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Kyp the Pilgrim - Part I [Concluded]
« on: August 12, 2011, 05:48:40 am »
As promised!

Kyp the Pilgrim takes place some months after the events of Kyp the Granger and Granger Island, and as such is a sequel to them...
An original composition by Conzul...feedback is welcome!






Chapter One
The Heresy Begins



    "Alright everyone, you know the drill. Keep your eyes peeled and stay frosty!"
Mark's orders - though whispered - still sounded like a commanding 'bark' to everyone else on the comm. The squad was one of many combing the planet Togg IX for survivors from a downed passenger ship, and even though there had been no alien activity detected in the sector for five months, Central Command wasn't willing to let its guard down. Just because herds of them had been stupefied after the Homeworld incident there was no reason to believe that the change had been universal.

    Keeping this in mind, the Sgt. started rapidly meting out finger signals, marshaling the troopers into position around the mouth of the cave. There was little cover in this region; the caked-red sand barely supporting a forest of dead trees that only just kept the searing sunlight from heating the sand to unbearable levels.
    Across from Sgt. Mark, Privates Turk and Irena pressed up against the dirt wall, tier-ing themselves at different levels to maximize defensive posture in case anything should happen. Behind him, other members of the squad could be felt - rather than seen - falling into position. A light tap on his helmet, and he turned to Karl, right behind him.

    "Scans show that it goes back at least 120 feet, and angles down after that, sir!" Karl informed him.

    "Activity?"

    "None showing, sir, but intel has suggested that there may be mineral compounds locally which can hinder scans. Are we going in?" asked Karl.

    "Oh yes," replied Mark.

    Taking point, he hunkered down and entered the blackness. His feet started splashing through ankle-deep fluid about ten yards in. Reaching down to his belt, he unhooked a signal flare and smashed the butt into an nearby stalactite, lighting it. After a quick look over his shoulder, he proceeded onwards, then downwards. On the incline, the water gave way to slippery moss, and it was all his squad could do to avoid sliding down behind him and knocking him forward.

    After about 300 feet, the cave narrowed. A flash of red painted Mark's HUD, and then was gone. He stiffened, whipping his hand up in a 'Halt' signal.

    "Anyone else see that?" he whispered.

    "I did," said Irena hurriedly.

    "Then it wasn't a glitch - good," he replied. Ahead of them, the cave had narrowed to a portal about six feet across and ten feet high, with the watery fluid flowing past them through it. Expecting resistance now, they fanned out to the sides as they prepared to breach. Mark held up his free hand in the light of the dying flare, and counted down from 3 for everyone to see. On '0', Turk, the closest trooper, launched himself through the aperture, and Mark followed next.
    Just as he passed through, his flare went out as it passed under a torrent of water. Cursing aloud, he reached for another but was bowled over by the trooper behind him. He splashed into the fluid and fought to get upright as fast as he could, but there was no light.

    "Sir, I've got one!" Irena sputtered helpfully, and finding his hand, passed it over. Another trooper tripped over Mark's heels and splashed water everywhere, but Mark shielded the flare and lit it against his knee.

    The orange light filled the chamber, and time slowed down almost to a complete stop for each one of them as they perceived their surroundings.

    No fewer than six tyrants encircled them; three on each side of the cavern, and, what had at first peek looked like a wealth of hanging formations turned out to be a wealth of many-legged lesser aliens. The squad (only eight members) was completely outnumbered and outflanked. It was over before it even started.

    Yet no move was made. The tyrants, like hulking reptilian centaurs, held their distance, the light from the flare blooming in their many eyes. Above, the silent-footed basilisks did not reach down; did not stir.

    Mark - getting lightheaded - finally let his breath out. Weak-kneed, his squad huddled behind him, not knowing what to do. Ahead of him was Private Turk, who had stumbled in first and gone farther. The soldier was standing not two feet from a seventh tyrant, looking up at its slight gape, its raised foreclaws. This stalemate might have gone on forever, had not a third party disrupted it.
    From behind the seventh tyrant, a silhouette emerged. It was human. It was a female human, and it was leaning on the tyrants legs as it worked its way around through the water.

    "Oh my God......." Mark found the capacity to exhale in wonder. As the figure entered the light of the flare, it resolved into the shape of a handsome woman in her fifties, whose starved appearance and tattered clothing were completely at odds with the smile on her face.

    "You finally found us...you finally came!" she said hoarsely, stopping at Turk and grabbing happily at his outerwear. It took all of the poor soldier's willpower to turn his head from the gaze of the tyrant and face the woman.

    "It's okay, they won't hurt you. They're nice aliens," she assured him.

    "Nice?"

    "Yes! Oh I honestly don't know what all the fuss was about, they're as gentle as a kitten," she went on, not even whispering. Mark couldn't help but cringe as her voice echoed through the confines of the cave; but he did find the ability to finally lower the flare and move toward the woman.

    "Are you a survivor of IPF-8021?" he asked in hushed tones. The woman turned to him and nodded excitedly.

    "Yes, I'm Selma. I'm sorry, I'm the only one left," she said. Mark didn't think she was sorry. She looked a little crazy.

    "Ah...didn't you say 'us'," he asked. "You said that 'You finally found us'...doesn't that mean -"

    "No, the others died in the crash," said Selma, losing her smile. "But us,..." she turned back to the tyrant and gazed almost lovingly at it. The alien turned its head to her briefly, but made no other motions. Mark, snapping back into command mode as fast as he could, made the quick decision that the poor woman was completely off her rocker, and that they needed to get out of here somehow.

    "Yes, uh, yes we're here to evac you. I'll bet you're starving for a proper meal," he took her arm and started to walk slowly backwards. Behind him, the troopers nearest the entrance backed out into the tunnel.

    "Oh, yes, I am hungry," she said slowly, as if just realizing it, and let Mark continue to lead her out of the room. As they reached the 'door' she waved back at the aliens, almost as if she was leaving a neighbor's house but was soon to return.

    "Just follow Private Irena, M'am, I'll look to our rear," said Mark, turning his pulse rifle back to the aperture.

    "Now why would you do that? Don't go starting trouble," Selma said almost sternly, but took Irena's inviting hand anyway.

    The climb back out of the cave seemed to take ages, but when they finally stumbled out into the light without incident, they began to fall all over the ground, trembling. Mark, slumping to a short boulder, was at odds in his head.
    They should all be dead. This had never happened before, not even after Homeworld. Even then, after the muddling had worn off, a number of aliens seemed to remember their hostility and continued their unorganized attempts to chomp the nearest humans. Something was very wrong. Mark pitted his will against his trembling knees and stood up. As he walked over to Selma, he slid off his helmet and wiped the sweat from his eyes. He wanted to know what was going on, but Irena gave him a pleading look as he opened his mouth. Selma was still chugging water from a canteen, and a half-eaten nutrabar occupied her other hand.
    Walking back over to Turk, he crouched down.

    "How are you doing?" he asked.

    "Sir," Turk managed to stammer, but said nothing else. Mark nodded and patted him on the shoulder. Deep down, he was speechless too.

    "Why are you all so tired?" Selma asked suddenly, behind him. Their tension had gone completely over her head.

    "M'am," said Mark. "Excuse my language, but M'am - What the hell is going on?"
Mercifully, Selma seemed to understand the depth of the question, and put on a weary smile.

    "They can talk, in your head," she said.

    "There are voices - in your head...." said Mark.

    "No, no, you make me sound crazy or something," she replied dismissively. "I mean - the Big One - can talk right to you!"

    "The Overmind?"

    "Yes, that, whatever it's called. I woke up in their cave. They told me the others were dead. They said they wanted to help me."

    Mark winced. "So you're not sure that the others are dead...we'll have to keep searching...."

    "Anyway, I was all terrified, you know - from what I've heard about them. But they didn't do anything to me at all. The Overman -"

    "Overmind," corrected Mark.

    "- Overmind told me an amazing story. He said that about a month before I crashed, a black granger had arrived on an alien-launched pod and told his own amazing story, about things that happened on Homeworld before it was destroyed, and that's why they didn't do anything to me. Because now they know the truth."

    "The truth?" said Mark, eyebrows raised.

    "Yes," she replied.

    "Well - what is the truth?"

    "Oh now I don't know that, but the Overmind does," she exclaimed, as if she expected that to be common knowledge. She smiled and walked back to Irena, who gave Mark a questioning look. Mark twirled a finger around his ear and shrugged. He went over to Karl, who was ready with the communicator.

    "Karl, I need you to dial CentComm and get us a lift out of here. Also inform them that there may still be other survivors that need rescuing." Karl nodded and got to work. Mark looked back over his shoulder at Selma, who was disgorging her story all over Private Irena between engorging nutrabars. Mark walked back over to her and made no secret of eying her up and down. She paused long enough to give him a look of seriousness which he smiled inwardly at.

    "So," he said finally. "You're absolutely sure you have no memory of your co-passengers?"

    "Never saw them after the crash," she said. "But...oh my, I just remembered something else!"

    "What is it?" asked Mark flatly.

    "The Overmind told me that the black granger's name was 'Kyp'."

    "'Kyp' - never heard of it," said Mark.






Chapter Two will follow soon.....
« Last Edit: December 13, 2011, 07:58:39 am by Conzul »

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Re: Kyp the Pilgrim - Part I
« Reply #1 on: August 15, 2011, 04:05:43 am »
continued from above



Chapter Two
A Day in the Life of Kyp the Granger


    The aliens waited nervously in the anteroom. They had all been ushered out by an order from their Overmind. Far from Togg IX, this was an icy planet mostly devoid of life on its surface. The deep chasms provided some protection from the chill, but not from errant snowflakes that wound their way down from the slits of white sky above. In the mix of aliens young and old; black dragoons and red dragoons; eager dretches and sombre tyrants, two marauders jostled through the crowd to the entrance. One peeked through into the Overmind's chamber.

    What do you see? inquired his friend.

    Nothing, really. The Master is blocking him! replied the peeper, drawing back.

    Is he really as tall as they say he is? wondered the first, chattering his foreclaws into the granite so that a perforated line trailed behind them.

    I didn't see any shadows, can't tell....

    A large tyrant stomped the ground behind him. No eavesdropping! Any dissent will be reported to the Master, it said with sharp authority.  The marauders moved off quickly, but continued their speculations. It was widely known that a messenger had been expected with news from Homeworld, but no one had expected a black granger. Such an entity was unheard of.

    What do you suppose he's telling our Master? Why does our Master listen so eagerly? the first marauder said.

    I have no idea. Maybe he has valuable intelligence on the human species...like you know, I heard that they have only one Stage, and that they can't evolve! said the other.

    Oh that's nothing. I heard that when they want to make more of themselves, they have to "mate" with each other!

    "Mate"? What does that mean? So they don't just have a greasy explosion like normal?

    I don't know if anyone's ever seen a human "mate", but I've heard that it's like how other mammals mate -

    Oh you mean like when the younger dretches are playing leapdretch and the leaper gets stuck behind a big one and keeps trying to get over -

    Don't interrupt me! Yes, like that... finished the first.

    Gross!

    I know! I almost feel sorry for them...

    The two marauders silenced themselves abruptly as the creep under their feet flashed with a hazy wave of green light. The Overmind must have finished. A pair of tyrants positioned themselves at either side of the Overmind's chamber, and growled for the rest of the heaving mass to give way. Following suit, the other creatures let a narrow path form between their ranks, just in time for a smaller shadow to enter the doorway. It was a black granger! As room for it appeared, it made its way forward into the crowd, which had now fallen completely silent. Not moving particularly slow, it went past them and towards the exit without acknowledgement. Another wave passed through the creep, probably indicating that the Overmind wished to call in his children for a powwow.
    Letting the tyrants enter ahead of them, the marauders fell in line.

    I heard that eggs and tubes heal faster just because he's near them!

    Seriously stop that, growled the last tyrant, but they kept giggling as they pushed through into the main chamber with everybody else. When all had entered and tiered themselves at a respectful distance, the Overmind began its speech. It spoke in no words and without voice, but what it had to convey flowed through the creep and all were made to understand its higher meaning.

    I........have just heard the words of Kyp. He has told me many, serious, and confusing things. I will tell you what he has said in the order that he told me, which I hope will make the most sense to everyone. He has said that the Hivemind was completely destroyed, and Homeworld is no more...

    There was an incredulous exhalation throughout the chamber.

    ....AND...that all the aliens who survived it no longer attack the humans because they have 'free will'.

    After pausing for a moment and not receiving any signs of comprehension, it went on.

    ...'free will' is the beast that rules the humans. It causes them great unrest, which is why they intruded on us decades ago. It was also your Master many eons ago before the Hivemind rescued you from it. And, it appears, it has finally spilled over between species. The Overmind continued his conveyance, his tone one of sadness and seriousness. Kyp has said, however, that this has caused the humans to stop killing them. And there is one final thing he wishes us to believe. He wishes us to believe - that he made a friend who was human even before Homeworld fell...

    There was another awed exhalation throughout the room.

    ...and that this friend is the reason that any of us survived at all on Homeworld. He claims that she gave her life in doing so, though he at least admits that she also had reason to because many human fleets would have perished as well. He believes that as such, the humans are not lost and might one day be our best friends. And, he expects us to believe with him...I can feel you all now; wondering if this will change anything - wondering if what will be different now; or if I will believe him. Well........you are right to wonder. This does sound like heresy, but he is a 'black granger'. I know you have never seen one before, but it is a design we conceived of in the Hivemind long ago. It is the mark of that rarest of beings, the trusted builder. This tells me that he is not being deliberately deceitful or tricksy. He seems to have nothing to gain by lying, so - I have chosen to believe him. As he has recommended, the next time the humans come to our home, we will not attack them unless they attack us first. The Overmind finally released them from audience and allowed most to wander off.
    The two marauders, however, he called over, as well as all of the grangers, who were agog with envy over Kyp. He instructed them to guard the grangers, who would build a pod-launcher for Kyp had to make his way to the next planet, to keep his message flowing.


               
*******


    Kyp was starting to get used to this. He had made it his mission to do this work, of traveling to the ends of the galaxy to spread the truth about Homeworld, and about his deceased friend. After Roslyn had died, he had wondered out of Uncreation back to the surface of Homeworld. On the way, he had met a wounded soldier who was on the verge of death. Kyp had spontaneously decided to expose himself and lead this soldier back to his ship, where he could be saved. The fact that the soldier hadn't attacked him and even followed him only strengthened in Kyp's mind the perception that humans were simply misled; not evil as the Hivemind had made them out to be.
    And so, during the subsiding mayhem, he had made his way to an unhurt pod launcher and escaped to begin his crusade.

    Kyp had come a long way from the insignificant and somewhat noobish builder who had found himself flung into combat eight years earlier. He had a message to spread; a message that relied on the belief of its recipient to keep flowing, because without help, Kyp couldn't make his own pod-launchers. Each new world was a chance for the message to die, or to live on. And only he could deliver it, for only his special armor could convince each respective Overmind. The remnants of the alien race would learn the truth, even if he died trying.



Chapter Three will follow soon.....

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Re: Kyp the Pilgrim - Part I
« Reply #2 on: August 17, 2011, 09:34:35 pm »
I thought the series would end after the homeworld died. It didn't. It orriginaly felt like the book would keep up hanging at the end, craving more. Then, more came. I saw that as the last chapter that wasn't a chapter. Then when more came, I realised something: It wasn't the end of the series: it was the end of the book.
Kyp the granger part 1 has finished and started with this chapter 1 in part 2.
If this epic story keeps going, heck, you can maybbe publish this book and revive tremulous! Thats a bit farfetched, but you can try it.
I just got a funny thought: since the hivemind persuaded the aliens that the humans were evil beings, and they wern't in fact, makes the hivemind similar to Adolf Hitler.
these are stupid suggestions, don't even waste our time.
I don't like your negative attitude.

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Re: Kyp the Pilgrim - Part I
« Reply #3 on: August 18, 2011, 03:56:52 am »
I just got a funny thought: since the hivemind persuaded the aliens that the humans were evil beings, and they wern't in fact, makes the hivemind similar to Adolf Hitler.

Oooh nice catch. Hitler and some other notable historical figures were in mind when writing for the Hivemind. Keep in mind though that just as Hitler wasn't absolutely evil, the human race in this story isn't absolutely good either. It's all about perspective, and I try to integrate that.

Thanks for the positive feedback!

Edit: Every 6 months or so I get a terrible writing bug, so I try to keep each Kyp the Granger "book" semi-open ended. You know, in case the bug comes back. Did you see the pun? Did you see it?
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Re: Kyp the Pilgrim - Part I
« Reply #4 on: August 18, 2011, 03:30:51 pm »
I never thought Hitler was evil. The media just made him seem evil because he lost the war. If he won, he would be a hero. I mentioned Hitler because he mesmerised the aliens like a dictator.
And no, I didn't get the pun.
these are stupid suggestions, don't even waste our time.
I don't like your negative attitude.

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Re: Kyp the Pilgrim - Part I
« Reply #5 on: August 18, 2011, 07:01:47 pm »
I never thought Hitler was evil. The media just made him seem evil because he lost the war. If he won, he would be a hero. I mentioned Hitler because he mesmerised and unified the aliens like a dictator.
And no, I didn't get the pun.
Kyp is the 'bug'. In case Kyp comes back....for another story? Get it? Took all the fun out of that :P

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Re: Kyp the Pilgrim - Part I
« Reply #6 on: August 18, 2011, 09:44:48 pm »
Seems like Godwin's law is in effect again. :)

You make up Qrntz, u always angry, just calmdown. :police:
I am stupid idiot who dares to open mouth and start debating

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Re: Kyp the Pilgrim - Part I
« Reply #7 on: August 18, 2011, 11:10:04 pm »
Seems like Godwin's law is in effect again. :)
FFFFASSSSSSTTTTT Track!

Edit: I should have the next chapter up by tomorrow mornz.

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Re: Kyp the Pilgrim - Part I
« Reply #8 on: August 23, 2011, 06:52:50 am »
continued from above......



Chapter Three
Resistance


    Nephra Prime was next on the itinerary. It was the planet with perhaps the largest concentration of aliens left in the galaxy, and it had always been a royal pain in the ass for the Coalition. Several well-developed colonies had been under steady attack for no less than nine years by equally well-developed nests of aliens. Though the Hivemind had been destroyed and individual Overminds could no longer commune with each other, the handful on Nephra had all continued their relentless predation of the human populace. Their successes were not without cost, as, in recent years, the Overminds had been hunted down one by one; leaving only one left - fortified in the subterranean depths of Nephra Prime. And, it was into the midst of this rivalry that Kyp the Granger found himself disembarking.

    The miles-long trudge from the clumsy organic pod proved to be tiring, and Kyp was glad when he had finally woven his way through the human patrols and began to head into the foothills. The trees all around him were shades of green and blue, and the smell of the air was much like Ventas. The stars shone through the overhanging leaves, and the cool ferns and moss underfoot added to the illusion of peace.

    As he made his way out of the forest and up the incline of the nearby mountain range, he came out into a steep clearing. He paused in its center, catching his breath and glorying in looking back at the distance he had traveled.

    And what, pray, are you doing out here? a deep voice startled him from behind.

    AAAAAAH! cried Kyp, whipping around to confront a grizzled black dragoon. You st - st - startled me! I never even heard you -

    If you could hear me, it would mean that I'm incapable of doing my job. Do not insult me by pretending that you could have.... it said. Overshadowing Kyp by about two feet, it paced around him in the moonlight, continuing its statements.
    Unless the light deceives my aging eyes, you have armor like mine - all black. It is newer...of deeper hue. Mine is greying as the stars circle us....ah, I remember when my armor was that new... the dragoon seemed to space out for a moment.

    Uh, yes, about that, started Kyp.

    You were going to tell me why you're here, snapped the dragoon, now back in the present. Why?

    I uh...ah...need you to take me to your leader! said Kyp with as much confidence as he could muster. Something about this particular alien was unnerving him. It seemed vaguely familiar, like someone he had known years ago. But that was impossible; all those aliens were dead or missing.

    For what purpose? asked the dragoon without skipping a beat.

    I have a message that I have been spreading, said Kyp. I have come from Homeworld, and I have tidings of its downfall which I have made it my mission to make known.

    The dragoon gazed at him for an uncomfortable moment. It then nodded approval and motioned for Kyp to follow it. Together, they began to make their way even higher into the mountains. After half-an-hour of uphill climbing that didn't seem to affect his companion, Kyp stepped up onto a wide ledge. Tucked far back against the mountainside, hidden by a forest of scrawny bushes, was the entrance to the lair. The ground around it showed signs of much traffic. At the entrance, the dragoon paused.

    Halt! it said. Kyp froze and hurriedly scanned his surroundings. There was nothing to be seen except the moonlight on the mountainside and the distant glimmer of human settlements. He looked back to the dragoon, who did not meet his stare and provided no justification. Instead, it turned to face away from the entrance and back down the mountainside. Kyp was unsure of what to do. This must be some kind of parallel parking for aging goons... he thought derisively.
    The minute dragged into five minutes. Kyp was getting anxious.

    Then, a sound echoed between the two near faces of the mountain. It was a high-pitched war cry. It was met by others as Kyp realized that what they were waiting for was a number of returning raiding parties. A veritable swarm of marauders vaulted its way up onto the ledge. They were all in high spirits, and from the looks of them, drenched in blood. One of them was flailing a hindleg around, trying to loosen a human hand which was still trailing from the end. After some help from its mates, the hand was successfully undone and bouncing along the ground to land at Kyp's feet.
 
    Oh boy. I have my work cut out for me, Kyp thought to himself. It would be difficult to persuade this lot to a ceasefire, judging by how much fun and success they seemed to be having.

    The raiding party went in ahead, behaving like the VIPs they obviously were. Though they spoke quickly and happily amongst each other, Kyp was able to make out the usual trash talk that followed nearly all outings of this kind. One marauder claimed to have killed four turrets in as many seconds, despite not being an advanced marauder. Its assertions were drowned out by another marauder vociferously crediting itself with a crush kill. It quickly regretted this statement, as everyone near him cheerfully told him that this was because he was a fatass, and could probably oneshot a reactor with his girth. Yes, it would be difficult to get to these warriors.

    Following them down the tunnel at a distance, Kyp and the dragoon were eventually left in the dust. Kyp found himself going over his argument in his head again and again, in front of a grand chasm full of elite, bloodthirsty aliens. His musings went something like this:

    1: Uh, Hi everyone! Name's Kyp. Now, see, not all humans are bad, see? And I've been telling other nests this and they've been shutting down and there's been no more killing, see?
That line never seemed to end well. He mentalized another one.

    2: Okay people, the Hivemind is down, and everywhere, our kind is giving up and the humans aren't hurting us when we do. So we all gotta just bite the bullet and show them that we'll be able to live together in - hey....put me down....where are you taking me? What? I'm not a hippie! What's a hippie? Let me go!

    You get the picture. Kyp just had no idea what he was going to say to them, and he was already nearing the time when he would have to.

    Arriving at the bottom of the tunnel, the dragoon led him to a grand room that seemed to be carved right out of the stone. It was oval in shape, Kyp guessed, for he could not see the walls or ceiling; they were so far away. Huge pillars rose into the murk above, and even with his alien vision, he could not count the number of life forms in this great hall. The tally was vast. It seemed to have an organization as well. The marauders who had gone in ahead were settling down on the creep, which was far, probably on the other end of the chamber. Near where they had just entered, the outgoing parties were rallying before their turn. And in the middle, rows and columns of eggs tessellated the floor farther than his eyes couldn't see.
    Eventually, he was led all the way across to the room occupied by the Overmind. Immediately, his ears were filled with the strong buzzing of dozens of hives. The insectoids were preemptively patrolling the Overmind's dais, their routes similar to the vapid lines of dissipating smoke rings as they rose to the ceiling. Everything in the room had been armored with a layer of silvery chitinous armor.
    Putting aside all of the distractions, Kyp readied himself for his expose. The dragoon had left his side, so now, Kyp was alone in the room with the Overmind. He could feel its mind probing him through the rippling creep underfoot, and prepared to speak.

    Great Master - he began.

    I know all you have to say, interjected the Overmind abruptly. Its tone was that of extreme displeasure. Suddenly, Kyp felt himself lifted off of his feet as a number of tentacles descended from the ceiling to apprehend him. A numbing shock flowed through them and he felt his spine scream with pain.

    Aaaah! Please Great Mind, please please please stop! he implored aloud, barely knowing what he was saying. The shock stopped.

    You wish, said the Overmind, that Me and mine just cease our fight and let the humans wipe us out? What insanity is this? What trickery? I know you have come from Homeworld, and that you bear a mark of trust, but your words are as poison to my mind! it shocked Kyp again. He squirmed in the current for a moment, then the tentacles slammed him into the floor.
    Barely able to speak, let alone move, Kyp tried to force reason into his mind. Why was this Overmind hurting him so?

    Because of your treasonous heresy! it spat at him, having read him. I don't care how many backwater Failminds you have convinced to let themselves die! You will not quell our fighting spirit! The humans have done nothing but torture and hurt us for decades. They expand and expand. They always keep coming. We can never get far enough away, and when we decide to stand our ground, they wax even stronger! And you would have us give up? Based on what? Your feeble beliefs, based on the actions of only two humans who were probably delirious out of their wits! the Overmind stopped talking, and threw Kyp out of its grip, toward the exit.

    I never want to see you here again, it let its voice rumble loudly so that the sentinels would hear. The black dragoon had waited at the door, and now, it entered and sank its teeth into Kyp's rear and started dragging him out. See if you can get the humans to stop fighting first! Then I'll reconsider your status as a traitor! the Overmind called after him.

    This was humiliating. Kyp's chain of successes had come to a painful, abrupt end.





to be continued in chapter four, soon....
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Re: Kyp the Pilgrim - Part I
« Reply #9 on: August 23, 2011, 08:35:36 pm »
More. Now. This is the only book I will ever read for my own amusement ever. Maybe except for big Java.
these are stupid suggestions, don't even waste our time.
I don't like your negative attitude.

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Re: Kyp the Pilgrim - Part I
« Reply #10 on: August 24, 2011, 01:36:44 am »
tl;dr
-If you think its a joke, it's like thinking that kicking a dog/shooting someone innocent in the leg is funny.
Meisseli is a dump face ... Telling that gpp have no cheat is like tell that Meisseli mother dont suck cock !!!!

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Re: Kyp the Pilgrim - Part I
« Reply #11 on: August 24, 2011, 03:51:52 am »
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Re: Kyp the Pilgrim - Part I
« Reply #12 on: August 25, 2011, 07:28:38 am »
continued from above....




Chapter Four
One Little Indian Boy



    One planet back, on icy Vega, deep in a surface fissure, Sgt. Mark and his squad walked through a holding area. Mark could never really get used to this; the way that he could now just trudge past frightening aliens, large and small, and not even have to point a weapon at them. They were eerily pre-pacified. The dim glow of the many flares strewn about the floor (there are no flashlights in the tremulous universe) were reflected back from hundreds, even thousands of eyes. The eyes of sombre Tyrants, standing aloof and away from the curious dretches, who made no secret of their curiosity about the human intruders. They had all been ordered by their Overmind to stand down, and to only intervene if the humans attacked or detained them.
    Mark was plagued by the irritating sense of being in a trap that everyone knew about but were unable to stop. His squadmates perceived this, so they were on edge as well.

    Their patrol path took them through the main "room", if it could be called that. A huge, icy cavern that was populated by alien buildings that were indifferent to the subzero climate.

    "Look at the size of this place..." said Irena, not whispering but almost unheard anyway.

    "Yes, it certainly is big. I wouldn't like to call it home though. Too chilly," replied Turk. As pointman, he always had to tread carefully and let the eager dretches get out of the way. The crunch of ice under their boots seemed hostile to the ears, and the semi-darkness brought the reptilian mind to unwelcome life.

    "Cold to heat, heat to cold, I'm getting tired of it," Mark admitted. "Why can't these things ever occupy decent planets? How come we never get sent to those?"

    "Careful, you may get your wish," said a voice.
The squad stiffened. This probably wasn't the best reaction, since they were passing right past a trio of dragoons, who counter-stiffened and bared their teeth. It took all of Mark's self-control to keep his hands from darting to the pulse-rifle that was slung over his shoulders. Damn thing probably was too frozen to work anyway, he reminded himself.

    "Who goes there?" asked Turk loudly. A moment later, a figure stepped into the light of the nearest flare. It was a civilian woman, and she didn't look happy.

    "Who are you? What are you doing here?" Mark asked, making sure to look equally pissed-off.
She reached for a lanyard around her neck and showed him a reporter's badge. It looked authentic, but Mark was still suspicious.
    "What are you doing out here? You're either braver than most, or crazy..." he said. She would have had to have walked here alone all the way from the command post in the distant entrance.

    "There's nothing to be afraid of," she said emphatically. "Just look around you. Do you see anything to be afraid of?"

Karl coughed.

    "Look at how majestic they are....how durable....how finely crafted they seem..." she went on, eyes passing over the beings she was talking about.

    Oh yeah, we got a kook here, thought Mark. Then, aloud; "You must be one of those alien-rights activists that have been popping up everywhere since Homeworld."

    "You make me sound like something that you scraped off your boot," she said, a snarl in her voice.

    "Look, lady, these are all bloodthirsty monsters who's masters are just trying to put one over on us. They'll wait till enough humans - like you - believe that they're for real, then they'll strike again. And, when they do, I'm going to be ready, because I don't believe the lie!"

    "People like you make me sick," she spat back at him.

    "Ahhh, whatever," he said, turning away. "One way or another, it'll all be over soon, I expect."

    "You're right. It will be," she replied. Irena looked curious at this. "What do you mean by that?" she asked.

    The journalist took her hands out of her coat pockets, wrung them, and stuffed them back in. Then spoke detachedly.
    "You've heard about that granger, 'Kyp'?"

    "Yes. One of the people we rescued told us about him," said Irena.

    "Well, it looks like everywhere he's been, he's convinced the aliens to avoid taking human lives and being violent. No one knows how he does it, but my sources tell me that Central Command is doing their best to map out his route and follow behind."

    "Well yeah," said Turk. "That's why we're here."

    "I've been following behind them," said the journalist, "and each place I've been to had no aliens on it."

    "What do you mean, 'no aliens'?" asked Mark, his interest rekindled.

    "They just aren't there," she said, looking up at him. "All the sites which your squad and others have been to. I was told there were aliens there, being studied and observed because they weren't aggressive anymore. I just came from Togg IX. There were none there either."

    "That can't be," said Mark. "We just departed 32 hours ago, and we didn't kill any of them. I specifically remember that we didn't kill any of them, because I wanted to, but I didn't."

    He was rewarded with a sarcastic smile. "Then it's being done after you leave," she said. "This is the first time I've actually caught up before anything happened."
Mark gazed at her for a moment before deciding to reply.
    "I don't care. It doesn't matter. They're animals," he said.

    Not letting him get to her, the journalist responded evenly. "If any government treated humans who surrendered this way, it would be a war crime."

    "Do these look human to you?" Mark asked, waving his arm at the eyes glowing in the shadows.

    "Studies have shown that the more evolved classes have IQ's of up to one-hundred. And don't get me started on Overminds. It's been speculated that they have self-awareness!"
Mark was getting tired of this. They had already overstayed their patrol route, and were due at the CP.

    "Form up," he called over his shoulder. "Our patrol hasn't found any human remains or" - he glared at the journalist - "a black granger. Let's get going."

    "But Sir," interjected Irena, "Don't you think this is important?"

    "Form UP, Private!" he said irritably. Oh no, not you too, he thought. He took point and began trudging back along the path of flares. Behind him, he could hear the soldiers fall in line. He could not, however, tell if the journalist was following. Something told him that she wasn't; that she preferred to remain in the dark, with the uncertain beings that she irrationally valued. Crazy bitch.....

    Fifteen minutes later found them coming out into the light of the entrance. The area had been artificially widened with much shoveling and picking, and a command station adorned the middle. Defensive Tesla generators had been mounted, untraditionally, in the ceiling ice, crackling and pulsing just feet above their heads.

    The battalion commander looked up as they entered, and waved Mark over.

    "You're tardy, soldier," he snapped at him. "Explain yourself!"

    "I apologize sir, but we were detained by an activist we found wandering the caves..." said Mark, swallowing hard.

    "Oh, that's okay then," said the commander, indicating for them to be at ease. "I hope you didn't tell her anything."

    "With your permission sir, I told her to 'piss off'," replied Mark. The commander smiled.

    "I don't have that luxury," he said. "I represent people, so I had to be polite. God, but there are some days I miss grunthood!"

    "It has its perks, sir," said Mark. Then, "What are our orders now, sir?" he asked, noticing a mobile lift gliding into the cavern. It was loaded with what looked like portable gas tanks - the kind you would use in a barbeque grill.

    "You're pretty far behind the others," said the commander. "Everyone's getting off-planet. Use the two nodes left and get your squad up to the Revenge ASAP."

    "Yes sir," said Mark stiffly, and saluted. He nodded for the others to follow, and they made their way over to the nodes. They were attached to a repeater. Mark toed the activation switch, but the device was poorly insulated, and took forever to warm up. As they waited in a circle, he glanced around at them. He noticed Irena, who looked like she was fighting to keep her mouth shut. It was a fight she quickly lost.

    "Sir, that reporter was right!" she blurted out in a whisper. "Everyone being called off, and now, those gas canisters....I think they're going to plant them to exterminate the aliens while they're noncombatant, sir!" she looked very serious.

    "No one asked you to think, Private," he replied momentarily. "Do you know why? Because it isn't your job. If you wanted to think, why are you here?"

     Private Irena had no response for this. That, or she had the sense to censor it.

    "It's nothing personal, Irene," he continued. "Why should we give a shit?"
His voice must have been the tiniest bit too loud, because a split second later the battalion commander appeared behind his shoulder with a questioning expression.

    "Do I hear dissent?" he asked.

    "No sir," said Mark quickly. "Just discussion."

    "Well, I hope so," said the commander, with an edge in his voice. "Connecting Kyp's dots has led us to Nephra Prime, and that'll be your next landfall. We need morale to get up and stay up. Nephra is the last and the biggest. Once we've taken care of the hostiles there, the alien remnant is essentially broken. We can't have any distractions. Do you get me, soldier?"

    "Yes sir, it was nothing sir," said Mark. The commander nodded slowly, then went back to his console. Mark gave Irena an exasperated glare. She glared back, as if to say, I told you so.

    "Our job is to fight, not think," he said quietly, as if hoping repetition would strengthen his message.

    But it was too late. He was thinking.









To be continued in chapters below...
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Re: Kyp the Pilgrim - Part I
« Reply #13 on: August 25, 2011, 02:28:58 pm »
evul hoomanz. They kill all alieums and steel their lahnd. I feal sorry for Kip teh granguhr nao.
 :granger: :granger: :granger: :granger: :granger: :granger:
these are stupid suggestions, don't even waste our time.
I don't like your negative attitude.

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Re: Kyp the Pilgrim - Part I
« Reply #14 on: September 22, 2011, 10:55:08 pm »
continued [finally] from above....



Chapter Five
Pilgrim's Regress




    As he sat outside the cave on his aching rump, Kyp obsessed in his head about what he had done wrong. Why had he been rejected? It was clear from the neck-in-neck fighting on this planet that everyone needed him; needed to hear his message. Never, even for a moment, did it cross Kyp's mind that he might be wrong. He had memories of adventures with humans. At first, these adventures were painfull and unpleasant, but he could see that not all humans were out to get him. Eventually, in his short time with Roslyn, this suspicion was confirmed in his mind, and he had never questioned it since.
 
    Now, with Nephra's starry sky above him and its swaying forests below him, he began to get very depressed.

    If I don't convince this Overmind that I'm right, I'll never get off this planet, he thought to himself. If I never get off this planet, then I won't be able to help the rest of my kind, up there in the stars....but how do I do it?
    Previously, after each nest he had preached to listened, its Overmind had allowed a pod-launcher to be built by its team of grangers. These pod-launchers were long, underground shafts that could only be engineered by a large group of builders. Alien travelers were then put to sleep and encased in egg-like pods that were shot out of the shaft at speeds capable of sending them out of the atmosphere. This is how alienkind was spread back in the days of the Hivemind, much like spores that made their way from world to world.

    Without one of these, he could never continue to spread his message.

    This realization finally hitting him, he lapsed into a hazy sadness, and started to wander down the mountain. Nephra had a longer day-night cycle than Ventas - about a standard week for each. Because of this it was still as dark as when he had arrived many hours earlier. Indifferent to the night beauty that would give most humans pause, he reached the foothills and entered the forest. Aimlessly, he wound his way around the large trees and through the ferns and moss. Some time later - he did not know, or care how much - he sensed humans ahead. They were few, and their signals were close but faint, as if they were near death, or sleeping perhaps.
    But he also sensed a greater number of his own kind in the same area. Being the simple-minded creature that he was, he made a pragmatic guess as to what was going on, and whether or not to explore it further.

    There are weak humans in the midst of a large raiding party of aliens, he worked in his head. Since the human signs aren't fading, we must be planning a surprise attack on some lonesome campers...wait a minute. What human would be stupid enough to go camping in the woods with aliens about? They can't be campers -
    And, as if to confirm this, one of the humans disappeared from his senses.

    Okaaaay, that leaves us with the other contingency - he said to himself, as he worked his way closer for a look - That we aliens have a forward base here and have captured more humans than we can eat in a night. The fact that they're still alive means there must be a tyrant around, restraining the dretches from ending them...huh, sounds safe enough. he concluded, arriving at the scene.
    Several trees had fallen, forming a rough clearing. Hiding in a large bush at the edge, Kyp gazed at the commotion with his nocturnal eyes. A number of eggs had been built in the cover of the rotting timber, but there were no defenses, indicative of a temporary staging area. About a dozen marauders and an equal number of dretches were lazing around, probably in-between raids on the local human outpost. In the mossy center of the base, a great tyrant stood almost completely still, watching as a trio of dragoons poked at some human bodies. There was blood everywhere.

    Two humans, both female, already lay dead, and a third was incapacitated past locomotion. Every ten-to-fifteen seconds, the badly mauled survivor would find enough air to holler for her husband, then return to a pained pant and clutching of the side.

    The scene was so disturbing that some of the depression was forced out of Kyp, and he had room for pity. No wonder this war never ends - when we do stuff like this, it becomes too enjoyable to end.. he muttered to himself. Unfortunately, his mutter wasn't as quiet as it should have been. The gilded tyrant stiffened, turned, and looked at the bush Kyp was hiding in. After a moment:

    Oh, it's you. Come on out, Kyp, it said, turning its back on him again.
Kyp emerged, confused.

    You know me? How - oh no........you must be Sigig! Kyp said, startled. Of course you are - I don't know any other tyrants who are as sadistic.

    The tyrant bared its teeth in a smug alien grin. Ha! You think this is sadism? This is function. This has a purpose. That said, I won't deny that I'm enjoying it nicely, replied Sigig.

    Function? What could this possibly achieve? asked Kyp, dumbfounded.

    Hmm, I'll tell you. We noticed recently - Sigig paused while the woman called for help again - we noticed recently that this is an effective tactic for eradicating smaller villages. See, human males are pretty dumb. We don't know why, but every time that they're allowed to think that their female mate is alive, they always go after it. And I mean always. We go into a new village, cause havoc for a few minutes; drag off some of the females without killing them; and the calls for help do the rest. Then, the human male tells the other males that he is going to go after her. Sometimes, if we are lucky, a group of this male's friends supports him and goes out with him. Then we kill this group as it tries to swoop in and save the female. After a couple of rinse and repeats, the village is largely undefended, and we can go in and finish it off. Sigig finished just in time for another plaintive call from the captive.

    Wow, said Kyp.

    I know, said Sigig. Isn't it perfect?

    I meant, 'Wow', you are truly evil and if I were big enough I'd kill you and all the humans like you.

    Thankfully, replied the tyrant, We do not live in that world. How did you get off Homeworld anyway? Pod-launcher like me?
Kyp said nothing.
    Yeah, said Sigig, continuing anyway. Yeah, it took me several weeks to recover after that double-crush kill I got back there...remember?

    Hate to rain on your hive, said Kyp vindicatively, but you actually didn't kill anyone. The pilot got away and the passenger...the passenger... Kyp coulnd't bring himself to finish the sentance.

    Ah, but you'll say anything, because that's what you are, Kyp. A misguided bag of lies and misery in a black bowtie. You wonder why I'm this way, well I might have been more like a normal basilisk if you hadn't caused us to rot on that forsaken planet for six years. If you think about it, Kyp, you're the reason for the state of everything today. If you hadn't messed up, Ventas would have fallen and the Hivemind would still be in power. I admit to enjoying mental autonomy now, but that autonomy lets me ponder and realize the truth. And the truth is that things were better for us before. Look at us, scattered remnants of a once great collective, hunted to the ends of space and unable to build or commune anymore. If you're wondering, that's why I haven't killed you yet. I like you better miserable, broken. Heck, maybe you'll even see your heresy one day.

    Again, Kyp said nothing.

    Well, we killed our builder for wandering off, so you can stay on if you like, said Sigig.

    For wandering off.... Kyp repeated.

    Trust me, there's nothing more scary to a pro than the sight of a granger charging down the hall ahead of you, said the tyrant.

    Whatever, replied Kyp.

    Oh, one other thing, Sigig said suddenly, and with ominous tone. The gray dragoon you met? That's Mnoth. I rescued him as well. He is weak and has total amnesia, so don't even think of trying anything around him...like talking to him or anything. I have my eye on you!




To be continued in chapters below....
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Re: Kyp the Pilgrim - Part I
« Reply #15 on: September 23, 2011, 12:29:16 am »
 :o This is amazing! I officially love your stories.

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« Reply #16 on: September 26, 2011, 07:21:57 am »
continued from above......




Chapter Six
Men of Valor




    The troopship Revenge and its group was making its way slowly toward Nephra Prime. Toward the center of the convoy, similar troopships housing thousands of soldiers each hung together, and out on the perimeter, comforting pairs of Remdann destroyers wove their repeating patterns.

    Sgt. Mark sat at a table in the mess hall with his squad, which had been thinned. Coalition scientists had performed recent studies suggesting that an untraditional squad size of four people would be best against embedded aliens such as the remnant on Nephra. Mark had at least been allowed to anonymously choose which of his squad would stay with him. He let his eyes wander around the small table at his companions, who had all temporarily grown quiet after stuffing themselves and were content to stare into their java mugs. To his left, Karl.
    This grizzled vet had turned down promotions on several occasions, and he and Mark knew each other the best. They had actually been together in Operation Endgame - the failed attack on Homeworld. Fighting side-by-side had strengthened their bond, and their confidence in each other. He looked to his right to see Private Irena leaning on both elbows and lost in thought at the bottom of her mug.
    
    Apart from Turk and Karl, Mark had almost no combat experienced troops in his squad, so why had he chosen Irene, especially after the fuss about remaining aliens being gassed. She wasn't particularly strong or large, or even fast. Most leaders would let their eyes slide past her, seeing her only as a feeder and rank-filler. Mark finally remembered why he had chosen her, with a twinge of irony - it had been because she had better communication skills than other candidates. She knew several languages, and that had come in handy when coming down on aliens in minority planets of the Coalition, where not all humans spoke the same standard language. They were heading for Nephra, which was an old colony with much diversity and many outposts. He was sure she would be handy at some point, as long as she didn't get killed immediately or start up again with that trash about being anything but brutal towards the enemy.

    A long-barreled rifle was slapped down on the table in the midst of all the dishes, and Mark looked up to grin at Turk, who was usually the fun end of trouble.

    "What's that?" asked Irena, a little put off by the startle.

    "It looks like a repainted MD," said Karl, eyeing it with interest. "Did you mod that yourself, Turk?"

    "It's not a mod-job," replied Turk incredulously. "This is THE new model - the MDZ!"

    Mark reached over and hoisted the weapon onto his lap.
    "I don't see what all the fuss is about," he said eventually after a once-over.

    "How can you say that?!" said Turk, sliding into his seat, his smaller size promting him to move the carafe aside so he could see his toy in its entirety. "Look - it has a reflexive scope now. And the heat spreader is further down the barrel - no more accidental burns!"

    "Gotta love that new blue," came Karl's deep voice as he leaned back and poured more coffee. "Any projectile optimizations?"

    "Ah, well, no," replied Turk, running a hand through his scruffy brown hair.

    "Then it's just a regular MD with a few changes," said Mark, leaning back and passing it to Turk, who was starting to look hurt.

    "Hey man, this is quality stuff right here," he said. "The newest of the new - why don't you like it?"

    "I don't hate it," replied Mark. "I just don't think enough has changed or improved to fuss over. Look, they just tagged a 'z' on the end and moved some stuff around..."

    "You didn't hold it right," retorted Turk. "It has new hand grips. They feel better than the old ones but there's no slippage when aiming for a shot! They FEEL better!"

    "Okay, okay, Turk. I'm not gonna deny that some people will think so. It's just me. Personally. It really is no different than the old model..."
Turk tightened his lips and furrowed his brow, and slid his hand up and down the barrel in consternation. Eventually, unable to think of anything to say, he got up and headed off.

    "Think we made his day?" asked Karl with a sideways smile.

    "Ho-yeah," replied Mark. "He'll come around. Or he won't, whatever. Heck, maybe I'll even try one of those things out when they become standard issue."

    "It's not the revision we were waiting for, that's for sure - but maybe it'll hold us over for now," agreed Karl. The trio fell into silence again.
Suddenly, Mark remembered something he had wanted to tell them.

    "Oh yeah, um - there's a new weapon that's going into distribution for this assault. It's supposed to replace our sidearms."

    "Really?" said Karl, interested. "I don't know....I'm really comfy with my blaster."

    "Yeah, me too," said Irena lazily. "I get my best accuracy scores with that weapon..."

    "Well," continued Mark, "We're getting a kind of dart-gun. Four rounds in the clip. Briefing says that its a sure-kill if it hits. The effects are slow, though. It's some kind of serum that first messes with their metabolism to stop biological regeneration. Then it works its way into their nervous system and they go to sleep in under ten minutes - the final sleep."

    Irena didn't react to this, Mark noted gladly. Karl did however.

    "Ten minutes! How will we ever get to use that? I can see it now - empty a clip into a charging tyrant or a bouncing marauder, and when it gets to you you gotta ask it politely; 'um, heh, got you! Could you just look over that way for ten minutes, pretty please?'"

    "Yeah, sounds silly," agreed Mark. "I guess they thought that they'd make one blaster shot supremely effective, but failed to think about the lucky soldier...."

    "Damn straight!" said Karl. He downed his remaining coffee and after a minute of looking into the distance and shaking his head, excused himself.
Mark sighed, poured the last of the coffee, and glanced over at Irena, who was already looking at him.

    "...... - yes?" he said.

    "I have a question," she said.

    "Shoot," he replied.

    "Well, there's supposed to be only one Overmind left, and that's on Nephra - our last stop."

    "Yes."

    "They have huge amounts of grangers there...even Kyp himself. So why don't they just build more Overminds?" she asked plainly.

    "Um....I think it has something to do with, ah, when a new Overmind is built, it has to be able to check in with the Hivemind or it becomes a vegetable - or something like that," he said, laughing inwardly that he couldn't answer effectively.

    " - and since the Hivemind network doesn't exist anymore, no more can be built. I see," she said, nodding into her cup again. "So, after this Overmind goes down, pretty much all aliens left will revert to a basic, non-hostile nature, right?"

    Oh, God, here it comes, thought Mark. "Yeeessssss."

    "So, why don't we just do a covert operation to kill the Overmind, instead of wading through all its slaves? We could probably do it quickly and efficiently with current technology. I know I'm not qualified to speculate about that - I know" she said, seeing his rebuttal coming. "But wouldn't it save more lives faster? And that way we wouldn't have to kill all the aliens."

    "That may be true," he said measuredly. "But again, it's not for us to worry about. Do you think our leadership is so incompetent that they wouldn't have already thought of that?"

    "Not incompetent - disinterested."

    "Like me," Mark supplied.

    "Sir - imagine for just a minute that our places were swi-"

    "No," said Mark flatly. "They are animals. You crack me up...you're just like that journalist back on the freezer planet. Why the hell does this matter to you? To anyone?"

    Irena looked glumly back. "Because it's needless killing. We become like them when we over-kill everything. Once they give up, it isn't needed."
Mark kept shaking his head slowly, allowing a subtle smile to show itself; much like a persevering parent talking to a misguided child.

    "Animals," he said.

    "Ok, I get it," she appeared to give in, and started to get up.

    "Do you? Really?"

    "Yes. Animals, I get it."

    A few minutes later found Mark by himself. Sending his coffee bottoms-up, he swiveled around towards the viewport and looked out at the stars. There were so many of them. Why didn't she get it? Nothing matters but yourself, and your own.







to be continued below......
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Re: Kyp the Pilgrim - Part I
« Reply #17 on: October 03, 2011, 01:42:19 am »
ur stoopid

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continued from above.....





Chapter Seven
Seriously, Run



    Kyp had been wandering around the base for about an hour. There wasn't really anything to do. All the eggs and acid throwers had been built in their best possible places, and they had avoided attack for so long that they were starting to form harder armor over time. Kyp had never seen this before - apparently it was an invention of the local Overmind, who had come up with it as a way to punish human stalling even further.
    Two of the three human captives were now dead, and the final female had become exhausted and stopped calling for help. Sigig paced around her bloodied body, still nursing the hope that she'd bring the choir back after the intermission. He had a rough job of keeping the idling dretches away, since they kept trying to sneak up and tear at the damaged parts of the human.

     Finally, he crawled up onto one of the many fallen logs that populated the site, and, perching there, gazed glossy-eyed at Sigig and the camp.

    Well, here I am, he thought. I'm the failure they all say I am...I can't go on. I...give up.

    He watched as Sigig leaned over the human, who was slowly panting on her stomach. With a foreleg he shoveled under her and turned her over. She gasped and choked in pain, Kyp could only guess at which; there were so many to choose from. Moments later, she went back to labored breathing.

    Frustration crossed Sigig's face. Call again, damn you! he said, and roared in her face.
The woman was either no longer afraid, or too far checked out to react. She didn't even flinch at the challenge, just kept staring up, meeting his gaze.

    Yeah, that's what I feel about now, thought Kyp again. Anyway, Sigig must give into the luxury of impatience now, after all that time wandering around Ventas. Won't be long...

    He was right. After another few moments of the staring game, the human's eyes followed Sigig's massive foreclaw as it was raised above her head. The tyrant brought it down swiftly, sinking it far through its mark and into the forest moss. Around him, the circling dretches perked up and started chirping excitedly. Sigig made no more effort to restrain them. Kyp turned around and faced the trees - not only because this sort of thing unsettled him, but because he had felt something.

    A light breeze was still churning through the forest, and the moon and stars still sent their beams through the flora to dance amongst the ferns and flowers at the ground. Kyp strained his eyes a little harder. A tall tree stood at the edge of the clearing, encircled at its base by many tall ferns. One of them twitched, as if disturbed by an unseen force. Dropping off the log, he went up to the spot and sniffed the air. It carried the scent of something familiar, but there was no one hiding in the ferns. Kyp sighed and turned back. The moment he did so, he felt the presence again, and this time he whipped around to get a look.

    It was Roslyn.

    Kyp gasped in awe. There, clearly in front of him, stood the only friend he had ever made. She seemed to glow a little, as if the moonlight caught itself on her too much, and her lips did not move.

    How - I saw you fall - how are you here? he breathed in amazement. For an answer, she smiled and shook her head as if that didn't matter. Falling to her knees, she stretched out her hand to pet him. Deep in his gut, Kyp felt a warm, glowing bulb of happiness that tessellated through his being and tingled as she scratched that soft spot behind his head.

    I missed you soooo much...Oh, that feels good. So good.... he closed his eyes and floated on the cloud.

    Suddenly, a branch cracked in front of him. Eyes popping open, he saw with dismay that Roslyn's image had been replaced by an aged and gray countenance.

    DAMN IT! he cursed. Great timing, Mnoth.
Indeed, the old dragoon was emerging from the thick ferns in front of him.

    I was going to go right on and deliver my message to Sigig, but before I enter I see a lone granger talking to a bush of ferns and wagging his head happily. And do you know what my first thought was? Mushrooms. You've got to stay away from the mushrooms.

    Mush - no, I wasn't talking to myself, I was talking to Roslyn, said Kyp, falling back to earth with a depressing thud.

    Who?

    Oh, that's right. You've got amnesia. Right, Kyp replied sarcastically. Surely you remember me?
 
    Of course - I kicked you out a few hours ago - but I'm starting to forget why....shame. I wish I remembered why they let me do that. They don't trust me with much anymore - they say I'm getting too old.

    Well that's good, said Kyp. And you're sure Roslyn rings no bells? You don't remember a really odd human who you actually let walk beside you so she could get some closure before you ate her?

    I would never walk beside a human! That's a lie! Oh, wait, now I remember why I kicked you out. You're that liar from another planet or something, Mnoth said.

    Huh. This must be one of your bad days.

    Okay, out of my way! I have to deliver a message, grunted Mnoth, some of the old urgency finding its way into his feeble speech. He brushed by Kyp contemptuously and headed for the center of the base.

    If you can REMEMBER it, derided Kyp when he was sure he couldn't be heard anymore. He turned back to the edge of the trees. Though the moonlight still danced, there was no sign of his friend. He had been so sure, too. After a brief internal debate, he decided that he had seen her. He wandered if others from his past might start appearing. Maybe if he could get Mnoth or Sigig to see one of them, he could prove to himself that he wasn't delusional. With that in mind, he headed back into the base to report.

    Coming up on Sigig, he noted that another wave of marauders was returning. As they loped into camp, they let themselves drop unceremoniously on the nearest booster. Sigig roared and waved for the next group to head out.

    You may not want to give that order just yet, Kyp heard Mnoth tell him.

    Why's that? asked Sigig, knowing the voice but not turning. Did you remember your message this time?

    Yes! The humans....the humans...oh dammit! Mnoth fought to remember. Sigig shook his head, his expectations confirmed. Mnoth went on.

    Something about the sky...light in the sky... he said.

    The moon and stars? Yes, I see them. replied Sigig, boredom in his voice.

    No, no! Something....I'm supposed to tell you to look up at them.

    What does that have to do with delaying the next attack? said Sigig with annoyance. He threw his elongated head back and scanned the heavens.

    Hellllooo, you might be right, he said after a moment. I see some stars that are moving...strange.

    Ah, I just remembered. 'The humans are coming', that was the message! See? I got it! said Mnoth, planting his forelegs up on a log and looking up also.

    What's that supposed to mean? They've been here for ages - in fact...oh never mind, the dretches finished.

    The Overmind has sensed ships, I think, provided the gray dragoon.

    That star - is it getting closer? asked Sigig quietly, squinting at the sky. Kyp himself looked up. There was indeed a light that was growing in size, rapidly.

    Uh, guys, that isn't a star, said Kyp, backing away. I think we should get out of here!

    Why? asked Sigig, though he too was waxing nervous.

    I think that's orbital bombardment, said Kyp. The other two looked at him incredulously. Don't ask. The Overminds I convinced taught me many things.
The 'star' grew in brilliance until, moments later, it lit up the whole forest. The shell slammed into the ground right on the edge of the base, sending dretches and structures flying in all directions. Kyp threw himself down behind a log, barely in time. The larger aliens were not so fortunate, their stature exposing them to the full blast wave. Sigig was knocked off all six legs into an awkward kneel, and Mnoth had to dig his pouncing legs into the ground to avoid being thrown back. As the roar in their ears subsided, they got back onto their feet.

    The humans are here, cried Kyp. We gotta go!

    I can't do that, replied Sigig. I have to organize a retreat! he stumbled back up and tried to get his bearings.

    There isn't time for that, said Kyp, already turning back for the mountain. Seriously, run! Otherwise we're all dead... Mnoth himself pounced past Kyp, into the woods. As Sigig looked back into the sky, more stars began to grow. Many more.

    Okay, everyone get out of here! he thundered, and went for the forest to follow Kyp and Mnoth. Charging out of the base, he was fortunate that a few trees covered him from the next impact. Strings of molten plasma sailed past like party confetti, setting the forest on fire. As he kept bounding through the trees as fast as he could, he began to hear the distant hum of dropships descending from above.

    The humans has finally brought their armies to the last alien stronghold, and deep inside, despite his iron-hard fighting spirit, Sigig wondered how much time was really left....






to be continued below...

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Re: Kyp the Pilgrim - Part I
« Reply #20 on: October 17, 2011, 10:56:46 pm »
Wow, SPECTACULAR story writing! I can't wait for the next chapter!
Publish it.
these are stupid suggestions, don't even waste our time.
I don't like your negative attitude.

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Re: Kyp the Pilgrim - Part I
« Reply #21 on: October 18, 2011, 02:17:07 am »
Wow, SPECTACULAR story writing! I can't wait for the next chapter!
Publish it.
Wednesday, maybe. I'm up to my neck in coursework.
Thx for the shoutout.

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Re: Kyp the Pilgrim - Part I
« Reply #22 on: October 18, 2011, 04:47:47 am »
die scumbag aliens >:{, +47
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Re: Kyp the Pilgrim - Part I
« Reply #23 on: October 20, 2011, 08:57:53 am »
continued from above....






Chapter Eight
The Madness of Kyp Granger


    As he charged through the woods, the wail of dropships in his ears and the crackling of burning forest in his eyes, time slowed for Kyp. It was sudden and unwanted, but there was nothing he could do to stop it. He could count the seconds before his stride finished; could notice the individual drops of fire fall from a flaming dragoon pouncing past. The world seemed to lose its sound, then suddenly its feel. For a moment, Kyp had the feeling of awakening from a dream. He blinked his eyes hard, hoping to find himself in a hospitable reality - one where not everyone and everything was out to shoot or chomp or shock him.

    But he had only passed into another dream, one that he had relived too many times already: He was falling down a chute, sliding a few feet across the floor into a room, and seeing the familiar fluorescent lighting of ATCS. His heart sank.

    Why was he here? Where was here?

    With silent footsteps he climbed the ramp to the alien starting point, but the buildings there were already built and already dead. He saw the Overmind. It was sagging, lifeless; its rough hide turned to a gray, musty ash. The eggs also were decayed, crumpled into themselves like raisined corpses. He dropped down to lower ground, amidst rows of dead acid tubes. As he moved, the dust in the air swirled, but did not fall - and his movements made no sound. The exit to the room was shrouded in darkness, as if the unilluminated night waited outside for the unwary. Kyp was accustomed to seeing all types of blood everywhere, but this place was clean, as clean as the day after it was made.

    Hello? Anyone there? he called. While he heard the sound in his head, he could not be sure if it had traveled any farther, or even if he had spoken aloud. He made for the exit.

    As he passed the dogleg and entered the courtyard, the light behind him faded and he saw stars above. And, in front, hordes of dretches. He knew something was wrong because none of them were moving. Like the shells of Caddisflies they stood still and hung on whichever perch they occupied, lifeless and silent. Kyp tried to move forward, but there were dretches everywhere. He kicked at one. It dissolved into dust that drifted down, not even forming enough for a pile.

    This place was creepy. He had to get out.

    Braving his way through more dretches, he worked his way around the left side of the compound, and finally heard something: A laugh.
He peered through the doorway into the building. There was no light and no movement, but there were ferns. Not knowing what to expect, Kyp went up to them and stepped through. On the other side, he was met with blinding light and bubbling sounds. He had stepped into a third dream. Now he was back in Ventas forest, near a brook. Looking back over his shoulder, he saw that he had just exited a huge, rotting log, whose exit was covered in ferns. Having no desire to revisit that dark place, he looked around.
    Another laugh grabbed his attention. Two boys were stooping in the foliage several feet away, unaware of him. Kyp sidled up to a tree and kept watching.

    "She'll never find us!" said one, nearly biting his hand with glee.

    "That's good. I have something to show you while she's busy," said the other, tugging at him. They both started creeping off. Kyp followed. Eventually, they reached the mouth of a hidden cave. Moss hung from its top, and the slanting sunlight did not enter it. Kyp recognized this cave as the cave he had built in on Ventas years ago. Wondering why all this was happening again, he was surprised to notice that things weren't playing out the way they had originally.

    The boys, after a quick look around, both ducked into the cave and faded from view.

    What? No! thought Kyp, wandering if he should do anything. A moment later, he stepped out of hiding and made for the entrance.

    "FOUND YOU!" he heard from behind.

    Heart in mouth, he jerked around, and the dream ended. Well - not entirely. Though he was back in the burning woods of Nephra, Roslyn was standing in front of him again.

    You're here again! Thank goodness - what does it all mean? he blurted, hurrying to her feet. Before, when he had seen her, he had decided it had been real. Now, after the dream, he wasn't so sure.

    She didn't respond, but dropped to a knee and looked in his face. Kyp waited expectantly. Instead of saying anything, her hand went down to her foot and pulled the pant-leg up a few inches, revealing her prosthetic foot. She looked back up at him, as if expecting him to understand.

    What - what does that mean? he said urgently. She frowned and tapped the metallic appendage with a finger.

    I don't get it! Kyp said hysterically. Suddenly, he was hit hard in the face. The pain was nothing compared to the shock. He had been struck by his best - no, she was gone. A marauder was standing in front of him, and sound was flooding back into his head.

    I should get used to this, he thought ruefully. The marauder screeched at him.

    Come on! it said. What's wrong with you? I FOUND YOU, now hustle!

    Who are you? What do you care? asked Kyp, miserable.

    Tyrant says to bring you, keep you safe. Says end is coming, builders must survive! The marauder danced around to Kyp's rear and poked him.

    Gaaah! Son of a bitch! cried Kyp, pissed and confused. Leave me alone!

    I'll keep doing it! warned the marauder, who also looked pissed, albeit at his assigned task. Kyp sighed painfully. He had no choice but to get moving again, but everything was much less real than it had been a few hours ago. Nothing seemed to matter.


******


    Mark was having the time of his life. The rush was just so powerful. To his right and to his left, dropships just like his were descending from the clouds. Between each tight group of shuttles, round after round of orbital fire was streaking planetward. Leaning over the side to look down, he could clearly see the impacts and debris as alien encampments everywhere were incinerated. The surprise was perfect.

    "YEEEEE-Haaaaaaaaa!" he called into the wind, and turned back to look at his squad. Karl grinned widely and let a laugh rumble out. Irena and Turk also had wild smiles on their faces, and chomped at the bit to get onto the ground.

    "We're gonna show 'em that we can swarm, too!" yelled Mark, unphased as a descending shot sailed down past them, close in.

    "Yeah GET SOME!" came Turk, growling and miming a grenade throw.

    "Hold on there, champ, we're not there yet!" said Mark. "I don't know about you guys, but I'm going flamer. Best thing for these caves."

    "Shotgun," said Karl and Irena almost simultaneously.

    "Ohhoh, guess Turk is using his MDZ," quipped Karl. Turk didn't flinch.

    "You're damn straight I'm gonna use it! Half the theater is forest! You guys enjoy your flamer creep, I'm sniping this one out!" he returned.

    The treetops started flicking against the lower fuselage. They had made it to the planet's surface, and now were skimming the treetops toward the mountains. It was known that the alien stronghold was in a complex cave network that would have to be weeded out. The plan was to drive all the aliens back into the caves with flames and shock tactics, and then, with them walled in, go in with close-quarters weapons to finish the job.

    The long war was going to end - finally, going to end. There was no uncertain or risky attack to be performed; no backstabbing corporation to worry about; no variables to keep track of. This was it. Mark took his gaze from the approaching mountains and turned it east. The glimmer of morning was starting to show itself. A new day was coming.

    Fitting, he thought to himself.






to be continued below.......
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Re: Kyp the Pilgrim - Part I
« Reply #24 on: October 21, 2011, 02:11:44 am »
Amazing as ever! Make a Leeroy Jenkins reference.
I lol'd so hard at the "use the MDZ" part.
these are stupid suggestions, don't even waste our time.
I don't like your negative attitude.

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Re: Kyp the Pilgrim - Part I
« Reply #25 on: October 22, 2011, 03:48:41 am »
Amazing as ever! Make a Leeroy Jenkins reference.
I lol'd so hard at the "use the MDZ" part.
From last night.
Is this Leeroy Jenkins enough for you?



Guess which one is me Leeroy. <3
I'll see if I can do the next chapter over the weekend. There aren't more than two or three left.
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Re: Kyp the Pilgrim - Part I
« Reply #26 on: November 08, 2011, 10:43:16 pm »
continued from above.....the author wishes to apologize for the delay, but informs that he has been playing BF3 so much that he lost all sense of time and responsibility.






Chapter Nine
Convergence


    Mark, Karl, and Irena, all panting heavily, came together and looked down at Turk. Despite the burns and bruises of the previous hour, they were all grinning widely.

    "This ISN'T funny! Get it off me!" demanded Turk, referring of course to the dead form of the dragoon that sprawled across him.

    "Why, yes Sir," said Mark, all sweat and mirth. "Give me a hand, would you? No not you, you two."
Karl and Irena slung their guns on their backs and helped him to lift the corpse off Turk. Once done, he sat up stiffly. The squad had been clearing out the shallower caves at the base of the mountain for the last hour. Procedure had been to send Mark in first with the flamer; have Irena and Karl watch his flanks, and drive the aliens out of the cave into the repeater base. Turk also would be waiting with his MDZ to finish any that made it that far. Only this time, a panicking dragoon had sailed through the turrets and died practically on top of him.

    Not even waiting for Turk to get his breath back, Karl started, "Kinda makes you wish you had something with more stopping power, doesn't it? Like, a shotgun or something."

    "Yeah, why did you let it hit you? We practically saw the whole thing - why didn't you shoot it?"

    After a moment of hurt leering, Turk responed. "I lost my grip."

    "I'll say," said Irena cheerily.

    "No - my grip on the gun."

    "Wait a minute. Didn't you say that these grips were engineered to be slip-free?" countered Mark.

    "My hand didn't slip off the grip, the grip slipped off the gun," said Turk miserably. He stood up and dusted himself off. Mark stared at him, smiling. "Go ahead. Say it," said Turk.

    "Beta-Tester Badge, Gold. That is all," said Mark, patting him hard on the shoulder. "Forget it, here's a shotty."

    They heard the sound of an approaching dropship from overhead. As it came into sight, Karl's radio started to crackle.

    "You gonna answer that?" asked Mark, not looking away from the dropship as it descended. Karl reached over his shoulder and pulled out the mouthpiece.

    "This is position 21, we read you," he said.

    "Position 21, we have new orders for you. You have a guest we're attaching to your unit. You are to follow his orders from here on out. You should see his shuttle at this point."

    "Copy, we see it," said Karl. "Who is it?"

    "Civilian, ex-Remdann. Highly decorated. He'll be directing your squad's objectives for the remainder of the operation. Call copy, over."

    "Copy all, over and out," Karl hung up. "Did you get that sir?" he asked Mark, who had been listening over his shoulder.

    "Sure did. I wonder if it's......." he trailed off as the noise of the landing dropship drowned him out. It alighted just on the perimiter of the repeater base, shutting down its engines and sliding its sideport open. Mark and his squad looked on in curiosity.

    A man stepped out. He was in his late thirties and already graying. He wore silvery-gray expedition colors, and was armed only with a holstered blaster. Despite not having a highly-memorable set of features, they all knew instantly who he was. Mark stepped forward first.

    "Martin Spencer - it's an honor," he said, meaning every syllable.

    Every soldier in the field knew Martin Spencer - "Marty", the one responsible for stopping the mad Hal Corrdino in Operation Endgame back on Homeworld. After his rescue, he had been given Remdann's highest awards; handed a map of possible careers in Remdann and asked to point to any that he wanted. Instead, he had asked for early retirement. Everyone had been very understanding and he had been living the last year in relative luxury and peace. That he was here was as shocking as it was humbling.

    "Please, call me Marty," said Marty. "I'll bet you're all wondering why I'm here."

    "The thought is still trying to gain my focus," replied Mark. "Guys, stop gaping," he said aside to his squad.

    "You may have heard of Kyp, the Black Granger," started Marty. "He's the reason that I've been assigned to work with you. The thing is - "
He was forced to pause as the dropship took off and the mountainside became quiet again.

    " - The thing is, a growing movement back home has forced our leaders to at least show that they are making an effort to save some aliens for study and entertainment. The public went all gaga over the idea of a domesticated granger. I don't know what they were told but that's what they got. It's like Koala bears all over again. Now that victory is certain, we can actually send people in and allow civilian oversight....you know, to get them off our backs."

    "But we haven't seen Kyp, we've only heard of him." said Irena nervously.

    "I know, but intelligence suggests that he's on this world, and if there's a chance that he can be detained, it needs to happen. I've been brought in to assist, probably because they think he trusts me."

    "Is it true that he saved you on Uncreation?" asked Irena, but suddenly regretted it. "I mean, I don't mean to insinuate that you were - lying....I mean..."

    "It's OK, I know what you mean. I did have some mental instabillity for a few months, but I got over it. Come on, I'll brief you as we go." He started walking into the cave.

    "Ah, sir....we just cleared that one," said Mark.

    "Not all of it. Oh, and it's Marty," came the reply. He and Mark entered the cave, followed closely by Karl and Irena.

    "This doesn't make sense - it's great, but - there are dozens of squads attacking the alien base. Why did he chose our unit?" she thought out-loud.

    "Hell if I know," replied Karl. "Ask the writer."

    With Turk close on their heels, they exited the growing glow of the morning for the dark recesses of the caves.



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    Kyp and the marauder finally caught up with Sigig and Mnoth at the base of the mountain. The tyrant was turning in furtive circles, trying to sense enemies, while the old dragoon was slowly catching its breath. Just inside the treeline, they could see an entrance to the mountain. The only problem was that there was a repeater base loaded with turrets, guarding the entrance, and the bodies of many lesser aliens were strewn and perforated about the place.

    I've got to hand it to them, the surprise was perfect, said Sigig ruefully. Mnoth didn't say anything, just kept panting. Kyp came to a stop and tried to get his breath too. The marauder seemed fresh as ever.

    Four or five humans in that cave, just entered about six minutes ago, it said, its superior senses doing it proud.

    Really? said Mnoth finally. I only sensed three. I'm getting too old for this, Kid.

    Sigig raised four of his six brows. How do you know you're old? he asked.

    I can feel it, said Mnoth. Everything else is only what you tell me.

    Sigig and Mnoth kept talking, but Kyp wasn't listening anymore. He had sensed something too - a presence that he had not felt in a long time.
'Marty', he said to himself. The human who followed me back to his shuttle on Homeworld. I thought that he had died for sure...why is he here? Why is....

    Quite suddenly, the reason for everything struck Kyp, and it wasn't pleasant. Rather, it was one of those realizations that quickly opens a dark, scary pit in your intestines and doesn't close it soon enough. It explained the apparitions of Marty and Roslyn; it explained the lack of feeling he was experiencing; it even explained why Sigig and Mnoth were here.

   We're all...........dead. he said to himself.
Marty, Roslyn, me, Sigig, Mnoth - all of us. We all died on Homeworld that day, and now that strange energy is forcing us to always keep converging, always keep fighting, always keep running.

           ....we're dead, and this is some horrible afterlife...


    Kyp blurted it out to Sigig. Everything made sense now. We're dead! he said.

    We're not dead YET, said Sigig, not really listening.

    No, I mean, we all died before. This is some sick, undead dream. You, me, Mnoth, Roslyn, Marty.....

    What is he talking about? asked Mnoth, curiously.

    He's off his rocker, said Sigig menacingly, moving up to Kyp. What are you trying to pull, granger? he asked through his teeth, angrily.

    Oh come on, you can stop pretending. It doesn't matter if Mnoth knows, because he's DEAD. We all are!

    What makes you think we're dead? Sigig hissed. Do you see dead people? he meant it sarcastically.
 
    Yes! Roslyn was here, twice, and now Marty's in that cave up ahead.

    Who's Marty? The one I crushed on Homeworld?

    I told you already, you never crushed anyone back there. insisted Kyp.

    Never mind. Look, this is just madness on your part. Don't include me in your granger-frenia. I don't see dead people, I don't sense dead people, what-EVER. And, if you keep this pessimism up, who knows? Maybe you will be dead.

    I am not a pessimist. retorted Kyp. I'm a realist. Look around - the planet is lost. This would never have happened if your Overmind had listened to me.

    Kyp, do you know why we're here? asked Sigig. Because we're not idiots. We CHOSE this planet, this Overmind. He is much greater than any Overmind you have ever made, let alone met. You think the humans have the day? Well they don't. Our new Master has a    l i t t l e   s u r p r i s e   planned for these filthy breeders when they cross our threshold. Your lack of faith disgusts me.

    I don't see it being a big enough surprise to stop all of them, said Kyp.

    Doesn't matter. The trick is to never give up - you have already failed in that respect. We will continue to fight! We will whittle them away, one filthy human at a time, starting with the ones in that cave! Mnoth! Losh! Ready yourselves, we will break through in a few seconds.

    Well I won't make it, said Kyp.

    Good, replied Sigig. I don't want to see you again. Your services as a builder are far outweighed by your insanity.

    Oh God, make up your mind! cried Kyp.

    I just did. Get out of here. said Sigig, kicking a face-full of moss into Kyp's eyes. Kyp jumped back and coughed. He then turned for the forest.

    Just you wait. You will see the dead ones, and you'll know that I'm not lying, called Kyp, over his shoulder. Sigig spat at him and turned back to the mountain.

    Ready?
Mnoth and Losh nodded. Sigig took a few deep breaths, braced his legs, and charged. He smashed one turret, then a second. Another was ten feet away, he turned to slash it, but stepped on a metal webbing on the ground. It sent painful surges of electricity up his legs and crackling through his back. He probably wouldn't have escaped if Losh had not pierced his bladed leg deep into the repeater and disabled the whole base.

    Sigig roared with vengeful anger; a roar that echoed of the mountainside and was heard by soldiers across the forest.
    I was going to just lop their heads off, he growled, But now, I'm going to actually eat them. Tear them apart, while they're alive!

    Mnoth smiled. For a moment, he thought he remembered something, but it slipped away quickly. Whatever it was, it had been a good memory, and Mnoth decided that remembering having a good memory was better than nothing. He followed Sigig into the cave, sensing that the humans were not far ahead.







to be continued below.....

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Re: Kyp the Pilgrim - Part I
« Reply #27 on: December 13, 2011, 07:52:12 am »
continued from above...




Chapter Ten
The Heresy Ends


    Kyp was wondering around the forest in a haze. Having come to the realization that he was already dead and that this was some form of postmortem hallucination, he didn't put much purpose into his trek. He didn't even know exactly where he was or what he was doing when the dart hit him.

    It was a well-aimed shot, the projectile seating itself firmly between two plates of his dorsal armor before discharging its synthesized death. Kyp thought that a stinging insect had lodged itself on his back, and gave only one or two shudders before forgetting about it. A full minute later, he started to get dizzy. The dark green of the forest started to blur with the brightening sky, and the sensation of stepping into a cool waterfall broke over his body. The passage of another minute found him without locomotion, and a further minute, the loss of his vision. As the last color drained from his perception, he thought he saw a human step out of the foliage.

    Then, all was blackness....

                                                  ....there were no dreams.....
    ...no sensations.....

                            ....no hope, until -

    A sound - he heard something fuzzy. It was a human, yelling. A human female, who seemed pretty angry. His hearing started to come into focus, but none of his other senses came to his aid. He could not even feel his own body.

    "What the HELL do you think you are doing? I am a journalist! A goddam JOURNALIST! You can't do this to me!", said the voice.

    "I'm sorry, ma'am, but this falls under military jurisdiction. You are not military," came a male reply.

    "You TOOK my property away from me!" she continued to yell. "You CAN'T DO THAT!"

    "Your 'property', ma'am, falls under our jurisdiction. You can't just take alien organisms wherever you want, even if it is dead."

    "YOU - YOU - You'll pay for this! I have friends! You're in for a world of hurt," she replied savagely.

    "If you say so, ma'am," said the marine.
Kyp heard her crash out of the room and slam a door. He could tell that he was in some sort of confined space, because the sound was different from the openness of the woods.

    "Bitch," he heard someone say.

    "Eh, you get used to it," said the first voice. "What I don't understand is why she wants the thing so badly. It's dead - she's no scientist. I mean, sure, it is that black granger everyone's been going on about, but seriously."

    "Never believed the rumors myself," replied the other one. Kyp heard more footsteps and people entering the room. "Still, it is a sight. I wonder whose wall it'll end up on."

    "Unlikely. It'll probably be sent to the labs on Ventas and dissected. They'll want to know how it got so intelligent on its own, and maybe figure out how it got the other nests to stop fighting."

    A double-chime sounded from some far off place, and echoed around them.

    "Well, that's our shift," said the first voice. "Ah, here are the replacements."
Kyp started to sense light - foggy at first, but slowly defining into several shades of blue. It was fluorescent light. He heard boots stamp out of the room, and the voices diminished. He still couldn't move. Suddenly, a new voice started up.

    "Woooooowww......look at it. I can't believe that I'm seeing the one-and-only Kyp!" said one voice, all hush and awe.

    "I know, right?" came a similar reply. "Too bad he's dead. I bet those scientists are crying back on Ventas. They'd have loved him alive."

    "Yeah. You don't suppose - HEY! Don't lean on that! What the hell are you thinking?!?"
 
    "Lean on what? What is that?"

    "What is that? Are you kidding? That's the power-network overload control. Are you trying to overload every reactor on the planet?" said one with exasperation.

    "What?!? Why the heck is there even a control like that?," came the flummoxed reply.

    "It's so that if any forward base gets overrun, we can nuke it remotely with its own reactor. It's been that way for ages!"

    "I NEVER saw anything like that before, and I've been on three other patrols in my time. You guys are crazy."

    "Well that's why it has triple-safety catches - so that morons like you don't accidentally blow everyone up..."

    While the voices continued, Kyp senses a third person enter the room. The individual was trying to do it quietly, but was easy to detect for Kyp. Moments later, he heard a whispered voice near his head. It was the female from before.

    "Look, I don't know if you can even hear me, let alone understand me, but you're not dead. I didn't use the serum in my dart, it was just regular tranquilizer. They don't know that. I was trying to save you from them..."

    "HEY! You're not supposed to be in here!" came a shout from nearby. Kyp heard a chair scraped away and hasty bootsteps.

    "Kyp, I'm SORRY - " she blurted out, before kicking and dragging noises ensued.

    "You have NO business being here! I'm going to report you. Get out!" he heard a door slam. His vision was starting to clarify more. He could now see lines and shapes.

    "Hey, you better follow her," said the other voice. "She could try to cause more trouble."

    "OK, just as far as the hall though. Hey, I'm getting a cup of joe. Want any?"

    "Sure.....wait, you never make it right. I'll come with you."

    Amazingly, Kyp listened as both humans left the room. Sure that he was alone now, he opened his eyes fully and turned his head. He was in a small control room. There were no windows, just colorful consoles and swathes of buttons. He tested one of his limbs. It moved grudgingly. The floor beneath him was some kind of cheap, cold tile, and the air was cool.

    I'm ...not... dead. I'm not. he thought to himself. She was right...but how? What's serum? Oh, my head...
He took further stock of his situation. He had obviously been dumped in the middle of the floor for the humans' gratification. They must have been gloating over him, he realized. A lump of sourness crossed his mind and his throat simultaneously. Hatred, or something. He hated all of them. Every human, every alien. Why was it so hard to find decent creatures in this world. Kyp snarled.

    Breaking his concentration, a voice crackled from the other end of the room. Kyp realized it was a radio transmission, but only after the adrenaline faded. He limped over to the console, and hopped painfully up onto a chair. In front of him, several holographic screens depicted the mountain. There were many moving lights over this display, and he had a hard time figuring them out. The mountain was depicted from a top-down perspective. That, he could understand. What he could not understand were the threads of blue lights that reached out towards its center, and the red lights that huddled in the center. After a moment, he guessed that the red lights were aliens, or the alien base at least; and that the blue lights represented the human incursion. Before he could analyze the situation further, the radio crackled again. He listened carefully.

    "Reactor control, I repeat, where are you guys, copy?" came the voice. It sounded frustrated and out of breath.

    "Reactor control, respond! We are encountering seismic activity within the mountain. Things are definitely heating up around here, copy."
Kyp's attention was redirected by a blinking red alarm overlay that appeared on the mountain screen. It showed a large radius around the mountain in red, and a set of numbers popped up. These numbers began counting down, rapidly.

    "Reactor control, COPY," the voice was panicking now, and there was a rumbling backnoise. "COPY, COPY!"

    Kyp realized what was happening. The mountain was erupting. It must have been the "little surprise" that Sigig had alluded to before he had blacked out. And, Kyp thought grudgingly, the tyrant had been right. It was catching the humans off guard.

    It truly seemed like his kind might stand a chance...

    But what about the rest of the humans on the planet? They were many in number. Victory was not certain. Kyp let his eyes wander over the console. They settled on a large panel that was devoid of controls except for a large, red safety flip.

    This is what they were talking about....what blows up every human reactor...
He looked back to the screen. If he could blow them all up, he could change the tide of the battle - maybe even the war. But did he want to? He thought back to the way he had been tortured in ATCS. He thought back to Richard and his sickening arm device. He thought back to every time that he had been prodded with the stun stick. And it was enough. He started for the red safety catch. It was difficult to grab onto, but he managed to hook under it and pull it open.
    To his dismay, there was another one beneath it. This one had a smaller gap to latch under, and took a full 30 seconds to pry up. Though there was a third catch, it was open-ended and easy to pull. With the final safety catch out of the way, the hologram changed and a voiced monotone chanted, "please designate target."

    Ok, ok, ok, it wants me to chose which machine to blow up. Kyp noticed a plethora of lightning symbols appear on the mountain map. They encircled the mountain and forest completely. Kyp reached for one to designate, but his huge foreclaw dominated the hologram and shifted the image.

    What now? he said with consternation. The display had shifted perspective, and now showed the planet's surface as well as the sky above it. Kyp tried again to reach for a target. This time, it turned red when he passed his foreclaw through it. His foreclaw was large, though, and passed through the sky part of the display as well. Several icons appeared and turned red there too.

    What? Why would there be reactors in the sky? thought Kyp, but then it hit him: Ships! Those reactors are aboard the human ships!
He waved his foreleg through the holo-display again. His large claw caught all the reactors on the screen, turning their icons red. The monotone chimed up again.

    "Targets designated," it said. Then, quite suddenly, a loud alarm sounded. Apertures in the ceiling opened and orange alarm lights started oscillating through the room. Kyp heard footsteps. The humans had been alerted. He heard one curse.
    Gliding across the console again, he made it back to the overload control just as the two humans turned into the room. The one in front turned to stone, his face paling and mouth dropping. The one behind passed out and hit the floor. Only now, by looking in their direction, did Kyp notice that there was a reactor in the other end of the room.

    Great he thought. There's ALWAYS something...

    The remaining human started stuttering. "N-n-n-now K-Kyp....l-listen up. Y-Y-Y-You don't want th-this, do you?" he said, taking a step forward. Kyp really had no idea what to do. If he hit the button, he would die, along with all these humans. He had no particular wish to die, but -

    - but, from behind the human, another human stepped out. This human was much shorter, and stood at ease. Kyp was almost relieved. It was Roslyn. The man took another step towards Kyp. "Thaaaaat's it. Nothing hasty...." he whispered, torrential sweat making its way down his creased face. Kyp glanced over at Roslyn again. She nodded at him, and almost smiled sadly. Kyp knew now. Turning back to the marine, he spoke. He had no idea if the human understood him.

    It's never going to end for me. Why should it end for you? he said.

   

    And he pushed the button.











This concludes Kyp the Pilgrim. I will not be doing a 'Part II', or otherwise continue writing in this fashion. I'm not as good at it as I used to be, and I don't really have the time. Don't worry, this isn't the "end" end. I'll write a short story to tie up any loose ends (like I did with 'Granger Island' after Kyp the Granger was finished). I hope you enjoyed the story, despite the fact that it took me so long to write it. Happy pwning and Merry Christmas to all of you.


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Re: Kyp the Pilgrim - Part I [Concluded]
« Reply #28 on: January 06, 2012, 03:03:33 pm »
I never liked many novels. I do know. I've said this before, publish it.
these are stupid suggestions, don't even waste our time.
I don't like your negative attitude.

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Re: Kyp the Pilgrim - Part I [Concluded]
« Reply #29 on: January 08, 2012, 10:42:43 pm »
I never liked many novels. I do now. I've said this before, publish it.

Hmmm.
I'm hoping, when summer rolls around, to get started making this (or the original, rather) into a CG Movie. I figure if I get enough help, I can finish it by the end of summer. Some TremZ peeps have hinted that they'd help me with it when the TremZ rush is over.

Who knows? It could happen.