Hey guys i made a blog! Need some feedback

[dragoon[dragoon]]

hello everyone i know all you think i am annoying,troller,and just and idiot. But i just made a blog http://www.boredlittlekid.com/ and i wanna know what you guys think what should i liek improve or what you dont like. i know its still small adn barely alot of content but i need some feedback so far so plz visit my blog and tell it to everyone! thank you! http://www.boredlittlekid.com/

[dragoon[dragoon]]

oh sorry this is codercon i thought i was logged in on my bros accoutn who is dragoon so sorry me codercon is the one who made the blog. thanks ( )

[Aelita]

This explains a lot.

[codercon]

how 

[mooseberry]

WTF Bordism is not a word... I'm going to guess you're a little kid, but still... English is a good thing to know if you are writing a blog for people who expect to be reading said language.

[your face]

I think the blog is awesome, good job.

[DraZiLoX]

Tremulous is probally the best freeware you will ever play. whats better then being a humman gunning down aliens or an alied killing soem humans. In the game you can be a alien or human you build up your base and try to destoy the other teams base everytime you kill someone you get credits(humans) or evos(aliens) the more credits or evos you have the beter guns and aliens you can get so go on over to http://tremulous.net/ and check out this awsome game. theres nothing to lose! and alot to gain! Also look see a trailer here:http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SQhJhi340Vs

eDIT: Even better:

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But anyways, nice job, you have blog. Just fix grammar and voila!

[dragoon[dragoon]]

Hey this is coderocn again on my bros account. thanks for pointing out those errors in my grammer i will fix them and always use spell check! thank you www.boredlittlekid.com

[dragoon[dragoon]]

Also any one know where i can get more traffic to my site.  thank you
www.boredlittlekid.com

[dragoon[dragoon]]

WTF Bordism is not a word... I'm going to guess you're a little kid, but still... English is a good thing to know if you are writing a blog for people who expect to be reading said language.

lol. now i use spell check      

[DraZiLoX]

Remember, after dot (.) comes capital letter.
Example:
Tremulous is good game. thats why i play it <- wrong
Tremulous is good game. Thats why i play it <- correct

[CreatureofHell]

You're still on the wrong account...

[mooseberry]

Remember, after dot (.) comes capital letter.
Example:
Tremulous is good game. thats why i play it <- wrong
Tremulous is good game. Thats why i play it <- correct

Tremulous is a good game. That's why I play it. <- even better

[KillerWhale]

Tremulous is a good game. That's why I play it. <- Acceptable, but the second sentence directly correlates to the first; there isn't a need to separate them.
Tremulous is a good game; that's why I play it. <- Better, but they are still not right.
Tremulous is a good game: that's why I play it. <- Logical consequence, a colon fits.
Tremulous is a good game, that's why I play it. <- This is the most fluid and natural punctuation of this sentence.
Tremulous is a first person shooter combined with elements of a real time strategy game. -Full exposition of the game here-. -Reasons why you like it here-. <- While reading a review of a game, we expect that you've played it. We don't need to be told. It's also not enough to just say: "This is a good game". There is not enough substance for me to be convinced by that; if I went to 1up.com and saw a review that told me "Game X is a good game, that's why I play it", I would write it off as garbage and go somewhere else.

Isn't editing fun?

[your face]

are you guys seriously correcting the grammar and spelling on that blog, lol

[Jack Bauer]

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[superspirality]

arr yoo gize seereeuslie corekting thu gramer and speling on that blohgh: lol

yUsh indid!

[codercon]

Thank you for the grammer stuff lol. i dont knwo if ima taking that offensivley or help  lol
but i will fix the mistake



  Bored, boredlittlkid.com Curing bordism 1 post at a time.

[mooseberry]

You... got your url wrong. D:

[superspirality]

You... got your url wrong. D:

[TheMarxer]

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[ziplocpeople]

needs more grangers
also
hi quintin