New Map: Containment

[ReversedParadox]

My first map.
Please comment and give opinion

Map still in beta stage.
thanks

Anyways, here are some screenshots






Screenshots Fixed..

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[Repatition]

not bad for (first map)................

[CreatureofHell]

It amazes me when I see people texturing like this. I can't see how it is done...

[UniqPhoeniX]

We need a sticky with "DONT RELEASE YOUR FIRST MAPS" in the title. Or maybe 2. Or more just in case.

[your face]

Better than my first map.

@ReversedParadox: don't be discouraged, just don't release anything until you are sure the community will at it.  I hope you continue to map, check out some of Brain's tutorials and other tutorials and other materials.  Good luck with future projects.

[ReversedParadox]

thanks for the info face, the tut's great.
and thanks for the encourangement and instructions

[Demolution]

Blinding hallway is blinding!
Looks nice for a first map.

[amz181]

I dont understand why people get so annoyed when people release their first maps. If you want good advice then you should release, then someone can give you accurate advice, instead of vague advice based on screenshots.

[UniqPhoeniX]

I dont understand why people get so annoyed when people release their first maps. If you want good advice then you should release, then someone can give you accurate advice, instead of vague advice based on screenshots.

Pollution (even when the map name is 'Containment'). If you want advice on how to make maps, read some of the 1000s of tutorials out there. Then release. Don't make people repeat the same advice 1000000s of times. These maps will get played a few times (if any), then they will be forgotten.

[JJosh]

I actually really like it. Get it uploaded to MG so I can put it on UnlimitedBP! o:

[Winnie the Pooh]

All the drama about first maps is such a stereotype. I mean, look at mine! That's MY first map.
Are we talking about first maps EVER (like the first time you touched radiant) or the first map you've released?

[CATAHA]

Lol, my first map was more detailed... but not trem-stile, more HL style. But i working hard (over 4 months) on my 1st map.