Tyrants Wrath-An Aliens View Of Tremulous.

[ArchPyro]

Awesome, more please. 

[mooseberry]

Lol.

[twigstik97]

Thx guys.
More coming up.


CHAPTER 3
We all guarded the human entrance while my daughter put up defenses .
We heard a human yell out 'COME ON!'.
Me , my brother and the the other dragoons hid.
The newly born dretches wall-walked above the entrance.
My son, now a basilisk , ran into the hallway.
We heard human screams and then a basilisk growl.
My son barged back threw the doorway and laid down.
He was too injured to fight.
Then the dretches stormed through the hallway.
I heard a human yell out 'Dretch storm!!!'.
Once the dretches returned, i ordered my daughter to create acid tubes and trappers around that entrance.
She tried to but she said she felt sick and couldn't...

I ordered her to create an overmind .
That might be the reason.
I suddenly heard 'The overmind has awakened!'
My daughter tried to fill out my previous orders.
She no longer felt sick.
We heard more humans trodding through the hallway.
My son was ready to pounce but i kept him back.
I heard clangs this time...as well as footsteps.
A human opened the doorway...
We were well hidden so he didn't see us.
He walked forward and the acid tubes burst out acid at him.
He tried to retreat but the dretches cut him down.
Then i heard that same clang again.
Clang, Clang, Clang.
Then a door behind us opened.
I felt terrible pain in my back...
My brother swiped at the metal suited human that had ambushed me and killed him.
I walked towards the booster , i started to regenerate quite quickly and my claws had a 'stingy' feeling when i touched it.
Most of the dretches evolved into marauders after the second human attack.
They went out on a hunting trip.

They came back as dragoons , but with a few losses.
I realized that this was our chance..
I ordered a meeting.
Dragoons and tyrants were to stick together.
Dragoons in front and tyrants at back, we would be known as tremulous-delta.
The marauders were going to get into the human base through an alternative doorway and lure the humans out, they will be tremulous-recon.
My son was going to stay back with the other basilisks at base to protect, they will be known as tremulous-xenon
My daughter was to keep building.

We ran towards our positions.
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So, how'd ya like this chapter?

I can give you a sneak peak of the next chapter:
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The Tremor slowly tilted and then started falling towards earth .
All the aliens shreeked and ducked down.
Hoping not to break any bones or limbs on impact.

Ok, hopefully with that preview, you'll want the next chapter.
Btw, the next chapter is shorter than most.

[twigstik97]

HELLO?
Anyone here?

[MitSugna]

It is a poem!

[Repatition]

I want it give it i want it i cry give it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[Archangel]

thanks to you i'm likely to die several years earlier from lung cancer

[Repatition]

really and you wont be making fun of every thing anymore great ill pay for a weed on your grave

[Archangel]

i'd appreciate it if you grew weed on my grave. tokin' from the depths of hell..

[Repatition]

A weed like thistle! not smoking stuff!

[Archangel]

a thistle on my grave would be a beautiful sight.. it is an ancient Celtic symbol describing nobility 

[twigstik97]

thanks to you i'm likely to die several years earlier from lung cancer

Wait, what?

A whole conversation has been going on overnight!

[Baconizer]

Solar, do you like tomatoes? I have a bunch of seeds. Peas, too.

Ooh, wait! If you want, I could rip up the neighbor's rhubarb and plant it on your grave.

[twigstik97]

Can you please stop this conversation and continue it in by pming each other.
I want to know stuff about my story, not weeds and lung cancer.

[Archangel]

Solar, do you like tomatoes? I have a bunch of seeds. Peas, too.

Ooh, wait! If you want, I could rip up the neighbor's rhubarb and plant it on your grave.

cherry tomatoes, please. good memories of childhood eating them by the dozen. ^_^

[mooseberry]

really and you wont be making fun of every thing anymore great ill pay for a weed on your grave

English classes do help you learn a second language better, especially if you will need to use it for anything serious.

[ArchPyro]

The off topic newbs... Yes great story. Post some more

[twigstik97]

OMG..thank you archpyro.
One of the few mature ppl to walk into the forums.

Chapter 4
Tremulous-delta was waiting in front of the main human entrance...
The marauders , Tremulous-recon, were going to tip toe into the side entrance in about 5 minutes.
The marauders shrieked and charged into the base causing minimal damage and then retreated back out the side entrance.
Most of the humans followed them.
The Tremulous-delta charged through the main entrance and cut down the remaining humans and retreated back out again.
We waited to regenerate and then charged through again, we destroyed most of the turrets .
We then went back out to regenerate again.
As soon as we open the door to charge in again, a human squad was standing there.
One with his rifle at my head ...

I wagged my small tail.
That was a signal for the advanced dragoon to snipe the humans.
The advanced dragoon fired poisonous barbs at the humans .
The ones that got hit fell down, the ones who didn't just ducked.
That gave us the opportunity to attack while they were distracted.
The marauders jumped over us and started swiping at the humans.
The dragoons charged in and helped.
Me and my brother stayed at the 2 entrances and killed fleeing humans.

We've so got this, i thought to my self.
The marauders yelped out a victorious screech.
The dragoons immediately ducked down to eat at the dead humans .
Me and my brother destroyed last remaining building.
The reactor .

As soon as we destroyed the reactor, the lights went out and the Tremor stopped moving...
The reactor was the only source of power on the ship...
The Tremor slowly tilted and then started falling towards earth.
All the aliens shrieked and ducked down.
Hoping not to break any bones or limbs on impact.

We suddenly heard a big explosion.
I fell out of consciousness...

   :D

[mooseberry]

Off-topic:

OMG..thank you archpyro.
One of the few mature ppl to walk into the forums.

Funny...

On-topic: Good to see you're having fun with this. Keep it up.

[Repatition]

a reacoter only power ??

[infestor1]

a reacoter only power ??

Its a reactor, not a reacoter. And if you've played tremulous, then you will know that a reactor is a source of power for human structures. Since the overmind isn't really 'power'. And if the Tremor is broken, like in the story, then I guess that the RC would be only source of power.

Twigstik, please continue on with the story. Its good!

[twigstik97]

ok, thanks guys.
More coming up.

CHAPTER 5
I woke up to the sound of a pain saw.
I looked around and it was still pitch black except for some glowing blue particles in the distance.
I felt something touch me, i sensed it was my daughter and son by their scent.
The advanced marauders used their electricity to power up the lights in this room.
A dragoon told me that we had crash landed in a transit station.
He also told me that the humans were just outside, trying to cut open a hole in the side of the ship.
As soon as the pain saw stopped its humming, the marauders cut the power.

I heard metal hit the ground.
And i smelt humans coming inside, they weren't soldiers though...
They seemed more like curious civilians.
One pulled out a torch, so all the aliens hid.
We made alot of noise while trying to hide and that caused the human to turn on the pain saw.
The pain saw was emitting enough light that there was dim light all around the room.
I was hiding behind a large crate, but my head was too high and i lowered it.
I knocked an upper platform while doing so, the human turned on his torch and pointed it in my direction.

More humans came inside, these ones were soldiers .
The marauders lit the lights with their electricity and one soldier ,who was startled by the sudden lights, fired randomly into the room.
One bullet hit a dragoon and it jumped at the soldier .
I got out of hiding and pummeled down the humans .
The human with the pain saw dropped it and ran outside screaming.
I peeked outside and glared at the crowd of civilians surrounding the ship.
I let out a huge growl and charged out.
I trampled over the humans.
The dragoons came out and helped.
The marauders tried to power up the turrets on the ship.
They focused the electricity to modify the turrets programming.
The turrets started firing at the humans.

After the humans were finished off, the turrets shut down automatically.
The marauders came out of the ship looking tired...
Powering lights for a whole room and turrets at the same time would be tiring and risky...

I know some of this is is unrelated to tremulous
EX:
Marauders cant change turret programming...
And they cant power up lights...

But they have an electricity attack so i dont see why not.

[twigstik97]

Aw man...
I think my story topic has failed. 
No-ones answered in a week

[mooseberry]

Well you did get 5 chapters. That's not bad. 

[twigstik97]

I've still got more chapters to post, and I'm still typing.

[your face]

I think the story is awesome, and you should keep writing.  kthx

[serial sleeper]

more plz this story is awesome

[Chomps123]

ME WANT NEXT CHAPTER NOW!!!

Good work so far.

[xDragant]

More please, I'm a silent reader :>

How about making a new topic with ALL of the chapters in it, so it's like a book, unlike this topic with interupters :<

We all want more, no need to ask. kthxmoreploxbai

[twigstik97]

hm....i've lost interest in this story sorry, i've got more important things to do, but i'll post what i've already typed, but haven't posted...

CHAPTER 6
We set up base in one of the of human vehicles called a 'train'.
There were 4 entrances inside, so it would be risky trying to keep humans out.
We managed to seal up one entrance with some creep.
But there were still 2 more entrances, and 1 entrance that comes through the roof.
We moved some crates into strategic positions, so it blocked the overmind out of sight from the humans.

We sealed up the rest of the entrances with a weaker creep.
The automatic opening doors aren't strong enough to break the creep.
But a human weapon could rip through the creep easily.
We managed to find a human reactor in the next room.
We destroyed it and all the lights in the station turned off, and the automatic opening doors stopped opening.
We were trapped in a train, while our base was open to the enemies in another train.
It was a trap...

I tried ramming into the door, but even the strength of a tyrant couldn't barge this door.
I saw a little box next to the door, about the size of a human hand, but a bit bigger.
I clawed at it.
A few electric sparks flew from it and the door opened.
An alarm then sounded 'Unauthorized Entry In Tram 303'.
Was that us?

I charged out the door, bullets went flying across the gap between this tram and our base tram.
I made it into the base.
The dragoons all ran at the same time, but a lucifier cannon was shot and killed/injured most of them.
The other aliens made it across safely while the human with the lucifier cannon was reloading.
They have our base surrounded now.

I ordered adv.dragoons to stand ready at the doors.
And snipe any intruders that come inside.
Dretches and basilisks were to wall-walk above the doors and swipe at anyone that comes past.
Tyrants and marauders were to go through an alternative exit and ambush the humans from behind.

Move out!


EDIT: I never knew so many people would like my story, so i may continue with it, but it'll take a while to get each chapter finished as reality kicks in and takes over my time.