Author Topic: Tremulous: Genisis (Read 8707 times)

Eyn Xaeyn · « **on:** October 20, 2007, 05:39:44 pm »

Welcome. I have been working on a story that tells about the beginning of tremulous, although it is still underway i will be posting sections as they are finished.

If u see any ideas for a map u r currently making feel free to take them, or if u want to make a map based off this that would b fine 2

HamStar · « **Reply #1 on:** October 20, 2007, 05:55:24 pm »

Its Genesis, not Genisis.

Eyn Xaeyn · « **Reply #2 on:** October 20, 2007, 06:10:18 pm »

The Earth, the beautiful blue-white planet...The year is 2000 a.d. and the Humans are on the verge of a technological marvel, Deep-space travel, The humans made 5 deep-spacecraft- Tremor, Pulsar, Karith, Nexus, and Raepel. All of these spacecraft were meant for deep-space colonization, though the Reapel had a Security system and a lockdown mode with 3 stages. Tremor colonized Arachnid II, and continued its service as a freighter. Nexus colonized Pulsar IV, and supplied Pulsar V with food. Pulsar colonized Pulsar V and found The Universal Peace Program. Karith Colonized Polaris VI and found the Karith Station. Reapel crash into Xavier I and though we are not sure why, we did get one strange Maday message:
Mayday! Mayday! This is the Reapel and our ship is going down, the engines are damaged, and there are strange greeni- w-what was that? hello any body the-static-OH MY-static-RAWR!-static-
We are thinking he was going insane and crashed the ship. We will be trying to make Reapel an outpost in the near future...

Eyn Xaeyn · « **Reply #3 on:** October 20, 2007, 06:11:27 pm »

Quote from: "HamStar"

Its Genesis, not Genisis.

thats becuase i havent added any thing

HamStar · « **Reply #4 on:** October 20, 2007, 06:19:13 pm »

No, I was correcting your title

Eyn Xaeyn · « **Reply #5 on:** October 20, 2007, 06:21:35 pm »

Xavier I, our beautiful homeworld. "I am only a modest Tyrant now, but back when The Hunt began, I was a mighty Granger. Most of my tribe is thankful for the shelter of the strange craft our prey flew in, I am just thankful for the easiest and sweetest prey I have ever seen...

Eyn Xaeyn · « **Reply #6 on:** October 20, 2007, 06:48:29 pm »

I looked down upon a strange battle in front of a starport, we seemed to be trying to retake earth from strange black-green creatures and it seem that[Red Alert!] I awoke from my dream wondering what was wrong, i got up and exited my Living Quarter. As I turned to go to the Central Elevator, I heard a noise behind me, I turned to look and saw nothing but the open doors of the Engine Room Elevator. I felt like I was being studied by someone...or something. I entered the elevator and still saw nothing, "Weird" I said to my self. I turned back to go to the Central Elevator and walked briskly to it. When I got to the elevator, I went up one floor to the Secrity Room and check the moniters on the wall behind me, everthing checked out...till I saw the Engine Room with a gaping hole in one side. I felt chills as I remberred feelling watched on the Rec floor. I went to the Lockdown switch next to the monitor and activated Lockdown Stage 1 turning on the Security Turrets on the Rec floor and the more powerful Guard Turrets, and also locking the elevators in place. I radio one of my builders, GodMil, and told him to get our location, as well as what had happenned...

Eyn Xaeyn · « **Reply #7 on:** October 20, 2007, 06:51:20 pm »

just for clarifacation- Reapel' elevators r I-shaped, but the engine room elevator has a hollow central pillar

Stunt · « **Reply #8 on:** October 24, 2007, 10:19:55 pm »

Hi.

I think that what you have written here is absolutely terrible. There is nothing redeeming about your story. You are a bad writer.

You are a very bad writer.

HamStar · « **Reply #9 on:** October 24, 2007, 11:13:33 pm »

Quote from: "Stunt"

You are a very bad writer.

Pwnt.

Ryanw4390 · « **Reply #10 on:** October 25, 2007, 12:56:21 pm »

Any tremulous version with the word genesis should begin at the title screen with a phil collins drum solo.

Caveman · « **Reply #11 on:** October 25, 2007, 01:50:30 pm »

Can't help it, but i've read the story already elsewhere.
Please scratch it and find something completely new and don't be a copycat.

HamStar · « **Reply #12 on:** October 25, 2007, 03:26:45 pm »

Quote from: "Ryanw4390"

Any tremulous version with the word genesis should begin at the title screen with a phil collins drum solo.

Can you feel it in the air tonight?

CreatureofHell · « **Reply #13 on:** October 25, 2007, 05:40:55 pm »

Quote from: "HamStar"

Quote from: "Stunt"

You are a very bad writer.

Pwnt.

Indeed!

ShadowNinjaDudeMan · « **Reply #14 on:** October 25, 2007, 08:08:51 pm »

I dont feel very good reading this stuff, is the tyrant a descendant of a red indian called wind-head-feather-brain?

It certainly feels like this, refine your writing skills, I was spooked reading this.

Shadowgandor · « **Reply #15 on:** October 25, 2007, 09:37:05 pm »

how comes everyone is like ohh and ahhhh when they first read it and when someone writes something bad about it, everyone goes like ya it's rubbish?

ShadowNinjaDudeMan · « **Reply #16 on:** October 25, 2007, 10:03:30 pm »

Quote from: "Shadowgandor"

how comes everyone is like ohh and ahhhh when they first read it and when someone writes something bad about it, everyone goes like ya it's rubbish?

Problem with that; there was never a post with a positive opinion about the story.

But everyone went ya its rubbish.

HamStar · « **Reply #17 on:** October 25, 2007, 10:03:58 pm »

What? When did they say that? O.o

Bajsefar · « **Reply #18 on:** October 25, 2007, 10:47:34 pm »

I just read this.
Makes me sick.
Poor Eyn Xaeyn.

ShadowNinjaDudeMan · « **Reply #19 on:** October 26, 2007, 09:56:33 am »

I KNOW WHAT THIS WRITING REMINDS ME OF!!!

All Your Base Are Belong To Us
You Will Not Survive Make Your Time
Someone Set Us Up The Bomb

And some crap, cheap trashy romantic story.

-[=AHs=]- DarkEnix · « **Reply #20 on:** October 30, 2007, 11:17:36 am »

LOL , how abt this

Human's Technology is extremely high right , ill be a Destroy This Story Guy

im no one , cuz no one ever acknowleged me , im a weapon developer

n this , my greatest invention , The New n Upgreaded Atom Bomb ,
Xeno MK V

but because this world is nothing to me , ill use it , as i checked on the weapon infomation , it sends a chill down to my spine

Xeno MK V Weapon Infomation

Causes Extremely Large Explosion when exploded , in addition , this weapon will create an epic Gravition Force causing everything in the Universe to Crash Together n leaving nothing else

Xeno MK V Firing Range

Distance Away from Target 0 cm

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^v
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Fireing Scene

Log Ended

Thats the last thing ive seen i----n My-------L <BOOM>!!!

everything was sucked in the gravition force even b4 he could finish talking to himself

Caveman · « **Reply #21 on:** October 30, 2007, 11:34:35 am »

DarkEnix, back off. The OP at least did his job (re)writing something.
You are just annoying with your try at short-writing.

-[=AHs=]- DarkEnix · « **Reply #22 on:** October 30, 2007, 01:09:00 pm »

Quote from: "Caveman"

DarkEnix, back off. The OP at least did his job (re)writing something.
You are just annoying with your try at short-writing.

like i said , im the destroy the story guy..LOL , Read carefully

Plague Bringer · « **Reply #23 on:** October 30, 2007, 08:43:45 pm »

Quote from: "-[=AHs=

- DarkEnix"]
Quote from: "Caveman"
DarkEnix, back off. The OP at least did his job (re)writing something.
You are just annoying with your try at short-writing.

like i said , im the destroy the story guy..LOL , Read carefully

No, you're an idiot.

-[=AHs=]- DarkEnix · « **Reply #24 on:** October 31, 2007, 06:46:59 am »

LOL , read this story then got bored , lol , nth to do but to spoil it..XD

HamStar · « **Reply #25 on:** October 31, 2007, 07:03:32 pm »

But what is there to spoil?

News:

Author Topic: Tremulous: Genisis (Read 8707 times)

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