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Re: Fightenen: The begnining
« Reply #90 on: December 20, 2008, 07:50:15 am »
The start of us, How screwed we are.

"Dude, I'm scared, I'm fucking scared." Those words chilled me beyond belief. Dayton Perrera, AKA. "Derra" was the heart and soul of our squad. My best friend, and also, I think, the best friend of everyone else in the squad.

"It's ok man, really, it's not too bad" consoled James McRosen, Squad MassDriver, "we're almost done with this."

"No, it's not ok, it's not fucking ok!" I think Derra shivered. "I'm sick to death of this shit."

"This is the marines man," I said. I  "If you want easy.."

"My Brother's in the Home Defense dude."

"I was going to say you should'a stayed home on the ranch."

"All I know man, is I'm giving up, I can't take this any longer." Derra stared off into space, looking out the window and sighed. "I signed up to fight here man! And all I know is these marches. Fucking day and night, miles and miles and miles of this shit. And almost no food or water. We're not fucking clones, man we need food every now and than!"

"Fuck the military man, what the hell were we thinking?" James Thouh was also a tough ass kind of guy. To see him diss the military out like this scared me bad too.

I sighed and looked out the window, even though there wasn't really anything interesting to see. Just barren red plains and the occasional Glone-tree. Pitiful excuse for a planet. And the disturbing thought I had was... it summed up our lives quite nicely.

Derra started shaking again, his arms making violent movements across his body. We all turned back towards him and stared. "This is the part that's really scaring me guys. I think my body is eating itself. I can feel my lips are ripped and thin. Not because of the heat, you know there isn't any on this planet. But I think it's because it has a lot of fat. It's something I can take easily. And my neck too! I can feel the veins pounding in my neck. Pulsating extra hard, because there's no water to help move things along."

"We act or we die." Timmy Martinez didn't speak much, but when he did you had better listen.

"Yah dude, maybe, but..." Derra never finished that sentence. The barracks door swung open and in marched 1st lieutenant Marshall, asshole of the universe.

"What the hell are you men doing?" He drawled, spitting on the dirty, hard floor. "Get going! Time to clean the cafeteria."

"Sir, with all due respect, we're not supposed to be on clean-up duty till next week." I respected Derra for that, I doubt I would have had the backbone to stand up to Marshall like that.

"You fuckin' will go an clean up now, you dirty soldier." He leaned into Derra's face, and breathed, a wretched, whiskey filled breath I could smell from where I was into Derra's nose. "Do it... Now!"

And that's when it all started. And ended. Derra went beyond his snapping point. I saw the veins bulge in his face as he snarled, and then crossed. With all the might he could generate at such close quarters, Derra thrust his fist into 1st lieutenant Marshall's neck. I heard the impact, like the twanging of a rubber band, and Marshall collapsed, unconscious onto the floor.

"Oh.., shit!" That gasp of speech was echoed by the entire squad. We all knew we were in deep, deep trouble from that moment on. I don't think I was actually scared, but I knew I was anxious as hell.

"We better get out of here guys!" My voice screeched in a nervous tone. "Who knows what shit they'll do to us for this."

"Us?" Derra said. "There's no us. It's just me, I was the only one who did this."

"Forget it." McRosen cried. "We'll all get thrown in blender for this one, and you know it."

"Besides," said Thouh, "we're not leaving you behind, not to... these guys."

At that moment we heard heavy footsteps pounding down the hallway, rushed ones, not likely to be pleasant. We knew they had cameras everywhere, watching us. The second they saw Marshall go down the officers must have rallied troops to hunt us down. We all stared around, and as if in slow motion, we all saw our one way out. We spun around and rushed for the door that led to the airlocks. I reached the door out of our barracks at the same time that the first soldiers, riot-shotguns in hand, stepped through the doorway on the other end.

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Re: Querulous: The Juddering: The Fractal Zion Incident
« Reply #91 on: December 20, 2008, 08:04:02 am »
CODE CRYPTS -- ********

Start transmission:

An entire fleet has been lost just last week. Word from the emperor is still not forthcoming. Rumor in the palaces is that the psys freaked out. Without them, as you know, we hardly stand a chance against our enemies. I sure as hell don't like these guys, they creep me out to be honest. Always in those dark rooms, I don't think one has seen the sun his entire life. In fact, rumor is they really don't. Born in some cryptic vault 1000 miles long some hundred miles below the surface of Earth. When they grow old, say five, they are moved to tele-communications training rooms where the Emperor himself uses that witchcraft like mind-bond they call "Psyphere" to control men, and more importantly clones from millions of miles away. They say some are born without eyes, or ears, or mouths. Something about physical connection interfering with their abilities to tele-communicate. I never really liked those freaks, low excuse for a human being I thought. And now, they've flipped. Or so I hear. Something about mass brain meltdown. They said the psyclon just collapsed, and all the psys screamed and collapsed. I don't actually know anyone who was there of course, but very dark images come to mind just imagining the stuff. These withered husks of men, with minds containing the abilities to leap across distances greater than most men will ever travel in their life time. I heard they screamed, they cried, they twisted, they warped. I've been told they received mutations, great ungodly stuff. Who knows what is true, and what merely fiction? I know this stuff seems pretty crazy, but from what I've seen, and what I've heard all my life, I wouldn't put a lot of this stuff past them. One thing that does seem to be clear however, judging from the fact that at least eight independent sources have told me the same thing more or less is this. That at the moment just before they all went wacko, they all cried out together. The same words, in the same tone. From what I've been told, they all cried: "Her power, it's too great! Who could imagine that those so simple have such a great psy-mind! We can not contain her!" And all this just after we found a homeworld too....

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Re: Querulous: The Juddering: The Fractal Zion Incident
« Reply #92 on: December 21, 2008, 05:18:21 pm »
I think there's enough stuff in here to turn trem into an RPG. :D
I realise this probably isn't what you meant, but once upon a time (long ago) I was working on a Tremulous d20 adaptation.
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Re: Shuddersome: The Dice-Rolling: The Dungeon Master Incident
« Reply #93 on: December 22, 2008, 02:02:37 am »
I think there's enough stuff in here to turn trem into an RPG. :D
I realise this probably isn't what you meant, but once upon a time (long ago) I was working on a Tremulous d20 adaptation.

Tabletop Tremulous - I've been dreaming about this, since I've been working on that other little project.

Two questions:

1) How far did you get?
2) Any chance you can make it work with this?

And don't be surprised to see a board game somewhere in this thread. It's been bouncing around in my brain for weeks. ;)

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Re: Querulous: The Juddering: The Fractal Zion Incident
« Reply #94 on: December 22, 2008, 04:01:15 am »
1.) Not very. I had statted out weapons and changed a fair amount of the feats around to be more Tremmy. Ultimately, Tremulous doesn't lend itself very well to d20. For one thing, one half of Tremulous comes in the form of playing Aliens, which is a kind of thing that the system isn't really fit to handle. And you'd have to take a lot of liberties with what defines "Tremulous": is it the way the game is played (FPS/RTS hybrid of humans versus aliens), or is it the underlying story/atmosphere (mercenary armies hired by corporations to defend corporate interests from an alien scourge). The latter lends itself well to tabletop RPGs, but doesn't have the same feel as the computer game; while the former might as well just be adapted directly to a board game/wargame. Also, it's an awful lot of work. If I were to do it again I'd probably adapt a different system for use, or just come up with something new altogether.

2.) I haven't been keeping up with that thread since it was first posted and don't have the time to go through it now, but if I were to do this again, I don't see why I wouldn't be able to.
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Re: Quavering: The Incomprehensible: The Mosh Rave Incident
« Reply #95 on: December 23, 2008, 12:12:02 am »
-from War of the Power Trios, a solar-weekly review by Eno Reyalp, Centauri Tightcasting, a division of POP!-o-ganda Interglobal Viral Media, LLC, early 41st Cent. (ICE)

Caduceus - Crow in the Snow
Glamour of Winter - Amorous Glamorous Clamorous
Green Lion - Eating the Sun

read the marquee outside. I had brought my dearest Bettarina to see first-hand the ancient, forbidden spectacle of the Merfolk Pageant: live, in-person, for herself. Oh, like the rest of us, she had said the prayers and read the chants, played the games and attended the festals, but she had never actually seen the short-form of the battle-pit, never experienced the sweat, blood and gears of the Extravaganza Extraordinaire. The sheer, bludgeoning, screaming, deadly ritual combat of the Trio vs. Trio vs. Trio Skirmish, the Three-way Fight for Metallic Honor and Shameless Braggadocio. We sat in the stands, far enough away to get a good view of the whole arena-club. I didn't want to be down front, with the hardcore Tremble-freaks, or in the pit, with the slaughter-fodder, the Suicide Kids who wanted to destroy the latest incarnation of themselves in communal seppuku.

We had both had a bit too much of the Lux Stim by then, as the pulsing red lights chased patterns around the OLED pixel-panels that covered every exposed surface in the place, including the floor, walls and ceiling. The patterns could be used to induce calm and a quiet sense of meditative contemplation, but they could also be used to create a sense of fever-pitched anticipation: with every twitch-fiber of a person's whole being acutely attuned to the whims of the fight-or-flee mechanism; and with every pulse of angry red, the answer, more and more, became FIGHT! - flashing like a lurid neoglo sign on the forehead of every mosh-raving lunatic in the building. The crowd, all of them ready to spit out their pent-up teen-clone angst and mutant-offspring aggression, walked in the door pissed, and ready to kill and die. Now they were about one power chord shy of eating one another alive.

And then, with a clamor and a clangor, flaming gongs rose from the center of the battle-pit, as robot arms beat them senseless with gigantic mallets and cruel-looking war-hammers. The main show was about to begin. The audience in the stands arose, as one, and flung their seat cushions into the battle-pit, to further enrage and excite the beserker-fans and head-banging shock-troops. Around the outside of the Pit, three stages began rising, also coming up from out of the floor, each decorated differently, but each funereal in its aspect, as horrible, terrifying and grotesque as the latest advances in wireless power transmission and pyschopathological mass-gestalt scenic design would allow.

I took a moment to take in the scene, as the gongs sank back into the floor, and a giant, torus-shaped tank arose to take its place, filled with Merfolk diver-dancers swirling like fish in a school - moving always as a group - darting this way and then flashing back, capriciously circling in endless whorls. The tank had luminescent flora and fauna within it, which gave off coruscating illumination in tawdry shades of aqua and lime, salmon and peach: blind albino cave carp with brown-black cat-o-nine-tail feeler bundles - tipped with tiny blue-and-gold lanterns wrought by the dwarf-elven kith of the Nymphfolk - swam alongside the mermen and nymphs; bioluminescent coral, spiny urchins, star-flowering anemone, glowing sponges and oversized sea-cucumbers - all throbbed eerily, with an uncanny, inner light. It was hard to make out the dance of the synchronized swimmers, rim-lit and darkly shadowed as they were in that big, donut-shaped aquarium, but there was something sinuous, sensuous and weirdly seductive about the choreography of their movements as a group, as if they formed some larger entity, which they had called up from the Black Depths of Deepest Darkocean with their bodily incantations. As they moved faster and faster around the tank, it too, sank back into the floor, which folded back into place as if the tank had never been there. As the last of the floor panels snapped into position, the three outer stages exploded into glorious, flaming life.

Giant braziers, tiny torches, great banks of candle-stands, all blazed into searing, burning illumination simultaneously. My pupils reflexively saved my retinas, but I could feel the heat on my face, and smell the singe of fine hair on every body between me and the three stages. And then the ring announcer came down from a freshly-opened hole in the ceiling, standing on a massive hook, supported by a thick chain, descending over the crowd.

"Clone-sons and vat-daughters: Are you ready to RUMBLE?!?"

The crowd went wild. I swear I could see fights breaking out, down there in the Pit.

"I can't hear you! I said ARE YOU READY TO RUMBLE?!?!?"

There was an even bigger roar, and now I was sure I could see little skirmishes, as fans of one band started stomping those of another, while those of the third band cracked the heads of the other two.

"I'm gonna ask you people just one more time, and if I don't hear some noise down there, there ain't gonna be no show tonight. Now, are you people ready to RUMBLE, or not?!?!?!"

It was at that point that the riot in the Pit spilled over into the stands, and I got Bettarina out of there before she got hurt. We didn't even get to the hoverpark before she was all over me. I knew right then that it had been a mistake to bring her.

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Re: Droningly: The Positronic: The Fancy-Meeting-Me-Here Incident
« Reply #96 on: December 23, 2008, 08:12:23 am »
-from the personal daily autoblogger of Joss the Dub, recovered from an abandoned jumpboat found orbiting Kosimov Seventeen, 4197 ICE

I got Bettarina outside of the venue pretty quickly. I almost blew my cover when some oafish idiot tried to slamdance Betty, and then realizing what he'd bumped into, tried to grope her, with me standing there grinning like a fool and holding her hand. I let go her of soft hand and elbow-smashed him in the mouth, breaking his front teeth, the sharp stumps of which slashed me pretty badly. If he'd had time to recover, he would have destroyed me, but I punched him in the throat with my other hand, a short, quick, shitty jab, but it knocked the wind half out of him, just the same. As he wheezed and clutched at his throat, I stomped down as hard as I could across his instep, then kneed him in the groin, and as he lurched forward, I palm-smashed his nose into his face. I wanted to kill him. When I saw his meaty mitts pawing my Bettarina - I snapped. His friends started looking ugly, and I was sure I was either going to have to pull a weapon or flash a badge, when one of them got a samovar-hookah smashed over his head, and his buddy turned around right into a flying kick thrown by some little guy that came out of nowhere. The place was complete bedlam. Everyone was smiting anyone they could lay hands, feet, or blunt objects on.

We made it to the hoverpark without much further hassle, as by then she was scared shitless, and I looked really pissed, not just whipped-up-on-Lux-Stim pissed. Even the huge guy at the door let us pass, without even so much as a "No re-entry." He even tat-stamped me on my bare arm on the way out, with a bar-coder in henna ink, so I could get back in. When I looked up at him, he just looked away.

I beeped my drone immediately. Actually, he was already on standby, and came down off the roof of the building, following behind us, and sending me video of what was around us. I got Betty to the hoverpark, and into my terraplane - a Redroni GEX 327z that I used to take out for races with carboxyl truck-trains on the Schiaperelli Freeway, old Mars One, back in the House of Haos days - where we spent some time expressing our devotion for one another, and then I had the drone put her in a charter hansom, and started to head back inside. I couldn't wait for her cab with her, I had to meet someone inside. I could see that she was hurt, but as she was fond of the drone, and considered it her confidante in her conquest of me, she took it in good cheer. It broke my heart to leave her there, but if anyone had so much as looked sideways at her, the drone would've tasered them into next week, blown out their eardrums, disrupted their central nervous system functioning until they shit themselves silly and filled their exposed orifices with capsicum powder. Needless to say, the drone was very fond of Betty.

It had always been a very dependable companion, and was my most trusted partner in situations requiring extreme discretion, such as this. I was probably burning the candle at both ends a little, trying to boff the heir-apparent to the Betelgurz Board Chair, while at the same time investigating a triple-duplicide, but what the hell? I was young, and you only live nine times, right? Besides, the "real" "me" (if there was such a person), was somewhere in the Outer Southern Rim by now, three-and-a-half Jumps and an omniverse away from here, and I was just a hastily-rendered low-res field-dub, not even a fully-registered dupe, so I was feeling pretty expendable and pretty invincible right about then. A dub like me, nailing an heiress like that. It was the kind of stuff you'd expect to see in a perfume banner-vid on a bluehair simspace.

I was having weird thoughts, but I figured they were an effect of the Lux Stim. I knew I had to get back inside. I guess I could just walk right back in the front door, with my nice bar-stamp, but for some reason, I just didn't trust the guy at the door. Too damned friendly. Could he be my contact? I wished I knew more. I had only been "alive" for a week now, having been incarnated only recently. Apparently "I" had had "me" stashed on "my" jumpboat, and activated "myself", and then took off, for parts unknown, after the briefest briefing known to clonekind.

"Just take the girl to see a show or something. Keep her entertained."

"But what will we talk about?"

"Don't worry. By tomorrow you'll start to remember things you didn't think you knew. Everything will come back to you. It'll all be fine."

"And what, hold her hand?"

"Hell, no. You're me, remember? By the time I get back you'd better have married her, and be raising my family."

"Don't you mean my family?"

"By then you'll be ready for a break from domesticity, my friend. We'll simply switch places and off you'll go, on to your next adventure, someplace warm, with lots of exotic vat-daughters and winsome indigenous locals to keep you company."

"And who will be around to advise me, when I screw this up completely?"

"Why Terrible North Wind, of course," we answered simultaneously.

"You see?" he said, "I'm feeling more confident already."

And then he left.

The drone beeped me.

"She's on her way home. I'm back in position. Going in the front door?"

"No fasking wai," I said.

"There's a smart clone. I found a way in, up on the roof. Get your ass up here."

"Good drone," I said, and headed around behind the building, to the spot the drone was sending me video of.

"Climb the fence, grab the fire escape, climb to the top, and jump up onto the railing. I'll drop you a line."

"You always were a smart drone."

"You've only known me since last week."

"Drone, I feel like I've known you my whole life."

"Great, another smart-ass dub. Don't fuck this up. I don't want to have to redub Joss, without authorization."

"Hey, I'm Joss, so don't you have to listen to me?"

"Oh, yeah, that would be a great idea."

"No matter what happens, I hereby authorize you to keep re-dubbing me until I marry that girl."

"You get nine tries, and then I can't get another usable copy, without fresh source material."

"Nine tries, huh?"

"Yeah, nine, smart guy, so use them wisely."

"Y'know, I think I'm starting to like you."

"In that case, will you do me a personal favor?"

"Anything you like."

"Shut the fuck up and start climbing."

"Nice way to talk. Who programmed you: me?"

"Damn straight and fuckin'-'A'-right, cloneson. See the fence?"

"Yeah, I'm there."

"Start climbing."

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Re: Querulous: The Juddering: The Fractal Zion Incident
« Reply #97 on: December 24, 2008, 12:40:05 am »
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Post-human Cyberpunk.. I love it!

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Re: Querulous: The Juddering: The Fractal Zion Incident
« Reply #98 on: December 24, 2008, 12:52:11 am »
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Post-human Cyberpunk.. I love it!

Sounds like Deus Ex, which sounds like home. I remember a few years back I would read volumes of Deus Ex fan fiction, well, the good ones atleast.

I loved how funny the Drone was btw, but does he have to be such an ass? The clone seems to like him as a brother, but the drone doesn't give a crap, its like it has no feelings at all and only wants to do it's job. Oh wait, nvm then, but the drone is still a jerk. 

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By the time I get back you'd better have married her, and be raising my family."

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Re: Polyhedral: The Self-Regulating: The Prof. Bowlsworth Incident
« Reply #99 on: December 24, 2008, 06:43:39 am »
-from evtp://hyperscribes.vvd/pdas/73_add'l.ebd

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read the sign outside the small kiosk. It was dark inside, almost completely. The "room", if you could call it that, was maybe the size of a big closet, and felt like one. There didn't appear to be anyone there. In the dimness, I could make out a waist-high counter, dividing the space in about half. The walls of the interior part were lined with every bootleg fad device and illegal concealed stunner I had ever seen a factsheet on. Behind me, steps led up to a back alley, behind an empty warehouse, in the run-down part of the resindustrial rururbs, on the rail-farm flats above Pondsey Basin. I hadn't seen anyone I'd want to do business with in the last six block-hamlets, including the last four souls I'd passed, living in doorways they'd never crossed the thresholds of: a Mer-kid in party mask and furry dress, slumped in the first, wearing his iLux, and stimmed out of his head; a Naiad-nymph servicing a Merc Marine behind a sort of drape in the next, while hollering at me, "Cantcha see I ain't done here yet, doppel-boy?"; and some Grundaemon priestess relieving herself in the last, while smiling at me and waving a Good Morning, gathering up her habit with the other hand. This was a pretty freaky neighborhood at dawn, but then so was the rest of Neapolis. That's why I had come here, specifically to Pondsey Mills. I needed a drone. A discreet drone. From a private source.

Betty had known a dealer, back on Centauri Cloister, and had given me his name: Professor Bince Bowlsworth. I'd been jumping around the Middle South'ards, looking for the guy, and the trail had finally brought me here, to a basement closet storefront in the crappiest part of the most corrupt open port on a has-been little worldlet of the Redolent Vectors. And there I stood like a dope, waiting for someone to wait on me, in a dark and cramped space barely big enough to turn around and walk out of. Which is just what I was about to do when I heard a voice. It sounded a lot like my own.

"Can I help you?"

I squinted harder in the gloom, but I still couldn't make out anyone. I didn't see any back room, or partition, other than the counter. I peered over the counter, looking down into the deeper shadows there. I don't know what I expected to find.

"What're you looking for, a leprechaun?"

The voice was coming from behind the counter, but much closer to the level of my head. I raised my gaze, to rest on a small, greyish box which rested on the shelf across from my face.

"Yeah, you. I'm talking to you, pal. Can I help you?"

It was definitely my voice, coming out of the little box, asking me if it could help me.

"I'm looking for a drone."

"Well, you came to the right place. I happen to be a drone."

"I'm looking for a person, actually."

"Which is it, pal: a person or a drone?"

"Both, actually."

"OK, let's say I'm interested. Does either the person or the drone have a name?"

"Bowlsworth. Bince Bowlsworth."

"That's Professor Bince Bowlsworth," the drone corrected me.

"Professor Bince Bowlsworth," I parroted, robotically.

"In that case, my friend, you've come to the right place. Not only am I a drone, I just happen to be that particular person. Or one of his iterations, at least."

as told to the author by Juan Jose Master-Dub, in an arena-club on Neano Three, during the Solo Champion competition, sometime in the late 4030s

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Re: Duplicitous: The Multi-Layered: The MERC Meeting Incident
« Reply #100 on: January 04, 2009, 09:06:46 am »
-from the personal recollections of Joss the Dub, as told to the author in the Deep-Winter Calling of the Kith-Clade, in the Lodge of the Last of the Haldens, 4209 ICE, North North Grand Islet, Portkin Holdings Polarward, NSH, FZ BIIIb, OSSZ

The RKFF came and got me. I woke up in a squat-cage on Multa, two-and-a-half jumps away. Lord Brightness came to see me. I'd never seen myself look so unhappy.

"Look, son-"

"I'm not your son-" I cut in, but he cut me off, backhanding me cruelly across the mouth.

"Shut your cakehole, before I have you wiped. What do you think you are: special? We'd all like to spend our days banging dubs of my ex-wife and our nights dying in the Pit at the Merfolk Pageant, but there's work to be done, boy. No more needler-derringer duels with Ye Drecche-killer's clone-sons, no more embarrassing elopements with his vat-daughters. Now clean yourself up and get back on task. Listen to the drone, and do what it says. We won't have this talk again. A pleasure meeting you, as always."

I'd never met him before, and would never see him again. But I knew right then that they'd messed with the wrong clone. Don't threaten me. Either do it or shut up. I grew up that day. That was the day I decided to teach Daddy a little lesson.

as told to the author by the drone Terrible North Wind, near the worldlet known as Barnstar, 4242 ICE

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Re: Frangible: The Shivering: The Frozen Zygotes Incident
« Reply #101 on: January 19, 2009, 11:30:25 am »
-from the personal reflections of Joss the Unclean, poet-philosopher of the Oracle Aflame

The "child" appeared to be a young man of nineteen Old Time years, but he was actually only seven by such reckoning; he'd been "born" looking like an almost-exact copy of me when I was nineteen, when I'd had my first Master Copy made and my Personal Groove laid down. My wife-sister-cousin, Bettarina the Beloved, (if indeed it was her, and not one of her many agents or dubs), had brought along my youngest clone-son (that she knew of) to meet his father, and accompany his vat-mother (my sweet dearest Centuari Merfolk Rigel-Kentish betrothed) on her business Jumps about the Southern Starsprawl. His name, of course, was the same as my own. Or nearly so. It was the custom of our people to provide some differentiation betwixt iterations of the same individual, lest our histories become indecipherable repetitions of the same few billion names, endlessly recursive.

Betty had named him Jamshid Omar Samuel Sergei von Rigel-Kent van Halden-Bettelgürz, and the court back at home had dubbed him Jocelyn the Inward-Peering, for the youth was of an introspective and reflective sort, more suited to the Dedicant pursuits of the novitiate Guilder than to the duties and responsibilities of a Duplicant agent of a grasping and hardy kith-clade, clawing its way to dynastic glory and austral-celestial-hemispheric hegemony.

He had brought with him a pet, a most interesting and robust specimen of Eurymela Fenestrata: a common jassid or austral cricket. He kept it in a small round box, made of woven grasses and exotic tree-barks, and would drink tea, burn incense and meditate, communing with the cricket and chanting old codices, for hours at a stretch, in a loft we had given him above the Great Room of the Centaur's Lodge, my hunting quonset on North North Grand Islet. I had come here for the Deep-Winter Calling of the Kith-Clades, when the Rigel-Kentish clonefolk of Centauri Pageant heritage met for feasting, drinking, exchange of diversity and discourse of genealogy; when the Sons of the Slide and Daughters of the Dish celebrated the ancient, festive ways of the First Colony.

Bettarina and I stood outside the clustered huts and scattered yurts, our backs to the quonset lodges and mead-halls, facing the deepening black-purple of the advancing night, as a Clusterday lupper such as neither of us had experienced in decades filled our bellies, and made us sentimental, nostalgic and foolish. She was wearing a grey-and-crimson weatherskin, with emblems of the RKFF proudly emblazoned on the shoulders and across her chest. Campaign ribbons adorned her left breast, while emblems of rank and service stripes decorated the sleeves. She wore a retro half-bubble helmet, with a rose-tinted face shield. She had never looked lovelier, and I knew her better than anyone in the Seventeen Systems.

Huge flakes of snow were falling, and the clouds looked so low you could almost touch them. We had walked far enough away from the encampment that the sounds of revelry within were drowned by the blanketing silence without. She was holding my hand: gloved fingers gracefully offered to clumsy mitt. Although the Brindus Cluster was down, Al-Guhl had not yet set; this time of the Haldanian year, however, it was so distant and paltry, that one could barely discern it from the stars of other systems. Blutogardis hung somewhere above, hidden by the snuggling coverlet of thick, heavy snow-clouds, dumping flakes the size of Guilder-thalers at a rate that seemed sure to bring several feet an hour. She was talking to me, gently admonishing me for not being with her during the High Holy Holidays of the Merfolk.

"I can't believe you thought we wouldn't be together for the Calling," she said.

"I thought your business would have kept you away from such backwater worldlets as this, beloved," I replied.

She turned toward me, gently bumping her faceplate against mine.

"We shall always be together," she said.

"And this latest boy-toy of yours?"

"Your son--" she began. Exasperated, she pushed me away.

"Did you really think that lunkhead dub and silly drone were going to keep me occupied?" she asked. "With what, yet another night at the mosh-fights?"

"I didn't know it was so important to you," I lied.

"You know I've always been a traditional girl," she returned the favor, turning back toward me, and taking my arm and wrapping it around herself, pulling me into a hug.

"Yes. dear," I said.

"Don't start that again," she said.

"Let's go back inside."

"Wait just a minute longer," she said. "I want to remember this."

We looked off towards the woods, where the hex signs and distelfink lanterns clattered softly, a very gentle breeze turning and twisting them, as if inspecting their handiwork, and admiring their quaint homespun charm. She held my hand, and we both breathed a sigh, enjoying the scene of a tradition long dead.

She turned back to her drone, and the team from Corporate Media Investor Relations.

"Did you get that? Good, that's a wrap, kids. Post that to my metablog immediately, and have the lifter ready to make contact with my Jumper within the hour."

She turned back to me. "Always lovely to see you, darling." She blew me a little kiss, gloved hand waving a virtual smooch from lovely lips behind a rosy-pink faceplate.

"Yeah, you too, kid. Don't break this one, OK? We may need a ready dub, for a quick gig or an extended vice-royalty."

"I'll take the best of care of him."

Later, after she'd gone, Old Cedric Weltischer came into the mead-hall.

"You look happy," he said.

"My ex is fucking the latest version of me," I replied.

"At least she has good taste. Talk about your vicarious thrills. C'mon, I'll buy you a tankard and you can dance with a dozen of the Larboard-daughters."

"That'll probably do it."

"If it doesn't, you can always kill yourself tomorrow."

"I guess you're right," I said.

"Of course I'm right. I was right when I blew this stinking shithole of a planet up the first time."

"Yeah, well, let's not do that again, shall we?"

"Oh, things didn't turn out so bad. Plenty more dupes and dubs where those came from."

"C'mon you callous sonuvabitch, you can buy me that tankard now, and we can reminisce about your martial heroics another time."

"Help me up."

I helped him get up. One of these days, I was gonna haveta get him to get some upgrades. He really was starting to look like shit. If only the omniverse knew. Ked the Great, St. Cedric of Titan, the Savior of Brindus, was a broken-down Original Unmodified living in a cold corner of the forgotten planemo he once almost completely destroyed.

"I'm gonna get really drunk," I said.

"Not if I see you first," he said.

"What?" "Huh?" We both replied at the same time.

"Fuck it," he said.

"Let's have that drink."

I helped him over to the bar, and true to his word, he got me drunk and even tried to help get me laid, introducing me to every kin-cousin and kith-sister in the mead-hall, making them dance with me, and then slipping out quietly, leaving me in the company of some ladies from the Western Isles. Maybe he was a saint, after all. That was the last time I saw him, Bettarina or young Jocelyn the Cricketeer. And I've been to almost every Deep-Winter Calling since.

as told to the author by the drone Soul of a Wild Thing, at the Post-trans-meta-xenohuman Conclave, Unvanquished Confederation, 4190 ICE

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Re: Querulous: The Juddering: The Fractal Zion Incident
« Reply #102 on: January 19, 2009, 11:16:03 pm »
This is the fucking best bit you have written so far. I LOVE how that intimate meeting turns around to be a PR action. Very nice!

Also: "distelfink" rofl. I laughed out loud. Really.

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Re: Querulous: The Juddering: The Fractal Zion Incident
« Reply #103 on: January 19, 2009, 11:24:09 pm »
Wow, you got me there when they were actually acting but it was sad that it was fake, but you know your obsessed if you date the clone of your Ex.

>.>

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Re: Querulous: The Juddering: The Fractal Zion Incident
« Reply #104 on: January 19, 2009, 11:43:24 pm »
It's all clones these days... >.<

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Re: Friends of Q: TJ: TFZI
« Reply #105 on: January 20, 2009, 12:38:31 am »
Thank you both immensely for your feedback and praise. It's really awesome to have the comments of a sympathetic audience.

By the by, I'm a real seat-of-the-pants writer, so I didn't know that part about the video crew was going to happen until about a sentence before it did. I love it when the characters tell me what they're going to say. That's when I know I have enough back story that they are taking on a life of their own.

@B: Found that word in an almanac article about barnstars. Great word, and it opened up a whole vista of New Amsterdaam/Pennsylvania Deutsch influences that were in accord with my view of these colonists and their planetary backwater.

@both: Yeah, the whole clone concept just started to snowball once I wrapped my mind around the concept of incarnations being like beta releases of software iterations or low-resolution copies of a CD burn.

Cheers, gentle readers.

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Re: Unvanquished: Still Standing: The Final Payoff Incident
« Reply #106 on: January 28, 2009, 06:11:18 am »
Rigel-Kent, Lord Jocelyn the Bright, 111th Vice-ducal Adjutant for Historiographical Affairs, RKFF, Firelord House Virtual Media. Myths of the "Third Race": Project Unvanquished and Interglobal Zaibatsu Xenohuman Experimentation in the 39th C. in the New Far South, OR What Goes on Outside of the Pink Corridor Stays Outside of the Pink Corridor. Dirtwater Junction, Big Pilings Outrider Route #3, Lifter-Post Alpha, Rhubarb Ridge, NSH, FZ BIIIb, OSSZ, IG_17, 4203 ICE.

It is said of the Unvanquished, that they wear black in memory of their fallen ancestors, who were human lab rats in interglobal zaibatsu cloning experiments:

There is a rumor that the original Unvanquished Project was a joint Haos Redro/Tumbo Manufacturing xenohuman development project (back in the 39th or 40th Century) that instead produced misbegotten monstrosities and mutated abominations, which were abandoned to their hellish fate on cruel planetoids and harsh moonlets. These half-human beasts were said to have been arcane attempts to recreate the demon-beings of ancient folklore, utilizing the latest advances in metaphysickal physicks and alchimerical chemicks, and combining these with non-human genetic material, obtained during the Fire-bat Eradication Wars. The plan was to produce a "Third Race" of creature-people, as super-soldiers, to aid Humanity, should another Alien menace arise. Then, as any schoolboy knows, Ked Ambrit was sent to fight the Evolving Arthrosaurian Aliens in the Fractal Zion system in the late 4020's. Now, decades or even centuries of Old Time years later, these bastard step-children of fringe science and forgotten mysticism have not only survived on the worst worldlets of the Uninhabitable Zone, they have thrived, and are returning to destroy the Humans who created and then abandoned them, and the Aliens who slaughtered them in their time of weakness and despair. Before: they had been freaks; and their heads had been bowed. Now: they stand tall. Now: they hold their heads up high. Now: they are feared by Human and Alien alike. Now they are: Unvanquished.

Others still say such talk is rubbish, and that the Unvanquished are older than the pyramids of Firststar's Greenworld, as old as the makers of the Mines of Al-Minak, who walked the sands of Greenworld when the Man-faced Lion was a Lion-headed Man, and are the guides of the One throughout this Precessionary Epoch. Only the Übergeist can say for sure, and she ain't talking. If the Unvanquished hadn't filed all of those class action lawsuits on behalf of the Sapients and Sentients of the Omniverse, resisting Hyparxial Picodestruction, HR Holdings and Tumbo Designs might have just destroyed the omniverse, and all of Experiential Virtuality, one tiny nano-nano-chunk at a time. Still, the cost to the Executrix must have been huge. She has called for the heads of the Unvanquished leaders - six mysterious characters, one of each class, the Six Originals - to be displayed in the Hall of Heads on Multa, the sacking and pillaging of their planemos and their nitre-encrusted relics, and the razing and sundering of their haunted and holy temples. An alliance with the Big Mofo Bugs may be in the offing. But by which side?


-from The Bloviator: News Right Fresh from Heaven

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Re: Four Pages: Ten Tuesday's: The Sledge-Moose Incident
« Reply #107 on: January 28, 2009, 08:01:06 am »
I'd like to thank mooseberry, + OPTIMUS +, Hendrich, Bissig, Seffylight, khalsa, Nux, Roanoke, f0rqu3, Lava Croft, Kaleo, yahoo and all of the other people who contributed in some way to this thread, mostly for inspiration, critique, encouragement and nurturing; but especially mooseberry, for being the co-creator, and coming up with all of the cool stuff; for + OPTIMUS +, just for being himself, so obviously the character Prime; for the Eternal Lovers immortalized as Anfidgean and Flovat; to khalsa for a place to display my wares; to Nux for the nifty science discussions, and to zybork for playing along; Hendrich and Bissig my regular readers; to Seffylight for the kind words of encouragement; to Roanoke for the enthusiasm for zany ideas; to Kaleo and yahoo for death-prog-thrash-core inspiration; and also my Mom, Jesus and America.

It's been a joyride through the Nadirward Vectors of Outer South Nowhere, an omniverse of dubs and dupes, of clones and drones.

Cheers, y'all! Thanks for coming along. For now, this drone is returning to semi-retirement.

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Re: Querulous: The Juddering: The Fractal Zion Incident
« Reply #108 on: January 30, 2009, 06:28:09 am »
*Sniff*

I'm gunna miss you buddy. But don't worry, I got a great surprise coming.  :police:
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Re: <i>Q: TJ: TFZI</i>
« Reply #109 on: January 30, 2009, 08:10:09 am »
@mooseberry: Thanks, buddy. I look forward to your next installment. I was gonna PM you, but tears and snot mess up my trackpad (and I think I've got something in my eye). Also, I wasn't sure if you were still into this. With the Unvanquished mod taking off, I just don't have the time to devote to so many projects. I've still got one installment of the story that won't leave me alone, and insists on being told, which will force itself out of my head and through my fingertips sometime soon. Thanks again for the collaboration, the inspiration, the great ideas, and the awesome work. It really jump-started my writing, and it was great for once not to be so lonely while doing it. Warmest regards.

And I forgot to thank Amanieu for his kind support of my ideas. Best blurb ever! And a bit of the inspiration for my current project.

Cheers!

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Re: Querulous: The Juddering: The Fractal Zion Incident
« Reply #110 on: February 22, 2009, 10:21:00 pm »
ZOMGFTW best human story ever, like the creatures in the beginning

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Re: Querulous: The Juddering: The Fractal Zion Incident
« Reply #111 on: May 06, 2009, 07:22:34 pm »
how did i miss this lol

bunch of fucking virgins

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Re: Noticeable: The All-Knowing: The It-Takes-One-to-Know-One Incident
« Reply #112 on: May 07, 2009, 02:41:07 am »
i'll be sure to mention that to my grandkids

and thx 4 ur support
 
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Re: Querulous: The Juddering: The Fractal Zion Incident
« Reply #113 on: May 07, 2009, 04:11:36 am »
how did i miss this lol

bunch of fucking virgins

That was our problem.
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Re: Querulous: The Mad Liberator: The Fractal Zion Reincidence
« Reply #114 on: February 08, 2010, 08:56:06 pm »
The Revisiting
Extraordinary Rendition Center

Mulva Moonlet

4031 ICE



Ked sat mutely in the inspection cubicle, arms folded limply over the black document case in his lap. He stared down at the black obsidian-like floor. It seemed to envelop him. Decadent. Hedronian soulstone - transport costs alone were above 20 million credits, by now. Lives were most definitely lost mining in the turbulent conditions of that not-so-recently discovered planetoid. Your life for this floor. We can - and will - walk on you. We do it every day.

He heard heels clicking down one of the long corridors, off to his left. He didn’t take his eyes off the reflections in that black, soul-sucking floor. 
He knew this kind of place: the sense of authority - the brooding, over-arching dominance of man by money. Just like the HR Holdings Complex on Titan. The towering crystalline entrance pillars reduce anyone of stature into a mere blemish of shadow on the black floors. That was intentional. If you're diminished in presentation, you stand no chance of gaining leverage with one of the most powerful corporations in the known omniverse. Even less when you were a mute cripple, confined to a hoverchair.



The small yellow sign above the secure corridor flashed on. BEWARE. Why hadn’t he noticed that last time? The slide doors swooshed open revealing a dark elevator platform. Ked cleared his throat querously. At least he could still do that. He felt a quick flush of perspiration all over his body. Could they be doing that? The sign pulsed again. Ked's lip quivered as he whooshed beyond the threshold with an uneasy wobble, his chair functioning poorly.



Breathe. At least he could still breathe. The air didn’t calm him as it should. It tasted of thwarted promise.



Once inside the dimly lit space, the door behind him slammed shut, with a resounding “thwang” which echoed off the distant corridors. The platform fell away below his hoverchair and he plummeted along with it.

Then lights were shining in his eyes - which clicked off as the far end door swung open. Didn’t it slide away last time? Ked hovered toward the end and peered into the cavernous office space. The office was a large semi-circular room with no exterior windows. The harsh green light from Mulva's surface streamed in through light tunnels in the atrium. Freightliners could be heard carbing their engines far overhead - their massive forms preparing to jump though the Void.

Ked trundled out of the corridor sheepishly, realizing that he had been frozen for a moment too long. Again. His gaze moved around the room finding the centerpiece of the office. A large slab of borewood replete with red moldings of synthium. He should have known. Another symbol of decadence. Behind the desk sat a motionless figure, face cast in light from a padpod laying on the desk. He knew that face. Could it be? Had he come all the way here, just to cashier one officer? Ked wondered what they were really making on the World Aflame. He bumbled forward, feeling his apprehension rise, multiplying his need to get out of there.



Run. If only he could get up and run.


"Ked Ambrit." The voice was older and meaner. Ked tried to look away. A scoutliner arced across the horizon on a display off to his left, but he couldn’t tear his eyes away to look at it. Caught in a timeless stare, Ked tried in vain to rip his gaze away from the man. His heart was banging against his ribs, trying to leap from his chest and run away, to leave the rest of his lame and useless body there.



Speak. Breathe. He tried to lick his lips, to swallow, to answer. He felt mute.



"Ye- yessir." His voice was tiny. “Yes, sir.” He tried to bite his own tongue, to stop it from wagging, to make himself salivate, to give his nerves something to bite down onto. But still his throat was dry and acrid. The man behind the desk outstretched a darker, even more skeletal hand than Ked remembered, tossing the padpod device across the sleek surface of the desk. The pod swung around before Ked. There was video playing on its screen. A loop, playing over and over. The destruction of the Fractal Zion Colony.



"As you know, Haos Redro has recently suffered some 'setbacks' in the Brindus system." His voice no longer carried that affected accent the executive used to use, the result of being surrounded by obscene waste his entire, extended, evil life. He still spoke the zaibatsu marketing bullshit, that much was true, but now he just sounded mean, bitter and tired.



Ked said nothing, to avoid looking like a complete asshole.

"These 'setbacks' , if examined, have the ability to make Haos Redro one of the most hated entities in the omniverse." He paused.

Ked knew better than to answer.

"Indeed, Mr. Ambrit, if it were not for some even more recent... 'concerns'." Again that word with that intentional inflection of importance. It wasn't a small problem, this was a 'concern'. Again with the Haos Redro corporate doubletalk. "You're quite aware of the situation, as this act was done at your hand."

Ked wisely remained silent.


"We lost the entire facility at Rhubarb Ridge, decimating our coil-and-rail mating R&D."


Ked knew he better keep his mouth shut.


“Your action has had several results, Mr. Ambrit. The Omniversal Court was unable to find any evidence that HR Holdings contributed in any way to omniversal picodestruction. The levitric-apergic facility at Plowshare was saved, ensuring Tumbo’s dominance in Lux-Beam weaponry for the foreseeable future. And while you may have ruined our chance of being first to market with an updated mass-driver prototype, at least you kept the omniversalists from finding anything. Of course your actions did not slow down the Alien advance one whit. We have, however, found a most useful subject for our Clonal Forces program. A very promising subject indeed. You kept the Company’s interest at heart, Ambrit. You’re our kind of guy. I just wish we had more like you around here. Oh wait - we do." He signaled to a team of guards and orderlies, who appeared with a stretcher and restraints.


"Take him away!”

Ked sat awestruck. Humans had been cloned before, but it had only been to perpetuate their line. Military cloning: this was new and extraordinary.



"Get this asset over to Research." The executive spoke to his drone. "Get me the latest figures on the Ablator/Devivificator Program. I think Nux is padding his budget again."


"Right away, sir." The guards and the drone responded to authority. The feeling of dread sank into his bones now. Ked would keep his job.


"One more thing, Ked." The old man was grinning. It was horrible to see what made a man like this happy, or the way it twisted his ancient face. 
"You will be on the next ship back to Brindus Four, as soon as you've been reassembled as the prototype for our Clonal Forces."



The feeling of dread would never leave him again.

found drone-pengraved on optilisk chitin-hide covering the stock of a concussive blunderbuss, believed to be owned by the Bettlegurz clade, and unearthed, of all places, near their ancient estates, on North North Grand Islet, FZBIIIb

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Re: Querulous: The Juddering: The Fractal Zion Incident
« Reply #115 on: February 09, 2010, 02:53:26 am »
"What the fuck," mooseberry thought quickly to himself. "I saw in an email update that someone had posted in here again, but player1? And with a new story nonetheless? How is this possible..." He quickly scanned the page, and saw more about Ambrit. Deciding to read it all, mooseberry shifted his weight, and dug in for the time. "Wow," he thought to himself when he was finished, "that was quite good!"


Good job! Very, very intriguing, I would love to see more. :D

And now I feel....  :angel:
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Re: Querulous: The Juddering: The Fractal Zion Incident
« Reply #116 on: February 09, 2010, 03:02:59 am »
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