better keep your word!

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Re: ...The Harder They Fall
« Reply #74 on: July 05, 2009, 08:45:21 pm »
:laugh:

awsum part <3
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Re: ...The Harder They Fall
« Reply #75 on: July 05, 2009, 09:02:55 pm »
Exciting ending.  :o Good job as always.

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Re: ...The Harder They Fall
« Reply #76 on: July 06, 2009, 12:30:01 am »
I just finished reading all of them from the very begining.

You are doing a very good job.

You should see if you can turn this into a movie.

Cant wait till the next chapter.

Keep it coming!
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Find some time every day to have some fun. ;)

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Re: ...The Harder They Fall
« Reply #77 on: July 12, 2009, 06:31:12 am »
Today's my 2nd day playing and I heard there were some good stories on the forums.

1st click - The Harder They Fall

Reading this made me WOW, very detailed compared to other Written Lore's :)

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Re: ...The Harder They Fall
« Reply #78 on: July 13, 2009, 09:46:51 pm »
Heh, thanks a bunch! I like to use detail in my stories, and there's a lot to work with here.

Once again, thank you!

(Next part is COMING! I ASSURE YOU!)

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Re: ...The Harder They Fall
« Reply #79 on: July 17, 2009, 10:11:21 pm »
i hope but it never does but thats ok your a writer and need your space hey i loved that last part it was great and blackout and all send to publisher!!!! only rename it

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Re: ...The Harder They Fall
« Reply #80 on: July 20, 2009, 04:20:05 pm »
<3 Skully
This is amazing!
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Re: ...The Harder They Fall
« Reply #81 on: July 20, 2009, 08:25:57 pm »
nice story! A few grammar mistakes but I don't want to go into those as people might start complaining and telling me that these mistakes don't ruin the story (which they don't I might add ;) ).
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Re: ...The Harder They Fall
« Reply #82 on: July 21, 2009, 12:01:23 am »
* khalsa waits for the illustrated, animated, and live-action versions
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Re: ...The Harder They Fall
« Reply #83 on: July 22, 2009, 03:57:56 am »
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Re: ...The Harder They Fall: Part 11 1/2
« Reply #84 on: July 24, 2009, 03:07:28 am »
“Bar the doors!” 13 yelled, slamming the aforementioned doors shut. A couple clones joined him, pushing against them. The swarm of dretches hit the other side, knocking them back a few inches, but they instantly moved back into place. “Hurry up!”

The other solders spread out through the room, searching for a board, a shovel, a metal bar, something to hold the doors closed. They knocked over desks, bookcases, tables. Finally a clone shouted in joy and raised his fist in the air, grasping a crowbar. He raced over to the doors and shoved the tool through the handles. They all stepped back, and it held.

“Good job, soldier. Help me move some desks over here.” 13 said, wiping the sweat off his brow.

They pushed and pulled the nearest desk in front of the doors. The floor here was carpeted, making it hard work.

“That'll hold em. We need to get to Turner now.”

13 activated his comm and spoke into it.

“Turner, you there?”

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He propped his arms on his legs, hands dangling between his knees. He was sitting against the wall, mere feet away from the seemingly bottomless chasm. McNabb sat across from him, lost in his own thoughts.

"Turner, you there?"

He looked up sharply, wondering who had spoken, then realizing it was his comm.

"I'm here, 13. What's up?"

"We had dretches down here. A whole truckload of those bastards chased us down. Didn't lose anyone though, so you gotta give us that. We trapped the fuckers on the stairs, heh. Barred the door with a crowbar and a desk."

"They're still out there, though. We'll have to keep an eye out. Are you on your way here?"

"Yeah, we are. ETA 10 minutes or so. Sit tight, why don't you?"

"Not much of a choice. See you soon."

Turner cut the connection and looked over at McNabb. "What was that about?" the latter asked.

"13 was chased by dretches. He and his group got away and shut the entrance with a crowbar."

"Has he been playing Half-Life?"

18 walked into the short hallway. "Oh hush, old man. You and your ancient movies and games."

Turner laughed and stood. "Any luck searching for a way to get out of this dead end?"

"Nah." 18 replied, leaning against the wall. "I honestly have no freaking idea why it's built like this."

Suddenly there was a loud click. The startled clone moved away from the wall as a panel slid open behind him. "I'll be damned."

Turner approached the console hidden in the wall and looked at the buttons. He pushed the green one.

A walkway extended from where they stood to the platform across the way.

"Jesus Christ. 2 hours searching for a way across and it was that easy?"

McNabb chuckled. "Leave up to these guys to use old tricks. Lets go across."

The soldiers lined up, single file, and walked over to the platform. From there they took the stairs up to the next platform, which led to the next floor hallway. Another force field greeted them.

"Gah. I've about had it with this place and obstructions." A clone said.

"Oh, stop whining. Grow some balls."

Turner pushed another button on the panel set into the wall, bringing the field down. He smirked and led them down the hallway.

"See, that was easy!"

He froze suddenly, and McNabb ran into him. "What is it?" he asked.

Turner cocked his head. "Do you hear that?"

"Hear what?"

McNabb listened closely. The scuffle of their feet on the floor, slow breathing... and what sounded like-

Turner spun around and pushed past them. "Move it! They're coming!"

The soldiers ran after him as a loud growl filled the air. McNabb looked over his shoulder and nearly fell when he saw the goon. The thing was huge, and solid black, unlike the ones he'd seen before. It rushed after them, moving fast despite its size.

They turned the corner and raced out to the walkway. McNabb spotted the button and slammed it with the palm of his hand, but nothing happened. "Oh, shit! Work, you piece of-"

The forcefield went up just as the goon pounced... but not fast enough to stop it. The creature was sliced neatly in half, the back part trapped behind the field. The front, however, kept going, crashing into a clone. He let out a scream and fell forward, sliding to the edge. Turner leapt after him, attempting to grab him by the ankle, but was only successful at sliding through a pool of gore from the goon remains. The clone went over the side, but grabbed the edge with one hand, his fingers nearly breaking under the weight. "Help me!" he cried, the yell echoing through the chasm. The goon corpse fell downwards into nothingness.

"Drop!" a voice yelled from down below. Turner peered through the holes in the walkway only to see 13 and his men.

"Drop!" 13 commanded again. He was standing right below the endangered clone, his arms outstretched. Without warning the clone dropped, right into 13's arms. The soldier caught him and nearly fell off himself. He put the bewildered clone down. "You injured?"

He shook his head. "No, I'm not, just frightened. Thank you!"

13 smiled and clapped him on the back. "We all help each other out here, remember that."

They went up to join Turner and McNabb, along with the rest of the soldiers. Turners entire front, save his face, was coated in thick black blood from the goon. Not to mention, it smelled atrocious. He fought the urge to gag.

"If we find a shower, I'm taking one." he muttered.

McNabb laughed. "Oh, you gotta get dirty sometime, son."

"Shut up." Turner replied, smiling a bit.

He walked over to the forcefield and deactivated it, stepping over the remains as he went down the hall. The others followed him, spreading out as was the standard. "Jesus, are we ever gonna get anywhere?" someone said.

"It appears we have." Turner replied, pushing the door ahead of him open. Tanks filled with liquid filled the edges of the room, from wall to wall. Alien after alien filled the tanks, wires connected to their bodies. A few of them were even twitching. "I think they're dormant," 13 said, tapping on the glass with the barrel of his rifle. The basilisk inside jerked at the sound, but didn't open its eyes.

"This raises the question... where did they come from?" McNabb asked. "It looks like Karith is making them."

Turner shook his head. "No, I don't think so. They came from somewhere else, that was stated in the reports back at the headquarters. Karith is breeding them, I think, and putting them in these tanks to prolong their lives, for whenever they need to use them."

13 stroked his chin with his thumb and finger. "I don't think they are using them to attack us either. It's pure science going on here, not warfare. The aliens getting out... that was an accident."

McNabb nodded. "Makes sense. Damn scary though, considering how fast they breed."

"Karith will pay," Turner said. "Even if it was an accident, innocent lives have been lost."

"I agree," 13 said.

"So do I." McNabb added. "Come on, we're wasting time."

"Wait," Turner said, holding up a hand. He slowly walked over to another tank, this one containing a tyrant. He gazed into the murky liquid at the creature, completely silent. "This is the one." he said finally, although it was quiet.

"The one from where you were stationed?" McNabb asked.

Mac nodded. "Yes, this is the one."

They all gathered around the creature, watching it, almost in awe. It was bigger than the tyrants they'd seen before, taller by at least a foot, and wider. "Rant on steroids." one clone later said. Scars crisscrossed its body, and the teeth were a fearful sight.

"Ok, I'm out of here." 13 said. "That thing gives me the willies."

"Me too," a few other soldiers said, following 13. Turner lingered for another moment, then joined the rest. "Ok, what now?" he asked.

"You're the boss." 18 said.

"Technically McNabb is the boss..." Mac replied.

John shrugged. "We both know you run this operation, Mac."

Turner sighed. "Ok, so this facility is run by an underground reactor, alright? It has to, because there's no sign of external power being used. I think what we need to do here is destroy it."

"Destroy it?"

"Shut it down, destroy it, whatever. I think if we do that, all these aliens will die, since there'll be no power to run the tanks."

"Sounds like a plan."

"Alright. Gather your weapons, cause break time is over." Turner announced.

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"Ugh," McNabb said.

"Yeah, tell me about it." Turner replied.

The room they'd just entered was a war zone. Bodies lay everywhere, blood pooling on the floor. Shreds of paper, splinters of wood, dents in the walls, you name it, it happened. Turner walked forward and stepped on something soft. Looking down, he saw it was an arm, no body attached. "Oh, jesus," he muttered, kicking it out of the way. Most of the clones looked pale, not quite used to sight of gore, or rather, so much of it.

"The work of dretches," McNabb said, examining another body. "Anything bigger would have torn these guys apart. Look at the bite marks, see? Small and neat. Something like a goon or, god forbid, a Tyrant, would have made much more of a mess."

The engineer laid his shotgun on the floor beside him and rummaged through his pack, pulling out a scanner device. He flicked the switch and the small machine came to life, green lights emanating from the underside. "We need to save these images and put them in the database back home." he said.

"Good idea," Turner replied, impressed. "Why didn't I think of that?"

McNabb laughed. "When do you even think?"

"Oh, you're in for it!" Turner growled, play-lunging at him.

"Relax," McNabb said, grinning. "I was kidding."

"Scans are done." the engineer said, placing his scanner back in the pack. "Definitely dretch work here. Same ones you saw earlier, 13?"

"I'd bet money on it." the clone replied, making sure his rifle was full of ammo.

"We better keep an eye out. Look at the blood? It's somewhat fresh." Turner said.

They moved on, soon realizing that this part of the base was poorly maintained. The lights flickered, wall panels torn off, the floor dirty and rusted. A rat stood in the corner, staring at them. Turner kicked out at it and it squeaked and ran off. "Dirty rodents," he growled.

"I hate them," McNabb said. "I remember when I was a boy, I was sleeping on the couch at home, and my elbow felt funny, so I opened my eyes, and there was this huge freaking rat sitting on my chest, chewing on my elbow. Man, I screamed and swatted that disgusting thing off me. Ran away and I never saw it again."

"Gross, man," someone said.

"Tell me about it!" McNabb replied.

They finally emerged into what was none other than the loading dock. "We must be right below the surface," Turner said, pointing up to the ceiling. "There's a door up there. We need to contact Chopper #1 and get our new toys."

McNabb took the engineer and went to the control room up the stairs. Once there, he skimmed through the channels till he found the one they were on. "Chopper #1, this is John McNabb reporting."

"Affirmative, John McNabb, this is Chopper #1."

"We're in a loading dock underneath the surface. Look for a giant hole in the ground in a few minutes."

"Why does that sound so disturbing?"

"Shut yer mouth," McNabb replied, chuckling.

The engineer messed around with the wires for a few moments, and then, with a load roar, the machinery came to life. The docking bay doors slid open, revealing the white moon in the sky. Cold air rushed in, nearly freezing them. The whup-whup-whup of chopper blades grew louder as it descended, deploying its landing gear. Turner bent over a bit to decrease the wind resistance and rushed to the chopper as the door slid open. One of the soldiers inside picked up the steel grey case and handed it to him. Turner ran it over to the nearest clone and rushed back to the chopper.

"We've got to get this thing on a dolly!" the soldier yelled.

"WHAT?"

"I SAID WE'VE GOT TO GET A DOLLY UNDER IT!" the soldier replied.

"YOU LEFT YOUR DOLL AT HOME? I'M SORRY TO HEAR THAT!" Turner shouted back.

The soldier grabbed Turner by the arm and pulled him over to the dolly on the wall. He pointed to it and then pointed to the case holding the Battlesuit.

"OH! WE'VE GOT TO PUT IT ON THE DOLLY!" Turner exclaimed.

The soldier loosened the binds holding the dolly to the wall. The utility truck dropped to the floor with a clang, and the soldier wheeled it over to the large container. He slid the edge under the side while Turner walked around and pushed the container back towards the soldier, who wheeled the suit backwards and down to the ground.

"Delivery complete," he said.

"Thank you. We'll be calling for pickup soon, so keep an ear open." Turner told him.

"Will do. Good luck!"

The soldier saluted and jumped back on the chopper as it took off. Moments later it was gone, and the docking bay doors slid closed.

"Ok, let's see what we have here." Turner said.

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They cracked the larger container open first, using a crowbar from the engineers pack. Off came the top, then the sides, revealing the Battlesuit. They all stood back and admired it, how the lights reflected off the surface, the size (at least 8 feet tall), the detail.

"Ok, so who gets to use this baby?" 13 asked.

They all looked at Turner.

"What? I haven't had any practice with it!" he said.

"You're more fit to use it than the rest of us." McNabb said.

"Hey, it isn't about who deserves to use it, it's about who is best with it, who can hold his own in combat no matter what he has available."

They all kept looking at him.

"You're kidding me..." Turner said, smacking his forehead.

"You're the best here, Mac. No doubt about that." 13 said.

Mac sighed. "Ok, lets try this baby out."

He reached up and pushed a button hidden under the neck armor of the suit and the back slid open with a hiss. He stepped onto the leg platforms, which were installed to bring the users head up to the head of the suit. Once he had sure footing, he lifted himself up and slid his arms in, gripping the handles. He slid his right hand index finger around the built in trigger and placed his face securely into the head support. Without warning the suit closed and he was submerged into darkness.

"Oh crap," he said. "Can you guys hear me?"

Nothing.

He growled and tried to move. Still nothing.

"Start?"

Nothing.

"Turn on?"

Nothing.

"Activate?!?"

"Battlesuit Online. Welcome, Mac Turner."

The screen in front of his eyes lit up, fuzzy at first, then smoothing out. He saw each member of the squad, highlighted with a faint white line. "Guys?"

13 stepped back. "Whoa, you've got a deep voice in that thing!"

"Damn, I do!" Turner said, shocked.

He tried moving, and surprisingly the suit moved with ease. Each step he took produced a loud thud. "Wow, this is amazing. Get me a gun!"

The clones opened the other, smaller case and produced a chaingun (saving the Lucifer Cannon for when it was needed). They fitted it onto his right arm, the weapon clicking as it snapped into place.

He ran over to the exit, then turned around and looked at the others.

"Come on!" he yelled.

They all cheered and followed him.

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"Stop right there!" Mac yelled as they stormed into the reactor room.

The workers halted, one of them screaming in surprise as the soldiers spread out around them. "Who are you?!" one of them asked angrily, stepping forward. His name tag said he was Dr. Jonas Rekal.

"Hello, Doctor." McNabb said, moving towards the man. "Would you like to explain just what you are doing here?"

"None of your business. Who gave you permission to enter this facility?!"

"The government." Turner said. "Your actions have caused the death of innocents across multiple worlds, did you know that? Surely you did. You look like a smart guy."

"And what if I did? Do you have any idea what work is being done here? We've found proof of alien life!"

"Yeah, I'm just as happy as you are. Next time you find alien life, make sure it's friendly, please? I would prefer to keep my face, thank you very much." 13 added.

"Oh, go and be a smart ass, why don't you?" Jonas said, spitting. "You know nothing about science. All you know is how to have your own way. Ok, you want to kill the aliens? I can arrange that!"

The doctor  turned and ran to a computer and quickly typed in a command. He held his finger over the ENTER key.

McNabb drew his blaster and aimed at Jonas. "Don't do it. You're going to give us access to the reactor and we are going to shut this place down, understand?"

Jonas laughed. "Ok, you got it!" He pushed the button.

Just as the lights went out, McNabb fired.

To Be Continued...
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Re: ...The Harder They Fall: Part 12
« Reply #85 on: July 24, 2009, 03:08:07 am »
Make Sure you Read The First Half Of This Chapter! ^^^^^

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A few moments later the generators kicked in, powering the emergency lights. Jonas lay on the ground, screaming, his white lab coat soaked red with blood. McNabb had hit him in the shoulder..

"Oh, shut up, ya wuss." 13 said as the medic knelt by the doctor to check his wounds.

"What just happened?" Turner asked one of the other workers.

"He cut off main power to the facility." the woman replied. She was the one who had screamed earlier.

"And this means...?"

"Well, we probably lost whatever work we were doing on our computers, but the biggest problem right now is..."

"Is?!?"

She looked at the door behind Turner. "Well, the generator isn't strong enough to supply power to the lab area..."

"Dammit, lady, stop trailing off!" Turner yelled. "WHAT ARE YOU TRYING TO SAY!?"

She burst into tears. "I'm trying to say we're all gonna die! Without proper power, the tanks will malfunction and the aliens will get loose!"

"Oh, Jesus." McNabb said, going pale.

Alarms suddenly began to bray, nearly deafening them.

"Oh my god, they're loose." the woman said.

"Block the doors!" Turner yelled. "Move, move, move!"

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"I have an idea," the woman said. "If you can draw the aliens close to the reactor and destroy it, it'll probably kill most of them, if not all."

"You've got to get the reactor area open, then." Mac said.

They'd blocked all the doors with desks and tables, but the vents couldn't be touched. Turner kept looking at them warily.

"Well, I think I can do that." the woman said. As she turned and walked over to one of the computers, Mac saw her name tag. She was Dr. Susan LeMaster.

"I don't know if this will work," she said, "but here goes."

She bent over the keyboard and typed for a few minutes.

"What are you doing?!" Jonas yelled. "Don't you dare let them in there!"

"Be quiet." Susan said to him. "You've already caused enough trouble."

She kept typing, then jumped with glee. "Yes! It worked!"

To confirm this, a huge door at the far end of the room began to slide open. Beyond it sat the Reactor, ascending all the way to the ceiling. Swirls of orange energy pulsated and glowed, lighting up the entire room.

Turner looked at Susan. "Do you and the others have a way out of here?"

She nodded and walked over to the wall, pressing a button. It slid apart, revealing an elevator. "It'll take us to the docking bay... but there's probably barely enough power for one trip. If we take this, its a one way trip."

Mac nodded. "13, John, grab the engineers kit and come with me. The rest of you, go with the scientists, and pick up DJ and the other clones. We'll catch up another way."

"Wait, you idiots!" Jonas cried. "Are you gonna blow it up?"

"Why do you ask?"

"Because it'll irradiate the whole entire area! You'll be killed! Not to mention, in the event of  an explosion, that room is set to shut the doors immediately. You'll be trapped in there and you'll die a horrible death."

'We'll see about that," Turner said. "Go on."

He reached down and picked up the case holding the Lucifer Cannon. 13 hoisted the engineers pack over his shoulder, while the others got on the elevator.

"We'll have the chopper wait for you," one of the clones said.

Mac smiled. "Thank you."

The soldier nodded and the doors slid shut. They were gone.

"Well," John said, sighing, "this is it."

"Hell yes," 13 replied.

"Let's get this done." Mac said, leading the way.

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13 knelt and opened the engineer pack. He removed several packs of C4 and handed them to John. "Help me put these up on the reactor. We can blow it up that way and make a run for it."

McNabb nodded and took them, and they got to work. They attached them all around the base, making sure each one was linked to the detonator. Within 5 minutes they were done.

"Ok, now we wait."

Turner shook his head. "No."

"What?" 13 exclaimed.

"Give me the detonator. You two wait in the office area for me. I'll do this."

"Hey, no way am I leav-"

"Who's the one in the suit, me or you?"

13 sighed and handed it over. "Fine, but next time we go on a suicide mission, I'm the one dying, got it?"

Mac laughed. "Alright. Now get your ass out there."

McNabb and 13 ran out of the room, and he was left alone to wait for the aliens.

He didn't know how much time ticked by, whether it was seconds or minutes, but he finally heard them coming. And it sounded like a lot.

He faced the only other door in the room, which was open to reveal a long hallway stretched out before him. He held his chaingun up, the detonator in his other hand. He stood and waited.

The dretches came first, swarming down the hallway, literally hundreds of them. Their feet pattered as they ran along the walls and ceiling, coming for him. The vents above him burst open, and out came the basilisks.

"Come one, come all, motherfuckers. We're gonna have us a barbeque."

Marauders bounced their way through the dretches, leaping into the room and onto the platforms. The dretches climbed up the walls to the ceiling, covering every inch of space. Ah, and here were the goons...

Yelling, Turner opened fire with his chaingun, tearing into the goons. They roared and tried to run, but he gunned them down before they could move. He spun, shooting the supports holding the platforms up. They collapsed, crushing the maras.

He laughed, shooting everything he could, sending them into a frenzy, driving them to anger, but the roar silenced him. He looked back down the hallway, only to see a tyrant. Not just any tyrant either... it was the one that had tried to kill him where he had been stationed.

"Oh, you are one ugly son of a gun." he said.

It roared again and charged down the hall.

"Come on!"

He had not anticipated its speed. It reached him, slamming one of its forearms into his midsection, knocking him into the air. He hit the wall with a thud, denting his armor. The Tyrant roared in victory. Turner laid on his back, his armor locking up.

"Oh, not now..." he prayed, hoping something out there would hear him. The alien loomed over him, saliva dripping from its jaws.

"Are you hungry?" he asked it.

It merely growled at him.

"Well, eat this!" he yelled, bringing his arm up and sticking the end of the chaingun into the creatures mouth. He grinned and pulled the trigger, the bullets tearing the back of the tyrants head off. It roared, stumbling back on its rear legs. Turner saw what was going to happen and rolled to the right as the alien came down, falling where he had just been. He stood slowly, watching the rant carefully. It was dead.

He dropped the now depleted chaingun and opened the case, pulling out the Lucifer Cannon. He equipped it and aimed at the reactor, pressing the trigger. The weapon began to charge.

The remaining aliens went crazy, swarming down the walls towards him. A marauder leapt off another platform, dropping towards his head.

"Bring it!"

He released the trigger, a huge glowing ball of energy emitting from the Cannon. Time seemed to slow down again...

... and the world vanished in a flash of white light.

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"Radiation Levels Increasing: Evacuate the Area Immediately"

Turner opened his eyes, only to be greeted by the sight of flames. Burning alien corpses surrounded him, a few of them still very much alive. They squealed in pain as the fire engulfed their bodies, limbs falling off. He tried to stand and couldn't.

"Radiation Levels Increasing: Evacuate the Area Immediately"

"Mac!"

He wondered who was yelling at him.

"Mac! Get out of the suit!"

"Go away..."

"MAC! GET OUT OF THE DAMN SUIT! THE DOORS ARE CLOSING!"

"Deactivate..." he said, weakly.

The Battlesuit shut down, releasing him. Strong hands grabbed the back of his body armor and he felt himself being lifted to his feet. He shook his head to clear it and looked at the man holding him up. It was McNabb.

"Come on! We've got to go!"

"Can't move..."

"Come on! You're fine! Move it!"

"No... wanna stay here..."

"Mac, you've got people waiting for you at home, you can't stay here! Remember all the other soldiers, your friends? Remember Jess? You've got to RUN, son!"

He finally felt strength flow back into his legs. He began to walk slowly... then jog... then run. They ran out of the room just as the doors slammed shut, but they didn't stop. They kept going.

13 caught up to them. "You made it!" he said, laughing. "I knew you would."

Mac smiled weakly. "I don't die unless I have nothing to live for... and right now I have plenty."

McNabb grinned. "That's the spirit!"

The building shuddered as something else exploded.

"What was that?" 13 asked.

"We've set off a chain reaction..." McNabb said, panting. "We've got to hurry, because this place is going to come down around our ears!"

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They emerged out into the docking bay, where the chopper was waiting, as promised. The soldiers pulled them aboard and they lifted off as the building shuddered again.

"You did it." one of them said, clapping Mac on the shoulder.

Mac smiled. "No... we all did it."

They zoomed out of the hanger and headed south. After they'd gotten about a mile away, the base finally exploded, a huge column of fire rising into the air.

"Woooohooo!" McNabb cheered. "Lookit that, men! We killed those suckers good!"

They all cheered.

"Well, guys, who's ready to go home?" the pilot asked.

They cheered again, even louder.

"That's what I thought," the pilot said, laughing.

They flew off into the the distance over the mountains, finally homeward bound.

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A Few Months Later...

"Come in." John said. He was in his office, smoking a cigar.

Mac opened the door and stepped inside, a folder in his hand. He took a chair.

"Oh, Mac, how good to see you!"

"Likewise, sir."

"Oh, drop the 'sir' bullcrap. We've been through too much as a team for you to ever call me sir. First name basis. How are you?"

Mac laughed. "I'm as good as can be, s- I mean, John."

"Wonderful. Jess and the baby?"

"They're good. I wish things would speed up so I'd know if it was a boy or a girl. It's driving me nuts."

John smiled. "Well, going by your luck, it'll be a boy."

"I sure hope so."

They were silent for a few moments.

"Something on your mind, Mac?"

"Well, yeah... I've been wanting to tell you something."

"Lemme guess, you're gonna turn your papers in and vanish, am I right? Had enough of the military life, eh?" John asked, joking.

"Actually, you're right."

His face fell. "Oh, no, you're the one joking now, right?"

Mac shook his head. "No. I've been talking with Jess over it for a while now, and we both agree this kind of place is not safe to raise a child. The work we do... we could be killed in the field of battle anytime. We don't want the child to be an orphan, you know?"

John nodded. "I know, and I understand. Who else knows?"

"Well..."

"Oh, don't tell me I'm the last?"

Turner smiled apologetically. "I wanted to save the news for you last, cause I admire you the most out of everyone. You saved my life, John, more than once."

"Ok, but I still don't get why I'm last?"

"You're gonna be the hardest to say goodbye to," Mac replied. He picked up the folder and slid it across the desk. "Here are the papers."

John looked at them, putting his cigar out. "When are you leaving?"

"Oh, about 10 minutes from now."

"What!? Thats cheap!"

"Well, you can stay here or walk with me out to the shuttle."

"Oh, fine." McNabb stood and opened the door. "Come on."

They exited the office and took a right, walking down the hall to the landing pad.

"Man, it seems I came here only yesterday, you know?" Mac said.

"Oh, I know it. Time flies when you're having fun, huh?"

"Amen, my friend. Hey DJ!"

"Yo bro!" DJ replied as he walked past. "Heading out?"

"You bet."

"Peace, my man. We won't forget ya!"

John smiled. "You've left an impact on these mens lives, you know? You did more with them with your determination and your willingness to defend the innocent and avenge your fallen brothers. You made them soldiers, and you did a better job of it than I ever could."

Mac felt tears welling up behind his eyes. "Thank you. That means a lot."

They opened the doors and stepped outside. A light breeze was blowing, and the sun was still rising, bringing the promise of  another scorching day.

"Well, this is it." Mac said.

John nodded. "Yep, this is the end of the line." He extended his hand.

Mac shook it for a moment, then pulled the other into an embrace. "Goodbye, John. It's been good."

John grinned and patted Turner on the back. "Brothers till the end. Even if you are leaving the military, the military will never leave you."

Mac laughed. "Thank God for that. Hey, I'll call once in a while. Take care, my friend."

"I will. Give Jess a kiss for me?"

"I'll do that. Adios, amigo."

Mac turned and boarded the shuttle. He took his seat next to Jess, by the window, and waved one more time. John waved back and leaned against the wall, crossing his arms.

"All ready to go?" he asked Jess.

"I am if you are." she replied.

He smiled and kissed her on the cheek. "That's from John."

"Will we ever see them again?" she asked.

Mac put an arm around her as the shuttle lifted off and zoomed towards space, pondering her question.

"I don't know, dear. I really don't."

"I hope we do, at least someday."

Mac looked out the window down at the base, watching as it grew smaller.

"So do I, Jessica. So do I."

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The End

May 9th, 2009 - July 23rd, 2009


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Re: ...The Harder They Fall
« Reply #86 on: July 24, 2009, 12:42:46 pm »
It's over  :'(

The first part of the first part of the chapter reminded me of the Battle for Helm's Deep in The Lord of the Rings: The Two Towers.

also rofl @ "Has he been playing Half-Life?"

Nice story overall :) keep it up in the future.
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Re: Tremulous: The Harder They Fall
« Reply #87 on: July 24, 2009, 07:41:30 pm »
Nice story, you are a good writer!

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Re: Tremulous: The Harder They Fall
« Reply #88 on: July 24, 2009, 09:23:38 pm »
Hey guys, thanks for the responses.

It was a very fun project, and I enjoyed every moment of it. I never had intended to make a full fledged story out of it (that's why the first chapter simply says "The End" after it), but the responses were all positive, so I decided to keep going. As time went along, the story played out in my mind, like a movie, and I just kept writing more and more down. In the end, what started as a 1,000 word short story was transformed into a 28,000 + word story (which is, I found out, considered to be a novella). I really like the fact that there was so much that could be made up, since the "official" Trem story is somewhat short and lacking detail. It's true that THTF may not be extremely realistic in some spots, but for gods sake, we're talking about Humans VS Aliens here  :D.

There were a few ideas I'd had at first that were never implemented, like 13 and his clones betraying Turner and HIS clones later on. Instead, I found it best to leave them all buddies.

Like any story, there are a few "dud" chapters. In my opinion, these are 7 and 11. 7 is just... so-so, IMO. And 11 was more or less rushed because real life kept getting in the way of my writing and both the readers and myself were tired of waiting for a release.

In the end, I think it turned out good, and I'm happy with it. Thanks to all of you for all the comments and the support! I welcome all future critique, detailed or not, positive or negative.

Thank you all again!

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Re: Tremulous: The Harder They Fall
« Reply #89 on: July 25, 2009, 01:46:49 am »
You are very talented at story telling and should venture further into this area. Maybe take a writing class or similar..

I hope you find time, will and stamina to pay another tribute to Tremulous with another great story. For now: Enjoy your break! ;-)