TREMULOUS COMIC!

[Psylo]

I decided to make a short tremulous comic.
The problem is, that i will need someone for the text (my english is far from beeing perfect)
When it is finnished we could send it to Planetquake to attract more players to the mod.
Oh and some things in the comic might look a bit different to what they will look like in the mod, it will hopefully give an impression on how yoú might feel while you play it.


Btw, i didn't really like that mosquito-like look for the base offensive droid , i made a new sketch.
Please check the shots section and give us concept artists some feedback (as that's what sketches are for...visual communication....when the models are done it might/will be too late for changes)

[Psylo]

Hmm you don't seem to be very interested...
But now it's too late, i have a story and I drew the script for the first page last night.
Damn, I have to work harder or the mod will be finnished before the pro-mo comic...
 

[Timbo]

Wooo neat stuff. I like the new base offensive. Carc was actually modelling something quite similar before you posted it.

When do you get a computer and hence irc back?

[Psylo]

Not before next month i fear.
2nd page of the comic is ready scripted and i cleaned the script for the first one.
the comic will have about 10 pages i guess.

[Psylo]

I scripted another 2 pages yesterday Im counting 40 panels on 4 pages now...hmm 10 per page is a bit much but I used a long dialouge to introduce the situation..

[Psylo]

I set up the panels for another page.
46 panels now.
But 10 pages wont be enough...better 12.
I hope it will be done at the end of next month.

[Psylo]

script progress information:
6 pages
53 panels
characters so far:
a 0-G service robot named Oges
two pirates named Sue and Marvin
and a dozen marines
alone on that huge spaceship(or at least thats what they think).
But no one died...yet.

[Psylo]

Damn I'm out of paper.

[DarkStorm]

I can go over your script Psylo.  Me and my fiance are both at about professional level writers.  (Which isn't as hard to achieve as you would think)

[Psylo]

Would you like to write the dialogues?
I can't express so well in english.
I can send you the script and the plot then
but i'll have to translate the plot(the written script) and I will have to make the drawn script more readable for the eyes of others(where i set up the size, location and content of the panels..like a storyboard)at the moment there are only a few lines and circles on 50% of the panels

[ This Message was edited by: Psylo on 2001-07-26 12:20 ]

[DarkStorm]

Translated script I will need, but a lot of times I'm pretty resourceful with images, you'd be surprised.

[Psylo]

I fear it will take a while to translate the whole script...