eh I will admit that the comics appeal to a younger audience
If "younger" means early teens with ADHD, then I've no argument about that. At least you admit it.
and the reason for the embeded music is just because I like that song
That's nice and all, and if you wanted to make a personal site I would advocate that you put whatever horrible music you prefer all over it. However, if you're making something that you want other people to read, it's a big faux pas in modern webdesign to put embedded music into the page - especially something loud, fast, annoying, and distracting.
The art sucks because I was just trying to simplify it to go faster in the process of making the comic
Yeah, I can understand that. The wonderful thing about comics is that art doesn't have to be great as long as the comics are funny (or they achieve another emotion that the artist/writer wanted to convey). However, art that is lacking requires even more of an effort on the other side of the equation, which you clearly have problems producing.
Again, I'm not advocating at all that you don't continue. I made horrible comics not unlike these in junior high and my first couple of years of high school that I thought were hillarious at the time, but now cringe whenever I think back about them. Not everyone's a
Katie Tiedrich, y'know?
Ultimately you should just keep doing whatever you like to do, and what makes you happy. You wanted opinions, though.
Also, there are a few sites that are organized entirely around free hosting for webcomics that would likely be more fitting than a general free-webhosting site built around Flash (good for some things, absolutely horrible for this particular instance).
