Author Topic: Tyrants Wrath-An Aliens View Of Tremulous. (Read 75384 times)

twigstik97 · « **on:** July 11, 2009, 10:00:13 am »

Prologue
I was a Tyrant

....
Twice the size of my enemies, the humans

.
Charging through the human's defense machines...
Nothing standing in my way.
I was about to run around the corner and show the humans who owns this planet.
But I heard a dragoon's

growl behind me, I turned around.
The dragoon was whimpering in the corner and then pounced across the hallway to me.
It was hurt...badly hurt.
The thing that done that to him was like no human weapon I've ever seen.
It was so strong...
But i didn't wait to find out anything more about it, i was running the opposite direction.

There was a human blockade of turrets

in front of me (but out of range, so there was no threat)
But a human with the super weapon running towards me from behind...
I had to make a hasty decision
I charged at the turrets, they started firing...it hurt so much.
But it was my only chance.
I destroyed one of the turrets but when i reached the other side, there were more humans with the same weapon...
Except one had this big metal suit on

....

He fired this yellow energy ball at me.
It hit me and i collapsed to the ground.
I looked at my legs, I'm pretty sure i used to have 6, but i had 4....
I looked around, i saw the humans walk towards me cautiously, but i saw 2 of my legs about a meter away.
Damn it.
I looked at my remaining 4 legs, 1 was in half, 2 were badly injured and 1 was fine.

I heard that dragoon again, i got up and looked towards the dragoon.
It leaped towards that metal suited human and pushed him to the ground.
While the humans were distracted, i yelped out for help.
3 dretches

, 3 basilisks

, 1 dragoon

and another tyrant

(same as me) came in about 5 seconds.
They must of already been on their way.
I creeped up on a human that was firing at a basilisk

.
I looked at the yellow energy ball gun he was holding...
It said: 'lucifier cannon'

The human turned around, and i clawed him in stomach.
He collapsed, screaming in pain.
Weak humans.
I stabbed him in the chest with my claw hands.
I was still badly injured so I retreated back to the base...

So, what do you think?

This is my first story based on a game, so i hope i converted the game to a story successfully.

Also, i'll post chapter 1(this was the prologue) after i have a few responses.

Repatition · « **Reply #1 on:** July 11, 2009, 07:28:18 pm »

not bad I like it! it s interesting to see a rants sympathy for goon

Archangel · « **Reply #2 on:** July 11, 2009, 09:44:30 pm »

mooseberry · « **Reply #3 on:** July 11, 2009, 10:52:39 pm »

twigstik97 · « **Reply #4 on:** July 12, 2009, 05:36:45 am »

thx guys.
That was the prologue.
R u ready for chapter 1?

twigstik97 · « **Reply #5 on:** July 12, 2009, 05:57:29 am »

CHAPTER 1
I Crawled back to the base.
I confronted the Overmind

and told him about the battle between the small human squad

and us.
He was furious at me.
I was a higher-evolved form of most aliens.
I should of been able to defeat a human squad on my own.
But i needed assistance and i still lost.

I was a discrace to the aliens.
I trampled home.
As soon as i went threw the creep

, my son (a dretch

, still too young to fight) jumped at me.
He caught me by surprise and my claws almost killed him.
My wife, an Adv. Granger

, picked up my son who was badly injured and put him inside the hovel

.
My wife gave me an angry look and she went to sleep.
I went to sleep in my hovel

.

I woke up to the pain of a bullet in my rib

.
I got up and charged at the human squad

that was in my hive.
My son

was trying to bite at the humans but he wasn't doing much.
My wife was hiding in her hovel

.
I killed those few humans but then more came in.
There he is, the same human with the metal suit

.
He somehow remembered me and sprinted out the doorway.
I growled at the last humans and they ran off screaming.
I checked on my wife

in her hovel

.
She wasn't hiding...she was dead....

I trampled out the door with a huge roar

.
The human ships

were about leave back to earth

.
DAMN IT
Wait.....i had an idea.

I went back threw the creep and called my daughter

(Granger) over to come with me.
My son

wanted to tag along as well.
I told my daughter to hide in a cargo crate.
My son would have to stay with me.
Then i saw it, the grand human ship...Tremor

.

I called for more aliens..
Not many came, I'm guessing the humans killed most of us.
Me and my brother, another tyrant

, led the charge.

How'd ya like it?

Archangel · « **Reply #6 on:** July 12, 2009, 08:03:17 am »

twigstik97 · « **Reply #7 on:** July 12, 2009, 10:00:03 am »

Uh, what do you mean by that?
I've seen you play on tremulous, ur good.
But your way of communicating baffles me.

mooseberry · « **Reply #8 on:** July 12, 2009, 10:04:27 am »

twigstik97 · « **Reply #9 on:** July 12, 2009, 12:15:58 pm »

OMG WTF FFS BBQ!!??
uh....hows my story.

your face · « **Reply #10 on:** July 12, 2009, 05:00:05 pm »

{7}wrath · « **Reply #11 on:** July 12, 2009, 09:35:59 pm »

moose:

Repatition · « **Reply #12 on:** July 12, 2009, 10:24:54 pm »

i love it!

Baconizer · « **Reply #13 on:** July 12, 2009, 11:23:05 pm »

solar:

=

+

Archangel · « **Reply #14 on:** July 12, 2009, 11:55:04 pm »

{7}wrath · « **Reply #15 on:** July 13, 2009, 12:59:27 am »

Baconizer, I agree completely, except you forgot that

Without this the latter part of your arguement falls apart completely.
Also, I was replying to moose when I said moose:
I was correcting a slight logical error in his emotespeak.

Baconizer · « **Reply #16 on:** July 13, 2009, 01:49:22 am »

Quote

I think you'll find that, when you take it into account, this completely disproves what you're saying. Pay special attention to

{7}wrath · « **Reply #17 on:** July 13, 2009, 03:39:51 am »

is junk science. End of discussion.

twigstik97 · « **Reply #18 on:** July 13, 2009, 06:09:54 am »

uh...lol?

twigstik97 · « **Reply #19 on:** July 13, 2009, 06:43:56 am »

Are you guys ready for chapter 2?
Give me the word an i'll post it.

mooseberry · « **Reply #20 on:** July 13, 2009, 07:34:12 am »

twigstik97 · « **Reply #21 on:** July 13, 2009, 07:40:19 am »

I dont know what ur saying.

English please

I dont speak tremulous.

Archangel · « **Reply #22 on:** July 13, 2009, 08:27:30 am »

twigstik97 · « **Reply #23 on:** July 13, 2009, 09:21:52 am »

srsly, stop messing with my mind plz.
Do you want chapter 2 or what?

I'm currently writing chapter 6 now, so there's a lot to read until then.

Archangel · « **Reply #24 on:** July 13, 2009, 09:51:04 am »

twigstik97 · « **Reply #25 on:** July 13, 2009, 10:23:22 am »

FFS....
do u want the next chapter or what?

mooseberry · « **Reply #26 on:** July 13, 2009, 11:06:54 am »

UniqPhoeniX · « **Reply #27 on:** July 13, 2009, 04:26:06 pm »

Spammers

Yes, post the next 1.

Baconizer · « **Reply #28 on:** July 13, 2009, 09:27:25 pm »

is not junk science. Sure,

was wrong about

-- I freely admit that, as does everyone who follows him. But this time he's not wrong! Just look at all the evidence, like

and

!!

twigstik97 · « **Reply #29 on:** July 14, 2009, 02:38:21 am »

Thank you UniqPhoenix.
Someone acting mature for once.

CHAPTER 2
CCHHAARRGGGEEEE
We all charged towards the humans

.
The humans all dashed for Tremor, the huge flagship of the human fleet.
The cargo crate that my daughter was in was quickly transferred into Tremor

....Excellent

My alien warriors charged at the guards

, it was an epic battle.
100's of aliens

and 1000's of humans.
I looked at the closest human, I was about to swipe at him but a dragoon

pounced at him from the right.
The dragoon ate its meal graciously.
I snapped at the dragoon to continue fighting.
It left its meal and pounced at another human and then another and so on.
These humans were falling like leaves in autumn.

We finished off the human guards in about 15 minutes.
That was too easy.
All that was left to guard the Tremor was a huge amount of Automated Turrets

.
We charged straight through the turrets and on to the ship.
But there lay what i was hoping would never happen again.
About 20 of the metal suited humans

stand there with lucifier cannons.
With 30 of my aliens

behind me and my son

...wait....OMG
I looked all around while the humans started to fire.
All the aliens charged towards the humans.
We were the ones falling like leaves.
I kept searching for my son.
A bullet hit my chest and i charged at the human

, he fell down screaming.
I left him to die of shock.
I continued looking for my son.
He was no-where to be seen.

The humans had decimated our alien attack force..
There was me, my brother and a couple of dragoons

...
And we only managed to kill 5 humans

....
Just as all hope was lost, the aliens collapsed...it was a sign of surrender.
I growled at the aliens telling them not to give up...they wouldn't listen.
Me and my brother weren't going to give up.
But this human changed our minds, he picked up a lucifier cannon and pushed it to my face.

The human saw the anger in my eyes...
I sensed the fear in him.
I blew threw my nose a weak wind and he fell down screaming then he ran away behind the rest of the humans.
I fell down as a human pulled out his blaster and shot me in the chest

...
That really hurt....but that blaster is so weak...but it hurt so much.....ow...
Then i saw humans kept dropping from behind.
Plomp, splat, hiss...wait...hiss?
I looked behind the humans, it was a basilisk

killing all the humans silently and stealthy.
When the humans realised they ran the opposite direction.
That was towards me

They all ran in my direction screaming like little grangers

.
I got up with my brother and we started slicing down the humans, one by one

, two by two

.
The remaining humans retreated threw a doorway to the left.
I then heard screams behind the door.
The basilisk

moved towards the door and it opened...
There were flashing dim lights, and blood over the floor.
I moved closer and i saw a granger

hiding in a corner.
Did that granger kill those 3 humans? on its own?
I looked around the corner and there was an acid tube

.
I walked towards the granger

and picked it up...

I realized it was my daughter...
I put her down and told her to go hide...she ignored me.
Grr...
She went to the human entrance and blocked it with barricades

.
She told me she wanted to help me....help me fight by building defenses.
I looked for my son

and then the basilisk

jumped at me.
I was a bit more cautious this time and didn't swipe at him.
The basilisk was my son...
He had evolved...
Well lets show these human who owns this planet...and this ship

.

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