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Re: Kyp the Granger - Part II
« Reply #30 on: August 12, 2010, 07:56:38 am »
continued from above. . .




                             Chapter Seven
                                Deja-Vu



    Sigig's work had been admirable, worthy of double or even triple advancement. Mnoth was remembering this for when they reached an Overmind. Sigig's plan had been even better, amazing Mnoth and rekindling hope and certainty.
  
    Mnoth was feeling the fires of fate, and he did not remember ever feeling that before. Kyp, that mediocre granger from the Ventas cave, had been found alive in a cage in the same ship on the same trip. Threads were coming together, weaving a plot that Mnoth was sure would be in his favor.

    Standing by the personnel hatch, Mnoth waited for sounds of Sigig's return. Detecting him, Mnoth began muzzling the large, dim-witted zirkis away from the door, lest any of them should escape with him.

There was a scuffling noise, and then more scuffling noise. Mnoth bared his teeth, smiling to himself that Sigig could be such a professional killer, and yet have such trouble with the relatively simple task of swiping a security card through a slot.
    Mnoth heard him try twice, drop the card, pick it up, and try again. On the fourth try, it slipped through with a beep, and the door slid upwards into the wall.

    Mnoth looked at Sigig with an amused expression.

    Don't. Say. Anything. hissed Sigig with a pained deadliness.

    I wasn't about to, replied Mnoth levelly.

    Well, you get to carry this around, I'm through with it.

    Why?

    You have a lower jaw.

    Mnoth opened his mouth and clamped the security card under his tongue.

    I hope you didn't kill anyone to get this. . .

    He was sleeping, Sigig replied. Everyone is.

    Then let's get moving. Mnoth began to follow Sigig through the corridors.

    How far?

    This door here, said Sigig, coming to a halt. Mnoth dropped the keycard, and Sigig climbed to the console and started swiping again. He got it on the second try this time, using his mouth and front two legs in unison.

    The door slid open with a decompressing sound, and Mnoth looked into the cargo bay.

    Sigig, what's wrong with this picture?

    Nothing. That's Kyp. said Sigig, somewhat confused.

    Yes, but why can I see Kyp? pressed Mnoth.

    Because. . . Because I left...the....tarp....up - crap!

    I'm surprised, growled Mnoth in a low pitch. You usually don't miss that kind of thing.

    Yeah, well, I was a little distracted at the time.

    I don't need to tell you what would have happened if a human came and saw your handiwork, said Mnoth, walking into the room. That's the first strike against you, in all the time I've known you.

    Oh come off it. said Sigig irritably as the door closed behind them.

    Mnoth walked up to the cages. Kyp was sound asleep, and the other aliens were dozing as well. Wasting no time, Sigig walked up to Kyp and pricked him through the bars.

    Snorrrt! Aaah! said Kyp, opening all of his eyes one after another.
    My Hovel!

    Your cage. corrected Mnoth.
Mnoth's voice had an electric effect on Kyp, who stood straight up and and faced Mnoth like the Ghost of Christmas Yet To Come.

    Long time. said Mnoth, more interested in the dumb aliens near Kyp.

    Kyp said nothing. Mnoth paced by the other cages as Sigig pulled the tarps up to reveal them.
  
    Oh. Yes. They have been tampered with. said Mnoth, looking into the drugged aliens' eyes and sensing nothing from them.

    All as I have told you, said Sigig.

    Alright, let's get started, said Mnoth.

    Wait, said Kyp suddenly. What about the girl?

    Sigig's eyes opened wide. He had forgotten to tell Mnoth about her, due to reveling in his escape plan. Mnoth stopped suddenly. A piece of dust fell on the other side of the room.
 
    Girl? inquired Mnoth, speaking slowly.

    He didn't tell you? realized Kyp happily. The girl from the forest cave - she's here on the ship! She's in control of me, and these aliens!

    Mnoth seemed to have choked on the information, and wasn't moving or speaking.

   Did you hear me? grumbled Kyp.

   "Distracted". Yes, you were. Why didn't you tell me? She's alive!? Mnoth was advancing on Sigig with murder in his eyes.

   Backing up onto the wall, Sigig began to squeal pathetically:
   I was going to! But then I found Kyp! Stay away! I got you out of there, you'd be no where without me! I forgot!

   Standing at the wall, Mnoth looked up at him. ALIVE. . .

   Sigig darted around the wall, sure that Mnoth was healed enough to pounce him into a pulp.

   Such incompetence! You're just like Morig. I think I'll end it right now.

   NO! Why did we put up with him for so long when he was so much worse? Why don't I have more leeway than he?

   Morig was an ignorant moron, and when morons make mistakes, they pay. When professionals make mistakes, everyone pays. Mnoth kept right under Sigig, who was out of ideas and out of luck. Give me one reason not to kill you right now.

   Help came from an unlikely quarter.
   You need him to unfasten the cages and work the doors, said Kyp plainly.

   Mnoth stopped, the reality of the situation fighting with the realization that the reason for the situation couldn't both be dealt with at the same time.

   Sigig waited tensely. After a few moments, This is two strikes, Sigig. One more, and I won't even warn. And you can forget about using me as a reference, tell the Hivemind about your exploits on your own, see if they believe you.

   Sigig breathed a sigh of relief. Two things were certain. He'd live now, and Kyp would die later. Coming down from the wall, Sigig walked up to the cages.

   Which one first? Dragoon or Basilisk? asked Sigig.

   Who cares. Dragoon, I guess. Mnoth was remembering the face of the girl, wondering what she looked like now, and how she could have lived.

   Sigig climbed onto the cage of the dragoon, and saw how far down he could reach.

   Ready?
        Ready. replied Mnoth, who took a position in front of the stupefied dragoon.

   Keep him occupied. said Sigig somewhat redundantly.

   Hey! Mnoth snorted at the dragoon. The alien looked up at him with barely any recognition. Friend? it said.

    Mnoth waited a moment, then said Friend.

    The caged dragoon didn't have time to grin stupidly, because at that moment Sigig cut it's throat open from on top of the cage.

   That was easy, said Sigig as he got down.

   No it wasn't. said Mnoth lowly.

   So now we drag him back to the zirki pen. Which end do you want?

   Mnoth looked at him with mild disgust. What a shame. Sigig had shown such promise.


   Though no one saw them, the sight of a Dragoon and a Basilisk pulling a dead body through the corridors, looking at each other and saying nothing, must have been quite a sight indeed. More comical was that they were both thinking the same thought, roughly translated to, "One day, I'm going to kill you."





this chapter will be continued below. . .
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Re: Kyp the Granger - Part II
« Reply #31 on: August 14, 2010, 02:32:34 am »
You rock!!!  ;D ;D ;D ;D

I'm gonna be watching this topic until this awesome series ends!!!

When it does, i will be sad.  :'(

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Re: Kyp the Granger - Part II
« Reply #32 on: August 14, 2010, 03:28:46 am »
You rock!!!  ;D ;D ;D ;D

I'm gonna be watching this topic until this awesome series ends!!!

When it does, i will be sad.  :'(
Stop it.
You're making me blush.

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Re: Kyp the Granger - Part II
« Reply #33 on: August 14, 2010, 07:15:48 am »
You rock!!!  ;D ;D ;D ;D

I'm gonna be watching this topic until this awesome series ends!!!

When it does, i will be sad.  :'(
Stop it.
You're making me blush.

I found this story to be really boring, and is too long to possibly sustain my interest, also, I started bleeding out of my eyes upon seeing this mess. Feel better?
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Re: Kyp the Granger - Part II
« Reply #34 on: August 14, 2010, 05:55:09 pm »
...Lucifer Corporation...

That sounds a bit too evil to be a corporation name even if it was in 2000 years.  :laugh:

Unless everyone in the future are satanists.
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Re: Kyp the Granger - Part II
« Reply #35 on: August 14, 2010, 06:08:47 pm »
I found this story to be really boring, and is too long to possibly sustain my interest, also, I started bleeding out of my eyes upon seeing this mess. Feel better?

Back to Normal! =D
...Lucifer Corporation...

That sounds a bit too evil to be a corporation name even if it was in 2000 years.  :laugh:

Unless everyone in the future are satanists.
While Lucifer does refer to the devil, it was also his name b4 his downfall, which meant something nice, light-bearer.

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Re: Kyp the Granger - Part II
« Reply #36 on: August 14, 2010, 06:16:10 pm »
Light-bearer, as in radioactive, explodey and teamkill-y light balls. That makes perfect sense...

ok, can you give me the tool thingy app that can code?

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Re: Kyp the Granger - Part II
« Reply #37 on: August 15, 2010, 07:16:32 am »
Light-bearer, as in radioactive, explodey and teamkill-y light balls. That makes perfect sense...

Oh, I thought of Light-beerer, as in someone who delivers coronas to everyone.
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Re: Kyp the Granger - Part II
« Reply #38 on: August 21, 2010, 07:41:37 am »
chapter Seven, Deja-Vu, is continued from above......



    Blinding snow swirled around the vast grey passenger ship as it slowly alighted on the landing pad above the loading bays of the Arachnid Complex. The layers of fluff here hadn't been disturbed in months, since the planet wasn't exactly the main concourse of Coalition commerce. The Niveus Corporation had built this and several other stations on the remote ice planet called "Pluth". Much interesting work had been done in them by Coalition and corporate scientists alike.

   A series of unfortunate events had occurred several years back, that had resulted in the closure and quarantine of most of the Pluth stations. One incident was related to experiments with the dark energy that humans had taken from the Origin Nexus. The Lucifer corp. had attempted to design a form of 'hand-cannon' that employed the tremendous power of dark energy. Early tests were promising, but progress was slow as the design teams kept underestimating the blast radius, and were consecutively replaced. The weapon itself, codenamed the Lucifer Cannon, had all but been dismissed as a functional alternative to the age-old grenade launcher, partly due to instability, and the constant lack of dark energy used to fuel it.

   Other incidents had taken the form of explosions attributed to corporate espionage, and a number of devastating alien incursions had rendered personnel and equipment null and void. Only now, after extensive robotic probing, certain stations were being opened for operation. One of three specifically bio-science-oriented stations, Arachnid 1 (or Arachnid, as most called it), had been selected by the Lucifer Corp. as the sight of the proposed alien testing.


    Roslyn stretched as she walked down the service ramp onto the tarmac, then quickly closed her arms around herself as she felt how cold it was. She waited impatiently as the servicemen defrosted a control console that hid below several years of ice and snow.

    Such a hideous place... thought Roslyn. They were supposed to put the aliens through their paces, but not kill them outright. Or perhaps she was underestimating them again.
    Best not to do that, she thought to herself.

    The servicemen had finally melted enough ice to push the buttons that needed pushing, and a low, terrible groaning noise joined with the swirling as a huge bay door slid away, revealing a dark, subterranean room with numerous cargo lifts and mountains of unmarked crates. A burst of warm, stagnant air escaped, throwing snow and noses up and away.

    "That's right. Things die here,"a technician told her with dark cheerfulness. Then,
    "Hello Sir. Everything's in order, unloading will begin as soon as we've cleared the facility."

    "And why," said Professor Wetz in a deep voice, "hasn't this been done yet? We landed half-an-hour ago.

    "I'm sorry, sir, but orders are for the Remdann security-persons to evaluate the facility for safety before we can let you in. And they haven't landed yet," he said, but indicated two growing shadows that were materializing out of the snowfall.

    "Considering what they're being payed, you'd think they'd be running a tighter operation," said Wetz sourly. He turned and began to walk back into the ship.

    "Notify me when they have finished, please."

    "Yes, Sir!" said the technician, enthusiastically. Roslyn rolled her eyes and shivered.

    "I'm Richard," he said, turning to her with eyes that smiled a little too widely.

    "I'm Carrie," she replied, and turned for the ship herself.

    "I thought -", he began.

    "Middle name. Friends only." She hurried into the ship. It was so cold out here.

    He was still looking after her when the hatch closed. Nice to finally meet you, he said to himself.


   

    Jake, Gill and Marty were all part of the same squad. That meant that they marched together, ate together, fought together, and died together. And they were just fine with that. There was also John, but he didn't say much.

    Their shuttle dropped quickly onto the landing pad, dwarfed by the great cargo ship. Alongside them, shuttles were landing from the other destroyer as well, the troops ready to scour the facility and set up camp.

   Marty, the Mec-1 or squad leader, stood in front of them as they lined up in the snow. Farther down the line, other squads lined up to receive their orders.

   "Here's the story," Marty began. "This facility was probed two months ago by Remdann Electronic Spies. They found minor biosigns, probably stray dretches, and nothing else of import. Our job is to weed these out, if they are still alive, and to secure the facility. Then we will remain with the civilian team for the duration of their month-long stay."
    Gill began to raise his hand.

    "Orders. It's a formality for the records, okay?" Marty told him directly. "You didn't think it would all be glamor and glory, did you?"

    Gill quieted down, visibly pissed off.

    "We clear on this? Any questions? John?" Marty joked. The others let out a chuckle and John grinned slightly.

    "Good. You've been briefed, we'll await the orders of the Mec-2 to move out."

    They stood at attention as well as they could in the ankle-high, gusting snow. Finally, once all squads had been briefed, the Mec-2 transmitted the orders to move out. The landing bay slid open again, and the soldiers slid down metal cables into the darkness one after another.

    "Okay, men, it's our job to get the lights on, that's one floor down. Jake, take point."

    "Yes sir!" Jake started off down a long hallway, the other following. They had their rifles at the ready, sidearms, and the Mec-1 had a throwing knife that was more a status symbol than a tool.

   "Floorplan says take a left at the junction." said Marty.

   "Where's that?" said Jake, squinting through a pair of night-vision goggles.

   "Twenty paces," replied Marty. "Who's got the scanner?"
   No one answered.

   "Good, John's got it. I trust him over any one of you."

   "Turning left!" notified Jake, having reached the intersection. He walked hard into a solid wall of crates, upsetting several of the topmost boxes and making a general ruckus. Two bodies crashed into him from behind.

   "This is stupid," complained Jake, rubbing his head. "I can't see a thing. Why don't we have flashlights?" The others looked at him, grumbling.

   "Well?" he pressed.

   "There will be no flashlights," Marty said in a godlike monotone.
   Jake let a sigh out and took the scanner from John.

   "It's the next junction, not this one," he corrected, breathing heavily. A box that had been grandstanding on the edge fell loudly, breaking and spilling its anonymous contents. They all jumped. The other squads were out of sight and hearing now.

   "Okay, let's get moving."

   They went on, turning at the junction, and passed through more bays full of stacked boxes, crates and containers. Finally they arrived at a long, gradual ramp that led into blackness.

   "This is it, the generators are down there. Now, who wants to go first?" Marty may have been joking, and may not have been.

   "Heck wid' it." snorted Gill, and started off down the ramp, rifle held in a firing position. The others fell in behind him.

   "John, I want you up front with Gill. Otherwise we'd have no way of knowing if you got nabbed." John shrugged, and moved up in the line.

   "Is he mute?" whispered Jake, checking the crevasses in the ceiling.

   "No." said John suddenly.

   "That's good to know," Jake said.

   The scanner beeped.

   "Twelve-thirty, multiple contacts!" Jake announced in a hushed voice.

   "Awwww, dey're cute!" said Gill.

   They had come upon a gathering of three or four dretches at the bottom of the ramp. There was a huge room beyond them. The dretches did not attack or scurry away, just parted and looked at the humans curiously.

   "Musta been without an OM for too long," observed Gill roughly. "Hey, little guy...c'mere! I won't hurt ya..." he coaxed the nearest bug with wiggling fingers. It didn't move. Gill stepped closer.

   "That's it...come to Papa!" with a sudden motion, Gill stepped firmly onto the dretch with his full weight. The alien burst like a pinata, mucous and guts painting a fan on the metal deck plating. The other dretches exclaimed fearfully in insectoid jitterings, and sped away.

   "Nice, Gill, now you go chase them," Marty said dryly. "We could have had them. What did you want, an autographed photo?"

   "No problem, Sir." said Gill in a low voice.

   Marty shook his head. "Fan out, cover the room. We'll meet on the other side at the generators. When we've - "

   He was interrupted by shots from Gill's rifle, aimed into the darkness. A moment later they heard the splat of a small, falling body.

   "Nice," said John, startling all of them.

   "Looks like competition," said Marty aside to Jake, as they began to separate. Gill grinned and pretended to chew something messily.

   All right! Jake thought to himself. Level One, target practice with retarded bugs.... He moved toward the left wall of the room.

   "Got more contacts, the original three and two more on Jake's side," called Marty softly, who had taken the scanner. Jake braced himself and walked along the wall, checking every platform and pillar for hiding dretches. This was certainly a strange room. As he passed another row of pillars, he looked up.

    A streak of red filled his night-vision. He raised his rifle, but wasn't fast enough. He was knocked sideways by something with serious momentum, and felt a large claw pass through his armor like hot butter. Part of his shoulder pad fell away dreamily, the razor-sharp claw barely missing his skin. Adrenaline blurred his vision and clouded his hearing.
    From where he fell, he faced the red blur and squeezed off a dozen blind shots. The muzzle flashes illuminated the room, and drew the attention of the others.

   "I see it!" called Marty, and he and John both took a knee and fired single shots at the alien. Moving fast, it didn't stop at the wall, but began to bound up it as if it were still moving across a level floor. Sparks lit it up from near misses as it kept its unreal movement tack.  Jake struggled up and held down the trigger, praying for a hit. Several rounds seemed to pierce the red alien, but they did nothing to slow it down. It reached a high platform over the generators and crashed through a vent, out of sight.

   Jake breathed a big sigh of relief and reached for another clip. His hand met with stinging pain halfway down, and he cursed loudly as a dretch dug through his glove. Dropping the rifle from his other hand, he reached for his service pistol, grabbed it, and fired into the bug. The bullet tore the small alien to shreds, but also clipped his finger on the way out.

   "AAaaah, shit!" cried Jake carelessly as his blood mixed with alien goo. "DAMMIT!" He reached for a small pack on his belt, pulled out a syringe, and thrust it into his arm above his wounded hand. If anything, the effects of the drug were more painful than the bite, but at least the wound began to foam and close in what seemed fast-motion. Jake held his breath, sweating heavily. The others had arrived at his side.

   "That," said Jake haltingly, "was not, a dretch."

   "No kidding," said Marty, assessing the damage. "The signals have vanished, so we sent them running. Our priority is the generators. Can you stand?"

   Jake stood up painfully, discarding the syringe and torn glove.

   "Respect it," he waved his pistol shakily, trying to smile. Marty clapped him on the back, and they walked the rest of the way toward the generators.

   "You know, this would never have happened if we had had flashlights," Jake couldn't help but bring up.

   "There will be no flash- " Marty began, but Jake cut him off.

   "If you say that one more time. . ."

   "You'll what?" said Marty, grinning crookedly. They had reached the large, cylindrical engines that powered the station.

   "Where's the 'on' button?" asked Gill loudly.

   "There," said Marty, pointing to a console. "You've gotta prime it first with that crank-handle."

   Gill slung his rifle over his shoulder and began to crank the handle clockwise until he heard a beep. Then he pulled up on a toggle that said simply, "Main Power".

   For a moment, nothing happened. Then a loud humming noise began, and lights came on everywhere. The room was flooded with light, revealing the bullet holes and blood splotches of the last minute. Marty walked over to a com station on the near wall. He picked up the antiquated mouthpiece and spoke into it.

   "This is R-Squad, reporting in. The Power is on."

   Two tries later, "We read you R-Squad. Good work. Head back to camp for debrief."

   "Yes, Sir," Marty said crisply.

   They began to make their way back up the ramp, toward the main hold.

   "Could have been worse," Gill tried to console Jake. "You coulda lost your hand. Imagine where you'd be then."

   Jake thought of someone he knew who had lost a bodypart, and didn't relish the thought. Oh, well. At least she wasn't in this hell-hole.

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Re: Kyp the Granger - Part II
« Reply #39 on: August 24, 2010, 11:53:26 pm »
chapter seven, Deja-Vu, is completed below....




    Everything was ready. The bodies had been moved, the blood-stains had been licked up, and the tarps had been pulled down. Sigig had even managed to latch the cages properly, and he had done his from the inside.

    All that remained was to act docile and stupid. Mnoth figured that this would be simple enough for Sigig and Kyp, one by nature and one by skill, but he actually was unsure of his upcoming reactions. He had never seen a human at close range that he hadn't attacked or maimed in one form or another. His spying missions had always been distanced. Would his act be convincing enough? Would he be able to act at all?

    As if the anticipation wasn't enough, he couldn't focus because he had just learned that the girl was alive.

         She was on this ship, in charge of these aliens.

               And he wouldn't be able to attack her the moment he saw her.

    Mnoth's mind was thoroughly blown. He had to get revenge, he was sure of that, but his only opportunity was turning out to be no opportunity at all. Their only chance was for Kyp to build an Overmind, if the aliens were allowed to move freely as Kyp had intimated. Then that Overmind would have to be briefed, and it would have to decide that the troupe's lives were worth saving. This wasn't always the case, since Overminds who knew their doom was nigh often commanded their children to suicide missions, drugged them into the belief that this was the reason and the meaning of their life.

    Mnoth realized that having lived for so long without Overmind direction might have warped his thinking, even his perception of what was right and wrong. He knew however that it was wrong for Roslyn to live, and since they were so far from the Hivemind, perhaps the Overmind they built could be convinced to Mnoth's line of thought.

    Silent in their cages, they heard approaching humans. They were talking loudly, banging crates as they ferried them around, and generally unafraid.
    The door to the bay opened, and several humans entered. One was an older man with gray hair, who was looking at an accompanying technician. This was probably because that technician was looking too much at - a short woman with blond hair.

    It was true. This was her. She smelled the same way, she breathed the same way, she walked - well, not exactly. Peeping from under the edge of the hanging tarp, Mnoth noticed that part of her foot was metallic, and made the slightest of clinks when used.

    So she got patched up.... Mnoth was amazed. From the next cage over, Sigig tapped him rudely. Mnoth must have started breathing differently, or let his eyes go into focus. Either of those might give them away. So Mnoth quickly sagged his eyes to the floor.

    "Well," said Wetz in a deep voice. The technician looked away quickly, realizing he was caught.

    "Well," continued Wetz, "they don't look too much the worse for the trip."
He grandly pulled the tarp up, casting light upon the aliens. Taking their cues from the still-dozing dretch and marauder, Sigig and Mnoth stayed still. Kyp woke up quickly, however, and began looking at them all excitedly.

    "Huh." Wetz peered at the newcomers. "Our 'goon' and 'basi' appear to be more lucid than I would have expected. We may have to give them a maintenance shot once they are installed. Interesting. Did you get that, Carrie?"

    Roslyn had so far been hiding in the back, always taking notes for Professor Wetz. Now, she made a note of what he had said, and had to come forward as he beckoned her.

    "Yes, Mr. Wetz," she replied, trying not to shake. I haven't been this close since...
 
    "Excellent. Administer them in about six hours, 90 cc's of Xemalta."
Apparently satisfied, Wetz turned to leave. "Richard, please arrange for their movement down to level one, as planned."

    The technician acquiesced, and walked out ahead of him.

    "Uh, sir?" Roslyn was a bit thrown off. "Me?"

    "Me what?" asked Wetz.

    "You want me to administer the shots? By myself?"

    "Yes, you," said Wetz, frowning. "You have the training for this, yes?"

    "Oh, yes, I do, but - "

    "Then it's settled. There's nothing to worry about." He walked out.

    She didn't have time to tell him that her training during her advanced Bio courses only extended as far as injecting large, furry, nice-looking mammals with needles. Still, she had to do it, or forfeit her chances at advancement. It would look very bad for Norma to have to do it. Norma wasn't being as honored as Roslyn. Roslyn wished that she would be there, if only to watch.

    Roslyn finished the note on the pad, and looked up, realizing that she was alone in a room full of aliens, and that the door had closed behind Wetz.

    "Hi." she said quietly.

    The granger kept walking in circles, but the dragoon shifted slightly. Wetz was right, it did look more awake than the others. She was sure it had looked at her several times, even though she had been in the back. This was uncommon for the drugged specimens she had seen before.

    Richard walked in, humming to himself, and ostentatiously checked something behind a different stack of crates. Still humming, he took a note, and walked back out, leaving her alone again.


    Sigig was disturbed, both because he was seeing the girl again, and because Mnoth was doing a miserable job pretending to be drugged. He kept changing his breathing rhythm, kept looking at individual humans, and other mistakes. Sigig though for a moment about what he was doing, and where he was. And he was amazed.

    For his part, Mnoth was trying as hard as he could. The distraction was too powerful, though. She was standing right there. This was inconceivable. It was hurting his diminutive brain. When the other humans walked out, leaving the girl, it was even harder to stay still.

    She said something. Though he didn't know the word, he remembered from his espionage days that this was something humans said when they came together, or met new humans. It must have been directed at him, he thought.

   The nerve.

   After another minute, a techie interrupting briefly, she started for the door with a "bye".

   All we need is a cave, thought Mnoth as she left.



chapter eight will appear below....

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Re: Kyp the Granger - Part II
« Reply #40 on: August 27, 2010, 06:38:25 am »
continued from above.....


                        Chapter Eight
                             Turning Point



    Sigig accepted the needle with uncannily realistic inertia. He didn't move, make a sound, or do anything that might indicate his presence of mind. The girl looked nervous.

    Mnoth pretended to be disinterested in their surroundings. The alien "specimens" had been moved into a circular room with blue lighting. Many tall machines, probably computers, kept humming and displaying data on small screens. The professor's desk was a mess of graphs and bio-readouts. A bobble-head doll was the only hint of personality, goofily depicting one of the more outspoken Coalition politicians.

    It was his turn, he noticed. The girl inserted a second cartridge into the injection-pistol, taking her time and glancing repeatedly at him. She finished as slowly as possible, and walked toward Mnoth. In front of his cage, she didn't stand much taller than two feet above him. Her hand was shaking, which shook the needle in turn. He watched her eyes travel over him, her breathing quicken. Her gaze alighted on the green scar which Mnoth still bore after all these years.

    Uh-oh, thought Mnoth. The cave had been dark, but there was a chance that she had seen his scar and remembered it.

    Oh - guess not! Mnoth smiled inwardly as she slid the latch open on the door of the cage.




    Tremulous, Roslyn slid the cage door to the side. The alien was laying down, not moving, but she watched it's eyes follow her general position. She had to do this, otherwise she'd be blown out of the project, and her future.

    But the memory! Roslyn had an electric flashback to the day she lost her foot. The same alien...or it could be.
    Easing down to hand and knees, she got right up to the cage and held the injector in front of her. She couldn't look away. She saw her face in its glassy eyes. She heard a tapping, and looked down to see that her shivering had been hitting the needle against the bars. She took a deep breath, and reached forward for the forleg.

    Shocked, she saw all of its eyes snap to face her. Her heart skipped a second beat when a hand fell on her shoulder from behind.

    "Wait!"

    "Oh God, Richard! Don't you ever do that again!" She slumped, visibly trembling.
He let go and knelt beside her.

    "Wetz says he changed his mind about the shots. He wants them observed for several more hours first."

    "T-Too late," said Roslyn. "I already took care of the basilisk."

    "Huh. I'll tell him, don't worry. I got held back anyhow."

    Roslyn, looking at him for the first time, noticed that he was sliding his service pistol back into its holster. There was also red.

    "You're bleeding!"

    "It's nothing. Some of the guards have been taking care of our dretch problem, and they killed a larger red alien too."

    "But - "

    "A dretch bit me, but I'm fine. It's just a scratch," he said with a hint of humor.

    "Okay," said Roslyn. "What else?"

    "Wetz wants to see you. Meanwhile Arnold and me will be releasing this batch into section four. You better get going."

    "So soon? We've only been here for a day!"

    "No shackles." He looked at them edgeways. "There really is no worry. They have tracking devices, and we have troopers."

    He stood her up and began to beckon her out. Four Remdann security guards walked in, accompanied by Arnold, the other technician.

    "Tell Wetz we're starting," he was practically pushing her out of the door.

    "O - Okay." Not feeling much in her legs, Roslyn walked out of the lab toward the dorms, where Wetz would probably be. She was glad that she didn't have to touch the beast. At least not yet.


    
    Mnoth had almost let her prick him. Her display of total weakness and fear didn't help either, since it stirred in him the workings of a predator on top of its prey. Then, he couldn't help but notice as a man sneaked in, obviously trying to be quiet. His weapon was drawn, and he had blood on his hands. Creeping up on the girl, he had put his hand on her shoulder and made her jump.
     He started and continued to speak to her, all the while Mnoth noticing that he was hiding something, acting with bravado. When she left, and others entered, his demeanor changed entirely.

    Quickly issuing orders, he began to direct the soldiers to take up prods, and herd the group out of the lab and toward section 4, several-hundred meters-of-hall away.

    Following the marauder, Mnoth and Sigig slowly stood up, and walked in front of the tapping prods. Trying to behave dreamily, and struggling to keep the tracking device firmly in his mouth, Mnoth sauntered past Richard.

    Oh ho! That is not your blood. . . . it smells of the gray-haired one! This human had apparently been up to some subversion. Perhaps he had killed one of his own. That would explain the blood, the deceit, and the demeanor.

    It seemed like forever that they trudged down the causeway, past room after room of anonymous contents. Finally they reached a large room with red lighting, at the bottom of a long ramp. It was full of odd pillars, and a huge, whirring generator occupied the far end of it. The room (if it could be called that, for it was truly large) was also tangibly warm, almost hot. Kyp started sneezing. Mnoth rolled an eye. That granger was so backwards.

    Once in the room, Richard spoke to the guards, dismissing them. They walked back up the ramp, talking to each other. Alone with Richard and Arnold, it appeared as if they were in fact going to be let free, unsupervised.
    Arnold was writing something down on a pad. Richard was leaning down over Sigig, who had been drugged by Roslyn and didn't have to pretend anymore.

    "Well, everything's in order," said Arnold, looking up from the pad and scratching his chin.
 
    "Not everything," said Richard in a low voice, staring intently at Sigig. This must have woken the poor basilisk up enough to be a little freaked out.

    "I'm sure we didn't miss anything. What are you - "

    With his back still to Arnold, and right up in Sigig's face, Richard pulled his blaster out.

    "I'm sorry, Arnold." In one motion, Richard stood up, swung around to Arnold, and pulled the trigger.
    Arnold's face never lost the bewildered expression that it died with. The shell sped through his forehead, knocking him spectacularly over backwards.

    Sigig was stunned. So was Mnoth, but he recovered more quickly. Dropping all pretense, he jumped up and swung a forearm at Richard. The man ducked with great speed, falling to the floor, the swipe passing far above his head. Before Mnoth could recover, Richard had pulled his sleeve up to reveal a small device attached to his wrist. He dug his other hand into a button, and Mnoth felt electric pain, followed by a draining nausea. The dragoon collapsed almost on top of Richard, writhing painfully. Kyp and Sigig also were down on the floor, one squealing miserably, the other throwing up a green bile.

    Releasing the control, Richard stood up carefully, hand still at the ready.

    "Twelve hours ago, a large cargo ship reaches it's final destination. Its livestock pens reveal two dead humans and two dead aliens," he said, breathing heavily.
    "You're just what I needed, just what I've been waiting for. You might not understand me, but I know you've got brains.....more than the others."

    Mnoth snarled at him and tried to get up. The man hit his key again, and a reverberating crescendo of pain and weakness seemed to flow from it. Four seconds, or four years, later, he released his key again. Mnoth and Sigig had slumped to the floor, on the edge of oblivion, both throwing up.
    Richard walked confidently over to Mnoth's head. The tracking device had fallen out of his mouth. Richard toed it away, slime and all. Mnoth was sure that the pistol of treachery would send him to a quiet end, but he was wrong yet again. The man pulled the chip to him with his foot, and crushed it under his heel. This was so weird.

    Striding over to Sigig, he found his tracking chip as well, and destroyed it. Neither of the aliens could move. Richard stepped gingerly over Mnoth, and crouched near Kyp. Taking a small pocketknife out of a hidden pocket, he slit an opening in Kyp's rump. Kyp squirmed a little and cried with low howls of pain. The man reached his fingers into the recess and pulled a metallic chip out of Kyp. This he also dropped to the floor and crushed.

    Standing up, he flailed the goop off of his hand, and made for the ramp. At the base of the exit, he turned. With a face made of sarcastic malice, he said, "Don't fail me." Then he turned and walked up, away from the pools of gore. When he reached the top, he must have flipped a switch, because the lights went out. Mnoth and Sigig were left to struggle in the darkness.




to be continued....
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Re: Kyp the Granger - Part II
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« Reply #42 on: August 27, 2010, 07:36:04 pm »
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IT MAKES ME SAD.
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Re: Kyp the Granger - Part II
« Reply #45 on: August 28, 2010, 04:43:12 am »
IT MAKES ME SAD.
You know what's even sadder? I FORGOT WHAT COMES NEXT!




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Re: Kyp the Granger - Part II
« Reply #46 on: September 09, 2010, 12:59:15 am »
continued from above....Roslyn and Jake are confronted with the horrors of betrayal, and Mnoth gets the chance for revenge....



                        Chapter Nine
                            The Grand Buffet


    Kyp's head hurt very badly. His vision was blurred, and his rump was still bleeding. Over to his right, Sigig wasn't moving. To his left, Mnoth was slowly standing up, shuffling about on his forelegs. The room was black, almost pitch, since the lights had gone out several minutes ago.

    It was a good thing they were built to take it.

    Mnoth was hurt the worst of them, since he had been the closest to the emitter. Still he was managing to move about, and had spotted a torn package lying on the floor. Richard must have dropped it intentionally, because it was full of chemicals that the aliens ingested natively. It was clear now to Mnoth that the man wanted them to get going, to break out and do their thing.

    Mnoth took a lick of the green powder. It tasted horrible, but he remembered that it had "grown" nearly everywhere on homeworld. He knew that in a few minutes, he would begin to feel strong; that his healing rates would shoot through the roof; and that concentration and focus would be his servants.

   He dragged it over the floor to Sigig, spilling rather a lot of it.

   Sigig. Wake up. I have nutrients! Sigig didn't move.

   Come on! We have a chance! And I need healing... Mnoth's voice was hoarse, even though it was at all times a low growl.

   Sigig wasn't moving. The film had crossed his eyes.

   I think he's......gone, said Kyp, getting up. He should never have let her stick him. We all had - he winced - other shots that must have gone with it...

    Still shaking, Mnoth finally got up on all six. It was amazing. He had almost let her inject him with that stuff. Oh well. At least he wouldn't have to take care of Sigig later, as he had vowed. Still, the timing of this was horrible.

    Turning to Kyp, he said I'll take care of this. This is our only chance, so build.

    Kyp was licking some powder off the floor, trying not to puke again. Mwhat?

    Very slowly, Mnoth repeated himself. I said BUILD!

    Kyp was taken aback, but headed for a platform anyway. One tormentor to another...
He thought to himself. He wished, not for the last time, that he had a warm hovel to curl in and heal.

    Once on the platform, about forty feet above the room's floor, he headed for the back and began the all-too-familiar formation of a new Overmind. He would have been unable to move, let alone build a minute ago, such was the strength of the nutrient. He wondered how the human had got his hands on it, since it only grew on Homeworld and a few other alien planets.

    It was definitely working for Mnoth, if only as a painkiller. The once wheezing dragoon leapt high up, onto the platform near Kyp, bringing the parcel. A second trip brought Sigig up. Kyp experienced a moment where he though Mnoth would eat Sigig, but Mnoth just dropped him by the parcel.

    Faster! said Mnoth like a whiplash. Kyp cursed inwardly. This usually took hours, to be done correctly. Halting his vepositors, Kyp gulped another mouthful of the dreadful vitamin powder, and returned to work.

    Mnoth paced back and forth at the top of the platform, keeping guard.

    A tearing noise from below froze him. After a few more moments of silence, Mnoth dropped down. There were no further noises. Mnoth remembered that there had been a power line running along the base of the wall. Finding it in the dark, he slashed at it, then spat on it. It began spewing steady sparks, illuminating part of the great room.

   Another tearing sound. Mnoth whipped around, and saw a low red figure over the body of Arnold. It was eating quickly.

   A marauder! snarled Mnoth, loud enough to be heard. The red alien glanced up at him, then went back to its meal as if nothing unusual was afoot.
    Mnoth walked up to it and stared at it. It must have survived here for years without its Overmind, so crazed was its visage. It still wouldn't pay any attention to him.

    Mnoth took a few steps back, and kicked a cloud of the spilled powder into its face. It gagged momentarily, then stopped chewing, eyes widening.

   W-w-w-where d-d-d-did - its speech was of an older variant, stuttered and hard to understand.

   There's more, if you're functional, said Mnoth flatly.
He watched the marauder shiver a bit, and start taking deep breaths as if it had run a great distance. Color returned to its face, and its eyes darted more quickly. And too, on its legs, a faint shining began, like the oscillating of a lava-lamp.

   You're an Electric... said Mnoth with some interest.

   It-it-it's b-been so lo-lo-long, it stuttered. G-got a healer?

   Dead, but creep's coming, replied Mnoth. Up there...

   The Marauder looked up at the faint blue glow of the building Overmind and grinned toothily. It skipped up the wall and landed on the platform gleefully.

    Scratch one, get one, thought Mnoth, taking a bite himself.


                                       *******

    Jake's beat took him past the barracks. Though his hand had healed, it was still in a wrap, hidden under his glove. His squad had split the hour into four watches of 15 minute patrols each. The aliens had all been mopped up except for the red walljumper, who was injured anyhow. There wasn't really anything left to guard against.
  
    The tame specimens had been released half-an-hour ago, but they all had tracking devices and warning systems. If any of them began to be hostile, he had been told, a technician in the control center named Richard could zap them into submission with a special device.

    He rounded the corner and began the beat through the professor's corridor. In the shadows of the far end, a human figure also turned toward him from another hallway. He prepared to salute in case it was Marty, giving him a surprise inspection, but instead a short woman with sandy hair came into the light.

   "Roslyn!" Jake gasped.

   "Jacob!" she exclaimed and ran up to hug him.

   "What are you doing here?"

   "I'm stationed here! What are you doing here?!"

   "This is my scholarship expedition! I had no idea - "

   "Neither did I! This is great! Unless it's an elaborate ruse by Marty to catch me talking to myself..."

   "I'm real, you twat," she laughed. "Well...wow."

   "Yeah...." said Jake. She was wearing a grey jumpsuit with blue patches, a civilian science marking on her shoulder.

   "I was just going to see Professor Wetz. Richard says he wants to see me."

   "Well, you've come to the right place. This is his door." Jake wondered why he hadn't come out and the sound of them already.

   "Hey did you know? I had to inject some aliens just now! It was wild. I was shaking the whole time." She reached up to knock on the door.

   "Heh, you probably killed a few of them, with your treatments...." She was knocking on the door now.

   "I wouldn't know," she said seriously. "Richard took over."

   "I was being facetious," Jake rolled his eyes. Roslyn knocked again.

   "That's strange...he isn't anywhere else, I checked." Roslyn said.

   "Sleeping, maybe?" Jake suggested. He checked his timepiece. As great as it was to see her, he had a beat to walk.

   "He asked to see me," said Roslyn levelly. "He wouldn't doze off - "

   "Here, I'll just check." Jake knocked and turned the handle. The door opened a few inches.

   "Funny, he usually locks it." observed Roslyn.
 
   Jake swung the door open. The light was off. Roslyn reached past him and flicked the light switch.

   Wetz was on his cot, lying in a pool of blood that dripped from his slashed throat.

   Stuck in a soundless scream, Roslyn slumped to the floor. Jake grabbed his rifle from his shoulder and stepped into the room. It was empty except for the professor. The light revealed however that a grating had been broken. Breaking into a sweat, he realized that the red alien must have come through the air ducts and broken in on the professor.
   He wanted nothing more than to stay and comfort her, but there was a job to do.

   "Come on, it's not safe here!" he pulled her up and hurried down the hall. The corridors that had seemed so short now stretched for endless miles. The base was in the main hold, right below the landing pad on the main level. Running into the bay, Roslyn gasping behind him, he drew the attention of the soldiers there. Marty ran up to him.

    "Sir, Professor Wetz is dead. His throat's been cut!" Jake stood at attention.

    Marty and the other soldiers showed silent surprise, and all conversation stopped.

    "I think the walljumper got him, the grating in his room's vent is smashed."

    "That's not possible," said the Mec-1. "We've got it cornered in a dead-end section of the facility. Leo's squad is hunting it right now."

    "What's all this?" said the Mec-2, walking out of the reactor room. Jake and Marty turned and saluted. The other Mec-1's were bringing their troops into order.

    "Sir," said Marty, "it appears that Wetz is dead. We suspect alien action, though we don't know how this could have happened. We blocked all the vents into the barracks, it's running on reactor power."

    "Do you know what this means?" asked the Mec-2, rhetorically. "Wetz was the anchor of this expedition. Our assignment is over, and we won't be payed for it. That's what this means." He looked like he was about to rip heads off.

    Raising his voice, he spoke. "We pull out. Get Leo back here and notify Richard. Marty, contact the ships."

    "Yes sir!"

    Turning to Jake, the Mec-2 told him to get Roslyn, Arnold and Richard ready for departure.
    Jake complied and turned to Roslyn.

    "We have to pack up again," he said, trying to smile. She kept giving him the thousand-yard-stare. "Head for the lab, Richard probably needs your help."

    "No I don't." said a voice. Richard had walked up behind them. "What's all the ruckus about? Why are we leaving?"

    "Because - " Jake started. An explosion cut him off, shaking the whole station. The lights flickered, and gunshots began to echo in from the surrounding hallways.

   "They're coming!" a soldier yelled from out of sight. There was loud gunfire from the western section of the station, near its powerplant.

   "You two, into the reactor room!" cried Jake, and hurried after Marty. Gill and John were zipping up and loading their weapons. Another shock rocked the station.

   "Switch all defenses to reactor power!" A voice yelled. The lights kept flickering.

   Richard and Roslyn ducked into the reactor room, a small hold adjacent to the main bay.

   "Where's Arnold?" asked Roslyn.

   "I thought he was with you, Carrie." replied Richard. "Where's Wetz?"

   "He's dead," said she, trembling.

   Richard stared with wide mouth at her for a long moment, then, "What? Impossible! I was just speaking with him in his room!"

   Because the door was open, the two had a first class view of the main bay. The great doors of the landing pad were slowly opening, and snow began to sift down. The yelling and shooting was getting louder. From across the hold, a swarm of dretches burst from the battlefield. They were running right into the teeth of the auto-defense system, and the two watched as they were gunned down by turrets and soldiers. A single dretch made it past the turrets and was unnoticed by the soldiers. It sped for the reactor room, right for Richard and Roslyn.

    "Oh crap! Better find a box to STAND ON!" They jumped back as it ran through the doorway. An arc of lightning reached out from a Tesla Pillar and fried it in mid-air. Its charred body slid to a halt at their feet.

    "Whoooo....." said Roslyn.


                              *******


    Mnoth hadn't felt it in ages. He was on top. His side was out there, wreaking havoc. The Overmind was up, the eggs were up. The dretches had come quickly, the Overmind marshaling them until they were of sufficient numbers. They sped forth from the dungeon with the red pillars, first picking off individual soldiers on beat, then evolving to basilisks and marauders. These were led by the stuttering Vesh, who kept letting Mnoth know that he was the marauder he hadn't been in years.

    I f-f-f-feel s-s-so - and so on. Mnoth didn't need to understand his language to know what he meant. It had been more than six years since Mnoth had been a working soldier for an Overmind. He was in complete accord with Vesh.

    Next to him he heard a splat, and turned to see that one of the new grangers had fallen off the platform. It couldn't wallwalk, so Mnoth directed it to form acid throwers near the entrances. He was sure that these newbies would make Kyp look like a gnarled veteran. Oh well.

    A basilisk bumped into him. They didn't work as a team, he thought sadly. Sigig was an ass, but at least he knew what was going on. What a shame.

    Mnoth pounced up the ramp and into the hallway, ready for another foray. The shooting was getting closer. Mnoth bounded past a fallen soldier, dretches tearing at the corpse. He rounded into a dark hallway, hordes of dretches at his feet. They preceded him, launching themselves at a pair of soldiers at the other end. A wave of fire spewed from the crouching one, singeing the dretch motormen. The two got up and advanced. Mnoth stepped into the light, and they saw him, dretches circling under his feet and on the walls.

    Mnoth laughed inwardly, and pounced at the flamethrower. The weapon was knocked away as the human was smashed into the wall, completely winded and broken.
    The dragoon moved on, letting the dretches finish the work. The other human was running for the fallen flamethrower, intending to dual-wield them. A streak of red, and then blinding white, told them that Vesh had arrived. A crackling bolt of lightning reached out and shocked the soldier as Vesh skipped past. He dropped his gun in pain and fell. Prone, he reached for the flamethrower. Mnoth walked up behind him as he struggled to stand up.

    The human turned and aimed for the masses of dretches, but only met Mnoth. The dragoon drove his forlegs into the soldier's feet, pinning him in place. Savoring the look of anguish, he plunged his head - tusks, teeth, eyes and all - through the man's gut and out to the other side.

    The marine was flung aside with blood spraying everywhere. Another squad of soldiers spotted them from the next room. The dretches swarmed past him at them. Turning to pounce again, covered in steaming red, Mnoth internalized the moment with an

Oh, yes
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Re: Kyp the Granger - Part II
« Reply #47 on: September 20, 2010, 04:37:39 am »
This story is begging for a machinima.

ok, can you give me the tool thingy app that can code?

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Re: Kyp the Granger - Part II
« Reply #48 on: September 20, 2010, 08:16:27 am »
One more chapter before the end of Part 2. I just gotta grit mah teeth and write it.

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Re: Kyp the Granger - Part II
« Reply #49 on: September 21, 2010, 01:49:00 am »
Oh, yes.

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Re: Kyp the Granger - Part II
« Reply #50 on: September 23, 2010, 01:08:15 am »
YO!!!
this is EPIC!
I WANT MOAR!!!
PS, how do i give people turrets?
these are stupid suggestions, don't even waste our time.
I don't like your negative attitude.

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« Reply #51 on: September 23, 2010, 01:16:47 am »
YO!!!
this is EPIC!
I WANT MOAR!!!
PS, how do i give people turrets?

You have to have quoted someone at least 15 times in order to give them a turret. This was just my 15th quote of you, so I just gave you a turret to celebrate.
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Re: Kyp the Granger - Part II
« Reply #52 on: September 23, 2010, 01:17:53 am »
Yeah, what mooseberry said. He beat me to it! >:|

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Re: Kyp the Granger - Part II
« Reply #53 on: September 23, 2010, 07:18:03 am »
YO!!!
this is EPIC!
I WANT MOAR!!!
PS, how do i give people turrets?
You must post approximately 78 more posts (4 a total of 300).
I'll probably write the last chapter tomorrow night.
You should know that there are watchgroups on this forum who will blacklist people and assign them one negative ret for every positive ret that someone gets. I know this because I'm......not.....in....such....a....watchgroup.
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Re: Kyp the Granger - Part II
« Reply #54 on: September 23, 2010, 08:27:32 am »
YO!!!
this is EPIC!
I WANT MOAR!!!
PS, how do i give people turrets?

You have to have quoted someone at least 15 times in order to give them a turret. This was just my 15th quote of you, so I just gave you a turret to celebrate.

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Re: Kyp the Granger - Part II
« Reply #55 on: September 23, 2010, 01:43:22 pm »
YO!!!
this is EPIC!
I WANT MOAR!!!
PS, how do i give people turrets?

You have to have quoted someone at least 15 times in order to give them a turret. This was just my 15th quote of you, so I just gave you a turret to celebrate.

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Re: Kyp the Granger - Part II
« Reply #56 on: September 24, 2010, 01:59:49 am »
MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!What happes to kyp= :granger: mnoth=  :dragoon: is sigig=  :basilisk: dead? and all the  :human:  :battlesuit: :helmet: are screwed. oh yeah one question, do any  :human: s   :jetpack: camp?

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Re: Kyp the Granger - Part II
« Reply #57 on: September 24, 2010, 06:29:57 am »
YO!!!
this is EPIC!
I WANT MOAR!!!
PS, how do i give people turrets?

You have to have quoted someone at least 15 times in order to give them a turret. This was just my 15th quote of you, so I just gave you a turret to celebrate.

Or simply form a quote stack 15 deep. This makes 2.
3
I'm staying out of this.

ok, can you give me the tool thingy app that can code?

AngelKnight

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Re: Kyp the Granger - Part II
« Reply #58 on: September 24, 2010, 07:05:42 am »
lol i don't even know what's going on. :P
 :basilisk: FTW!
Madness? THIS IS TREMULOUS!!!

Demolution

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Re: Kyp the Granger - Part II
« Reply #59 on: September 24, 2010, 07:16:35 am »
Don't ruin the thread now guys.... :/

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