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Firstinaction

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New battle Rifle
« on: April 25, 2010, 07:19:28 am »
 :D ;D   I have been busy worken on some models and I came up with this a while ago. Check it out. Made in blender. I will show the character with the gun later but this is just pt. 1. PLZ give me your feedback 8)  And its not no Tremulous texture and I didnt Take no ones Idea so dont go blaming me around.
« Last Edit: April 25, 2010, 03:16:44 pm by Firstinaction »

Haraldx

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Re: New battle Rifle
« Reply #1 on: April 25, 2010, 08:01:25 am »
1. Texture is messed up.
2. There is no trigger. (there is a circle, but no trigger, It ain't needed)
3. You stole the idea from the Tremulous team modeler.
4. The optic sight looks too small.
5. The iron sight is too big and has bad texture.
6. The gun looks bulky, but the buttstock is thin as a stick.
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Re: New battle Rifle
« Reply #2 on: April 25, 2010, 08:41:59 am »
The texture on the butt of the gun looks like a Tremor texture.

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Re: New battle Rifle
« Reply #3 on: April 25, 2010, 09:05:29 am »
They're all Tremor textures; look at the ironsights.

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Re: New battle Rifle
« Reply #4 on: April 25, 2010, 09:11:37 am »
Yeah, i think it'd be looking better without this texture :P And it looks rather like some kind of grenade luncher than a rifle to me, GJ nonetheless
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Re: New battle Rifle
« Reply #5 on: April 25, 2010, 09:52:39 am »
I think it's pretty good, better than most weapons I've seen for tremulous (community made) but the stock needs some work.
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Firstinaction

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Re: New battle Rifle
« Reply #6 on: April 25, 2010, 03:19:54 pm »
Now with A character too hold the Gun. Check it out. Give me your feedback.Sorry for the bad quality. Im not that good with textures.

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Re: New battle Rifle
« Reply #7 on: April 26, 2010, 01:07:43 am »
Now with A character too hold the Gun. Check it out. Give me your feedback.Sorry for the bad quality. Im not that good with textures.

At least you called it "A character". Perhaps an abomination? Mutation? 6 month old chocolate milk in your bedroom under one of those heating lamps?

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Re: New battle Rifle
« Reply #8 on: April 26, 2010, 03:32:13 am »
lol hells....

Not bad, looks kinda like a shotgun to me though...
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Re: New battle Rifle
« Reply #9 on: April 26, 2010, 04:22:46 am »
Don't pay attention to our resident wannabe-troll, HellsAngelz.

The texturing (obviously) needs work, and the legs don't seem quite attached, but I think you're off to a fantastic start.
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Re: New battle Rifle
« Reply #10 on: April 26, 2010, 06:07:56 am »
the gun needs some improvements/adjustments/fine tuning, but, it is a good job, you have talent, just needs a little work on it.

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Re: New battle Rifle
« Reply #11 on: April 26, 2010, 09:35:20 am »
How about using a grey texture with barely visible lines at edges, something like on the pics here, and then start improving upon that.
« Last Edit: April 26, 2010, 09:37:16 am by UniqPhoeniX »