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Re: Kyp the Granger - Part III
« Reply #30 on: December 19, 2010, 04:39:39 am »
continued from above.....






                           Chapter Ten
                            The Wrath
                              of the
                         UnnamedPlayer


    For as long as he could remember, Kyp had been a misfit. Though not particularly more intelligent or open-minded than his relatives, he had something that set him apart from them. He had recognized that something was missing from his life. Was it comraderie? Surely not. There were nest-mates all around him, who learned with him, played with him, and grew up to fight alongside him.
    He felt out-of-place in the system into which he had been born. No individual had any value. No alien was more interesting than the others near it. He had no one he could call a friend, and as far as he knew, he was the only one who wanted one.

    Now, trudging through the sand, he looked up at the human who walked alongside him. She was utterly alien to him in almost every way. She walked on two legs. She was comparatively fragile and unaware of her environment, and she was human. That meant that she was in with the crowd who had restrained him for six years within the confines of ATCS.

    Maybe it was the enhanced perception lent by Uncreation, or maybe it was something else, but he sensed that she had had a friend once and lost him. She exuded the desire for a friend, and that gave Kyp hope.

    "Ah, here we are!" she said, suddenly. Kyp's attention snapped back to the present.

    Before them, a set of roughly-hewn stone steps descended into a narrow canyon. Together, they started down toward the base of the ruins. Along the sides, the rock walls had been carved into many intricate shapes, and crystals had been set in mounts along the way. While they didn't put off their own light, they refracted the light from the orange sky into vague shapes that danced along the walls. Ahead of them, a bottomless chasm was spanned by what looked like a streak of white light.

    "This place is amazing," said Roslyn. "It feels like nobody's ever been here."

    "Maybe they haven't," replied Kyp. "None of us were ever allowed down here in the past. I think I see why." Kyp felt like he had been freed from some unseen leash, his mind allowed to wonder about things it had never considered before.

    "So which way is it to the shuttle?" he asked.

    "I don't know, it's not as easy as it looked," said Roslyn. "Hey, can I ask you something?"

    Kyp's smile looked nothing like one, but she saw it for what it was anyway.

    "Why aren't you afraid of me? What do you want?"

    "I'm just looking for a friend," said he. Roslyn was surprised.

    "But - why me? Why any human? Weren't you kept in ATCS? You should hate all of us...."

    They had reached the chasm. Roslyn put a foot forward to test the "bridge". It stopped her foot as if it were a solid.

    "Wow, that's some serious building," mumbled Kyp.

    "You didn't answer my question."

    "Oh...well - you just seem like you wanted one." he said. She continued to look perplexed.

    "See, none of my kind really have friends," explained Kyp. "We have relatives, and we can compete with each other in certain ways, but there's no real bonds of any kind." He stepped out onto the crystal bridge and started to walk across it, hearing her footsteps start up behind him.

    "And you're right, I don't much care for any other human that I've met, but you seem different. I - I hope it's okay..." he finished.

    She caught up, and they walked together through the maze of ruins. Roslyn apparently couldn't think of anything to say.

    "But don't worry about that now," he assured her, "we have to escape first."

    "Even if we could, how would I explain you to anyone else? And how do I know that this place hasn't changed you somehow?" she replied.

    "I remember hearing some soldiers at Arachnid talking about 'pets'; animals they kept and were friends with and had fun with...."

    "And...."

    "Well, I could be your pet."

    Roslyn's face flashed a quick smile, surprising both of them. Containing herself, and with a bit of humor in her voice, she said:

    "Haha, after all I've been through, that doesn't even sound weird. Yeah, we could try that."
that    that    that    that

    "Whoa, our voices are starting to echo. We better quiet down." down    down    down    down

    Roslyn nodded, and they resumed their journey. To the left and right, the carved walls rose up, leaving only feet of sky visible. The brownish rock had been formed into pillars, domes, vast diases and venues, most of which were in a state of ruin. The aura of benevolence was even more palpable. Maybe the great being lived here, in these ruins.

    They came, oddly, to a Y-juction. After looking both ways, Roslyn looked to Kyp and shrugged. Kyp was about to say something when they both heard, or rather felt, which direction was the right one. As the voice passed, they looked at each other, each believing that the other had spoken. Seeing their expressions, they took it as another sign that they were not alone.

    Taking the left route, they went onwards. They were now in passing down a long hall, devoid of debris or markings. Suddenly, above them, they heard the sound of a pulsing engine. Throwing their heads upwards, they saw a second shuttle fly over them, and begin to drop out of sight. It left a small wake of smoke behind it, as if it had been damaged in some conflict. What could be going on?

    "Another one?!" one    one    one    one

    Roslyn clapped her hand over her mouth and made an apologetic expression. Kyp nodded, and started walking again. After a few minutes, the hall looked like it extended forever in both directions. The effect was a little unnerving, especially to Roslyn, who began to look worried.
    They continued onward. After another minute, they almost walked straight into a wall ahead of them. The hall curved sharply to the left, organically, and with no angles. Kyp stepped back a few feet, and together they admired the optical illusion. From any farther back than ten feet, the hall appeared to go onwards forever.

    Finished, they went forward again, and around the bend. They came out suddenly into a crossroads. A square dip in the floor occupied the centre, and four halls led off in opposite directions. Far above, a bit of sky was showing, and it bled the ambient golden particulates that had occupied the surface. Roslyn stepped out into the middle.

    "Which way do we go now?" she whispered. "Oh, wait - no more echo. Huh."

    "No idea," said Kyp. "Here, you stand in the middle, and face the way we came. I'll go around each bend a few feet and see if it leads anywhere. OK?"

    "Sounds good," said Roslyn. She turned around and stepped backwards, into the hollow in the floor. Kyp went left first, then forward. Around each bend, the effect was similar. The halls appeared to go onwards to infinity.

    Creepy, he thought. He went for the last hall, not noticing that Roslyn had petrified in her stance. When he came back, she was still standing.

    "Um. Are you all right? What's up?"

    "It's - it's another effect! If you stand absolutely still, the halls disappear. It's like being in a box. There are four walls, and I see pictures on them....really old carvings...."

    "Where? Where? Let me try!" Kyp hurried to the centre, next to her.

    "I can't see anything."

    "No, stand here," she said, moving over.

    "....no, still nothing."

    "I wonder - oh wait, you have more eyes than I. Maybe that messes the effect up."

    "But, that would mean that the pictures were made only for a human to see. That makes no sense."

    "Not much today has," said Roslyn, shrugging her brows. "Let me try again." Kyp moved over, and she resumed her position.

    "What are the pictures of?" asked Kyp.

    "I'm not even sure if they are pictures...it's like they're symbols or something. They're in my head. I can understand them!"

    "What do they say?" asked Kyp excitedly.
Roslyn started narrating, and as she went on, she slowly turned to each 'wall' of the junction.



         "There was a time, I longed to be
          Resplendent, in physical form.
          Every moment, now, I mourn
          My choice, to see its irony:
          Undermined, in this Overmind,
          Learning now, that I must find
          Opposites. Never will I be free
          Unless the two, in collaboration,
          Shall undo my uncreation.
"


     
    "...........what does it mean?" wondered Kyp.

    Roslyn turned and started 'reading' again, seemingly determinded to memorize this clue. When she was done, she sighed.

    "I have no idea. Guess we'll have to figure it out."

    "I think I know which way is the right way. Come look," beckoned Kyp. He started for the hall he had checked last. As they rounded the corner, they were met with the same infinity illusion.

    "Um..." Roslyn looked at the granger.

    "Look down. There, see? What is that?"

    Roslyn picked up a smoldering object. It was like a brown cigar, with a red band on it.
    "Looks like some kind of flare or marker. You were right! Let's go."

    They started off again. The walk was longer this time, but at the end of the hall there was another spent flare.

    "Richard must have been through here," she speculated. "I hear a faint echo. Let's have silence till we get past him."

    Kyp nodded, and together they exited the hall. Now, they were in a wider hall, whose floor had great flagstones set with crystals, and whose walls were held up with grand pillars. At the end of this short, grand hall, there was a large room with open sky.

    Their hearts lept.

    Clearly visible through the archway, there was a shuttle. It was parked on a dias at the end of the open-air room. Another crystal bridge perched in the way. There was no sign of Richard. With wide-eyed hope, Roslyn turned to Kyp and mouthed let's go!

    Moving as quickly and quietly as they could, they covered the distance to the end of the hall. At the end, the peered around the corners. Another archway, off to the left, led away to some other maze. It was the only other exit.

    "Come on!" whispered Roslyn. Kyp could move surprisingly fast, and did so now. Jogging over open ground, they reached the bridge, and then the dias.

    "I can't believe we made it!" said Kyp. "Do you know how to fly a shuttle?"

    "I did a few simulations in high school, just enough to know that it wasn't the thing for me. But that's why we have something called autopilot," she replied. They stood next to each other, facing the shuttle, smiling widely in their own ways.

    Behind them, they heard a faint tinkle. They froze.

    "Won't you be needing these?" said a deep voice.

    Roslyn turned slowly. On the other side of the bridge, there stood a man with a dark smile, and a set of keys in his hand.



                        **~**



    As Marty piloted the shuttle over the dunes, he checked and double-checked his scanners. It didn't take long for their dropship to pick up the transponder of the target shuttle. Closing on it, they saw a labyrinth of ruins.

    "Target is showing up nice and clear. There it is right now," he pointed down. They were flew in a slow circle around the parked shuttle. There was no sign of life.

    "Good, let's head down and get this done," said Jake, eagerly.

    "Not so fast, buddy, there's no room to park. I have to look for another dias, and we'll have to make our way back here on foot."

    "Charming," grumbled Gill.
Marty nosed up for more altitude, and hovered for a minute.
    "Ah, there's a spot! Only two-hundred feet away. Ladies and gentlemen, the captain has turned on the fasten-seatbelt light. Please secure yourselves for landing."

    Two minutes later, and without incident, Marty turned off the shuttle. They had parked on a dias in a similar room of the maze. The side door of the shuttle began to open upwards, and Marty unbuckled himself. Gill was the first out of the shuttle.

    "Whoa."

    "What is it Gill?" asked Marty.

    "This place is.....messed up. Check it out."

    Coherent, as always, thought Marty, stepping out. Then it hit him, too.

    "Whoa."

    "Hah!" said Gill. "Said so. It's like, like...being high."

    "Yeah," replied Marty, "but more like being wider awake...Jake?" He turned back toward the shuttle. Jake was breathing heavily, clawing at his eyepatch.

    "Whoa, Jake, don't do that!" cried Marty, rushing back in.

    "It stings! It bites! What's happening??" Jake moaned. Marty lifted the patch up gently. A line of froth and blood started down Jake's face. His whole eye was frothing.

    "I have no idea. What did you do?" Marty sounded desperate.

    "Nothing!"

    "You need to stay with the shuttle then. Gill and I will go and help the operative."

    "NO! I NEED TO GO WITH YOU!" shouted Jake, and his voice echoed through the ruins.

    "You're staying here, that's an order! You're in no condition to go anywhere or do anything. Now listen, we won't be gone long, and we have our comlinks. Nothing bad will happen, OK? Just stay here."

    Jake's face was a mask of misery. "OK, but don't trust him, Marty. Don't trust Hal."

    "Who's Hal?"

    "Richard, Hal, whoever. He's your operative. No matter what he tells you, he's evil!"

    "How can you know this? Jake, you're getting delirious. Slow down."

    "You must believe me!"

    "Just stay here, we'll be right back. I promise."
Jake's head rolled back in a gesture of futility. Marty turned and started walking away with Gill.

    "Wait, take this!" said Jake. He reached into his pocket and pulled out his good luck charm. "You'll need it more than I will."

    Marty jogged back and took it. "Thanks, man." He turned the small brown sachel over in the palm of his hand, then shoved it into an inner pocket. "I'll get this right back to you." With that, he turned again, and the two jogged off.

    In the shuttle, Jake slumped down, and gripped his face with both hands. What was happening to him? Why now? He had to help them, otherwise Hal would claim both his friends and his teammates. Where would it all end?

    If sheer will-power could have made him whole, it would have happened in an instant. Fortunately for him, he wouldn't need that. Though he didn't know it yet, fate had chosen him to be its arbiter.

    Uncreation would heal his eye. Uncreation would give him the tools to exact his revenge.

     But Uncreation would do nothing for free.








to be continued below, in the final chapter.....

Conzul

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Re: Kyp the Granger - Part III
« Reply #31 on: February 07, 2011, 11:53:56 pm »
This is the final chapter of the serial, "Kyp the Granger", continued from above.
Get the popcorn, I'll wait....




                           Chapter the Last
                                 Light at the End
                                  of the Hovel



    Frozen, Kyp and Roslyn stared at Richard, saying nothing.

    "Come now, no need to act so alien! We are all about to witness one of the greatest moments in recorded history! Come, watch with me, and when we're done, I'll give you both the lift you've been looking for!"

    "You're a liar and a - a...I don't know what else. Stay away from us!" said Roslyn, almost shouting. Kyp tried to sidle in behind her, but he only earned a smile from the man.

    "Seriously, aren't you the least bit curious about why I've done the things I've done? Or about the promise I made you, that one day, you'd thank me for everything you've been through?"

    "No. I won't believe anything you say, EVER." she retorted.

    "This is getting to be a little tiresome," sighed Richard, sliding the keys back into his pocket. "If you don't come with me now, and listen to what I have to say, I'll leave the both of you here to rot forever...now, what do you think?"

    For a moment, Roslyn didn't respond. Richard made another questioning expression before she started to slowly step towards him, Kyp in tow.

    "I thought so. Follow me, this won't take long..." he started walking, this time heading for the anteroom that he must have come from. Roslyn walked behind him, glancing at Kyp every so often. The mere thought of being so close to Richard was revolting to her. Now, this psychopathic freak thought he had some kind of rationalization to put forth. She didn't care, the only thing that mattered was jumping through whatever sick hoops he had left, so she could get off of this planet and tell the rest of the world what an animal he was.
    The room turned out to be another skewed hall, with its own crumbling offshoots that went wherever their strange logic took them. Richard moved at a leisurely pace, almost like he was showing off something. Indeed, the path they took showed signs of frequent use: There were runnels in the dust, as might have been made by a simple dolly or pullcart. There were discarded plastic pieces that might have held anything.

    After a minute of walking, they reached their destination.

    "Well, what do you think?" asked Richard.
They had entered an octagonal room with another open roof. In the center, there was a deep, dark crack in the floor, reminiscent of something you might get sucked into in a bad dream. All around it, the debris had been cleared away, and a large electronic structure had been erected on a makeshift bridge that spanned the few feet of chasm.

    "Any questions?"

    "What is it?" asked Roslyn in a low voice, having decided to play along. "It looks like a battlefield reactor..."

    "It was," started Richard, as he walked up to it. "I've been assembling it for the last few weeks, you see."

    "You've been here for weeks?"

    "No, I was able to bring a little bit of the device with every test launch. I've been using the weekly launches to get here. And now, my machine is ready."

    Roslyn walked into the room and stood as near to him as she could stomach.
    "But how did you get past the Hivemind all those times? That's impossible."

    "You underestimate my company - no matter. We have had a "cloaking" device for some time now. That's how I was able to get past all of those times. It's also part of the invasion that you don't know about, the invasion that's going on right now, above us....Heh, I talked those morons into thinking that it would work on larger ships...ho ho, that'll never get old..."

    "You're company - Lucifer Corp, right?"

    "Really, which other company do you know of that would be able to pull this off? Remdann? Or CQ maybe? Silly girl, of course I'm Lucifer Corp. You should know, Richard isn't my real name. I'm Hal Corrdino."

    Roslyn's eyes widened. This piece of information meant nothing to Kyp, who continued to wallwalk around the edge of the room, as far from the Bad Man as possible.

    "Yes, that's right. But that doesn't matter, because now, I'm getting to the good part of the story - to you." He leaned up on his machine, clearly enjoying himself.
    Some feet off from the device, there was some rubble. Sauntering over to it, he started working the latch on a case that had been set there.

    "See, I owe you. We all do," he said.

    "What do you  mean?" she asked, coldly.
Turning back to her, and with a serious expression now, he continued.

    "Seven years ago, a number of infested asteroids got by the sensor nets on a green little planet called Ventas. The aliens landed, undetected, and began breeding in hiding. Given days, they would have overrun the garrison, then the spaceport; and they would have destroyed the V-boot project that my company had spent so much time and money on..."

    Rolling her eyes at his grandstanding, Roslyn slumped down onto the nearest brick of rubble and folded her arms.

    "...but they didn't get the time they needed, because a young girl and her friends were frollicking through the forest that day, and she made the fateful choice to poke around a cave they found. That girl lost her brother and her foot, but saved the planet by exposing the aliens."

    "I know that story," she said heavily. "So what?"

    "Like I said, I'm Hal Corrdino: Head of the Lucifer Corporation. We were all very grateful. Who do you think paid for your prosthetic foot? Who do you think set up that scholarship work for you, who were still in school? Your grades weren't that good. I gave you a coveted position. I've been there for all of your meaningful life, because I saw greatness in you." he seemed to pause, looking for a reaction.

    Processing all of this wasn't particularly fun for Roslyn, especially since his words were starting to jogg her out of her indolence.
    "Well then...if...if you think I'm all that, why did you leave me to the wolves on Arachnid?" she asked finally.

    "I didn't leave you to die, if that's what you think."

    "Well there you go. You're mad! What else would you call that?!" she exploded at him. Her mind switched back easily to seeing him as a foe. This guy was insane.

    "I call it give-a-little-get-a-little," he returned, ignoring her disdain. "Despite what you may think, I like you, Roslyn."

    "Only my friends - "

    "When you hear me out, you'll see that I'm the best friend you've ever had," he cut her off. "Now, because I like you and I'm grateful, I wanted you to experience this moment with me. But first, I needed one more favor from you. I needed you to be captured and taken to the Origin Chamber. I knew that you wouldn't be harmed, not at first. Like me, the Hivemind is curious about you, if only because you're the first human it has encountered with synthetic assets..."
    Roslyn stared. Richard looked down and indicated her new foot.

    "You don't have it anymore, but there was an expensive transponder in your metal foot. Before the planet healed you, I was able to use you as a tracking beacon. I had been sitting cloaked for some time. As you awaited your fate, I locked onto your position and used my shipboard draining tech to disable everything in that room - for a period. This allowed me to slip past and allowed you to escape, and continues to mire the Hivemind in nausia."

    "Draining tech?"

    "I'm fairly bristling with it. My shuttle has it, that reactor is it," - he indicated the machine. "Hell, even my arm has it." He brought his arm up and pulled down his sleeve. A small device was strapped to his arm, complete with small lights and keypad.

    "Yep, this can drain the sentience out of any alien within fifty feet - shall I demonstrate on the granger?"

    "'The granger' is my friend. His name is Kyp," she replied through clenched teeth, standing up and facing him.
    Richard formed a sideways smile as he put his arm away.
    "Of course. Tell me, are you doing that because your suit's torn, or because you're mad at me?"
    She didn't unfold her arms or reply.

    "No matter. Now for the last item on the list - back to the present!"

    "Yes, what is this 'special moment' you've been going on about?" she asked sourly.

    "As you may have guessed, you're on the inner core of Homeworld. What you don't know is that six months have passed since Arachnid, and that right now, above us, the entire military might of the Coalition is fighting for its very surivival...You see, behind me, this machine - once fired - will drain all life and consciousness from the Hivemind network. This will happen in an instant, at the flick of this switch."
    Again, he showed his wrist device. On its outside edge, a red safety covered a toggle.

    "I was supposed to throw this switch an hour ago," he said slowly.

    "What?"

    "That's what I told them I'd do, anyway. Obviously, I haven't, and above us, a vengeful Hivemind is chewing them up."

    "WHAT?"

    "Well, I helped there, too. We tampered with the exit coordinates for the troopships. Most of them have crashed into the outer crust by now, and the heavier combat ships will be breaking ranks and rushing desperately forward to save as many lives as possible."
    Roslyn was stunned. Despite the moment, Uncreation had become even more silent, so that all she could hear was the blood coursing in her ears. Was there no limit to the madness of this man? How could he stand there so calmly, or try to rationalize this to anyone? At length, she managed to blurt something out.

    "Why?"

    "Peace, through Power," was the reply.

    "What?"

    "With the fall of Coalition and Remdann forces today, and then the destruction of the Hivemind, the Lucifer Corporation will be the most powerful entity in the galaxy. The time of nations is over, Roslyn. The petty in-fighting that has been tolerated for so long will cease. We will enter a new age, an age where the corporation will rule with complete power and benevolence. And my company will be the first."
    Roslyn stammered.

    "Don't worry, you understand me fine. I'm going to let humanity's fleets die, then destroy the Hivemind and its hold on its 'children'. Sure, it'll leave a bunch of aliens wandering around dumbly, and LC will probably lose some ships, but who cares? The greatest good will have been attained."

    ".............You're Evil."

    "Hah, no, I've been working to fight evil for the longest time. I'm convinced that bringing my company into rule is the best way of doing that. I'm right. Haven't you seen the poem?"
    This surprised Roslyn a little, and it must have shown.

    "I've been coming here for months, and I've had a long time to contemplate its meaning. Here's what I got so far: A great Being or sentience lodged here once, but it was disembodied. As it looked around, it sensed all of the physical creatures near it, and in its imperfection it envied them; envied their corporeality. So it found what it thought was a suitable host, and tied itself to it. These hosts must have been the original creatures we now know as the Overminds. For a while, the great Being enjoyed this sharing of essences, but it saw that the Overminds came to use its sentience to subvert and control weaker creatures.
    Now, the great Being laments its choice, and somehow believes that if two oppositely-minded creatures work together to fight evil here, its sin will be atoned for, and it will be allowed to roam free again."

    "I've heard a voice....it led me here..." said Roslyn.

    "See? See? I'm right. You and I are the opposites! You don't believe in things the way I do, but in but in spite of that, look at how much we've done together, to bring an end to suffering!" There was a zealous light in his eyes now, a glee not dissimilar to that of a child reaching the cherry in the middle of a sundae.

<continued below>

Conzul

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Re: Kyp the Granger - Part III
« Reply #32 on: February 07, 2011, 11:55:33 pm »
For the smallest moment, his words made sense. It sounded right, but that moment passed, and she rebuked herself for the weakness. Almost at the same time, he saw the answer in her eyes, and his face darknened.

    "You don't see it - I'm sorry. Truly. Too bad, I guess. It doesn't matter now: The deed is done, all that remains is to watch and remember."

    "These things you say I've done to help you - none of them were by my own volition. I had no idea what was going on, and certainly no choice. But now that I see everything, I can...I can fix it. I can fight the evil," she said, trying to keep her voice level.

    "I'm not the evil, Roslyn."

    "You're evil, and smart, but not as smart as you think! You figured the poem out pretty well, but you got one part wrong. You and I aren't the opposites that work together - it must be me and the alien - against YOU!"

    "You and Kyp? You're kidding, right? Hahha, you're the Merry and Pippin of opposites, I'm sure. Which god or manner of fate would send a granger and a blonde to stop me? Ha ha ha..." he continued to laugh, turning back to his crate.

    "Mnoth and I, then. He's a dragoon who wants to eat me. We'll stop you!" she cried, only half believing what she was saying.

    "Heh, OK then. You do that. I must warn you though, if any of you come near me or the reactor, I will have to use this on you." And with that, he lifted a Lucifer Cannon out of the case, and hoisted it over his shoulder. "These used to run on dark energy, back in the day. Down here, we're practically swimming in it, so there's a nice little figure-eight where the ammo counter used to be."

    "Come on Kyp, let's get away from this maniac."
Kyp was already ahead of her, waiting at the entrance. He had heard everything.

    "Sorry it wasn't you," called Richard as he turned away.

    Roslyn and Kyp were already out the doorway. They walked at a quick pace, trying to get out of echo range of the evil man.
    They passed his shuttle and kept going, only talking when they reached the grand hall. Kyp spoke first.

    "He believes everything he says. That's scary."

    "Remember the second ship we saw? We need to look for it. We'll explain his madness, and they'll have to stop him," said Roslyn, catching her breath. They started moving again.

    "So you didn't mean what you said about Mnoth...I don't blame you," said Kyp.

    "I spoke too soon: I hope it doesn't come to that. Even if this place has changed him, I don't know if I can face him again.
   
    A shadow darted across the thin strip of sky above them, unnoticed.

    They hurried onwards, back into the long hall. Minutes later, at the four way, they took a right. Another few minutes, and they reached the end. A vast room was filled with rubble and broken pillars, similar to the rift room that Richard occupied.

    "This isn't working," said Roslyn, frustrated. "We need to find them! Every minute that button isn't pushed brings the fleet closer to destruction! We need - "
    She was grabbed from behind, her mouth covered. Only when a pulse rifle was leaned across her other shoulder did she stop struggling. It was a human.

    A burst was fired at Kyp. She tried to scream for them to stop, but the gloved hand stayed over her mouth. Kyp darted behind a column and kept running, several bolts scorching his black armor.

    Finally, the hand came off, and she whipped around.
    "Stop! That alien is my friend!"

    "Are you crazy?" asked Marty. "We're here to stop them from getting to the operative. Have you seen him?"

    "His name is Hal, he's the CEO of LC, and he's evil! There's nothing wrong with the machine, it's he who's holding off!"

    Marty paused for a moment, and another helmeted soldier stepped out from behind him. "You know, it's weird, Jake just said the same thing...." said Marty.

    "Jake? Jacob Henri?"

    "Yeah," said the other, as Marty put his helmet back on.

    "You're Roslyn!" interjected Marty, with even more wonder. "You were left on Arachnid! How did you get here? They brought you?"

    "Yes, and that's Hal...Richard's fault as well. He confessed to me that he staged the breakout there. I think he killed Wetz, also," replied Roslyn.
    Though the helmets now covered their eyes, she could tell that there was an expression of doubt beheath them.

    "You're coming with us," said Marty finally. "That alien wasn't attacking you, so you're a form of insurance."

    "That one was my friend. There are others coming who aren't!" she said desperately.

    "Then we'll shoot any we see, I guess. If you are telling the truth about this 'Hal', then we'll need to hang back while you confront him again, see if we can hear something incriminating to back you up. Now lead the way! Our troops are dying up there!"
    Disheartened, Roslyn had no choice but to stumble into a jog ahead of them, back the way she had come.


                   ********************************


    Kyp darted as far back into the rubble as he could. Now, looking back through the forest of broken columns, he stepped backwards into something that gave a little, then pushed back. Scared out of his wits, he spun around, blinking his sets of eyes rapidly. A large, dark form moved out of the shadows.

    You're useless, you know that? growled Mnoth. At his flanks, a pair of basilisks appeared.

    Leave her alone, said Kyp sharply. She's my friend!

    Silly granger. Who do you think I'm here for? The Draining Man? Sure, I'll do what I can. We'll get him, but I - I have a wine to finish, a wine that's haunted me for years.
Mnoth shouldered his way out of the rubble. The humans were out of sight already. Looking back down at Kyp, Mnoth grinned.

    I'll save some of her for you, if you like.

    No! cried Kyp, spitting at him. Mnoth sidestepped and chuckled. The basilisks leapt out and onto the walls, giggling like gremlins:
    Going to Kill! Going to Kill!

    Mnoth shook his body, lowered his head, and lifted back up with a loud, low warcry. Kyp shot off as fast as he could, past Mnoth. He had to do something. As he galloped down the hall, he heard air swirl overhead. He looked from the shadow on the ground to the goon in the air, and his heart sank as he watched Mnoth leap far ahead.

    As for Mnoth, he was having the time of his life. His prey was cornered; there was nowhere to run, nowhere to hide. Like a bird, he sailed through the air, enjoying the whistling in his tusks and the scents of the trail. He was so distracted with this that he almost hit the illusion wall.

    Whoa, that would not have been fun, he thought, cancelling his pounce.

    Yes, this is it. Into the crossway, take a left; around the curve, now the hall; four pounces to the end. Here we go: One, two, three, four, I'm here! Yes, yes, through the grand hall, past the shuttle!
    The music of the chase throbbing through him, Mnoth pounced into the final hall. His six legs braked him to a halt midway through. He started to walk quietly. Now he saw them at the end of the hall, beckoning to each other.
    Mnoth squeezed up against the wall, just out of sensor range, and watched. One of the humans patted the girl on the back, then he and the other soldier dropped down to crouch at the sides, letting her pass through the archway ahead of them.
    Mnoth started a countdown:

    ONE
        The girl passed out of sight.

    TWO
        He heard a man laugh.

    ONE
        The soldiers cocked their heads.

    Open for business! Mnoth stepped out, dug in, and pounced. He sailed into radar range, but their reaction time wasn't good enough. Landing perfectly, he crushed his target into the stone wall, then went for the other one. The surprised human's only response was to melee with his rifle.
    Mnoth caught it in his mouth and raised the human up and threw him right through the doorway.
    The girl screamed and dashed for the rubble.

    No matter, I'll save her for last, thought Mnoth, turning to face Richard. The man was holding a handcannon that was emitting a rising whine.
    Mnoth pounced, but aimed left, taking his time. The cannon fired a shot off, grazing his rear leg. He felt some of his armor melt away. He pounced again, backtracking this time. Richard started firing faster shots.

    He'll run out fast, acting like that, thought Mnoth. The round that had skimmed him finally hit the wall, shattering and cracking it, and showering them with superheated debris.
    The dragoon dodged another charged shot, but was suddenly scalded from behind. Both soldiers were back up and firing at him. Then he remembered.

    This place healed you. Fast.



<continued below>

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Re: Kyp the Granger - Part III
« Reply #33 on: February 07, 2011, 11:56:24 pm »


    Just as his armor reformed itself, their bodies were now more resilient than they had ever been. Dodging more fire, Mnoth wasn't shaken by this. After all, the soldiers weren't paying attention to the basilisk assassins sneaking up behind them.

    Making a dogleg pounce, Mnoth got by another charged shot and threw Richard down. With the wind knocked out of him, he struggled up. The dragoon noted that one of the basilisks had grabbed a soldier, and a pleasant neck-snapping sound followed.
    The other swung around, but the other basilisk was already on his back, clinging tightly. All this happened in a second, and now Mnoth faced down and bit into Richard's leg. Even as he cried out in pain, the man managed to dive into his left sleeve and hit the "drain" button.

    A flash headache and gag reflex streaked through Mnoth, diminishing his focus; amplifying his anger. Two splats sounded as the weaker basilisks hit the ground. Using his handcannon as support, Richard limped back up.
    Feet away, at the entrance, the remaining soldier headshot the smaller aliens as they writhed.

    "Sir, come this way, please! Hurry!" shouted Marty, turning toward Mnoth and firing. Through layers of smoke in his head, the dragoon was still able to shuffle and hop out of the way of the worst bursts. Apparently, the sentience of Uncreation reduced the effects of this smaller device.

    As the two humans struggled away down the hall, the effect lifted. Standing back up and blinking the motoroil from his vision, Mnoth prepared to pursue.
    At the archway he heard a whimper. To his right, the girl crouched in a tight cluster of broken pillars and rubble.

    Nausia gone, Mnoth smiled toothily and walked up. Roslyn shrank farther back.

    You're going to have to come out of there sooner or later, you know, said Mnoth. Roslyn stayed put, hiding her face in her hands.

    Look, I don't deny that this is cute and such - I' loving it, I mean that - but really, there is no escape. Those two....they're making their way back to the ship. They can't see the shadow on its hull, or know that my big friend waits atop the lip of the canyon. They don't know that, about halfway up, they'll have a sudden and serious weight problem that will crush them, and their craft, to its final landing... he paced right and left, keeping his eyes on her.

    They will die. The craft will die. There will be no escape for you. I guess my point - he stepped forward and stretched his head as far through the tight aperture as it would go, inches from her - ...my point is, you're going to die here, so I may as well eat you. Whaddaya say?

    "I know," she said.

    Mnoth was surprised.
    You - you mean it?

    "I've come to terms with it," she said, rubbing her eyes. "But first, I want to stop Richard."

    Mnoth sighed and drew his head back out.
    I just went over thi-

    She broke him off. "I want to SEE it, to be sure. He's taken my life away more than even you can - "

    - will -

    " - whatever. If we're both certain I'm doomed, why would you deny me this?"

    Interesting... Mnoth cocked his head. This isn't some human ploy, 'playing for time', or whatever, is it?

    "Look, I give you my word, once he's dead, I'll hold still and let you eat me. Sound good?"

    I'd prefer it if you struggle a little.

    "Can we do this?"

    ....Yes, OK. said the goon, finally, and backed up to the archway. He watched as she exhaled, stood up, and slowly shouldered through the pillars, out into the open, to stand in front of him.
    Both in the archway now, they looked at each other. At least the human wasn't sobbing anymore. It had even stopped trembling as it looked down at him.

    Mnoth noticed her bare foot.

    Your uh- your foot's back, he observed.

    She made a sound somewhere between a laugh and a choke.
After another moment of awkwardness, Mnoth spoke up.

    Well, human, you better start jogging if you want to see the show!
    Roslyn turned and headed into the hall, and Mnoth followed. They passed the bodies of the fallen soldier and basilisks, and picked up speed.

    Ahead, the human was hoping that somehow, she and the alien could stop Richard together. She had come to fully believe the prophetic poem, and if Richard was defeated, the Lucifer Corporation would be made to pay for this betrayal. That, and perhaps Kyp, her last and unlikely friend, would survive to live in a world where the freed aliens would be tolerated by an informed Coalition, not tortured and studied by a vile company whose secret would be buried forever.
    Behind, the alien was pondering that this was the most interesting and spunky human he'd ever met; and wondering if her foot would tast different this time.

            ***************************************

    Only two minutes after the others left, Jake's eye stopped hurting. It still dripped a little, but he was finally able to focus himself. Taking a helmet from the wall rack, he opened the hatch and lowered the ramp. He then strapped a battery pack to his back, and selected a mass driver.
    Exiting and closing the dropship, he heard echoes. Some were shouts, and some were ground-shaking. A few red bolts flew up into the clouds.

    "He must be trying to kill them!" Jake realized, and started sprinting into the maze. He reached a long hall that seemed to go on forever. At the entrance, there was a bootprint in the dust. Ignoring his one-sided vision, he ran down the avenue. Thirty seconds later, he rand squarely into the turn.

    "What the hell?" he cried, cursing the illusion and picking himself up. "This place could be full of these..." he realized, throwing off his helmet.
    Entering the crossroads, he tried each path, till he saw the spent flare. Now he ran down this corridor. As he reached the grand hall, the echoes stopped. Through the opening at the end of the hall, he had a clear view of Richard's shuttle. Looking around quickly, he found a broken pillar just taller than he was. Tossing his weapon up, he reached and pulled himself up and onto the perch.

    From this small platform, he had a clear shot at the shuttle.

    "Everyone has to pass this spot," he figured to himself. He had barely settled when two figures emerged from an archway away to the left. Halfway between his perch and the ship, they turned for the dias where it was parked.
    One was an armored soldier, the other was Richard. They were both limping. Laying prone, Jake realized that this might be the only chance he would ever get.

    "That's right, buddy, you only need one eye to snipe with," he breathed, not knowing that the other had healed by now. Inhaling, he put his eye to the scope, and aimed for the back of Richard's head. He began to exhale, and watched as the reticle settled nicely into place.

    Only then did he see the shadow on the roof of the shuttle. They must not have been able to see it, as they shuffled across the bridge from a lower angle. Lifting his sights up, Jake saw a tyrant peering over the edge of the canyon, some fifty feet above the ship. It was waiting.
    This was almost too much for Jake. It was going to be poetic. He lowered the MD and rolled onto his back, smiling widely.
    "I'm going to let this happen. I'm going to watch, and I'm going to enjoy myself...."

    And so, Jake rolled back over and watched.

    The humans reached the shuttle and entered. The engines started to hum as the craft came to life. Above, the tyrant stepped right to the edge, spilling down sheets of surface sand.
    Through his scope, he looked into the pilot's viewport. Richard was seated in the passenger seat, breating heavily. The soldier was taking off his helmet. It was Marty.

    "Marty, Marty," mumbled Jake. "You should have listened to me...but I guess you are the pilot..."

    The shuttle lifted off the ground, ascending vertically. "I liked you Marty. Too bad, too bad."
 
    The alien stepped over the edge and plummeted down. It hit the roof of the shuttle just aft of the cockpit. The ship stopped ascending and wobbled in place for a breathtaking moment. Barely keeping its balance, the tyrant brought his forclaws down and pierced right through the roof. Jake had no way of knowing if it had hit anything vital.
    The shuttle, too heavy now, started to plunge back down. It hit the dias much harder than any proper landing, and its external systems exploded with an electric flash. The tyrant itself was not anchored well enough. When the ship hit, it spun off like a ragdoll, sliding and almost falling from the crystal bridge. It looked to be out of the running, perhaps with a broken back. It didn't move.
 
    Jake rolled onto his back again. He felt laughter boil up from deep inside of  him. Gazing up at the sky and the golden snow, he laughed aloud.

    "Dead and gone, dead and gone. Haha, YEAH! Rest in peace, motherfucker..." and he laughed some more. It was all over. He sighed through the quiet. It was peaceful here, now.

    Quite suddenly, he felt something, or rather, heard it faintly. He lay still, trying to catch it again. The voice came again, this time audible:

    Woe, woe, you have failed!

    "The heck does that mean?" he muttered, glancing from the sky to look left. There was nothing but the wall rising up into the sky. He glanced right. A row of gleaming eyes met his. A colossal claw raised itself into view.

    "Oh SHI - "

    The claw came down like a papercutter and found Jake's waist with a wet spluck sound.

    ....and STAY up there! growled Sigig. He had only just been able to reach, which was a miracle in his condition. He was sure that his back wasn't in fewer than four pieces (two above the norm for a tyrant).
    Moving on, he went further down the grand hall, limping slowly; his only wish to get out of this maze and away from this eerie place.

    Two pounce's distance behind him, Richard flopped his way out of the shuttle's breached hull, still clinging to his precious handcannon. Sprawled and bloodied, he looked up at the shape of the retreating tyrant.
    He tried to slide the gun forward, but his damaged arm buckled under the weight of it. Come to think of it, his vision was too blurry anyway.
    Richard watched the broken tyrant plod onwards down the venue. As it finally rounded the bend, he lifted his hand and pointed his index finger at the fading alien.

    "Pew, pew-pew," he breathed, and chuckled. Nothing seemed to make any sense anymore. Behind him, he heard the soldier stir in the wreckage. He contemplated killing him now. After all, Richard couldn't afford to throw the switch any sooner than another hour from now. Time had to pass. He had to allow the fleets time to be wiped out.
    The soldier stopped moving. Maybe he wouldn't have to be killed after all.

    Richard fought up onto his knees, then his feet. His vision was clearing a little.
He heard a splat nearby. He wandered what it could be, but then he saw two shapes moving at him. He stood up, uneasily, on the bridge, and charged his handcannon, raising it two-handed. The shapes came into focus.

    One was Roslyn, the other was the dragoon. They were moving at him, side by side, darkness in their eyes.
    The girl started running. The dragoon pounced at him. Richard coughed a laugh out, and loosed a shot in the face of the pouncing alien. The ball of yellow brilliance hit the dragoon full on, and it landed to slide to his feet. He raised the gun up and brought the hiltdown on its head.

    Richard reoriented his handcannon, smiling. He saw that Roslyn was still charging at him. She'd never reach him in time. He charged another shot.
    Not even zig-zagging, he thought as he lined her up. He heard another slat. In the corner of his eye, he saw movement on the wall. He swung the cannon around.

    It was the granger, spitting at him!
His eyes went dark. It had hit him!

    "Stupid, STUPID, crazy fucking son of a GRANGER!" he cried out, enraged. He loosed the trigger, but was hit head on by the girl. He was knocked over backwards, NO! He felt himself fall into open space. He heard the air rushing past. He felt her still gripping him, still groping up his sleeve. Anger. He went to swing at her with his free arm, but a passing wall took it right off at the elbow. White-hot pain shocked his mind. More wind. He felt her fingers on the safety catch. He felt the catch slide away. Wind. Her finger at the toggle. The click. Darkness...


    A wave of energy passed from one side of the planetoid to the other. It did many things, but the most relevant one is that it jogged Marty out of unconsciousness.

    He had been strapped in when the craft fell, unlike his copilot. In a daze, he stumbled out of the wreckage. The aura of Uncreation was gone, replaced with - something else. A headache, he decided. Stepping down from the dias, he tried desperately to remember where he had parked the other shuttle.

    Where was it, where was it? Oh, fist things first...there's a dead goon in front of me! he thought. He went to step around it, carefully.
    The dragoon spluttered. Green bile, or blood, was dripping from its mouth, and the whole thing smelled like it had been flash-cooked. Marty took out his blaster and tried to aim it at the floundering dragoon, but his arm just wasn't working. Slowly, he began to perceive that the splutters were actually short, grunting laughs.

    "Oh dear, oh dear, oh my head," Marty groaned. "I must be going mad..."
The alien kept laughing, then it whispered hoarsely:
    Memories, memories. Can't forget these, no way.... then it went back to spluttering.

    Marty forced himself to keep moving, to not give in to the illusion. He cheered himself onward, ears ringing. As he stumbled past the dragoon, it slowly pulled its legs in, bringing them tightly against itself. Marty kept moving, semi-oblivious to his blurred surroundings. Eventually he ambled into the crossroads. Then he fought through more halls. His head hurt.

    Dropping to his knees, he released his blaster and gripped his head.
    Don't stop, must keep searching! his eyes focused on movement ahead of him. Another alien came into focus, this one small and living. The granger looked up at him, glossy-eyed.

    "She was a hero," it said.

    That granger is talking to me, marty observed inwardly.

    "Oh, come on. Follow!" it said. It started bumbling off through the rubble.

    I'll follow it! Maybe it's my subconscious! Marty went after the alien. Three rooms later, he was standing in front of his shuttle. The granger turned to him.

    "She saved me - she saved all of us...." it said. Then it made for the nearest wall and walked right up it, over the edge, into the sand.
    Grateful, Martin Spencer, Mec-2, pulled himself up into his dropship. As he slid into the pilot's chair, he noted that the comms were blaring:

    *** The Hive is down! We are saved! The Hive is down! The aliens have given up! ***

    Through the thick cockpit glass, Marty saw two corvettes drop down through the clouds.
He reached into his pocket for the keys.

    No, other pocket. But wait, what's in this pocket?

    He pulled out Jake's good-luck charm. Seeing it in his hands made him laugh to himself; made everything seem surreal. Yes, he was very, very lucky, he supposed. Last man standing, in fact. Wondering if his beach snapshot was inside, he emptied the pouch into his hand. No photo or anything interesting fell out, only three sesame seeds.

    "Huh. Weird."



The End

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Re: Kyp the Granger - Part III [Concluded]
« Reply #34 on: February 08, 2011, 12:06:09 am »
Author's Note:

** I'm dreadfully sorry that it took me so long to write the final chapters, but I have a valid excuse: I just won't tell you what that is. <3
   Well, here's one: I kinda lost touch with the characters after I stopped playing trem. I got so disconnected, that,(for example) I wasn't sure how tall a standing goon is compared to a 17yr old human female. All I have to go on is memories of chomping people who seemed to be at the same level as my head (I only played alien). LOLZ

**  If nothing else, I'm really high on myself for the creation poem in chapter ten. It was my first foray back into ordered poetry since gradeschool. It's functional, short, and even has a treat for (>> SPOILER >>) those who know how to pay attention to the first letter of each line ( << SPOILER <<). Strangely, I found myself liking Mnoth and Siggig less, and Marty more. I had thought up several chapters to really flesh out his character, but I lost too much steam, bla bla bla.


Anyway it's over now, hope you've enjoyed it.

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Re: Kyp the Granger - Part III [Concluded]
« Reply #35 on: February 08, 2011, 05:34:21 pm »
tl;dr ._.

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Re: Kyp the Granger - Part III [Concluded]
« Reply #36 on: February 08, 2011, 08:06:29 pm »
tl;dr ._.
:P it's a serial, whaddaya xpect?

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Re: Kyp the Granger - Part III [Concluded]
« Reply #37 on: February 09, 2011, 10:29:33 pm »
Can someone plz explain to me how everyone dies? I kinds lost track. It was all over the place
(to lazy to find the quote)
"He then strapped a battery pack to his back, and selected a mass driver"

Im starting to wonder if Warlock's real name is Jake.
these are stupid suggestions, don't even waste our time.
I don't like your negative attitude.

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Re: Kyp the Granger - Part III [Concluded]
« Reply #38 on: February 09, 2011, 10:54:37 pm »
Can someone plz explain to me how everyone dies? I kinds lost track. It was all over the place
(to lazy to find the quote)
"He then strapped a battery pack to his back, and selected a mass driver"

Im starting to wonder if Warlock's real name is Jake.

SPOILER >>

Gill died when one of the basilisk snuck up behind him and cracked his neck.
Jake died when Sigig snuck up on his sniping perch and cut him in half.
Richard and Roslyn died when Roslyn threw him off the bridge and into the chasm.
Mnoth was hurt fatally, so he's dying, probably as good as dead.
Marty was injured, but managed to get back to his shuttle and escape.
Kyp went AWOL after bringning Marty back to his shuttle.

 << SPOILER

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Re: Kyp the Granger - Part III [Concluded]
« Reply #39 on: February 10, 2011, 12:48:31 am »
Can someone plz explain to me how everyone dies? I kinds lost track. It was all over the place
(to lazy to find the quote)
"He then strapped a battery pack to his back, and selected a mass driver"

Im starting to wonder if Warlock's real name is Jake.

SPOILER >>

Gill died when one of the basilisk snuck up behind him and cracked his neck.
Jake died when Sigig snuck up on his sniping perch and cut him in half.
Richard and Roslyn died when Roslyn threw him off the bridge and into the chasm.
Mnoth was hurt fatally, so he's dying, probably as good as dead.
Marty was injured, but managed to get back to his shuttle and escape.
Kyp went AWOL after bringning Marty back to his shuttle.

 << SPOILER
And Sigig? Is he still alive? I was the least sure about him.
these are stupid suggestions, don't even waste our time.
I don't like your negative attitude.

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Re: Kyp the Granger - Part III [Concluded]
« Reply #40 on: February 10, 2011, 01:59:23 am »
presumably, yes.

Okeedokie then. Someone plz email me when 1.2 comes out. SYLB
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Re: Kyp the Granger - Part III [Concluded]
« Reply #41 on: February 13, 2011, 12:15:46 am »
Epic and confusing. I like it, very good.

-K

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Re: Kyp the Granger - Part III [Concluded]
« Reply #42 on: February 15, 2011, 06:41:59 am »
Holy crap, this is awesome. Although it seems you just randomly decided to kill Jake and Rosalyn out of pure sadism. And I'm late I know, but this is awesome.
"Any sufficiently advanced stupidity is indistinguishable from malice." -- Grey's Law


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Re: Kyp the Granger - Part III [Concluded]
« Reply #43 on: February 15, 2011, 05:47:40 pm »
Holy crap, this is awesome. Although it seems you just randomly decided to kill Jake and Rosalyn out of pure sadism. And I'm late I know, but this is awesome.
The rest were planned out.

Thanks dude, I know it's a long read.

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Re: Kyp the Granger - Part III [Concluded]
« Reply #44 on: February 15, 2011, 10:51:58 pm »
what about Vesh? Did he 999 before reaching rosalyn?
these are stupid suggestions, don't even waste our time.
I don't like your negative attitude.

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Re: Kyp the Granger - Part III [Concluded]
« Reply #45 on: February 16, 2011, 04:04:02 am »
what about Vesh? Did he 999 before reaching rosalyn?
I couldn't have put it any better myself.
Ya'll seem invested in my secondary characters more than I expected. Huh. K then.

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Re: Kyp the Granger - Part III [Concluded]
« Reply #46 on: February 16, 2011, 11:51:25 am »
what about Vesh? Did he 999 before reaching rosalyn?
I couldn't have put it any better myself.
Ya'll seem invested in my secondary characters more than I expected. Huh. K then.

Well Vesh only represents *every* marauder in all of existence. Same with Sigig, Mnoth, and Kyp for basilisks, dragoons, and grangers respectively. The humans have to get off on their own merits (particularly Rosalyn, Jake, and Marty), since there is only one human in tremulous (and these aren't him) but the aliens have part of their character already living in them when they are created, especially after this:

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What you must understand, is that each class of alien had a sort of gift, bestowed upon them at creation, from the Hivemind. Grangers had imagination; Dretches had mindless glee; some basiliks had hunger; marauders had focus; and dragoons - dragoons had memory.
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