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Map: Fatal Error (Beta 1 - TremWars Request)

Started by Kaleo, May 17, 2008, 06:19:54 AM

Kaleo

Fatal Error by Kaleo
Beta 1
TremWars.net Request




"Something has gone wrong... Something has gone seriously wrong..."
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This is the beta 1 release of my latest map, Fatal Error. I was requested to fix it up for TremWars' new map rotation by it's owner, Critux. Thanks to him, more work has been done on it which otherwise may never of happened. I intend to release a final at some stage, so if you find any bugs, notification would be helpful.

~Kaleo
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TRaK

Looks nice. Layout looks like it should play decently.

A couple things:
- The vents are the brightest part of the map, which feels odd.
- A lot of the rooms feel a bit too boxy.
- Replacing the excess of crates in some rooms with other interesting props would go a long way.

All in all, this is a nice map, good job :)

Kaleo

Quote from: TRaK on May 17, 2008, 06:41:20 AM
- The vents are the brightest part of the map, which feels odd.

Tell me about it...

Quote from: TRaK on May 17, 2008, 06:41:20 AM
- A lot of the rooms feel a bit too boxy.

Hmmm... I'll see what I can do.

Quote from: TRaK on May 17, 2008, 06:41:20 AM
- Replacing the excess of crates in some rooms with other interesting props would go a long way.

I had some issues with patches not showing up in radiant. If they didn't decide to play up, there would be some nice stuff there.
I was also gonna put some md3's in, but I don't know why I didn't.
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Thou canst not kill that which doth not live,
but you can blow it into chunky kibbles!
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Divmax

Copy and paste from the TremWars forum.

Errors I found:
The doors for the bay can get you squished.

What's with the duplicate bay?
Useless box, don't waste precious FPS please.

I can see void.

I'm a developer for the following projects(now I'm inactive) :
TremWars's QVMNot updated anymore
TremWars's Client and Server Executable
TremWars's QVM 2

Kaleo

Copy and paste from the TremWars forum.

Quote from: Deathmax on May 17, 2008, 07:24:11 AM
Errors I found:
The doors for the bay can get you squished.

What's with the duplicate bay?

Yes... That does need fixing. And the duplicate bay is there for looks.

Quote from: Deathmax on May 17, 2008, 07:24:11 AM
Useless box, don't waste precious FPS please.

Patches leak. That box is most necessary.

Quote from: Deathmax on May 17, 2008, 07:24:11 AM

I can see void.


If you didn't have r_clear 1 on, you wouldn't notice it.

Quote from: Stannum
Thou canst not kill that which doth not live,
but you can blow it into chunky kibbles!
I has a cookie, and u can has a cookie, but i no givs u mai cookie...

Divmax

Another copy and paste.

Quote from: Kaleo on May 17, 2008, 09:40:02 AM
Patches leak. That box is most necessary.
You could make it caulk instead of that texture.
Quote from: Kaleo on May 17, 2008, 09:40:02 AM
Yes... That does need fixing.
I recommend playerclip.
I'm a developer for the following projects(now I'm inactive) :
TremWars's QVMNot updated anymore
TremWars's Client and Server Executable
TremWars's QVM 2

Kaleo

Quote from: Divmax on May 17, 2008, 09:49:47 AM
Another copy and paste.

Quote from: Kaleo on May 17, 2008, 09:40:02 AM
Patches leak. That box is most necessary.
You could make it caulk instead of that texture.
Quote from: Kaleo on May 17, 2008, 09:40:02 AM
Yes... That does need fixing.
I recommend playerclip.

The Box: That texture is harder to see that if I had it caulked. I had it caulked originally.
Door: I do too.
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but you can blow it into chunky kibbles!
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Kaleo

Quote from: Stannum
Thou canst not kill that which doth not live,
but you can blow it into chunky kibbles!
I has a cookie, and u can has a cookie, but i no givs u mai cookie...