My first map

[Ripperjack]

Like the title says.
opinion pleaze.

http://www.mc-design.nl/noobforce/games/tremulous/base/Kalbunga_beta2.pk3

[Knowitall66]

This probably should've been posted in 'Level Reviews & Released'.
Your map, Needs a levelshot and .arena file. It's a little too small and the rooms themselves seem oversized. In many areas it is much too dark. The alien base is too open and the human's base would benifit from some defence and maybe an armoury. The map also overall lacks detail.

[Ripperjack]

srry for the post here i forgot to login and accedentaly click this one move topic plz

[Zero Ame]

screenshots??

[E-Mxp]

**Screenshot's**

[mooseberry]

@E-Mxp: Is it really that dark in game?

@Ripperjack:I bet using greeble would make some of those walls look nicer.

[E-Mxp]

@E-Mxp: Is it really that dark in game?

Yes

[Ripperjack]

greeble?

[n.o.s.brain]

Greeble

[mooseberry]

Greeble

Indeed, on some of these "Tremor-ish" walls, greeble would help break it up and make it look better.

[techhead]

Now I have a form-letter response to many maps:
"Needs more greeble!!!"

[Lava Croft]

Now I have a form-letter response to many maps:
"Needs more greeble!!!"

And I can finally start whining about the surplus of greeble'd box maps!

[mooseberry]

http://www.3dfluff.com/files/greebletut/whoneedsgreeble11cr.jpg