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This is what I've been doing when I'm not playing Trem...
« on: September 06, 2012, 04:39:11 am »
Anyone with a taste for comedic social-commentary and four minutes to kill should check out this sketch I wrote and (tried to) act in...

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=60WzeuPaHus

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Re: This is what I've been doing when I'm not playing Trem...
« Reply #1 on: September 06, 2012, 11:27:24 am »
Entertaining. Good job!

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« Reply #2 on: September 06, 2012, 11:27:47 am »
The temptation to not click that link is overwhelming.
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« Reply #3 on: September 06, 2012, 08:41:30 pm »
Entertaining. Good job!

Thanks, Nux! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

The temptation to not click that link is overwhelming.

Hey, if satire isn't your thing, by all means steer clear. Still, it's always nice to try new things. If you don't, well, as a wise man once said...

"You're gonna miss everything cool and die angry."
-Patton Oswalt

(Or is it because of my pretty hair? If so, please, don't let yourself be intimidated. You're a growing boy and what you're feeling is only natural.)
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Re: This is what I've been doing when I'm not playing Trem...
« Reply #4 on: September 06, 2012, 10:09:27 pm »
Cool mon, and as they say, you have to try everything once except folk dance and incest.
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Re: This is what I've been doing when I'm not playing Trem...
« Reply #5 on: September 07, 2012, 01:18:12 am »
...As they say, you have to try everything once except folk dance and incest.

Truer words...

ALSO:
An update for everyone who was promised their Trem user-name would appear in a future video; that IS still happening. Though the project has now become a feature-length film partially funded by a producer from HBO (...bull-TRUE!) which should (hopefully) start production after Christmas.

My favorite of the possible poster-concepts...

[That's Stanley Wong of 21 Jump Street on the right and my dumb ass on the left.]
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« Reply #6 on: September 07, 2012, 04:24:41 am »
Entertaining. Good job!

Thanks, Nux! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

The temptation to not click that link is overwhelming.
Still, it's always nice to try new things.

(Or is it because of my pretty hair? If so, please, don't let yourself be intimidated. You're a growing boy and what you're feeling is only natural.)

That's what people say about gay sex. And pics of the hair or it didn't happen.
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« Reply #7 on: September 07, 2012, 10:48:36 am »
Not enough Slavs in that video.

You make up Qrntz, u always angry, just calmdown. :police:
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Re: This is what I've been doing when I'm not playing Trem...
« Reply #8 on: September 08, 2012, 01:44:36 am »
That's what people say about gay sex.

Go on...

And pics of the hair or it didn't happen.

I can't. The hair itself was actually CGI and reproducing any images would violate the producer's copyright.

Not enough Slavs in that video.

You're absolutely right, but that's only because I can't stand them.
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« Reply #9 on: September 12, 2012, 01:08:37 am »
[Sorry about the double-post. Though, considering I was the last to post anything in "Off Topic" as a whole, hopefully it's not that big of a deal.]

I just wanted to thank everyone for watching my video. I'm still new at producing my own sketches and so feedback is vital. Also, I had no idea just how many people outside of the U.S. played Trem.

Now, I know what you're thinking: "An American who didn't know about stuff outside of America? What a rare breed."

But it's a cool discovery none the less because (despite the BBC reference in it's title) this sketch was very U.S.-centric and I never expected anyone that far outside of my little bubble would see it.

Though, now I'm pretty curious to know what you thought. Was the satirical nature obvious? Did it seem funny to you (or in general?)

Basically, what I'm asking is if anybody from one of the 16 other nations listed in the video's view-counter has any feedback they feel like sharing, I would love to hear it. (Americans are welcome to respond, as well. Just know that, as in reality, your opinion is becoming less and less important ;))

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« Reply #10 on: September 12, 2012, 12:53:59 pm »
Just in case the UK counts as outside the US, I'm from England by the way.

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« Reply #11 on: September 12, 2012, 01:06:18 pm »
Just in case the UK counts as outside the US, I'm from England by the way.

I swear blind that was obvious last time I checked.
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« Reply #12 on: September 12, 2012, 06:55:35 pm »
despite the BBC reference in it's title

It's Channel 4 goddamnit!

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« Reply #13 on: September 12, 2012, 08:23:10 pm »
hey, that was actually kind of funny.

this is high praise coming from me, because i hate everything.

criticism:  the sketch as a whole seems very derivative.  basically, a hodgepodge of material ive heard or seen from stand up or other sketches rolled into one.

get passed that, and you have a great deal of potential.
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« Reply #14 on: September 12, 2012, 09:10:44 pm »
Just in case the UK counts as outside the US, I'm from England by the way.

I swear blind that was obvious last time I checked.

Yeah, I guess it is pretty obvious I'm English.

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« Reply #15 on: September 13, 2012, 10:46:15 am »
I actually always had Nux pegged for a German.  ;D
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« Reply #16 on: September 13, 2012, 03:31:52 pm »
Just in case the UK counts as outside the US, I'm from England by the way.

I swear blind that was obvious last time I checked.

Yeah, I guess it is pretty obvious I'm English.

Well I was really talking the UK being outside the US, but sure.
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« Reply #17 on: September 13, 2012, 07:25:44 pm »
I actually always had Nux pegged for a German.  ;D

you mean he's not brazillian?

my whole life is a lie.
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« Reply #18 on: September 15, 2012, 12:41:22 am »
Just in case the UK counts as outside the US, I'm from England by the way.

Yeah, dude. Bill Shakespeare practically invented modern story telling, plus most of the words we use to tell them. I'd say British feedback is quite acceptable.

Also, if it wasn't already obvious from the IT Crowd reference, I love British television. Four words:

Boys from the Dwarf

I COULD type out the whole theme song, but I'll spare you, Nux. Because you're good people. And good people don't deserve that.

hey, that was actually kind of funny.

this is high praise coming from me, because i hate everything.

criticism:  the sketch as a whole seems very derivative.  basically, a hodgepodge of material ive heard or seen from stand up or other sketches rolled into one.

get passed that, and you have a great deal of potential.

Thank you for the honest feedback, ND. That's not the first time someone has told me my work was funny but sounded vaguely like a stand-up bit they had already heard.

It's never conscious on my part but of course we're all pulling from the same well, so to speak. Either way, critique is always appreciated.

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« Reply #19 on: September 15, 2012, 07:27:11 am »

Thank you for the honest feedback, ND. That's not the first time someone has told me my work was funny but sounded vaguely like a stand-up bit they had already heard.

It's never conscious on my part but of course we're all pulling from the same well, so to speak. Either way, critique is always appreciated.


by the by, ive gained even more godfrey ho since last we spoke.

there's an idea for you.  you could give the ho treatment to a ho film.  excise the southeastern asian flick the ninjas or commandos or whatever are spliced into, and then film your own scenes without sound.

then get bad readers to dub the mess you splice together with the most whimsical of nonsensical plots.

bonus points for a shooting script full of nonsense, as used in kung pow, to made the dub even more "off".
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« Reply #20 on: September 16, 2012, 02:56:03 am »
by the by, ive gained even more godfrey ho since last we spoke.

there's an idea for you.  you could give the ho treatment to a ho film.  excise the southeastern asian flick the ninjas or commandos or whatever are spliced into, and then film your own scenes without sound.

then get bad readers to dub the mess you splice together with the most whimsical of nonsensical plots.

bonus points for a shooting script full of nonsense, as used in kung pow, to made the dub even more "off".

Interesting concept. Can a brother get some torrents?

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