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BlackX32

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Alien Side By BlackX32 Chapter 3
« on: June 03, 2010, 05:19:01 pm »
Note: All these characters are my own thought. Use of them without my permission will lead to trouble.

Chapter 1- The New Planet

Prologue
The aliens have taken over many planets and started many new hives. With every planet they take they grow more powerful. What was supposed to be their easiest planet yet turned out to be their hardest


Me being a warrior I was never a Granger but always a Dretch. New planet, new life. I lead the colonizing team but I still had to start out as a Dretch. Our builders quickly built the first Overmind.

The humans found us before we could become powerful enough to take them over in a few hits. The attackers were quickly killed. Some of us could even turn into Basilisks by then, but not me. One came up to me. "So what your still a dretch you made sure all of us survived. Only three of us were killed." He was right. The attack was swift and easy.
  
It took me a week to evolve. But I made it up to a dragoon with quick thinking. Other hives were being built with new Overminds to control them. One more kill and I would have enough experience to evolve into a tyrant again. Two other ones had evolved into them but without my control they lost it and got themselves killed. We were ready to launch another attack when the first Basilisk evolved into a dragoon.

We attacked and many of us were injured. While we were evolving and growing they had been trapping Dretches and killing them. They even sent in more people. "Shit. We're outnumbered." The guy next to me had said that. I made the first kill. Everybody knew what that meant. They gathered around me to protect me until I finished evolving.

Suddenly I burst from my old skin with acid going everywhere killing a few of the humans. The attack was finished. The humans had run away at the sight of me. We were going to win this.
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Re: Alien Side By BlackX32
« Reply #1 on: June 07, 2010, 05:01:22 pm »
nice continue?

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Re: Alien Side By BlackX32
« Reply #2 on: June 08, 2010, 04:10:29 pm »
Chapter 2- A New Evolution
"What do you mean the humans have found our base again. We've moved it I don't know how many times." "Well sir some of the dretches who gather the meat for the base have been shot with a tracking device. They never even felt it hit them. We got most of them out but some had to be killed." I walked away then.

I had some dretches stay in the vents. Those dretches were supposed to check any other dretch that came through for a tracking device and get rid of them. That plan was working. For now.

We could hear the shots through the hallway. I was fixing to go take care of it. But then the Master Overmind from our planet began speaking with me. It was very uncommon to be spoken to by the Master Overmind so I listened intensely. "We have a new evolution for you to try. Three actually. It will be like a tyrant except they will have control over the three main elements of Earth. One for fire, one for water, and one for grass. Fire can control anything that burns other things, even acid. Water can control ice along with water vapor. And grass can control dirt along with rocks. A regular soldier could not change between them but you are a captain and can change between them. Pick one and transform." I decided on fire.

I found an acid tank. That's when I made the acid burst out and on to the humans. I then made some fire blades come out of my arms that I could swing around and slice through what seemed like almost anything. Together with me my army killed every last human and their base.

So when I went back to base everybody was amazed. They looked at my red, fiery, glowing armor. They admired my fire blades that i could make appear out of nowhere and sound my arms by them. Then i fond i could make fire come out of any part of my body so i made it come out of my six feet and started flying. With this I couldn't wait to try out the others.
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Re: Alien Side By BlackX32 Chapter 2
« Reply #3 on: June 18, 2010, 07:56:32 pm »
interesting. seems kinda rushed tho, it seems like your just summing u what happened and not telling a story. anyway, good work :)

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Re: Alien Side By BlackX32 Chapter 2
« Reply #4 on: June 19, 2010, 04:46:43 am »
alien side is kinda hard to tell since it's more of a ranked than just weaponized. plus it's much more biological so it doesn't any that they don't use guns and instead so it gets rushed because there's almost less to say.
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Re: Alien Side By BlackX32 Chapter 2
« Reply #5 on: June 19, 2010, 05:37:25 am »
details my friend. try this
you:~ Suddenly I burst from my old skin with acid going everywhere killing a few of the humans. The attack was finished. The humans had run away at the sight of me. We were going to win this.
me:~ the rest of my small alien army encircled me, shielding me from the hot lasgun fire the humans launched into the room with us. my muscles tensed up in anticipation of the pain evolving always brought. my blue shell cracked as one of my comrades fell. "you must hurry" the overmind was beginning to get nervous. finally my transformation was complete. i roared with every fiber of my being and charged with all my fury and hatred. my sudden attack sent humans tripping over each other in a futile attempt to escape the coming slaughter. the chance of human victory ended in that moment.

expand a bit ;)

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Re: Alien Side By BlackX32 Chapter 2
« Reply #6 on: June 19, 2010, 05:39:45 am »
yeah i was in a hurry to finish that one because i had to go outta town in like 5 min so i had to improvise especcially since i still needed to get my stuff ready but thanks for the advice. i probably wouldn't have quite that much anyway though. still once again i am not that experianced in this department. although art. that i am very good at.
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Re: Alien Side By BlackX32 Chapter 2
« Reply #7 on: June 19, 2010, 08:24:21 am »
yea? maybe you can give me a few pointers than :p i cant draw for crap.

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Re: Alien Side By BlackX32 Chapter 2
« Reply #8 on: June 19, 2010, 03:32:53 pm »
First of all start with something you know really well and that's easy to draw for you. Second sketch it trust me it'll help later on. Do about 3 or 4 sketches that look somewhat a little different. Now here comes what can be the hardest part to some. Figuring out a background and any small things you want to add. Then sketch the pic you liked best with the background. When you sketch you make adjustments. After you get it to look the way you want it to take another piece of paper and redraw it without sketching it. This may take some time and it may not look so good as later drawings. These next 2 steps are optional: Take a fine point sharpie or a black pen and trace over the lines to make it stand out. then color. Do this with many different things and you can learn to draw very quickly and get better at it. Now personally I prefer sometimes doing over with a sharpie on somethings but I rarely ever color. How you do things though after you get good at it is your own. This is just a way to get started. Nowadays I just sketch out the thing I want with the background strait then make the lines finer by going over with a slightly darker pencil.
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Re: Alien Side By BlackX32 Chapter 2
« Reply #9 on: June 19, 2010, 05:10:34 pm »
hmm, never thought to do it that way :p
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Re: Alien Side By BlackX32 Chapter 2
« Reply #10 on: June 19, 2010, 06:00:49 pm »
thanks for the website but when I looked at it it does it lines that you have to erase and I don't draw that way. But it'll give me some insperation so thanx
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Re: Alien Side By BlackX32 Chapter 2
« Reply #11 on: June 19, 2010, 07:16:25 pm »
thoes lines you erase are just guide lines. your supposed to draw then very lightly so that they are invisible after shading and what not. but anyway, it was useful to me when i was trying to draw kingdom hears chars so i figured maybe it would help you 2 :)

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Re: Alien Side By BlackX32 Chapter 2
« Reply #12 on: June 19, 2010, 07:36:26 pm »
hey man everybody has their own style. Mines just something that waroks better for me and what I draw mostly since most of the body on my work isn't........... easy to erase in even with those it wouldn't help much but the inspiration will come in a big help to me.
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Re: Alien Side By BlackX32 Chapter 2
« Reply #13 on: July 02, 2010, 09:48:11 pm »
Alright guys I just want to warn you this will be the third to last or second to last. I haven’t decided yet. So just bear with me ( Yes I said bear) and enjoy this chapter.

Chapter 3- One Last Assault Part 1

Prologue- The hive has taken most of the major Earth cities with only three remaining.
My five hive had taken the most cities has grown so large that we are now five. I was leading the attack on the most defended city.


“Master Overmind do you think I can really transform into all three elemental tyrants at one time in one body?”

“Yes, Commander Zed conqueror of ten planets. You have become the only captain to conquer ten planets and so have become a commander. There are only five of those. You have the power”

“But sir I have only conquered nine. I thought that we had to eliminate all of the species on the planet before we officially conquered it.”

“Even if we fail here we know of their outposts in the universe so we can kill those off and find their weaknesses.”

“Yes sir.”

Why I have a name now is because when a captain shows great power or conquers a certain amount of planets they become a commander. When somebody becomes a commander they get a name. I now have control of the lesser Overminds that are lower in rank then the Master. On any planet that has been officially declared conquered by me I can control any unit anywhere.

“Commander Zed sir when will we attack?” A tyrant had said that.

“Three days my friend. Three days.”

Three days had gone by quickly. All the preparations were complete, and we were all in position. Every nerve in my body was worried. It was time for me to finally become the ultimate alien.

A cocoon formed around me. Every little nerve was changing into something more horrible then the last. I started to lose my strength. I was getting hot and was worried even more. The Master Overmind was no better. He might have been even worse. Just as I could feel the last of the life in my body seeping out, I burst out of the cocoon and everybody cheered quietly. My body was like before except certain parts of my body would change element without changing shape.

‘ATTAAAAAAAAAAAAAAACK!” I shouted so loud the humans started tripping over themselves to get into position.

I slashed a few humans with multi-blades. They had every element in them. When I used mostly grass like attacks they shot fire at me. I doused them all with some water. Blood was everywhere on the field. Even on the still alive humans. They weren’t alive for long though. I made some multi-hands, and then picked up a human. He screamed then shot his measly riffle at me. It did no damage to me. I heated him up, then chilled him so quickly that he went into shock and I ripped him in half.

I felt a turret hitting me then. I through some fire at it so that it melted. We got into the inner part of the city by then. It looked like a win, when the humans started running. But by then the city was already covered in blood and body pieces.

The death toll was eight hundred ninety. Not bad for an army of over three thousand on our side. This was the best they could through at us. But then I saw an army of battle suits. They were all ready for battle and were clanging right at us. These were new suits too because they had no scratches on them. We saw a few on the first few days, but those were all beat up. This was an army of them.

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What do you guys think huh? I thought this one was pretty good. The human side will come in around 10:00 eastern. That will be 9:00 around my time (I live in central time).
The delay for the second one is that my family is doing something tonight.  
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