Author Topic: CRATUREA!!! (Read 10552 times)

Firstinaction · « **on:** May 02, 2010, 01:02:41 pm »

New alien I made in 3d blender. tell me what you think. Its the best creation I have made. Im going to animate it soon but tell me what you think

BattleGranger · « **Reply #1 on:** May 02, 2010, 03:15:31 pm »

First off: nice spelling dude. Second: I rather like it!

It looks a little to spore-ish for Trem, but it's actually good looking! Loving the claws mainly, like an angry blue domo-kun!

your face · « **Reply #2 on:** May 02, 2010, 04:52:40 pm »

Vast improvement from your previous efforts. Good work.

mooseberry · « **Reply #3 on:** May 02, 2010, 08:03:40 pm »

Yea, I don't see this fitting in with Tremulous aliens at all, but really, that's fine because I don't think you're looking to get it included in 1.2 or anything, so the best place for this little fellow would be a mod, in which case, who cares if it looks like the others.

But it looks very good, the modeling itself and the postures look clean and well made. Keep up the good work!

Also, get some real textures on there.

your face · « **Reply #4 on:** May 02, 2010, 08:57:25 pm »

The third pic looks like he's about to charge into a tank.

CreatureofHell · « **Reply #5 on:** May 02, 2010, 09:05:05 pm »

Second pic is superman

harraps · « **Reply #6 on:** May 02, 2010, 09:53:01 pm »

OK
I have to put on my model as detail as this
I like it but your model look more like an human mutant than an alien,
try to change the global look, not the details.

Firstinaction · « **Reply #7 on:** May 03, 2010, 02:25:47 am »

Quote from: harraps on May 02, 2010, 09:53:01 pm

OK
I have to put on my model as detail as this
I like it but your model look more like an human mutant than an alien,
try to change the global look, not the details.

Thanks alote

your face · « **Reply #8 on:** May 03, 2010, 03:15:31 am »

That thing is awesome. Oh, the eyes need to glow red.

Conzul · « **Reply #9 on:** May 04, 2010, 01:57:25 am »

Wow dude that's some pretty tight work. (you are improving). I like it, but take a suggestion?

Draw (on paper) a concept art (of an object or creature) or two. Then scan them onto a computer. Now make a model based on your concept art. Post both your concept drawings and your resulting model into a thread like this.
You might not see the practical application of this, but around here we will. It's a way of proving how good you are at the design process. Also, (if you want to go even further in that direction) consider uploading one of the models you've made in .blend format. That way we can download it and see how efficient (or otherwise) your work is. That's what I'd do, anyway, if I wanted to prove myself to a development team.

Firstinaction · « **Reply #10 on:** May 04, 2010, 03:05:56 am »

Quote from: Conzul on May 04, 2010, 01:57:25 am

Wow dude that's some pretty tight work. (you are improving). I like it, but take a suggestion?

Draw (on paper) a concept art (of an object or creature) or two. Then scan them onto a computer. Now make a model based on your concept art. Post both your concept drawings and your resulting model into a thread like this.
You might not see the practical application of this, but around here we will. It's a way of proving how good you are at the design process. Also, (if you want to go even further in that direction) consider uploading one of the models you've made in .blend format. That way we can download it and see how efficient (or otherwise) your work is. That's what I'd do, anyway, if I wanted to prove myself to a development team.

OK thanks for the heads up. Allot.

Repatition · « **Reply #11 on:** May 04, 2010, 06:23:41 am »

Quote from: your face on May 02, 2010, 04:52:40 pm

Vast improvement from your previous efforts. Good work.

I agree!

Firstinaction · « **Reply #12 on:** May 04, 2010, 10:26:33 am »

Quote from: Firstinaction on May 04, 2010, 03:05:56 am

Quote from: Conzul on May 04, 2010, 01:57:25 am
Wow dude that's some pretty tight work. (you are improving). I like it, but take a suggestion?

Draw (on paper) a concept art (of an object or creature) or two. Then scan them onto a computer. Now make a model based on your concept art. Post both your concept drawings and your resulting model into a thread like this.
You might not see the practical application of this, but around here we will. It's a way of proving how good you are at the design process. Also, (if you want to go even further in that direction) consider uploading one of the models you've made in .blend format. That way we can download it and see how efficient (or otherwise) your work is. That's what I'd do, anyway, if I wanted to prove myself to a development team.

Too bad I cant really draw concept art on computer. But If I do draw it Witch I really could but I dont know how to scan it and put it on my computer. I could just take a picture. But my printer has a copier machine scanner And i dont know if that would work

Conzul · « **Reply #13 on:** May 04, 2010, 01:43:18 pm »

Quote from: Firstinaction on May 04, 2010, 03:05:56 am

Quote from: Conzul on May 04, 2010, 01:57:25 am
Wow dude that's some pretty tight work. (you are improving). I like it, but take a suggestion?

Draw (on paper) a concept art (of an object or creature) or two. Then scan them onto a computer. Now make a model based on your concept art. Post both your concept drawings and your resulting model into a thread like this.
You might not see the practical application of this, but around here we will. It's a way of proving how good you are at the design process. Also, (if you want to go even further in that direction) consider uploading one of the models you've made in .blend format. That way we can download it and see how efficient (or otherwise) your work is. That's what I'd do, anyway, if I wanted to prove myself to a development team.

Too bad I cant really draw concept art on computer. But If I do draw it Witch I really could but I dont know how to scan it and put it on my computer. I could just take a picture. But my printer has a copier machine scanner And i dont know if that would work

Well google tips on how to use your scanner. Yeah if you have a scanner that's the right piece of hardware. Concept art is sometimes easier to do "freehand" on real paper. And yeah, it always looks sloppy or "personalized" but the idea is to see what type of model you get from which concept source. The effort is worth it.

jm82792 · « **Reply #14 on:** May 04, 2010, 06:47:43 pm »

Now what does the wireframe look like?
Curious and would like to see it,
hopefully your modeling with good topology.

Firstinaction · « **Reply #15 on:** May 04, 2010, 09:57:22 pm »

This is a test for this alien. Just vote on witch color or texture one you like and I might keep it that color. I really like this one. (the first image)

But tell me what you think. O and the first image is not with ambiot occlusion like the other images.But this is just a test build of the CRATUREA alien. Im still making improvements. Next thing you will see is better hind legs. and better mouth maby and a animation. Thanks for the comments. enjoy.

your face · « **Reply #16 on:** May 04, 2010, 11:14:32 pm »

First one.

Try a mixture of red in it as well.

jm82792 · « **Reply #17 on:** May 05, 2010, 01:58:20 am »

Wire frame look clean!
Well your on your way to modeling,
but well you need to get it good enough because animation then getting it into trem takes a ton of work.

DraZiLoX · « **Reply #18 on:** May 23, 2010, 01:41:23 pm »

Human's alien costume.

harraps · « **Reply #19 on:** May 23, 2010, 07:24:51 pm »

there is only one thing i don't like on your model is its scratchs
they don't need to be white or black or red etc...
just put on them the skin

yes my english is very bad

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