Compact

[Firstinaction]

(Compact)

"The story of a small group of 5 marines stranded on mars"

"The crash landing"
 
F1rst19    "Danik your job is to keep us up in the sky without burning our ass's off and blowing up".

Danik    "I know, I know, were coming into the cloud bunk too fast at 40,000 knots", I can't keep us stable!

F1rst19   "Ahhh damn". This men is probably our last time together.   Let's pray.

Kwon    wait a sec look outside the corridor.  Danik suppress those wings and Land us on that mountain side.

Danik   "ok well this will be a hard mother F... Landing then".

F1rst19   all right guys if we do survive helmets on!

Menace   ok. I'm locking the cabben bay doors!

Moose    ahaha. All right boys strap up and sit down!!  "No homo!!!"

F1rst19   "shut-up moose"

Moose    ayah f1rst19 hay I heard of a place that contains earth human breathable air and vehicles made by humans. Heard this 3 years ago when I was banging prostitutes on the moon base hotels.  "Haha".
They call this place Compact. They said it's purpose was a garbage construction place that allowed ships to drop loads of garbage in the dump zone.  After that the trucks roll in and pick up the garbage and transfer it's materials into ship parts then they ship it to earth or the moon.

F1rst19   ok great story I liked the part when I fell asleep.   Just joking.   But that sounds like a good place to search for the completion of our objective. "So it's Compact huh". Hmm. I heard of that name while I was training for joining the trem team.
We will need to intercept that base and search for composits. and you said those ships drop loads of garbage so this job will be easier.  

Kwon   I think they got aliens there!

Danik   "Aliens WTF"


... As the small crew crash lands on the desolate rough landscape of mars no one was hurt due to the slick hilly mountain side. Almost plummeting over a cliff that would've drove them into there death. The crew slowly creeps out there damaged space ship that has burn marks from entering the atmosphere of mars at speeds of 2,300 mph.
 
Mars the unpredictable world

The futuristic doors of the damaged ship cracked open partially allowing the crew to exit one by one.
Danik the the teck of the crew was checking a device that projects a map of any planet he syncs his device too. He was able to detect where Compact is located...   "145" sva "2344" north is our location guys", Danik says too the crew.  
As the Crew looks into the air of mars, seeings its post apocalyptic looking landscape, rugged mountainous structure that streches as far as days. The orange red sky blends in with the ground and the foggy site seems to never end. Cool winds that blow at 60 mph and the constantly moving clouds makes mars one of a kind.

The epic crew

Denik   "guys look at that rimbuter ship?" It huge"!

Moose  " Thats what she said"

Menace nahh there too high too even notice our position.

F1rst19  yea. There probably dumping off loads of garbage at our destination - Compact.
Let's get moving... 

[Mustard]

Lol @ moose' character.

[Firstinaction]

Chapter 2: as the crew approaches the abandoned building they sence the eir feeling of being watched by something big.
They walk slowly with weapons ready and armed to fire at anything that moves. "dark hallways and the orange and blue halls are a calm pain knowing that humans built this Place. 

F1rst19   ok well were here and my helmet is sensing this place is huge.
And offline.

Menace  hay look there?  Two trucks.  "Ones flipped over on it's side I wonder why".
Denik check the power room. I will go with you. And see if you can turn the bots on so they can pick up the trash.

The team continues a search of the objective. Menace and Danik head down the hall as F1rst19, moose, and kwon, 3 brave soldiers head down stairs headed to the drop zone.

Kwon  to guys I heard something...

Moose what was it.......... Crap my helmet just picked up an enemy.
 
F1rst19 really. Mine didn't. But careful there might be something in hear. I can't put my finger on it but I feel something watching us.

Kwon  freaky

Moose "wow wow! Granger!

F1rst19  were? "shoot it!!!!
Wait kwon don't follow it. Shoot it from a distance.
If there is a granger there is a nest nearby.

Kwon  "I got emmmm!!".  He crawled around the corner. Got em...

As kwon's bravery gets the best. He kills the granger and stops and looks down at a puddle of green slime, it was radiation from materials that drop before. He quickly slips in it making the slime smash in his face. The slime radiation quickly burnt Kwon's face right off with seconds. The two other marines tried to wipe the radiation off his face with clothes that they have in their bags. As they try to save kwon he quickly screams and with one hand on his face he runs off in the dark area's of the hall. Loosing site of kwon was easy. The two tried stopping kwon from running into the dark and after seconds they lost him, blood quickly ran down the hallway and a loud groin monstrous noise came from down the hallway. The marines seen a big object with 6 legs go from one point of the room to the other within seconds. 

F1rst19  shit!!! Shoot shoot...F"ing shoot !!!

Moose  shit shit.   The he'll was that.  Too dark...   

F1rst19 fuck...    It was a dragoon I think...  It shredded kwon apart

[CreatureofHell]

Quotation marks usually go around what someone is saying, but because you don't use anything other than dialogue I wouldn't bother putting them in.

[Pazuzu]

Is this really the same Kwon? I notice a distinct lack of feeding...

[swamp-cecil]

You forgot the part where i bassywhore everyone.

[Firstinaction]

Yea swamp I will add your basi in there...    I typed all this in 2 days in class.  On my iPod touch.  So it has lots of error fixes and quatations automatically.    Anybody ready for prt 3.  Anybody ready for swamps basi... Lmao

[Pazuzu]

I typed all this in 2 days

This only took you two days?

[Firstinaction]

I typed all this in 2 days

This only took you two days?

Only in class on my ipod hiding it from the teacher...   got bored... 
and I have a full schedule...   school, football workout, homework, bed...

[Pazuzu]

I typed all this in 2 days

This only took you two days?

Only in class on my ipod hiding it from the teacher...   got bored... 
and I have a full schedule...   school, football workout, homework, bed...

Oh, that explains it.

[Firstinaction]

Chapter 3

Menace and Danik regroup with the other squad members; f1rst19 and moose.  All wondering what there next move is after witnessing a tragic death of kwon. After the halls lit up with light because of Daniks teck skills.
The small 4 Crew members continue to search the building for the completion of their objective.

As they wait until the huge door opens they continued into the drop zone area.
The drop zone was meant for ships too drop garbage as they fly by mars. And the place recently went offline due to radiation and atmospheric levels droping, making all the humans leave compact.

The drop zone was a huge open area with 4 pillars circling the area, with atmospheric gaurds that are invisible shields keeping human breathable air contained and ventilated for clean air. The team inhaled the garbage air as they hear a load sound as the vacuums suck the bad oxygen in and purify the air. Taking over an hour to purify it was hard for them to breath for an hour...

[Anonymoose]

ROFL YES! Pure Gold

Lol @ moose' character.

+1

Moose: "Heard this 3 years ago when I was banging prostitutes on the moon base hotels."

I also like how kwon is the first to die..

[Firstinaction]

As the team make there way too the drop zone they see a small nest of alien creatures. The nest had the main component,the overmind planted behind 2 ground lamps.  The aliens coming out if human size pods and there was dozens of alien creatures running around.
The team quickly ran back inside the corridor. Thinking about what the just witnessed and there next move.

"As they decide to open the door they run out guns blazing!" shooting the small aliens and the larger aliens as they try to attack. 
Yelling with power they shoot and shoot. 

[kharnov]

You have a very curious grasp of the English language. I commend you for writing what is basically the Doom: Repercussions of Evil of Tremulous, except in your case this is probably a very sincere effort.

10/10 A+++ would rate again

[Pazuzu]

No, Moose. You are the overmans.

[kharnov]

No, Moose. You are the overmans.

And then he was a granger.

[Pazuzu]

No, Moose. You are the overmans.

And then he was a granger.

Preferable to being a zombie, I'd imagine.

[Firstinaction]

Chapter 4

Welcome to the team

As the small team opened the drop zone door leaving the construction zone  indicated by their helmet, they opened fire on the alien infestation. Menace deployed a Grenade and instantly reloaded his mass driver. The grenade blast shook the ground, sending flames and alien body parts in every direction, Killing 3 aliens. "Danik jumped back in aw ", while shooting his simple rifle.
"did you get em" Danik yelled.
"yea, we killed em", moose said while catching his breath picking up his chain-gun.  
     As they reload and got their breath back Danik flinched and turned away as a Dretch jumped out from the ceiling. "kaboom" F1rst19 shoots the dretch before it could kill Danik. Green slime flies over Danik. " Danik put your helmet on, moose said in an angrily voice".
     They hear a loud bang come from a distance from the other side of the drop zone. I just picked up a random heartbeat from over there, menace points the direction were he picked up the heartbeat. Yea me too, F1rst19 said. "uh guys" Danik points across the drop zone at a balcony 20 feet high that intrudes the building. A trem marine officer was overlooking the area and spotted the team. He looked like he was in bad shape as if he just left a party. His shirt under his armor was ripped, showing blood dripping from his arm, and legs.  His armor had fractured in many places.  He then jumped down the 20ft drop and landed on his feet then rolling on his side propelling back up as if he is a good free runner.  The marine approaches the crew....
"Hello" the names Kharnov. I got stuck in one of those damn garbage trucks being pitted against my will by the aliens. I tried driving it but there were 3 goons and a rant." Oh look yes" you guys took out the goons. Thank you.  
Were is that rant? You guys took it out right?(pause-3sec) Right?  Wait rant? Menace says. A damn rant?  "shit".
Kharnov looks at the team with a unsure face. "well damn we don't have that much ammo left" and we need a medstation, I got hit by a dretch and I used my med kit already. "f1rst19 says.
Well ok I dropped my construction kit while running for my life. Come with me inside the complex too the transport hall. I can set up a small base consisting of an RC, turrets, a medstation, and an armory, Kharnov said. "Lets move" f1rst19 said in a military deep pitched voice.  
     As they set up base taking 2 min t :)o build. Where is your ship fellas? Kharnov asked.  Well it's 3.2 miles south and 20 clicks from here. Danik explains the situation to Kharnov. We crashed on the mountain side due to radio interference affecting our controls too slow down. Kharnov laughs as Danik explains what happen. What's so funny guy? Danik says.  Well only ships classified as preliminary BG, or ships that were made in the last 5 years are made too withstand mar's repulsive atmosphere and what kind of ship do you have? Kharnov asked while still laughing.  "Well my ship was made 15 years ago and I see, well no-body told me this". Danik says in a crying voice.
     "Guys I'm taking a wiz", Kharnov were is the restroom, Menace asked.  
It's down the hall,   It's locked with automatic doors, Kharnov said. Well I'm taking it outside. As Menace begins walking he turns around and grabs his pulse rifle, and maneuvers toward the door way leading too the drop zone.  
Menace begins too mutter a song.
He hears a loud roar and it begins too fade away and circles around menace.
Coming from around the drop zone.
"hay who is that"?   Moose is that you.
"dame you caught me". Moose comes out from behind a wall he was hiding behind. Gotta take a piss too.  "Moose don't do shit like that", Menace says.  "what I just silently walked".  Don't make creepy sounds like you did. "I  did no such thing".   Well then what was that noise then?    ....

[Anonymoose]

Kharnov looks at the team with a unsure face.

Yes! He sure does.

You have a wonderful imagination Mr. Firstinaciton, hold on to that and never let it die.