A different perspective...

[The_Spy]

Light. Too much light.

I froze. There was something, something in front of me. Suddenly, I felt compelled to protect it. Its large, bulbous head and long arms were attractive to me. I loved it. I heard it speak: "Go fourth, destroy all that stand in your path."
I saw in my head, a thing. It had two long things that held it up, two puny sticks with smaller sticks on the end, and an oval on its top, with a hole in the middle, a triangle pointing out, and two more smaller shapes with moving things in them. I felt a sudden rush of hatred, PURE hatred towards this creature.

I wanted to kill all of them!

Wipe them out!

I tuned, and moved to the nearest exit. I passed by a bizarre tube. I stopped, and went to examine it. It, whatever it was, was hollow, and filled with a kind of bubbling liquid. I stuck my head in it.
Everything went dark.

Light.

More Light.

I opened my eyes. I saw my companion, my family looking at me. I realized; it had saved me! It had saved my mind!

I said "My child," (I guess I am it's child) "Go fourth and do what you must,"

So I did.

I left the area that was my home. Traveling down a hallway, I saw the hated thing! It was holding a peice of metal, about the size of my body. It pointed it at me.
BANG-BANG-BANG!

Pain. I must run! My family said "Run, child, RUN!"

I ran. I soon put the creature far behind me. I shuddered. I felt my body pushing something out, my flesh mending. Something went Clink-clink on the ground. I looked at it.
It was small, very small. about the size of my leg, but smaller. it was shiny, and pointed at the end. I kicked it. It skittered away from me.
I was angry again. I wanted the blood of the creature and its bizzare spitting friend. I ran.
I saw it at the end of the corridor. It saw me, and aimed the thing at me but before it could spit, I jumped into the creatures face and BIT! It screamed and feel backwards, slumped against the wall.
Blood. It tasted good.
End of part one.

[player1]

not bad

("forth" not "fourth" - unless you mean "after third", "turned" not "tuned", "fell" not "feel", "piece" not "peice", "its" not "it's" - ur 2 for 3)

[mooseberry]

Lots of writing recently. 

[CreatureofHell]

Curiosity killed the dretch 

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