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Kyp the Granger - Part II
« on: July 26, 2010, 07:37:40 pm »
This is Part 2 of Kyp the Granger, an original composition by Conzul. Use with permission.
If you wish to read Part 1 (the Prologue), you can find it here.
If you wish to read Part 3 (the Conclusion), you can find it here



                                       Kyp the Granger
                                         Part II


                                         Chapter One
                                 The Second Awakening



    The cage was cold, wet, and hard to stand in, even with six legs. The years past had shown Kyp that he was replaceable, so he understood clearly that he must survive, no matter what the humans did to him.

    Turning gingerly in his metal cage, he wondered again why he tried to hang to life for so long. His was now a world of torture and neglect, of electrified prod-sticks, and sneering beings in dull uniforms.
    The vague memories of the freedom to move as he pleased, as well as the faded grayness of his youth on Homeworld, barely sustained him anymore.

    His will to survive was growing more reflexive, less meaningful.
Why keep at it? The humans would keep him here until he died, he knew that. He had seen it. Other grangers, some more fit and healthy than he, had come and gone. Most died in the arena; some were put down because they couldn't form a nest anymore; and others were vivisected for study.

    Kyp was beginning to feel old, and that was a Bad Thing. Six years had given him some experience and shown him some things. He had undergone a slow, independent evolution on his own. The ability to walk on walls was no consolation here, however, since he lived in a 4x4 iron pen in a damp dungeon under the arena. Alongside a handful of other rotting aliens, he awaited his fate.

    He had made it so far, though....for which reason?

    Was his destiny to manifest itself somewhere else, finally free of these ignominious chains? He had wished so for ages and ages, but thought he knew that that would never be his lot.

    There was a merciful rule here, at A.T.C.S. - if the starting builder survived for the first five minutes of the skirmish, a special door would open and the granger could leave to live another day. Kyp had been doing this two-to-three times per week for about five years now.

    He was unique. His handlers would brag to others about him, but he was never treated any better. If his fortune in the arena had built anything inside of him, he did not know or feel it. He had to watch members of his race die nearly every day. They always gave the humans a run for their money, but the margin varied.
    Sometimes, he would have time to look around briefly at his handiwork, large aliens muscling past him, the portal waiting open for minutes or more. More often, though, he would find himself three or four minutes in waiting at the door, with gunshots echoing behind him, and the gloom illuminated by flashes and sparks. Occasionally, he'd get a hot plug in the rump, and it would take hours to heal. His diet was not conducive to wellbeing, especially since it was close to the same fabrication that the humans gave to their canine underlings.

    He had just made it back from a match several minutes ago, and it had been a close one. The hatch had opened for him just as the tide was turning. Once in "safety", a few taps from the technician's prod had sent him across the dirty floor and into his box. But...there was something different this time....

    Oddly, the handler hadn't used the shock button on his prod, which wasn't like him since he was mildly entertained by Kyp's by-the-book reactions. What could be causing this new display of clemency? Kyp had come about as his cage had snapped shut, wondering what was going on. Surprised, he had seen the techie squatting down and peering at him intently. After a moment, the human had said,
    "Someone's taken a specific interest in you, Kyp my little pug-ugly...."
    After another moment of passing his eyes over Kyp, he had gone on.

    "It seems that you're excused from combat for a few days. Your survivability has payed off,
     I think. Somebody thinks you're interesting now. I wonder, what will happen to you?

    Standing, he turned and walked slowly for the door, deep in thought. As he left, the room was left in darkness.

     It had all happened in a minute, and Kyp was still going over it now. To his left, a cage of dretches stirred, and then went still.
    Kyp could not understand very well what the words meant, but he knew that the human had looked at him with curiosity this time, not the usual condescension.

    Was this a good sign? It could be....
Whatever its significance, it lit in Kyp a rare flame of hope, an experience that shook him from his doldrum. His memory stirred.
     He was a Granger from the Homeworld. He had matured, and left dormant in a comet to serve the Hivemind. He had made a nest years ago on a green planet, a planet unlike this one. Something had happened in a sweet-smelling cave, and then he had been captured and brought here. And now, something was happening that might take him away from this dreadful place, or so he hoped.

    The Girl.

    Suddenly he remembered her face. It had been covered by curiosity, much like the handler's face tonight. It had also been bright and - Kyp searched for a feeling - cheerful. But she was human....this was all so confusing. Thinking about it, Kyp realized that when he was young, he had no enemies, nor had he wanted any. The human girl must have been the same way too, he pondered. In retrospect, they had met each other at the crossroads, both awakening to what they were, and both having since come to mourn what they had lost at that point. After her maiming, Kyp was sure that the girl would hate all aliens as surely as he hated all of the humans that he had met since his capture.

    Kyp did a half turn, vying for a more comfortable position as he lay down to sleep. Change was coming, and tomorrow would bring it.
« Last Edit: February 04, 2011, 01:36:03 am by Conzul »

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Re: Kyp the Granger - Part II
« Reply #1 on: July 26, 2010, 09:38:34 pm »
Conzul, I like your lore. ;)
It's very interesting and I like your writing style, but the stories are...short, kinda?
Looking forward to reading more of it. :)

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Re: Kyp the Granger - Part II - a Dark Comedy by Dark Conzul
« Reply #2 on: July 26, 2010, 09:42:53 pm »
continued from above...



                             Chapter Two
                               Departures




     Transit Station was packed today, just like any other day - a nightmare of jostling elbows and foreign languages. Roslyn didn't mind, for she was far from living in the moment. She was looking forward, because that was the only direction that showed promise.
    She had made it. The Corporation had awarded her an internship right out of school. She would be going on expeditions with the Coalition's top zoologists as an intern while finishing her last year of coursework. As far as she knew, none of her classmates had been awarded this accolade, this chance to explore the galaxy and discover new life and name exotic diseases after yourself.
    She hadn't always been this way.
Just six years ago she had been a carefree minor, with decidedly the lowest grades that were tolerated. All that work just got in the way of the true meaning of life - roaming the woods and hills and having fun.

    Then there had been the incident.

    After waking from an induced sleep, she had been unsure of what had happened. She had been allowed to stand up, only to fall down. A new prosthetic foot and ankle had been fitted to her right leg. Both a pain and an embarrassment, it had been hard to adapt to. Taking her mind off of her classmates' signatures on her very person, she shook her leg to lower her cuff. Where was Jake? He was supposed to be here to say goodbye. And that guy in the leather trench coat kept looking at her, she was sure of it.

    Turning around, she saw the train coming in through the tunnel on its final approach, electricity crackling down on its dual rails. It would leave in ten minutes, and she would be on it.
    Where is he?! Just like a guy...

    She peeked over at the man in the long coat. He was now at a hot dog stand, very slowly and ostentatiously purchasing a hot dog. As she was considering walking over to him and asking him exactly what his problem was, suddenly and unexpectedly, she got hugged.

    "What's creepy and quiet and GRABS you from behind?"
She let out her breath and grinned. "Jake."

    Letting go, they turned to face each other and hugged again. It had been a few months.
    "Wha - oh my. And to think that it was you who saw me first...."
    "Like it?" Jake asked.
He was wearing the uniform of Remdann Securities, who apparently didn't care about making its members nondescript.

    "Well, aside from the glossy reflective bits, you look like security material to me", she said.
    "Are you really sure you want to do this? We could use people like you. I've seen it." Jake said. He had been trying to dissuade her from leaving for over a month now, believing that she would do better as part of a mindless security corporation whose only benefit was travel.
    Roslyn looked at him flatly. "If you keep at this any more, I'm going to make a ringtone out of it, I swear. I've gotten into something that's hard to get into, Jake. I can make a name for myself with this. Come on, security is too easy. Everyone gets in!"
    Unphased, Jake crossed his arms in a serious manner.
    "People need security. There are bugs everywhere. You should know that."
He tapped her foot with his, making a small metallic 'tink' noise.
    "Hey - does that say Dave was here!?!" He mocked surprise.
    "It says Have no fear, you nitwit," she was laughing now.
    "I get the distinct feeling that yet another guy in a trench coat is following you." said Jake.
    "They do that", said Roslyn. "blonds with duffel bags...."
    "That reminds me," said Jake, "what is it that friend of yours keeps saying about us, the-"
    "Norma," replied Roslyn. "She says that aliens and boys have a lot in common: They both come in waves, and they're both out to get my ass..."
    "I like it," and before he could stop himself, "Tib woulda' loved that one."
    "Yeah...." Roslyn grew quiet.

    Outbound SST-942 to Ventas Spaceport, departs in two minutes The loudspeaker barked.
    
    "Well..." Roslyn said.
    "I know." Jake looked at the trench coat again, who in turn looked at something else and chewed more slowly.
     He moved one of her duffel bags and looked at the markings.

                     Lucifer Corporation
                      PEACE THROUGH POWER

    "Really?"
    "Yes", said Roslyn.
    "Nothing I can say?"
    "Probably not."
    Jake thought for a moment, then smiled and held out his hand. "Service guaranties friendship!"
    "Mmm." said Roslyn, who smiled and clasped his hand anyway.

    SST-942 Departing now for Ventas Spaceport, all aboard! the speaker barked again.

    "You'll write."
    "We will."
    "What?"
    "Write."
    "That's right."
    "Exactly."
    "Silly," said Roslyn, shaking her head and starting to climb into the waiting traincar. Lifting her bags up, he said,
    "Well. This is it!"
    "I'll miss you."
    "No you won't." said Jake, as the rails began to power up.
    "Don't say that! I will. See you soon!" the traincar began to pull away.
    "You know it!" called Jake, smiling sideways.

    It would be a while before he saw her again, but that was okay. They had been inseparable after Tib died.
    Jake walked steadily over to the trench coat man, who was putting away a comlink and taking the last bite of his hotdog. He looked at Jake innocently.
    In as low a pitch as he could summon, and with a straight face, Jake leaned down and whispered,

    "Don't eat the sausage".

Leaving the man bewildered, Jake walked off, satisfied.
« Last Edit: July 29, 2010, 04:44:32 am by Conzul »

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Re: Kyp the Granger - Part II
« Reply #3 on: July 26, 2010, 09:43:31 pm »
Conzul, I like your lore. ;)
It's very interesting and I like your writing style, but the stories are...short, kinda?
Looking forward to reading more of it. :)

Mkay here's some more. Thanks for reading it :)

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Re: Kyp the Granger - Part II
« Reply #4 on: July 27, 2010, 09:30:32 am »
Excellent writing, looking forward to the next chapter.

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Re: Kyp the Granger - Part II
« Reply #5 on: July 28, 2010, 12:26:24 pm »
Excellent writing, looking forward to the next chapter.
^ This. :)

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Re: Kyp the Granger - Part II
« Reply #6 on: July 28, 2010, 06:30:22 pm »
hahahahaha

Man I love this.
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Re: Kyp the Granger - Part II
« Reply #7 on: July 29, 2010, 01:47:59 am »
This is awesome. A+!

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Re: Kyp the Granger - Part II - A Dark Comedy by Dark Conzul
« Reply #8 on: July 29, 2010, 01:59:22 am »
continued from above...


  Aliens are Weird
     Humans are Weirder

                  ~Hivemind Musings




                                       Chapter Three
                                           Civilization



    In the beginning, there was nothing.

    And then, there was the Overmind. . .

    Whether by mysterious accident or Divine intention, the Overmind had been formed at the very beginning. Thrust into sudden consciousness by the power of existence, it had taken stock of its being.

    Damn. No legs.
The Overmind kept testing itself. After five minutes, it had ascertained that it could not speak, see, feel, move, listen, or otherwise show outward signs of life.

    Great. Now what. I can't even commit suicide. If there's a God, I hate Him. I think I'll kill Him, and anyone who looks like Him! Wait a minute. . . I'm thinking! I can think! It's so easy!
The Overmind quickly calculated Pi to more places than it could remember after nine seconds, in nine seconds.

    This isn't so bad. I think I can go with this. . . .

    After some time, with nothing to do but think, the Overmind became a powerful mentalist, conscious on more levels than the lesser creatures that crawled around it. It learned to dominate; to control, and to extend its will far beyond its physical bounds to manipulate other beings. It was having a hell of a time.

    After a number of years, the Overmind developed abilities that resulted in a startling discovery: There were other Overminds! Excited, it called out to them. Sluggishly, they began to respond, one by one. Some were on different continents, but others were even on other planets. Over the years they had all followed the same intellectual course, and therefore were all able to discover each other due to having developed the same abilities.

    Enthralled, they did what most groups of super-intelligent beings do when they encounter one another - they formed a network to conquer and rule all that they could see. Their initial efforts showed them that they were going to be good at this. After all, most of what they saw - if not unworthy of rule anyway - was easy to overcome and organize.

    With their superior intellects, the Overminds decided to come together for the good of all beings, and the Hivemind was formed. Giving up their individuality, each Overmind gave itself up to the whole, in a mass act of historic selflessness. First on its agenda was the dampening of interspecies violence. Since all of the animals on all of its worlds were mostly weak of mind (or totally lacking), the Hivemind decided to just recondition them to be compatible with one another. There were no beings whose minds were too strong to control, so the Hivemind adopted this as the standard method for species that it discovered everywhere.

    This worked quite well, until the humans came.

    The Hivemind didn't know what to make of them. They were resistant to the probings of the Hivemind, almost not knowing they were being probed at all. Impudent in their metal ships, they passed through Hive worlds, intent on the Homeworld. The Hivemind wasn't sure why they showed such interest in that place. After all, it wasn't actually a planet in the classical sense. The Origin Mind lived on an asteroid structure, a sticky ball of space rocks held together by an unseen force that even the Hivemind was unaware of. Here, with the species most like it, the Origin Mind held absolute dominion.

    Uneasy and cautious, the Hivemind rationed that any beings intelligent enough to employ spaceflight must be just as benevolent and advanced as it was, if not more. Maybe the humans just wanted to make peaceful contact. But how did they know about the Origin? There were great happenings afoot, noted the Hivemind, as it monitored the approaching human ships.

    Once they arrived, they did nothing more complex than begin to siphon something out of the Origin Nexus. Apparently, they were harvesting something, but the Hivemind could not detect what. After several hours, the human ships were satisfied, and turned to depart. The Hivemind breathed out a collective sigh of relief.

    Then it felt the weakness.

    Whatever the humans had taken from the Origin Nexus had caused the Hivemind to nearly crash in exhaustion. This was a second nasty surprise. What was it that the Hivemind could not see, but that it needed to function? Were there forces at work that it did not know about? This revelation was met with much ambivalence and foreboding. The Hivemind was not all-powerful, as it had believed.

    One thing was certain. It could not allow any more beings in spaceships to enter its realm, no matter the cost, until this matter could be fully solved. As such, it arranged its minions to be hostile to the human aura that it had detected, and it began the construction of vast arrays of asteroids that could be launched from plasma vortexes to dissuade incoming humans.

    If the humans came again, they would not be welcomed. The Hivemind would never be made to feel the weakness again.


    Over a hundred years later, things had changed.
Battered on all sides by unending waves of human aggression, the Hivemind had gone from being an engine of order in a world of peace, to being nothing more than a tactical computer, visceral and without feeling.
    Its children were sent again and again, to hurt the humans, to slow the humans, to do anything to hinder the tide of human expansion toward the Homeworld.

    The Hivemind shot superheated plasma asteroids at the human ships.
        The humans built more and kept coming.

    The Hivemind tried to move Homeworld to a different location through mind-power.
        The humans found it.

    The Hivemind sent its aliens to human worlds to cause disorder and mischief.
        The humans killed them and came back harder.

    Nothing was working. For every human killed, a stronger one would take its place, with a better weapon. The Hivemind could not fathom their fervence, their will to keep coming and keep dying. Either they were incredibly stupid, or they were the greatest beings in the universe. Since the Hive couldn't figure it out, it kept its painful, unending course of war.

    To its children, it swore that one day, peace would return. One day, the humans would not return to cause the weakness, and that, one day, order would reign again.
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Re: Kyp the Granger - Part II
« Reply #9 on: July 29, 2010, 02:00:18 am »
Thanks for all the feedback: Keeps me going!

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Re: Kyp the Granger - Part II - A Dark Comedy by Dark Conzul
« Reply #10 on: July 29, 2010, 06:33:57 am »
continued from above....


                            Chapter Four
                               Over the Hill...




    Sigig wished that Morig would just shut up. He'd been moaning like - well, like a wounded basilisk. Which meant that he shouldn't be moaning, because

    Basilisks heal, you pathetic creep! Sigig snarled at him. If you are in such pain, let's have Mnoth put you down RIGHT NOW!

    Because Mnoth can barely walk himself, that's why retorted Morig.
    Well then be QUIET, hissed Sigig. We have a long way to go.

    Hiding in the woods for five years had been easy. Healing had not. Far from the Hivemind or from friendly aliens, Mnoth, Sigig and Morig had undergone some serious story-sized hardships. Though they were basilisks, Sigig and Morig had been able to do little for Mnoth because of their weakened state. Without proper food or the minerals they had access to when near the Overmind, they were skeletons of their former selves. Mnoth was in even worse shape, having been stabbed, burned, and hit by numerous big-game hunters who thought it was their lucky day.
   
    And they had to stay on the move constantly to avoid the patrols which still searched for them. The humans were meticulous, and knew that a dragoon had gotten away from the alien purge several years before. Some quarter had been granted this previous year, though, as no aliens had been spotted. The humans must have assumed that Mnoth died of natural causes, sickness or Ventas bears, or a big-game hunter on his lucky day. Either way, the trio had had nearly nine months to recuperate. They were still starving, though.
    They could not risk killing a human to eat, for it would be missed, and they would start back at square one. And they couldn't afford that, because Mnoth had a plan.

    Ventas Spaceport.
    Every month, large herds of livestock were loaded onto waiting ships and taken to other planets for various uses. Most of these animals were from Earth, brought by settlers and chosen specifically for their environment.
    Mnoth had been, in a previous life, a spy for the Hivemind, specializing in memorization of enemy positions, timetables, and other minutia that enabled covert OPS. From an outcropping of the mountain near Ventas Spaceport, he had been watching daily from the edge of the forest. Now, he was sure that he knew all of the arrivals and departures, and he had hatched (on his own) the daring plan of stowing away with a herd of the planet's indigenous livestock. The species he had chosen was a large, friendly reptilian with applications in, ironically, herding livestock. From a distance, Mnoth and the basilisks should be undetectable in a herd of Ventas Zirkis. And while all loadings were supervised, Mnoth had noticed that the humans avoided direct contact with the main herd.
    Mnoth had seen stray animals get in before. Once, he had seen the humans completely ignore two dark canines who had run alongside the zirkis barking loudly.

    Stupid humans.

     This would be a piece of cake.

    Two days later, he had it all worked out. In the evening, when the sun was two inches from the horizon, a local ranch would load its zirkis into waiting trucks, which would then drive fifteen miles to the spaceport. They were then unloaded in a mostly automated sequence from the trucks, and herded into large interplanetary cargo craft. What could go wrong?

    Turning to Sigig and Morig, Mnoth prepared for the tedious task of communicating with them.

    We've gone over this before, Mnoth said slowly. So there shouldn't be a problem. The night before, we'll sneak into the zirkis corral. They're inattentive and stupid, like you two, so they won't be bothered by us. Also - what Morig? No, you may not kill any of them - where was I? We'll wait for evening, and load up with the herd. Once on the spaceship, we'll take it all the way to its destination, a conflict world.
    Morig raised a claw.
    What? said Mnoth wearily.
   
    How do we know where this ship is going? asked Morig in a voice like icicles in vinegar.

    Its had some of its running lights disabled. They do that for "stealthy" landings on conflict planets.

     After a pause, Don't question me again. Sigig?

    Good here. said Sigig slowly and steadily. May I kill Morig? We will need energy for the ride, and we haven't eaten in days...

    Mnoth twisted his mouth around his teeth in a crude, sarcastic smile, and turned back to the spaceport panorama.

    We move out tonight.

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Re: Kyp the Granger - Part II
« Reply #11 on: July 29, 2010, 06:35:26 am »
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Re: Kyp the Granger - Part II
« Reply #12 on: July 29, 2010, 06:46:41 am »
I like how this is progressing so far. It's a bit short, but I think this is not so bad right now. :)

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Re: Kyp the Granger - Part II
« Reply #13 on: July 29, 2010, 06:51:25 am »
* steals Conzul's keyboard
:( but w w h h h y y y ? ? ?

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Re: Kyp the Granger - Part II
« Reply #14 on: July 29, 2010, 01:09:37 pm »
* went on a rush to Crava_Loft

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Re: Kyp the Granger - Part II
« Reply #15 on: July 30, 2010, 06:48:02 am »
You know I can't actually go on until he returns it.  :angel:

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Re: Kyp the Granger - Part II
« Reply #16 on: July 30, 2010, 07:41:19 am »
GIVE THIS MAN HIS KEYBOARD BACK DAMN IT!

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Re: Kyp the Granger - Part II
« Reply #17 on: July 30, 2010, 08:00:57 am »
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Re: Kyp the Granger - Part II
« Reply #18 on: July 30, 2010, 05:15:41 pm »
ok you can take it back

* Takes keyboard huffily.

I'll have some more in a day or two. Crava_Loft messed up the backspace key  :police:

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Re: Kyp the Granger - Part II
« Reply #19 on: July 30, 2010, 06:46:06 pm »
Ah that's nasty.

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Re: Kyp the Granger - Part II - A Dark Comedy by Dark Conzul
« Reply #20 on: July 31, 2010, 02:59:25 am »
continued from above...





                                            Chapter Five
                                                Stowaway Stupidity




    The bay was large and smelly, full of the happy jostling of the contented zirkis. The cargo bay doors had closed several minutes ago, the ramp had retracted, and the internal lights had been dimmed for the coming departure.
    They were still surprised that they had gotten in so easily, and wondered why this didn't happen all the time. Then, after ten minutes, Jeff realized why. It stank in here. And takeoff was no joke either, since artificial gravity was not as strong in the livestock areas.

    Hearing a crunching sound off to his left, he started irritably,
    "Already? You're going to starve. You're not getting any of mine, that's for sure."
    "Maybe you forgot, we spent nine hours in that truck. That means I haven't eaten in almost eighteen hours."
    "Just...keep it down." said Jeff irritably. He was feeling sick, from hunger, stench, and turbulence.

    After another ten minutes, they were out of the atmosphere, and the shaking stopped. Jeff was driven to go over the reasons that they were here in the first place. Out of work. Out of money. Kids grew up and left. Screw this planet. Individually weak, together a strong argument for getting a free one to an interesting world. They wouldn't get to do any fighting, the recruiters had told them that they were too old and fat for that. It didn't matter. They were finally getting out. The only issue was that the getting part sucked.

    "Remember that time -" started Adam.
    "Yes." Jeff broke him off.
    "You don't have to be an asshole. This was your idea."
    Jeff was silent. "Munchy" turned away and watched the herd of zirkis settle down to doze for the trip. In a few minutes, the vault was nearly silent. Adam felt a sudden gush of cool air from a few feet away. There was a vent, and the grid had fallen off.

    "See? This isn't so bad. Quiet, smell's leaving, lights are going out - hey! the lights are going out!"
    "Coward." said Jeff smugly. "What did you expect? This is third class."
    "I don't have a problem with it." Adam ate another crisp.
    Though he couldn't see his face anymore, he knew that Jeff was looking at him like something from the bottom of his boot.
    He reached in and took another crisp, and raised it to his mouth. Jeff kept looking at him. The crisp echoed as Munchy bit into it.
    Suddenly, the bag was kicked from his hand.
    "What's your problem?! Fuck....." Adam couldn't see where the bag had landed in the blackness.
    "What the hell are you talking about?" asked Jeff, glad that the crunching had stopped.

    Groaning, and getting up on hands and knees, Munchy started to grope around the dirty floor for the bag of crisps. A zirki grunted with annoyance as he planted a hand square on its tail. "Sorry!" said Munchy quickly.
    "Idiot." Jeff scoffed from a few feet away. More carefully, Munchy groped farther, worming his way between the zirkis.

    "Damn. They're spilled. Why did youuaanngth?"
    "Why did I what? I didn't do anything. Looks like the zirkis are just as annoyed as I was."
    "Eeenngth - aaAAaanth!" said Munchy stuffily, upsetting some more resting zirkis.
    Wow. Can't even wait to pile them into his mouth! thought Jeff. "Get back here, if you worry those things they'll trample us to death."

    A thrown object hit Jeff in the chest, and fell to his lap. More zirkis were getting up, moving away.
    "If this is dung or something, you're a dead man."
    Silence. The light level went up several lumens, apparently programmed to do so if the zirkis started moving a lot.
    Jeff felt for the object. It was obviously zirki dung, it was still dripping wet. Disgusted, he threw it from him and started to stand.
    "That's it. You're dead." Jeff took a step and landed on a crisp, which broke with a loud sound. Something dropped onto him.

    One moment later, the object was off of him, and he couldn't feel his legs. He couldn't feel anything. Then he stopped thinking, as all feeling left him. Unable to sense anything below his neck, he fell lightly to the floor, sure that he was missing something. In the dimness he saw a man standing over him. A shock passed over him as he saw that the person had no head.

    "That's m-"
    Then he was dead.

                                                                         **~**


    Sigig dropped off the wall and landed next to the corpse of the fallen human. It had been so long since he'd had the chance to do this, it almost made him happy. Several feet away, Mnoth was limping up to Morig, who as usual had made a complete mess of things.
    Sigig walked up to the two, stepping over the headless human. Weeelllll? he hissed.
    For you, point-seven seconds.
    Facing Morig, Five and-a-half seconds. You'd be retired if we were on Homeworld. They'd probably let a darky eat you.
    It's been years, what do you expect? retorted Morig with his mouth full.
    You were playing, we both know it. said Sigig. What an amateur. Mnoth, may I kill him now?

    Mnoth didn't answer, his mouth was full too.
    We don't have to be that perfect. No one knows we're here. No sound escaped. You don't have to be so professional. said Morig, blood dripping down his fangs.
    Bad habit, mumbled Sigig, distasteful of Morig's repeated idiocy. Why must I put up with this imbecile?

    Can't have your human and eat it too, said Mnoth through chews.

    Sigig croaked sarcastically and went over to his meal. At least I got the lean meat.

    Half-an-hour later, there wasn't much human left. Sigig had thought it comical that some of the more adventuresome zirkis had actually tried a few tidbits. Great chaps. They completely welcomed the trio in with them during loading, not making a complaint of any type. He must remember to let the Hivemind know about them.

    Now lazing around, with a full stomach, and the room back in darkness, Sigig was beginning to heal again. He had been living a life of frugality for a blue moon. Now, stuffed with proper sustenance and having tried some of the high-sodium crisps, he was beginning to feel life returning.

    It was a glorious sensation.

    I'm thirsty. intoned Morig. He was dozing on one of the sleeping zirkis, and rose and fell with its rhythmic breathing.
    As am I, agreed Mnoth.

    Funny how they're both looking at me, thought Sigig.
    Did you check their bags? I thought I saw a canteen. There it is."
    They got up and gathered around it. Mnoth shoved it with his foreleg. They heard water sloshing inside. They kept staring at it.

    It's got a cap on it. said Morig smartly.
    The other two looked at him, and then back at the canteen. On the other side of the bay, a zirki sighed in its sleep.

    Now what? moaned Morig.

    There is an open vent over there. We can head into it and look for water or something, said Sigig. By we, he meant him, unless an opportunity to ice Morig could present itself.
    What about the zirkis? What do they drink? asked Morig.
    Not pure water, said Mnoth, I tried it, it won't work. Better to break out now than to wait for the ship to land. I won't die of dehydration after having come so far. Where there are humans, there is water; we have that in common. You two must try to find a way to open that access hatch. There are no hydrolics in here, so if I can get out, I'll find something.

    Alright, said Sigig, feeling better than he had in ages. I'll go. Morig, you stay and heal Mnoth.
    NO! said Month. You're more likely to find something if you both go. I'll be fine. And he winked at Sigig.
    I'll interpret that as permission to get rid of Morig, thought Sigig. Okay. Lets go.

    Sigig followed Morig into the duct. This was turning out to be the best day ever.
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Re: Kyp the Granger - Part II
« Reply #21 on: July 31, 2010, 06:50:39 am »
Atkins basilisk? o.O

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Re: Kyp the Granger - Part II - A Dark Comedy by Dark Conzul
« Reply #22 on: August 03, 2010, 01:54:45 am »
continued from above....        disclaimer: alien speech isn't real speech, it's a series of grunts and expressions only they can understand. Just to get that out of the way.



                                                   Chapter Six
                                                        Threads



    So, if we do find water, how do we get it to him? asked Morig for the umpteenth time. They had been crawling around the duct-work of the ship for about three hours.

    We need to find some hydrolics near the livestock bay, and tear them apart so that water flows through the vent and down to Mnoth.

    That sounds complicated, whined Morig. Can't we just kill another human and let Mnoth have the blood?

    No. It'd be missed. Those we had were stowaways, like us, so no one was going to miss them. Of course, Mnoth could decide he's waited long enough, and break out and do that anyway, but that's bound to set off all kinds of alarms. Sigig was tired of explaining everything to Morig twice.

    Two hours ago, the ship had made a stop at a large space-station, and the two had watched as crates, cages and passengers had been loaded into another large bay. Sigig had made a mental note to check on them later, because he was sure that he had heard familiar sounds from some of them. They had explored for a further two hours, and had seen nothing of interest except that the mammoth passenger ship had taken on some escorts in the form of a pair of Remdann destroyers. Apparently, Mnoth had been right. The ship was going to a conflict planet. Sigig had been doing some espionage of his own recently, and was taking a liking to it. And he would have the opportunity to learn from Mnoth, the master spy.

    Having come full circuit, the basilisks arrived back at the livestock bay, and looked down at Mnoth through a second vent.

    Find anything? Mnoth asked.

    Yes, get over here, you won't want to miss any! said Sigig. Mnoth stood up and stepped over to the vent, ten feet above him, pushing zirkis aside.

    Um. How? hissed Morig.

    Back there. There's a line with water in it, not too hot. Go puncture it while I try to loosen this grating.

    Morig crawled over to a bundling of lines, not noticing that two of the larger ones were humming. This one?

    No, the one on the other side of it, replied Sigig, still pretending to mess with the grill.

    Morig reached across the bundle to grab the line that Sigig had indicated. There was a sudden flash as Morig came into contact with the dual power lines, and a gush of fried-basilisk smell. All of the lights went out, and Sigig heard a motor stop in an adjacent deck. The vent ceased to blow cool air.

    Was that Morig? grunted Mnoth.

    That was Morig. affirmed Sigig.

    Smelled like it. thought Mnoth aloud.

    Hang on, you'll want to get it when it's still cool. I heard some motors go off. I think we lost some life support.

    Sigig stepped over Morig's blackened body, towards the real hydrolic line. Cutting it cleanly with a foreclaw, he grabbed it in his mouth and pulled it over to the vent, with warm water flowing everywhere. Mnoth felt some splashing, and lifted his head up to get some.


    Several minutes later, Sigig was on the move again. He had to find some food that wouldn't be missed. After all, Mnoth couldn't eat zirkis, and neither of them was going to eat Morig. This was the last deck that Sigig hadn't explored.
    Crawling through more duct-work, he passed over a vent right as a pair of mechanics were making their way under it.

    "I thought we just got a full going-over a month ago." One said.
   
    "Doesn't matter. This needed to be scuttled years ago." the other said.

    "We'll try the aux first. Probably won't get to the root till we dock next...." And then they walked out of range.

    Sigig moved on, passing more machinery and moving on to the passenger quarters. He passed a few berths, peeking through the grid at sleeping bodies. Must be their night cycle, thought Sigig. It was starting to get very warm, almost hot, on this deck. Sigig was built for hostile environments, so it didn't affect him. He passed a room with an occupant who wasn't, however, doing so well. Peering through the vent lattice, he saw that she was short, blond, and very sweaty. She was standing at the console with her back to him, pressing a key, bringing up a communication.

    "This is the captain speaking; We apologize for the bother, but it seems that some of our older life support systems have failed. We are switching to backup systems, so the vents should stop blowing hot air in about five minutes." With a wink in his voice, the recording ended.
 
    Something seemed familiar, but Sigig became too distracted to focus on that. The human was pulling her shirt off.
Sigig usually admired human bodies as things to be taken apart, to be eaten slowly and thoughtfully, and appreciated for the many variations of flavor and consistency. This one was no different.

    Feeling suddenly adventurous and reckless, Sigig double-tapped the vent lattice with his foreleg, and then darted back into the shadows. The human whipped around, and not all of her at the same time, Sigig noted with some satisfaction.

    Heheh. Cheap shot. He shook his head to himself and started back on his way. He was a full ten feet down the duct when the double take hit, and it hit hard. Dashing back to the room vent as quickly (and quietly) as he could, he tried for a good look a target formerly low on his list, her face.

    The Girl. . . . . . . . . . . .The Girl.

    The cave.... Sigig remembered. She turned away the moment he got back, but it was enough. Her hair was a few shades darker, and her eyes had gone from a light blue to deep black, but she was definitely the same human from the cave. She had surivived. She was healthy. She was even looking good, Sigig punned to himself. This world was screwed up. NO one got to walk after Mnoth had his way with them. No one got to leave. No one healed. Screwed up, Sigig repeated to himself.

    Six years. a wave was growing in Sigig's head. Six YEARS. And she lives. I was rising. I had a destiny. She waltzed in and MESSED it all up! And she's ALIVE! The wave was cresting. It was all Sigig could do to hold himself back from smashing through the grate and finishing a goon's work. Fortunately for both of them, his professionalism won out, as it usually did.

    That's why I made it so far, he realized ruefully. I survive. And I will get my revenge.

    Sigig sneaked away, wondering when he should break this to Mnoth. This had gone from the best day, to the worst day. Sigig passed more passenger berths, none of them as interesting as the one he had just left. The auxiliary cooling systems must have kicked in, because the air began to cool again. Sigig was so distracted that he almost passed the second livestock bay without checking it. There were some interesting looking crates, which Sigig remembered had been making some interesting sounding noises. Walking across the deserted floor to a stack of covered cages, he chose one at random and pulled the tarp off it.
    Kyp was inside it.

    GHASP! gasped Sigig. That made TWO blasts from the past in as many minutes. Sigig felt suddenly dizzy. Maybe this was all a dream. Yes, that was it. Roslyn and Kyp were both dead, far away, and it was Sigig, not Morig, who was roasting on the powerlines, finally out of his misery.
    But that was too easy, and Sigig realized it.

    Um. Hi. said Sigig.
 
    Sigig. said Kyp. I remember you. You killed the boy. The one who was trying to save the girl.

    Would it interest you to know, responded Sigig, that the very same girl is on this ship, right now?

    I know. I'm her luggage. We all are.

    We?

    Kyp motioned toward some other crates with tarps on them. Sigig moved over to them unsurely. Lifting up the coverings, he spied the contents of several cages. There was a dretch, a basilisk, a marauder, and a dragoon. And they looked happy.

    What's wrong with them? asked Sigig. They look - broken.

    We're all part of an experiment. We all have things the humans put into us, to know where we are... Kyp indicated a healing scar on his rump. And guess what? They're going to let us go.

    Is that so? Sigig was sure that Kyp, at least, had been tampered with.

    Yes. But they are broken, I watched the humans take things out of their heads, and put liquids into them. Then they became broken. But not me. I only have the thing that tells humans where you are.

    Come to think of it, they do have a funny look on their faces.... said Sigig.

    They can't do things anymore, and they don't attack humans either! The humans changed them.

    Will you stop saying things? asked Sigig irritably.

    Like what? said Kyp.

    You know. sneered Sigig. But what did you mean, 'her luggage'?

    She is one of the ones who changes us. replied Kyp. Or she works with them, anyhow. I was surprised to see her, I thought Mnoth killed her. then after a moment: I think I like her.

    Sigig looked at him condescendingly. Yes, I like her too.

    No, I mean in a different way. She reminds me of - me. A long time ago.

    Let's see....ditzy, emo, pain fetish.....sounds right.

    My mistake. said Kyp quietly.

    You're serious. said Sigig. Wow. You pervert. This is because she touched you, isn't it? If the Overmind had lived, it wouldn't have taken you back.

    Very funny, Kyp snarled at him.

    You're just as broken as these others. No - you're worse. At least your semi-conscious. My, do I have news for Mnoth....

    He's here?!? exclaimed Kyp.

    Wait a minute..... Sigig was looking at the dragoon and the basilisk.
 
    Is Mnoth here? went on Kyp. What are you looking at? Sigig? . . . Oh no. No way."

    It could work, said Sigig slowly. But where to hide the bodies?

    And I thought I hated humans... Kyp mumbled to himself. Where are you going?

    Sigig was walking off, back into the duct. Kyp wouldn't miss him one bit. He had half a mind to start bellowing until he attracted attention, and then he would tell .. .. them .. .. nonsense. I can't do that... Then he would be no better than a human, and he still had a thorough hatred of them.

    Sigig made his way back to the zirki bay. He would tell his plan to Mnoth, and see if it met with approval. He would, after all, wish that his teammates would do the same to him if he were ever captured and - broken.

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Re: Kyp the Granger - Part II
« Reply #23 on: August 03, 2010, 03:49:50 pm »
awsome man awsome.
Pie is the food of the gods. Eat it and you will become AWSOME.

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Re: Kyp the Granger - Part II
« Reply #24 on: August 03, 2010, 06:04:45 pm »
Thanks. I was writing it the other day, when all of a sudden I knew how it was going to end. There's still enough left though I might have to do a Part III

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Re: Kyp the Granger - Part II
« Reply #25 on: August 04, 2010, 11:58:12 am »
I love your take on the background of tremulous, how aliens are kept in cages and used as training devices.

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Re: Kyp the Granger - Part II
« Reply #26 on: August 04, 2010, 06:47:42 pm »
Removed Atkins reference. Too out of place.
I love your take on the background of tremulous, how aliens are kept in cages and used as training devices.
Well that's their perspective. The humans just want to beat them.

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Re: Kyp the Granger - Part II
« Reply #27 on: August 11, 2010, 08:07:39 pm »
Omg, this is awesome!!!!  ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D
I can't wait for the next one!  ::)

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Re: Kyp the Granger - Part II
« Reply #28 on: August 12, 2010, 02:38:32 am »
Omy! I just remembered that I was writing this story. :P got carried away gaming. Let's see . . .

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Re: Kyp the Granger - Part II
« Reply #29 on: August 12, 2010, 06:43:39 am »
chapter six, "Threads", is continued from above. . .



    Ripping. . . Tearing. . .Blood everywhere. . . .
    Such pain. . .the s c r e a a a a m m m . . . .

    Roslyn shot up, barely catching her breath and avoiding hitting the upper bunk with her head. She had been dreaming again. It was so hot. . . she was sweating all over. What was wrong with her? Was it the room? She looked down at her foot, even though she knew it was still there. She wiggled a prosthetic toe. It moved back and forth, forlornly, its small servo humming just within hearing volume.

    She got out of bed carefully, trying not to disturb Norma in the upper berth. Moving too fast, she almost collapsed.

    So hot. . .
She steadied herself, shuffled over to the console, and noticed a green light flashing. Pressing it, she heard a recording of the captain's voice that was stamped from half-an-hour ago. He was saying that the heat was a malfunction, but that the ventilators would be back on in minutes.
    "Right," she rolled her eyes, "A few minutes."

    Stooping beneath the console, she tapped a pad that opened a drawer, a drawer with her effects. Opening a duffel, she took out one of the neatly folded T-Shirts and proceeded to relieve herself of her sweat-soaked tank-top.

    Few more months, I'll have be able to afford a whole wardrobe she thought whimsically as she threw aside the used article.

    Tap-Tap! a noise came from behind her.

    Swinging around, her vision zeroed in on the vent, still gushing warm air. She stood completely still.
    No further sounds came. She let her breath out, attributing the noise to her imagination. She had been having these dreams for years, and they always left her unsettled and melancholic.

    Pulling the shirt over her head, she chanced to look out the portal. Space was always black and beautiful, she thought. In stark contrast, a silver-toned warship rose into view, its patrol parabola bringing it into full view. It had the same "Remdann" lettering on it that Jake had worn, and the same shameless glitter and color choices that his uniform had born.

    Roslyn wondered if he were in that ship. It had only been two days, and she missed him more than she would have ever thought. He'd always been there to help in one capacity or another: First, helping her walk and adjust to her new "hardware", as they called it in an attempt at humor. Then with simple things like being there to talk to, doing homework together, going for walks in the woods.
    Well, the edge of the woods anyway, she reminded herself. The world changes its people, not the other way around. She believed this firmly, though she acknowledged that she didn't have enough evidence to prove it.

    The destroyer continued its circular pattern, passing out of sight of the portal. Roslyn went back over to her bed, and sat on the edge. Unable to go to sleep with the room this hot, she kept thinking of Jacob.
    At 15, he had abruptly slowed his routine of scholastic accomplishment and unrequited friendship. Roslyn believed it was because of the news about his father. Henri had been a promising recruit, and like so many others had given his all in the Coalition Army. He was listed as missing, but the news had told them enthusiastically days before that the planet he was stationed on had been lost.

    Jake became almost a different person. He stopped hanging out with her. He started noticing other girls. His grades suffered. He fantasized about running off and joining a security corporation to fight aliens.
    Freshman psychology hinted to Roslyn that he was out for some kind of revenge, but he had been so much smarter than that.

    The duct halted its heat flow, and there was a pause. Several moments later, she felt cool, soothing air on her face. Finally able to lay down, she thought about her own position, confident that sleep wouldn't let her do it long.

    She (and Norma, in a lesser capacity) were accompanying Professor Wetz on a month-long study trip. Their directive was to observe a group of partially domesticated alien specimens on a neutral planet. These aliens had been given many drugs, and had brain surgeries. Many aliens had undergone these, and this batch was the first to survive the treatments. The military applications were obvious, since it was now possible to make a drug that could incapacitate the legions of the Hivemind. Before the drug could be deployed, testing had to be done to see if the aliens would revert to hostility, given time or certain conditions. No chances were being taken.

    Roslyn's part in this was minor. The whole operation had been contracted to the Lucifer Corporation, and she was merely a student that they had selected to fill the role of intern. There was a certain stress, though, because minimal as she was, Roslyn was in fact the only Lucifer Corporation personnel on the entire expedition. While Wetz admired her academic skills, she knew that he was annoyed at the tactic that the company was using in this case.

    Roslyn was being used to spy on him, and he had made it clear that he knew that. When she denied it, he dismissed her rebuttal, and explained how she would be interrogated after the expedition was complete.

    Her duties were not critical, but involved her having access to all of the findings that the troupe would uncover. On top of this, there was more schoolwork, since she was technically still in school.

    The Sandman dropped a few specs of relief. Her mind started to drift, her eyes close. The room was cooling again. In a few hours, they would arrive at their destination, a frozen planet with numerous private installations. There would be so much work to do. . . best to get some shuteye. .. . .. . .. . ..



    Jake looked out of the portal of the mess-hall, and wondered idly if Roslyn might be on that passenger ship. It was entirely possible. She had said her trip would take about two days, and they were almost at the installation now. Well, in a few hours, anyway. The pair of destroyers had to keep pace with an outdated, outmoded passenger craft.

    In Remdann, there was always a tangible esprit-du-core. The soldiers had much in common. They had all joined to avoid the Coalition draft; for the increased pay and benefits; and the high-tier training that Remdann was famous for. They even took you if you were underage, claiming that recruits were kept in training until of a suitable age.
    Once in, it was up to the individual if they wanted Remdann to "lose track" of their age, and let them into the fray. Remdann Securities had the best survival rate of human soldiers anywhere. If Jake wanted revenge, this was the best and surest way to get it.

    He was even on "assignment" now. Word was, some famous scientists were to be experimenting with live aliens in the infamous Arachnid Facility. While there was no reported threat, this would be Jake's first training security stint. Their presence was more of something for the books, since aliens were actually going to be let free for short periods of time. They even had tracking devices implanted into them. Nothing could go wrong.

   "The Mec-2 says we'll be touching down in four hours," said Marty, one of Jake's cohorts.
We should probably get some sleep before then."

   Jake had made many friends. "Alright man," replied Jake, turning from the window and picking up his tray.

   "I hope those aliens go haywire, I can't wait to plant some lead in some bug hide," said Gill in his usual uncouth tones.

   "You just want the Remdann my-rounds-actually-hit-something bonus,  I know you," returned Jake.

   "Whaddaya mean? Don't you want some action?"

   "Heh" smiled Jake sideways.

   "I knew you would" grunted Gill. "It's not about the money, it's the pleasure".

   "Okay, okay, I'll see if I can't arrange to have some additional scars put around the edges of your face," said Jake sarcastically.

   He got up, threw out his tray, and headed for bed.