I understand the intent. It is obvious, and goes without saying. What I am quibbling with is the execution, which to my eye, is just a wee bit, shall we say, over the top. Not by that much, mind you. In the last picture I think you about nailed it, except to the non-Trem player, it just doesn't look that threatening. In the first shot the red blob is too jarringly out of focus. In the third shot I think you about nailed it. In the second one, the use of effects, while interesting in its own right is a bit much, and it's hard to relate the death throes of the mighty rant to the tiny, faraway, puny human figures.
Just my personal take on the aesthetics of your compositional style, since you posted it here, for criticism and encouragement. I offer both. Make moar plz.
