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Luskan

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The Diary of a Mercenary: A multi-part series
« Reply #30 on: September 09, 2006, 05:59:56 pm »
Great stuff ^_^, I can't wait to read more

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« Reply #31 on: September 12, 2006, 04:30:07 am »
awesome! very nice.
t's time to rock some socks.
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Seffylight

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The Diary of a Mercenary: A multi-part series
« Reply #32 on: October 24, 2006, 03:43:27 pm »
In which Falcon muses retrospectively, and Sarge makes a pretty scarf.

Entry Four

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August 17th, 4026
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It's the days like these -- the slow, dragging, boring rests in-between duties that you spend just staring out porthole by your bunk -- that I miss my old life the most. Looking retrospectively on those days when we'd just lay together in bed all day, letting the world flow by around us, I finally realize how good we had it. Back before the economy crashed, before the war, before the fallout -- before the corporations. I long for those simple days again. I long for the peaceful, quiet, perfect days that I'd work on my novel.

Spending my youth along the beach side, sitting on the warm sand as the foamy waves came crashing in, watching the gulls soar between the speeders that streaked through the sky, and the brilliantly fiery sunsets had filled me with the inspiration and ambition to be a writer before I'd even hit puberty. Coincidentally, it was that very same beach line that I discovered my only other reason for living: you. That's all over now, though, since the corporations like Haos arose out of the war. There wasn't any room for writers anymore with the proliferation of fighting throughout the galaxy, so I picked up a gun and joined the PMC.

Speaking of the PMC, they're bringing in that extra battalion tomorrow. Loads of kids, fresh out of the pathetic training they give them. Sarge and I are supposed to get eight of them that are going to be serving under us, with me as his right-hand. Apparently one time in an actual battle is enough to warrant more responsibility in his eyes -- even said that I'd be ready for a promotion some day before this was all over. I'm surprised that he actually talks to me like a person.

I had an interesting conversation with Sarge today. Since he is currently my only bunk-mate in the quarters for the Green Hawks until other privates are put under our command, we spend a lot of time laying around and talking about various things. Sports, weaponry, the latest speeders, holovids we've seen lately -- anything to keep from talking about ourselves. However, he saw me messing around with my datapad, and asked me what I was doing. When I told him that I was working on a novel, he seemed a little surprised. Guess he didn't see me as the writer-type. He only had one thing to say in response.

"That so? Yeah, yeah.. I can understand that... I like to knit."

I guess it's like Jones always said: "Everyone's human".

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kozak6

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The Diary of a Mercenary: A multi-part series
« Reply #33 on: October 24, 2006, 05:07:28 pm »
Brilliant/10

Nice work.  :D

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« Reply #34 on: October 28, 2006, 06:13:07 pm »
More.Seriously if they ever decide to make a sp campaign for Trem you should be the storyboard leader.

Seffylight

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Re: The Diary of a Mercenary: A multi-part series
« Reply #35 on: September 29, 2008, 02:57:34 am »
Almost two years? Geez.

Entry Five

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These kids are so damn green that it nearly makes me sick. It seems like the PMC has shortened the training process significantly in response to a demand for more troops. From what the new recruits told Sarge and I, it's now just a two week PT boot camp followed by a week of stimulant-fueled runs through the A.T.C.S. Some of these guys haven't even so much have shot a gun in their lives, and they're still so high off of the stimulants that they haven't yet realized that those simulations might as well be a computer game.

Look at me. It's not even been a week yet since my first combat encounter, and yet here I am trying to sound like the Captain. You wouldn't believe the dressing-down he gave a bunch of booters that he caught messing around with the lasguns. They'll be cleaning the cans by hand for the unforeseeable future. Fortunately for Sarge and I, none of them were assigned to the Green Hawks, and I doubt the older man would put up with them for long if they had been.

I suppose, looking over all the new recruits, we got lucky in who we got stuck with. By the end of the day, only a couple out of the eight (two eighteen-year old clone twins named O'Connor) were still strung out on the stim injections they had been subjected to before deployment. They've both come down now after a reluctant night's sleep, though, and they seem to be mostly alright. Sarge still thought it'd be best if they spent the day in sickbay, and I couldn't disagree.

The rest came through fine, though some are a little shaky about their first Oxygen Platform patrol. Not a one of them are over twenty years old, and only one of them – a rough-looking kid from the Martian ranching colonies that Sarge has nicknamed Dovetail – is especially familiar with the weaponry. Sarge said he's putting him on point for the patrols tomorrow, and the kid was the only one that didn't flinch. He reminds me a little of Jones. Maybe he'll be luckier.

The long summer here is almost over, and an even longer winter is on it's way.

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Death On Ice

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Re: The Diary of a Mercenary: A multi-part series
« Reply #36 on: September 29, 2008, 03:01:05 am »
Wow. I'm amazed you remembered, considering how long it's been.
This was before I joined, that's amazing.

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Re: The Diary of a Mercenary: A multi-part series
« Reply #37 on: September 29, 2008, 03:36:37 am »
awesome! It's history kids!  :)
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Seffylight

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Re: The Diary of a Mercenary: A multi-part series
« Reply #38 on: October 04, 2008, 12:06:33 pm »
Wow. I'm amazed you remembered, considering how long it's been.
This was before I joined, that's amazing.
You're such a silly billy.

I'm going to be trying to do one of these every Sunday from now on. Which is much different than the "every other day" thing I promised two years ago, and then immediately failed to keep up with.

And now you can watch as I fail to keep up with this schedule too!

EDIT: except for november, when I'll be doing nano, and so won't have any time to write anything at all.

EDIT DOS: oh god why am I such a liar

I'm probably going to bin this because I'm really tired of it and I no longer write like I did when I started it, also it's pretty crap compared to some of the other stuff in this subforum now so I am really embarassed about it and oh god it tears me up inside to be knocked down the ladder like this I used to be the only guy writing about Tremulous I hope you all die.

I imagine I'll have something a bit more decent done and up by the end of the year if I can STOP PROCRASTINATING.

peace out, homiez :granger:
« Last Edit: November 23, 2008, 11:33:56 am by Seffylight »
Stop it. Seriously.

Hendrich

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Re: The Diary of a Mercenary: A multi-part series
« Reply #39 on: November 26, 2008, 11:05:14 pm »
Nice work Seffylight, I love the thought you put into these "logs" of yours, quality work. Keep up the great job, I'm looking out for these stories.

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Re: The Diary of a Mercenary: A multi-part series
« Reply #40 on: December 02, 2008, 04:37:11 am »
You cannot quit.

We demand more NAOW.
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Seffylight

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Re: The Diary of a Mercenary: A multi-part series
« Reply #41 on: December 02, 2008, 06:14:16 am »
You cannot quit.

TOO LATE. Player1 has the journal entry market on the lockdown now*, so I will be doing something a bit different sometime around Christmas/SOON.

*this is not the actual reason, I'm really just getting nowhere when I try to write more of this stuff
Stop it. Seriously.

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Re: Diary of a Merc: A Trem Journal
« Reply #42 on: December 02, 2008, 06:41:10 am »
*not the actual reason

I like the sarcastic stuff where the real you shows through. That stuff makes me laugh and cry. This is the thread that inspired mine*. Please don't let it die, even if you come back to it years from now, as a rough-and-ready veteran scanning the log entries of your first few battles. 8)

Cheers!

*I took the easy way out and used the Lovecraft correspondence framing device, complete with unreliable narrator(s) and conflicting reports. But then, the whole "nature of truth" thing has been quite a theme for me since I got knee-deep in R. A. Wilson.

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Re: The Diary of a Mercenary: A multi-part series
« Reply #43 on: December 10, 2008, 03:03:53 am »
Wow. I'm amazed you remembered, considering how long it's been.
This was before I joined, that's amazing.
You're such a silly billy.

I'm going to be trying to do one of these every Sunday from now on. Which is much different than the "every other day" thing I promised two years ago, and then immediately failed to keep up with.

And now you can watch as I fail to keep up with this schedule too!

EDIT: except for november, when I'll be doing nano, and so won't have any time to write anything at all.

EDIT DOS: oh god why am I such a liar

I'm probably going to bin this because I'm really tired of it and I no longer write like I did when I started it, also it's pretty crap compared to some of the other stuff in this subforum now so I am really embarassed about it and oh god it tears me up inside to be knocked down the ladder like this I used to be the only guy writing about Tremulous I hope you all die.

I imagine I'll have something a bit more decent done and up by the end of the year if I can STOP PROCRASTINATING.

peace out, homiez :granger:

Procrastination Power, AWAY
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