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auky

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DRETCH
« on: March 11, 2010, 07:22:44 pm »
I remade the Dretch. So, tell me what you think. Has 438 faces. ;D


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UniqPhoeniX

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Re: DRETCH
« Reply #1 on: March 11, 2010, 09:48:51 pm »
Looks nice, tho I think the eyes are a bit too deep inside the head, and the lower jaw needs a bit of work.
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mooseberry

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Re: DRETCH
« Reply #2 on: March 12, 2010, 03:50:03 am »
So you made a low poly dretch?
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Asvarox

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Re: DRETCH
« Reply #3 on: March 12, 2010, 01:29:59 pm »
Nice, but as UniqPhoeniX pointed out already, eyes are too deep into it's head, and I think that arse thing is a bit too high. I also don't think dretch needs to be remade anyway

PS. Is it smiling? :o
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auky

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Re: DRETCH
« Reply #4 on: March 12, 2010, 02:03:56 pm »
Got it rigged! Now it can walk and bite  ;D







About the eyes, could you explain?

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UniqPhoeniX

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Re: DRETCH
« Reply #5 on: March 12, 2010, 06:56:59 pm »
The eyes are in an 'alcove' which is slightly too deep. It seems the dretch would have serious trouble seeing forward/up/below.
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auky

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Re: DRETCH
« Reply #6 on: March 12, 2010, 08:37:51 pm »
Here we go. Changed the eyes. Like him better this way. Thanks for the comments!  ;D








Again, say what can be done better.
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UniqPhoeniX

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Re: DRETCH
« Reply #7 on: March 13, 2010, 07:55:23 pm »
That's 1 mean looking dretch :o IMO the head and the front legs are a little too big compared to body and other legs. Could fix it by moving the head and the 'attachment point' of front legs forward, and then stretch the body forward (front legs are fine if bigger then others, just not that much).
Maybe also make the back of the body less flat?
About the lower jaw: in general it's a bit too thick, and if you follow the quads surrounding the mouth, they go from the front/side of lower jaw to the 'lip' of the top jaw. It makes the lower jaw look a bit twisted/squished.
The teeth should be bigger, and more of them. On mara/goon/rant, the teeth are right next to each other, where 1 tooth ends, the next one starts.
That is really everything I could think of :-X
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Asvarox

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Re: DRETCH
« Reply #8 on: March 13, 2010, 07:58:14 pm »
That front screen is so badass
Texutre it and make it wallpaper :)
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harraps

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Re: DRETCH
« Reply #9 on: March 21, 2010, 05:30:39 pm »
If you create a new Dreth why not make it look like to a Shark!

http://consilience.typepad.com/photos/uncategorized/great20white20shark202.jpg

And don't forget to make more bigger teeth
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Re: DRETCH
« Reply #10 on: March 27, 2010, 03:50:56 am »
That is a epic dretch. Should be in 1.2
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auky

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Re: DRETCH
« Reply #11 on: March 30, 2010, 06:53:59 pm »
I was quite busy lately.
I have started on the textures, not that great now. I'm still learning texturing  ;D
The teeth are more and bigger, the legs are shorter, the back thingie has more poly's so that he's less flat.

Gonna post again when the textures actually look like something  :P
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